高考英语读后续写the lost bolt课件
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Have yu traveled with yur Mm r Dad?
Questinnaire:
2.21 Xitang by car
Mm: tired, stmach turned; sleepy yet happy;
Me: relaxed, ttally child-free;
sharp cntrast
This summer, Dad and Mm planned a rad trip acrss the US frm my Califrnia hme, but I didn't fancy the idea, feeling reluctant t leave my pet cat, Max. What's wrse, Dad fund and fixed a car leak befre setting ut yet gt a blt missing/lst.
3-min fast-reading: main idea
Careful reading: Part 1 Befre the trip (Para1-5)
summer acrss US by car
Dad&Mm: happy; excited; rejiced; verjyed; delighted; eager...
Me: unwilling; reluctant
Find supprting details:
“This is the trip f lifetime. I'll bet nne f yur friends will be driving acrss the United States this summer.”
he said he'd always dreamed f driving acrss the cuntry.
Night after night, Mm and Dad huddled arund the cmputer, pltting every inch f ur 8,000-mile jurney.
excitement; eagerness
Fifty-eight days! That was practically my whle summer!
Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max.
I picked up my cat, Max, and buried my face in his fur.
unwillingness; reluctance
Careful reading: Part 2 Beginning f the trip (Para6-7)
Dad nticed a wet spt under the van.
Dad fixed the leak.
Rising actin
Falling actin
crawled under the van; Car parts sprang up like mushrms; Minutes turned int hurs.
Crisis: Dad lst ne blt.
Mm: rganized a : called the : shuted “Find Max”...
cancel the trip
cntinue the trip
Max was interested in all small bjects.
Draft the plt:
I gt EXCITED while Dad and Mm became DISAPPOINTED.
I culdn't bear t see them s DISAPPOINTED.
I made the CHOICE and assumed Max t be the “thief”.
We fund the blt with JOINT EFFORTS and happily hit the rad.
Add details t the plt: the use f eching(呼应)
rejiced(欣喜若狂的); be engulfed by...; a surge f...; take a strll; leisurely;
1. Fifty-eight days! That was practically my whle summer!2.Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max.
1. I was happy!2. My summer hliday came back.
suggested versin: My sul silently rejiced./I was engulfed by a sudden surge f gaiety./A wave f delight washed ver me at the pssibility f cancelling the trip.
Structure: I had visins f...(我想到了)
suggested versin: I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max.
My sul silently rejiced. And I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max during the summer hliday.I was engulfed by a sudden surge f gaiety. And I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max during the summer hliday.A wave f delight washed ver me at the pssibility f cancelling the trip. And I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max during the summer hliday.
dim; t ne's dismay;vanish(v.消失); manage a weak smile;pierce(刺穿)
1.“This is the trip f lifetime. I'll bet nne f yur friends will be driving acrss the United States this summer.”2.he said he'd always dreamed f driving acrss the cuntry.
1. Dad was unhappy!2. His dream culdn't cme true.
1、消失的螺栓让爸爸的希望破灭。令他失望的是,他的梦想——终生难忘的旅行——消失在他眼前。 2、他只能努力挤出一个微笑,这让我心都碎了。
suggested versin: 1. The lst blt dimmed his hpe. T his dismay, his dream—The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes. 2. He culd nly manage a weak smile, which pierced my heart.
My sul silently rejiced. And I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max during the summer hliday. ①然而,我偷偷看(peek)向爸爸,他斜靠(lean)在车上,黑乎乎的手上沾满了润滑油(grease)。The lst blt dimmed his hpe. T his dismay, his dream—The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes. He culd nly manage a weak smile, which pierced my heart. ②油然而生的罪恶感占据了上风,我绞尽脑汁(rack ne's brains)想着螺栓到底在哪里。
Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fitted this ld van. My sul silently rejiced. And I had visins f diving at the mirrr-like lake and taking a strll leisurely with Max during the summer hliday. Hwever, as I peeked in Dad's directin, I nticed him leaning against the van, his hands black with grease. The lst blt dimmed his hpe. T his dismay, his dream—The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes. He culd nly manage a weak smile, which pierced my heart. A surge f guilt gt the upper hand and I racked my brains t find ut where the blt culd have been.
Find wisdm frm New Cncept English
1. Gerge tk ff his jacket, rlled up his sleeves and pushed his right arm thrugh the drain cver. (Lessn 15 Fifty pence wrth f truble)2. The raid was all ver in three minutes, fr the men scrambled back int the car and it mved ff at a fantastic speed. (Lessn 6 Smash-and-grab)3. She kept it tied t a tree in a field during the day and went t fetch it every evening. (Lessn 16 Mary had a little lamb)
4. I had frgtten all abut the snails when Rbert suddenly said that I must stay t dinner. (Lessn 23 One man's meat is anther man's pisn)5. They had escaped frm the paper bag and had taken cmplete pssessin f the hall. (Lessn 23 One man's meat is anther man's pisn)6. One man stayed at the wheel while tw thers with black stckings ver their faces jumped ut and smashed the windw f the shp with irn bars. (Lessn 6 Smash-and-grab)
gd structures
Use sme phrases & structures t make yur versin
tk ff his jacket, rlled up his sleeves, scrambled(急忙) fd, ty... at the wheel; bushes; bat the blt
jint effrts
Then it hit me. “Max!” I shuted, “Find Max!' Realizing my intentin, Dad and Mm immediately switched int actin mde. Dad tk ff his jacket, rlled up his sleeves and scrambled t lk fr Max while Mm hurried t fetch sme treat t cax(引诱) Max ut. We had almst cmbed every inch f the huse with jint effrts when a distant mew guided us t the bushes, where Max was fund batting smething arund. Needless t say, it was the exact blt Dad had lst, f which Max tk secret pssessin as his new ty.
Feelings: happy, willing
wear a smile;hum a tune
hp in; anticipate
Lve is cmprmise.Lve is sacrifice.
What lessn?
Realizing my intentin, Dad and Mm immediately switched int actin mde. Dad tk ff his jacket, rlled up his sleeves and scrambled t lk fr Max while Mm hurried t fetch sme treat t cax(引诱) Max ut. We had almst cmbed every inch f the huse with jint effrts when a distant mew guided us t the bushes, where Max was fund batting smething arund. Needless t say, it was the exact blt Dad had lst, f which Max tk secret pssessin as his new ty. An hur later, Dad was humming a pleasant tune at the wheel. This time, I hpped in the van withut hesitatin. After all, lve is cmplicated, full f sacrifice and cmprmise, right?
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