天津高考英语作文分类训练：建议信

这是一份天津高考英语作文分类训练：建议信，共19页。试卷主要包含了假设你是晨光中学高三一班的李津，假设你是晨光中学的李津等内容，欢迎下载使用。

(1)注意气候：
(2)注意交通安全：
(3)有关风俗习惯的建议。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Li Jin
2．假定你是晨光中学的李津，近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有的两个栏目（学校简介、学习生活）之上，增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目（职业规划、学生风采、校园文化）中选一个栏目，跟帖发表你的建议和看法，内容应该包括：
（1）你喜欢的栏目及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
公众号：Official WeChat；职业规划：Career Planning
学校简介：Schl Prfile；学习生活：Study Life
学生风采：Our Students；校园文化：Campus Culture
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总数。
March 23, 2022
By Li Jin
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假设你是晨光中学高三一班的李津。你的英国笔友Chris发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Chris回复一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
（1）祝贺Chris获奖；
（2）提供深入学习汉语的建议（如：读中文原著，用中文记日记等）；
（3）邀请Chris来中国学习交流。
注意：（1）词数不少于100词；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
孔子学院 Cnfucius Institute
汉语桥 Chinese Bridge
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
4．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Mnthly）向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 自我介绍：
2. 说明该报优点：（如：内容方面，对学生帮助方面等）；
3. 提出建议：（如：增加某些内容等）
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：励志的inspiratinal
Dear editrs
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
5．假设你是晨光中学的李津。你在一个英文网站论坛上读到一个名叫Jack的外国学生发的帖子，得知他在寻求帮助。请根据以下提示给Jack留言：
（1）结合自己的学校生活谈谈压力的弊端；
（2）给Jack提出缓解压力的具体建议（至少两条）。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Jack America Psted n Dec.30th, 2021 20:09
I will take the final examinatin next mnth. Nw I have huge study pressure. I’m wndering hw I can reduce the pressure.
Li Jin China Psted n Jan. 6th, 2022 9:30
Hi, Jack,
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6．假定你是某重点高中学生会主席李津，你市正在迎接创建全国文明城市检查，请你以学生会名义写一篇倡议书，倡议大家积极为创建文明城市做准备，内容应包括：
1. 爱护公共环境，保持校内外卫生清洁。
2. 遵守交通规则，文明骑车。
3. 提倡志愿服务精神，奉献他人。
4. 其他
注意：1词数120左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
全国文明城市 a Natinal civilized city 志愿服务精神 vlunteerism
Dear fellw students：It is knwn t all that ur city is trying t build a natinal civilized city t create a better living envirnment fr us.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
7．假定你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，鼓励他要有自信井给出几点建议，要点如下:
1.大胆自信; 2.放慢语速: 3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。
注意:1.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数:
2.信中不得出现你的真实情况:
3.不少于100词。
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? I'm glad t learn that yu are cming t China this summer.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
8．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Wrried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封电子邮件。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰；
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：脾气 temper
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9．假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
1．参加中文学习班；
2．看中文书刊、电视；
3．学唱中文歌曲；
4．交中国朋友。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Mike,
Hardly culd I cntain my excitement when I was infrmed that many English peple wanted t learn mre abut China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. Yu said in yur letter that yu wuld cme t Beijing t travel. Since yur custms are quite different frm urs, I’d like t give yu sme advice t make yur stay here safe and cmfrtable.
First, it is quite cld here in winter, s yu’d better wear heavy clthes when yu are ut. Secnd, pay special attentin t the traffic. In China, we drive n the right cmpared with the situatin in yur cuntry. S be sure t keep it in mind when yu have gt a chance t drive a car. Besides, the Spring Festival is the mst ceremnius traditinal festival f the Chinese natin. Celebratins include sticking cuplets, setting ff firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and s n.
Lking frward t seeing yu. Hpe yu will enjy yur stay here．
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友迈克写信，就他寒假要到北京旅游一事给与建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
抑制：cntain→hld back
建议：advice→suggestin
牢记：keep in mind→bear in mind
隆重的：ceremnius→frmal
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the mst ceremnius traditinal festival f the Chinese natin. Celebratins include sticking cuplets, setting ff firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and s n.
拓展句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the mst ceremnius traditinal festival f the Chinese natin, whse celebratins include sticking cuplets, setting ff firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and s n.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Hardly culd I cntain my excitement when I was infrmed that many English peple wanted t learn mre abut China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. (否定含义词hardly置于句首，句子使用部分倒装和when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Yu said in yur letter that yu wuld cme t Beijing t travel. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．March 23, 2022
By Li Jin
Delighted t knw a new clumn will be added in Official WeChat f ur English Club, I ffer my recmmendatin as fllws.
Amng the three clumns “Career Planning”, “Our Students” and “Campus Culture”, I wuld like t chse “Career Planning” t be the ne t be added, based n the riginal tw clumns “Schl Prfile” and “Study Life”. I knw that right nw a large number f students still have abslutely n idea abut what they truly want t becme in the future, s it’s quite urgent and necessary t give students basic understanding f what different kinds f jbs are like and what kinds f qualities are required fr different jbs. This may help us gain a better understanding f ur strengths and weakness s that we can figure ut ur gals. T me, it’s much mre meaningful than “Our Students” r “Campus Culture”.
Dear classmates, what’s yur recmmendatins? Wuld yu like t share amng us?
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英语社团的微信公众号发帖，谈论自己对备选的栏目的建议和看法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
加入，包含：added→invlved
提供：ffer→prvide
要求，需要：request→require
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：This may help us gain a better understanding f ur strengths and weakness s that we can figure ut ur gals.
拓展句：Nw that it may help us gain a better understanding f ur strengths and weakness, we can figure ut ur gals.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I wuld like t chse “Career Planning” t be the ne t be added, based n the riginal tw clumns “Schl Prfile” and “Study Life”. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2]I knw that right nw a large number f students still have abslutely n idea abut what they truly want t becme in the future, s it’s quite urgent and necessary t give students basic understanding f what different kinds f jbs are like and what kinds f qualities are required fr different jbs.(运用了宾语从句、it作形式主语)
3．Dear Chris,
Hearing that yu wn the first prize in the petry recitatin cntest Chinese Bridge hsted by lcal Cnfucius Institute, I am s glad and sincerely sending my cngratulatins t yu.
As t the suggestins n hw t further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that yu shuld be expsed t Chinese literature, which helps yu build a gd sense f Chinese language. What’s mre, yu might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that mre practice cntributes t better mastery. Last but nt least, hw abut finding a Chinese language partner with whm yu can cmmunicate if yu wuld like t imprve yur Chinese fluency?
Hpe my advice is wrth taking. Meanwhile, I’d lve t invite yu t learn and exchange in China ne day.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回复邮件，就如何深入学习中文给出建议并表达祝贺，同时邀请对方来中国学习交流。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办：hst→hld
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
有助于：cntribute t→make fr
提升：imprve→advance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing that yu wn the first prize in the petry recitatin cntest Chinese Bridge hsted by lcal Cnfucius Institute, I am s glad and sincerely sending my cngratulatins t yu.
拓展句：Since I hear that yu wn the first prize in the petry recitatin cntest Chinese Bridge hsted by lcal Cnfucius Institute, I am s glad and sincerely sending my cngratulatins t yu.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As t the suggestins n hw t further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that yu shuld be expsed t Chinese literature, which helps yu build a gd sense f Chinese language. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s mre, yu might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that mre practice cntributes t better mastery.（运用了in that引导的状语从句）
4．One pssible versin:
Dear editr,
I’m s glad t give my persnal pinins n my favrite newspaper English Mnthly set up by the Student Unin. I’m a high schl student wh is enthusiastic abut reading newspapers and I want t learn smething frm them. I think English Mnthly has many advantages. Fr ne thing, it’s rich in cntent, ranging frm ecnmy t civilizatin. Fr anther, it’s a guide t English learning. Thrugh it, I can have a gd knwledge f what’s ging n at hme and abrad and I’ve imprved my English reading skill. If nly yu culd intrduce sme mre abut Chinese traditinal culture and inspiratinal stries in the culture clumn.
Here I really hpe English Mnthly will attract mre readers.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇建议信。文章要求高考给学校编辑写一封关于《英语月报》的看法，并且提出自己建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased
个人的：persnal → individual
观点：pinin → viewpint
建立：set up → establish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s rich in cntent, ranging frm ecnmy t civilizatin.
拓展句：It’s rich in cntent, which ranges frm ecnmy t civilizatin.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m a high schl student wh is enthusiastic abut reading newspapers and I want t learn smething frm them.（运用了定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If nly yu culd intrduce sme mre abut Chinese traditinal culture and inspiratinal stries in the culture clumn.（运用了if nly的虚拟语气）
5．Hi, Jack,
I learned abut yur truble frm the website and I’m srry that yu are having such a hard time at the mment. I’m writing t ffer sme slutins fr yur cncern.
Frm my pint f view, it’s cmmn fr students t feel under pressure befre exams. They are s thirsty fr academic knwledge and psychlgical develpment. Fr me, smetimes the pressure was s unbearable that anger wuld rise, affecting my health and the mds f peple arund me. Being angry nly led t bad scres, as my mind wasn’t clear.
Hwever, this can be cntrlled if yu take useful measures. First f all, turn t teachers fr help. They will nt nly slve yur academic prblems but als ffer their guidance n yur persnal issues. What’s mre, remember t save time fr leisure. Why nt schedule regular sprts activities t refresh yur mind after an intensive study sessin? Last but nt least, keep a psitive attitude twards all bstacles in life s yu can have a better chance t succeed.
I hpe yu will find these suggestins practical. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
这是一篇应用文，要求考生根据Jack的帖子，并结合自己的学校生活谈谈压力的弊端，给他提出缓解压力的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
了解：knw→learn abut
困难的：difficult→hard
渴望：be lnging fr→be thirsty fr
影响：influence→affect
建议：advice→suggestin
2.句型拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句：They will nt nly slve yur academic prblems but als ffer their guidance n yur persn issues.
拓展句：Nt nly will they slve yur academic prblems but als ffer their guidance n yur persn issues.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Fr me, smetimes the pressure was s unbearable that anger wuld rise, affecting my health and the mds f peple arund me. （运用了引导的结果状语从句和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Being angry nly led t bad scres, as my mind wasn’t clear.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）
6．One pssible versin:
Dear fellw students：It is knwn t all that ur city is trying t build a natinal civilized city t create a better living envirnment fr us. I am writing t call n all f yu t make jint effrts twards this gal.
As students, we can d many things t help. First f all, it's imprtant t care fr the public envirnment and keep ur schl clean. Fr example, we mustn't drp litter r make lud nise. Secnd, we are suppsed t always bey the traffic rules. Third, it wuld be helpful t have the vlunteerism and vlunteer in ur spare time encuraging ther citizens t behave prperly. Mre imprtantly, imprving urselves is a gd way t make us mre civilized.
Dear fellw students, let's wrk tgether t make ur city a better place!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会名义写一篇倡议书，倡议大家积极为创建文明城市做准备，以迎接创建全国文明城市检查。
【详解】
词汇积累
建立：build→set up
号召：call n→appeal t
垃圾：litter→garbage
恰当地：prperly →apprpriately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As students, we can d many things t help.
拓展句：As students, we can d many things t help, which can make a great difference.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It is knwn t all that ur city is trying t build a natinal civilized city t create a better living envirnment fr us. (运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] Mre imprtantly, imprving urselves is a gd way t make us mre civilized. (运用了动名词作主语)
7．Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? I'm glad t learn that yu're cming t China this winter. Yu say yu're wrried abut yur Chinese if yu are in China. Nw let me give yu sme advice.
First, yu shuld be brave and cnfident t speak Chinese when yu cmmunicate with thers. We Chinese are very friendly, s yu dn't be afraid t make any mistakes. Secnd, speak Chinese slwly and clearly when yu talk t thers. In this way, yu can make yurself understd easily. Finally, yu can use pictures r drawings and bdy language. As yu knw, mst f bdy language is in cmmn in the wrld.
I hpe these suggestins will help yu and may yu succeed in learning Chinese.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。要求学生用英语给Jack写封回信，鼓励他要有自信并根据要求给出几点建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
担忧的：wrried→ anxius
建议：advice→ suggestin
害怕的：afraid → frightened
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, yu can use pictures r drawings and bdy language.
拓展句：Finally, what I suggest is t use pictures r drawings and bdy language.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Yu say yu're wrried abut yur Chinese if yu are in China. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] First, yu shuld be brave and cnfident t speak Chinese when yu cmmunicate with thers. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
8．Dear Wrried,
I'm srry t knw that yu're having such a bad time at the mment. The truth is that everyne will have ne f thse perids when things seem t be ging wrng, s yu dn’t have t wrry s much. The imprtant thing is t learn t cntrl yur temper. Here are three useful tips.
First, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel. This is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself. Secnd, g utdrs and play team games with yur friends as physical exercise, which is an effective way t get rid f yur anger. And third, remain ptimistic abut yur future. Such a psitive attitude twards life can be helpful in lifting yur spirits.
I hpe yu'll sn feel calmer and carry n as nrmal.
Yurs,
Jamie
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给Wrried同学写一封电子邮件，对该同学的情况表示理解并给予安慰同时提出建议并说明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
糟糕的：awful→bad
建议：advice/suggestin→tip
有益的：beneficial→useful/helpful
摆脱：eliminate→get rid f
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel. This is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself.
拓展句：First, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel, which is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm srry t knw that yu're having such a bad time at the mment. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The truth is that everyne will have ne f thse perids when things seem t be ging wrng, s yu dn’t have t wrry s much. (运用了that引导表语从句)
9．Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.It’s ur great pleasure t have yu visit ur schl and give a lecture n western art during the cming summer vacatin.
When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic. Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities. It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my advice, and I hpe that I can gain mre knwledge thrugh the lecture. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：prvide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：pprtunity→chance
采纳建议：take ne’s advice→fllw ne’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
10．One pssible versin:
Dear Peter.
I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestins.
First, it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse, as yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students. Then, it als helps t watch Chinese TV prgrams and read bks, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.
Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs, because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily. Yu can als make mre Chinese friends. They will help yu learn Chinese
Try and write t me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →happy
建议：advice →suggestin
学习：learn → study
此外：Besides =Mrever
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse, as yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students.
拓展句：First, the reasn why it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse is that yu'll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm glad t receive yur letter in which yu asked fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then, it als helps t watch Chinese TV prgrams and read bks, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible. (运用了不定式作主语)