天津中考英语话题作文专项训练

话题作文

1．每个人的生命只有一次，你平安、健康、快乐地长大是父母最大的心愿，你保护好生命是对父母最好的报答。请你以“How to Protect Our Life”为题，从安全和健康的角度入手，写一篇如何珍惜和保护生命的短文。

要求：(1)80~120字左右。

(2)文中不要出现本人真实信息。

(3)根据提示词至少选择三个方面来写，可以适当发挥。

提示词：traffic accident, fire, electricity, food, exercise, sleep, computer games, smoking, drugs(毒品), happiness...

How to Protect Our Life

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2．为了交流学习经验，学校英文报举行了一次以“Learn well and wisely”为题的征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：

（1）学习方法；

（2）个人感悟。

注意：

（1）词数80~100；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

（4）短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Learn well and wisely

It’s necessary for us to develop good habits and ways to learn.

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3．假如你是阳光中学学生王芳，上周学校组织了一次募捐志愿活动，以“Charity walk for children in poor areas”为题，根据汉语提示用英文写一篇报道。

1. 活动目的：你和你同学想为贫困地区的孩子们筹款，用筹集的钱给贫困地区的孩子买些书。帮助他们获得更多知识；

2. 活动过程：

（1）上周早上八点在学校门口集合，一起步行去水上公园。

（2）你们把自己分为四人一组，出发前计划好了一切。

（3）步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得五万元善款。

3. 活动感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为……

要求：

1. 词数80-100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。

参考词汇：

knowledge 知识 campaign活动 Water Park 水上公园

Charity walk for children in poor areas

Last week our school__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

After the campaign,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

4．再过几个月，你将成为一名高中生，应该怎样完善自己？请以“How to be an excellent student”为题，写一篇英语短文。

提示：1. 遵守校纪校规（按时到校，按时上交作业）；

2. 上课认真听讲以便能取得好成绩；一回到家就写作业；

3. 与人沟通，学会分享，互相帮助；

4. 在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活；

5. 保护环境，积极参与志愿者工作。

要求：1. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 必须包括全部要点，但不能逐词翻译，可适当发挥。

How to be an excellent student

I’m going to be a senior high school student____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I believe I will be an excellent student.

5．每个人心中都有一个自己认为最重要的人，他/她可能是自己的亲人，可能是自己的朋友，也可能是萍水相逢的一个……请你以“The Most Important Person in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，简单描述一下你生活中最重要的人。

写作要求：

1.句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯;

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不少于80词。

The Most Important Person in My Life________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

6．请你根据以下内容提示，以"The old man moved me"为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍疫情期间发生在钟南山院士身上的事。

(1)2020年1月，新型冠状病毒肺炎在武汉爆发。1月20日，一位84岁的老人，钟南山院士登上了前往武汉的高铁列车；

(2)因为没有车票，他被邀请到了餐车；

(3)他一坐下，就马上拿出文件来研究，累了就闭上眼睛，靠在座位上；

(4)到达武汉后，他视察了2所医院以便了解情况；

(5)没有时间休息，他又乘飞机赶往北京参加一个重要会议，直到凌晨2点才入睡；

(6)他感动了……

要求：

1. 词数：80~100词；

2. 短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

参考词汇：感动move；餐车dining hall；高铁列车high-speed train；靠在座位上lean on the seat

The old man moved me

COVID-19 broke out in January, 2020 in Wuhan. Academician Zhong Nanshan,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

7．俗话说“没有规矩不成方圆”,   相信同学们家中也都有一些具体的家规。请你根据下面的提示内容及要求，以My Family Rules为题写一篇短文，在英语课上与同学们交流。

内容要点：

（1）按时完成作业。

（2）不能玩游戏。

（3）帮助做家务（例如：打扫房间,   ……）。

（4）对家规的感受。

注意：

（1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。

（2）词数：80左右（开头已给出,   不计入总词数）。

My Family Rules

My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some family rules.          

参考答案

1．例文：                                                                                                                        

                                                                                                                                            How to Protect Our life

Everyone has only one life. It is our parents’ best wishes to see us safely and healthily. In return, we should treasure our lives. How to protect our life?

Now there are more and more cars, so when we walk on the road, we must obey traffic rules. At school, we should get on well with our classmates. Don’t fight with them, or we may be hurt. Stay away from dangerous places.

What’s more, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. We’d better have enough sleep and do exercise every day. We must refuse drugs as well as smoking. Besides, we are supposed to control the time of playing computer games. Remember, safety and health are important. So please cherish your life and stay healthy!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：题干要求从安全和健康两个角度入手，以“如何保护生命”为题写一篇短文，文中要点不能少于三个，给出了部分提示词，写作时可选择应用。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称为主，多用祈使句和情态动词表示建议和劝告。写作时，先引出主题，再提出具体建议，最后总结收尾。要点之间需使用过渡词，使文章逻辑严谨，注意避免语法和拼写错误。

2．One possible version:

Learn well and wisely

It’s necessary for us to develop good habits and ways to learn.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Learning in groups and helping each other are two good ways to study. If we meet some problems, we can ask others for help. Many tasks need close teamwork. Nothing will be achieved unless we work well together. What’s more, we should do more reading in our spare time to broaden our horizon. And don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

Good habits and learning ways play important roles in our study. They help us save time and effort to make progress. I hope all these above will be helpful to us.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本题要求以“Learn well and wisely”为题，结合提示信息写一篇80-100词左右的短文给英文报投稿，内容包括：学习方法和个人感悟。

2. 写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示信息进行较详细地展开以丰富文章内容和满足字数要求；写作完成后应确保文章要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。

3．例文：

                                                                                                                                  Charity walk for children in poor areas

Last week our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas. We wanted to use the money we raised to buy some books for the children in poor areas so that they could get more knowledge.

At 8:00 a.m. on Sunday, we got together at the school gate, and then we walked to Water Park. Before we set off, we (had) planned everything well. For example, we divided all the students into four groups. After walking a difficult long way, some of us felt a bit awful. However, we helped each other during the whole campaign. In the end, we raised 50,000 yuan with the help of thousands of kind-hearted people.

After the campaign, although we all felt very tired, we were very happy. On the one hand, the campaign is a meaningful experience for us, and on the other hand, it makes us realize how important the teamwork is.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Charity walk for children in poor areas”为题，根据所给提示内容，写一篇作文。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时不要遗漏要点，围绕主题，正确地使用时态。可适当发挥，使行文连贯。

4．例文：

How to be an excellent student

I’m going to be a senior high school student. I should make myself better.

At first I will follow the school rules. I will go to school on time and I will hand in my homework on time. As a high school student, it is important to have good study habits. I should listen to the teacher carefully in class so as to get good grades. I will do my homework as soon as I get home. And I am going to communicate better with my teacher and classmates. I am going to learn to share things with my friends and help each other. At home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework. I will wash the dishes and clean the room. At last I will protect the environment and take an active part in the volunteer work as often as possible.

I believe I will be an excellent and successful student.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。主要以“How to be an excellent student”为主题展开描写。本文要写的内容题目中已经给出详细的提示。写作时要运用正确的英语把想要表达内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：文章主要用一般将来时，人称用第一人称展开详细介绍。文章可分三段描写。第一段总的提出会更好的提升自己；第二段分别从不同的方面写出具体的做法；第三段总结自己会成为更优秀的学生。写作时要注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。

5．The Most Important Person in My Life

There are many important people in the world, but in my life my father is the most important. He does a lot for our family. When I meet problems, he always encourages me and supports me. When I feel hope is gone, he always gives me hope. With his help I can face all the difficulties bravely and become confident.

My father is the real hero in my heart though he’s not famous. I’m really thankful to him for all that he has done.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文为话题作文，要求描写一个人，为记叙文。同学们可以从自己身边的人进行描写，可以描写出这个人和自己发生的事情，来说明这个人为什么重要。注意时态使用准确，所述事迹符合逻辑。

2.例文点评：文章主体部分采用两段式。主要采用一般现在时对情感进行描述。第一段描述这个人是谁，这个人是我的父亲，他在日常生活中，不仅鼓励和支持我，还给我希望。第二段表达自己对他的感激之情。

3.高分亮点：

短语：a lot；face all the difficulties；be thankful for。

句型：there be句型；though引导让步状语从句；that引导定语从句。

6．One possible version

The old man moved me

COVID-19 broke out in January, 2020 in Wuhan. Academician Zhong Nanshan, an old man who is 84 years old, got on the high-speed train to Wuhan on January, 20th. Because there was no ticket, he was invited to the dining hall. As soon as he sat down, he took out documents to research. When he was tired, he closed his eyes and leaned on the seat to have a break. After arriving in Wuhan, he visited 2 hospitals so that he could learn about the situation there. Having no time to rest, he went to Beijing to take part in an important meeting by plane. He didn’t go to sleep until 2 o' clock in the morning.

What he did moved me. He worked day and night to fight against the novel coronavirus. He is the bravest man. We should respect the old man. In my heart, he is a real hero.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。题目要求以"The old man moved me"为题，根据内容提示写一篇短文，介绍疫情期间发生在钟南山院士身上的事，则作文应以一般过去时、第三人称单数进行写作，同时，要注意动词过去式的不规则变化。

2.例文解读：例文用词和句式有一定的难度，有简单句也由复合句，特别是复合句的运用，如：“...an old man who is 84 years old...，as soon as he sat down...，having no time to rest...”，使人物描写更生动、可读性更强，让人获得情感上的共鸣。

3.高分亮点：

短语：break out，get on，have a break，so that，day and night，fight against，not...until...。

句型：

...an old man who is 84 years old...

Because there was no ticket, he was invited to the dining hall.

As soon as he sat down, he took out documents to research.

Having no time to rest, he went to Beijing to take part in an important meeting by plane.

What he did moved me.

7．My Family Rules

My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some family rules. Firstly, I must finish my homework in time. Secondly, I cannot play computer games, even in my spare time or at weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. If I follow these rules, I usually get some presents from my parents.

I think the first and third rules are good, but I don’t like the second one. In fact, I hope sometimes I can play computer games. It will make me relaxed.

【解析】

【详解】

1.       题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给提示和自己的实际情况介绍家规。在写作时，第一段承接开头，把家规的具体内容一一列出并加以说明；第二段直接发表自己的看法并提出合理化的建议。

2.       例文点评：例文采用第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。第一段介绍具体家规，用序数词作为过渡词进行衔接，条理分明且清晰；其中第二点和第三点联合实际，适当发挥，内容更加充实丰富。第二段提出自己的看法，有肯定有建议，合理恰当，符合作者身份。

3.       高分亮点：

短语：be strict with sb.；in my spare time；such as；make the bed；and so on。

句型：宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；and和but连词的使用。