广东高考英语作文分类训练：推荐信

这是一份广东高考英语作文分类训练：推荐信，共18页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1.你推荐的课程；
2.该课程的内容；
3.你推荐的理由。
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2．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。内容包括：
1. 推荐一本小说；
2. 此书内容简介；
3. 给出阅读建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tm热爱中国传统文化，最近打算来中国生活一段时间，但是不确定应该去往哪个城市，写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的城市；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 美好祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
4．假定你是高三学生李华，你的英国网友Tmmy一直以来对中国的历史和文化非常感兴趣，想在即将到来的假期来中国旅游。请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 问候并表示欢迎；
2. 推荐去处及理由。
注意：
1词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．学校将开设更多课外活动，假定你是高一（6）班班长李华，请你代表班级向学校学生会主席David推荐你们班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
内容提示如下：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
注意：字数80字左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Mst Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Editr,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
8．假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生 Henry 给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：
1. 词典名称；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜；
2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾以给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：三孔景区Three-hle Scenic Spt 孔庙Cnfucian Temple孔府Cnfucian Mansin
孔林Cnfucian Garden孔子文化园Cnfucius Cultural Park
Dear Ellen,
I' m excited t receive yur letter.
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That's my suggestins and I' m lking frward t yur cming t China quickly.
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Gerge,
I am delighted t hear that yu want t take a curse abut Chinese traditinal culture. I am writing t recmmend ne n Beijing Opera.
This curse, “Intrductin t Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next mnth fr tw weeks, cntains tw sectins. A lecture n the histry f Beijing Opera will intrduce its time-hnred develpment, including the detailed prcess f hw it spread. What takes the curse t a new height is a theater trip. Stepping int Mei Lanfang Theatre, yu’ll get a taste f the perfrmance techniques by appreciating hw the vices and mtins are perfectly cmbined n the stage.
I heartily recmmend this curse t yu based n the fllwing reasns. I knw yu lve drama s much, s yu will be able t mre easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, M, Chu, the five main characters f Beijing Opera. It is als an interactive curse, in which yu will have a chance t cmmunicate with pera perfrmers face t face.
I hpe my intrductin is helpful. Please let me knw if yu have further questins.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友推荐一个关于中国传统文化的课程。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
欣赏：appreciate→enjy
进入：step int→enter
喜爱：lve→be fnd f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing t recmmend ne n Beijing Opera.
拓展句：I am writing t recmmend ne n Beijing Opera, which will help yu understand Chinese traditinal culture deeply.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am delighted t hear that yu want t take a curse abut Chinese traditinal culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】This curse, “Intrductin t Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next mnth fr tw weeks, cntains tw sectins.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
2．Dear Peter,
I’m very glad t knw that yu have interest in Chinese nvels. There are s many famus nvels written in Chinese, including classical nvels and mdern nvels, amng which I like A Dream f Red Mansins mst. It is an interesting nvel and is excellent beynd cmparisn. Based n Jia and Lin’s lve stry, it describes a tragedy abut lve and the decline abut a big family, which expses the scial crisis.
The bk is written in ld Chinese, which is difficult t understand. S when yu read it, yu’d better get a Chinese dictinary ready fr reference. In additin, I suggest that yu shuld knw sme backgrund knwledge abut the Qing Dynasty.
I wish yu wuld have fun and learn smething thrugh reading it.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴：pleased→glad
非常：mre than→very
著名的：excellent/utstanding/well-knwn→famus
此外：furthermre/what's mre→In additin
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：It is an interesting nvel and is excellent beynd cmparisn.
拓展句：It is such an interesting nvel that it is excellent beynd cmparisn.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] There are s many famus nvels written in Chinese, including classical nvels and mdern nvels, amng which I like A Dream f Red Mansins mst.(运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In additin, I suggest that yu shuld knw sme backgrund knwledge abut the Qing Dynasty.(运用了虚拟语气)
3．Dear Tm,
I am pleased t learn that yu are t spend sme time in China.
I recmmend yu stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center f China. The city enjys a high reputatin fr its abundance f ancient architecture, which represents the traditinal lcal lifestyles. And there are als plenty f museums where precius relics f histrical interest are waiting fr yu t explre. Besides, the exceptinal Peking Opera perfrmances there are als what yu can’t miss.
I wish yu a very happy and meaningful time in China!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Tm写回信，说明你推荐的城市、给出推荐的理由最后送上 美好祝福。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→recmmend
宝贵的：valuable→precius
高兴的：glad→pleased
此外：in additin→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recmmend yu stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center f China.
拓展句：I recmmend yu stay in Beijing, which is the capital and cultural center f China.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am pleased t learn that yu are t spend sme time in China. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The city enjys a high reputatin fr its abundance f ancient architecture, which represents the traditinal lcal lifestyles. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Tmmy，
Hw are yu getting n these days? I was happy t receive yur e-mail，saying yu’re planning t visit my cuntry during the vacatin. Welcme!
Yu said yu are very interested in the histry and culture f China. There is n dubt that Beijing is really a gd place t travel. Beijing is the capital f China and als the center fr plitics and culture. It enjys a lng and rich histry. There are numerus places f interest and ancient buildings, such as the wrld-famus Great Wall, the Temple f Heaven and the Frbidden City.
I hpe yu will have a pleasant time here.
Yurs,
Yi Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友Tmmy写封信，问候并表示欢迎来中国旅游，推荐去处及理由。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
假期：vacatin→hliday
许多的：numerus→plentiful
愉快的：pleasant→enjyable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I was happy t receive yur e-mail, saying yu’re planning t visit my cuntry during the vacatin.
拓展句：I was happy t receive yur e-mail, in which yu say yu’re planning t visit my cuntry during the vacatin.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I was happy t receive yur e-mail, saying yu’re planning t visit my cuntry during the vacatin. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] There is n dubt that Beijing is really a gd place t travel. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
5．Dear David,
l am Li Hua, mnitr f Class 6 Grade 1. Knwing mre sprts events will be carried ut in ur extra-curricular activities, l'd like t recmmend tw events n behalf f my class.
Mst f us cnsider jgging is suitable fr bth bys and girls. Nt nly will it benefit ur health but als is helpful t shape ur bdy. As fr the grup game, ftball is much mre ppular than thers especially amng bys. All the members learn t cperate with each ther s that they build up imprtant qualities like respnsibility and teamwrk.
Fr these reasns, I recmmend jgging and ftball.
Hpefully,ur recmmendatin will be taken int cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表自己班级向学校学生会主席David推荐班级认为合理的运动项目，并给出理由。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.推荐项目；
2.推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
carry ut, extra-curricular activities,n behalf f,be suitable fr, benefit ur health,shape ur bdy,learn t cperate with each ther,build up imprtant qualities,take int cnsideratin
第三步：连词成句
1. Knwing mre sprts events will be carried ut in ur extra-curricular activities, l'd like t recmmend tw events n behalf f my class.
2.Mst f us cnsider jgging is suitable fr bth bys and girls.
3.Nt nly will it benefit ur health but als is helpful t shape ur bdy.
4.All the members learn t cperate with each ther s that they build up imprtant qualities like respnsibility and teamwrk.
5.Our recmmendatin will be taken int cnsideratin.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：nt nly…but (als)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Knwing mre sprts events will be carried ut in ur extra-curricular activities, l'd like t recmmend tw events n behalf f my class.（运用了现在分词做状语）
[高分句型2]
All the members wh learn t cperate with each ther build up imprtant qualities like respnsibility and teamwrk.（运用了wh引导的定语从句）
6．One pssible versin:
Dear Editr,
I’m a senir high schl student and I happened t hear that yu were hsting an activity t select The Mst Qualified Student. It is a great hnur fr me t intrduce t yu ne f my best friends, Lin Yang.
First f all, he, wh is amng the mst diligent students in ur schl, nt nly studies hard but als behaves well. Secndly, he stands ut fr his diverse hbbies, including painting and playing the vilin. Last but nt least, he is warm-hearted and willing t help thers in need.
Therefre, I here recmmend him t yu with all my heart and I lk frward t hearing frm yu at the earliest pssible mment.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给编辑写封推荐信，向英语报社推荐“最美中学生”林杨。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时等其他时态。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；
2. 说明推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
an activity t select The Mst Qualified Student; ne f my best friends; study hard; behave well; diverse hbbies; painting and playing the vilin; warm-hearted; be willing t help thers; recmmend him t yu; lk frward t
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m a senir high schl student and I happened t hear that yu were hsting an activity t select The Mst Qualified Student.
2. It is a great hnur fr me t intrduce t yu ne f my best friends, Lin Yang.
3. First f all, he, wh is amng the mst diligent students in ur schl, nt nly studies hard but als behaves well.
4. Secndly, he stands ut fr his diverse hbbies, including painting and playing the vilin.
5. Last but nt least, he is warm-hearted and willing t help thers in need.
6. Therefre, I here recmmend him t yu with all my heart and I lk frward t hearing frm yu at the earliest pssible mment.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First f all, Secndly, Last but nt least
2. 表并列补充关系：nt nly…but (als), including
3. 表因果关系：Therefre
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It is a great hnur fr me t intrduce t yu ne f my best friends, Lin Yang.（非谓语动词不定式作主语，it形式主语）
[高分句型2] First f all, he, wh is amng the mst diligent students in ur schl, nt nly studies hard but als behaves well. （wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．Dear Mike,
I’m glad t knw that yu are cming t China during Christmas. The fllwing is a brief intrductin abut sme places f interest that I strngly recmmend t yu.
The Great Wall f China is ne f the greatest wnders f the wrld and is visible frm uter space. Because f its rich histry and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lt f turists, scientists, and histrians.
The famus West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shres f the East China Sea near the muth f the Hangzhu Bay. The view f the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Lk frward t yur arrival.There are many ther wnderful places here. Wish yu a nice jurney.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Christmas；a brief intrductin；places f interest；the Great Wall；ne f the greatest wnders f the wrld；because f；a lt f；the West Lake；charming；lk frward t；there be
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad t knw that yu are cming t China during Christmas.
2. The fllwing is a brief intrductin abut sme places f interest that I strngly recmmend t yu.
3. The Great Wall f China is ne f the greatest wnders f the wrld and is visible frm uter space.
4. Because f its rich histry and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lt f turists, scientists, and histrians.
5. The famus West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shres f the East China Sea near the muth f the Hangzhu Bay.
6. The view f the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish yu a nice jurney.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：and；What is mre, Besides, Mrever（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because f
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The fllwing is a brief intrductin abut sme places f interest that I strngly recmmend t yu.（使用了由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2] The famus West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shres f the East China Sea near the muth f the Hangzhu Bay.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
[高分句型3] The Great Wall f China is ne f the greatest wnders f the wrld and is visible frm uter space.（使用了由and连接的并列句）
8．Dear Henry,
Pleased t knw yur passin fr learning Chinese, I’m writing t recmmend Xinhua Dictinary t yu. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tl, especially fr the beginners.
Firstly, it’s ne f the mst widely used dictinaries in China, nt nly fr its wide range f vcabulary but als fr its precise explanatin f each wrd. Besides, its reasnable price is undubtedly an appealing factr.
I hpe my suggestin helpful and wish yu great prgress in learning Chinese.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry写一封邮件，为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍词典名称；
2. 说明推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recmmend sth t sb; ne f the mst widely used dictinaries in China; its wide range f vcabulary; its precise explanatin f each wrd; its reasnable price; wish yu great prgress in learning Chinese
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing t recmmend Xinhua Dictinary t yu.
2. Firstly, it’s ne f the mst widely used dictinaries in China, nt nly fr its wide range f vcabulary but als fr its precise explanatin f each wrd.
3. Besides, its reasnable price is undubtedly an appealing factr.
4. I hpe my suggestin helpful and wish yu great prgress in learning Chinese.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, nt nly…but (als)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Pleased t knw yur passin fr learning Chinese, I’m writing t recmmend Xinhua Dictinary t yu.（用过去分词pleased作状语）
[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s ne f the mst widely used dictinaries in China, nt nly fr its wide range f vcabulary but als fr its precise explanatin f each wrd.（用nt nly…but als…连接两个并列的原因状语）
9．Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practising. Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan t d sth.(计划做某事)；in ne's place(代替某人)；recmmend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；bth…and…(两者都……)；take care f(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Ellen,
I' m excited t receive yur letter. Hearing that yu are ging t visit China, I will recmmend the mst representative turist sites f Chinese culture t yu.
Shandng Qufu , is the hmetwn f Cnfucius. The mst famus cultural sites here are Three-hle Scenic Spt and Cnfucius Cultural Park, which attract numerus turists frm bth hme and abrad annually. Three-hle Scenic Spt are Cnfucian Temple, Cnfucian Mansin, and Cnfucian Garden. These three sites have been listed as a UNESCO Wrld Heritage Site since 1994.
Cnfucius is the first philspher wh established a philsphical system in the histry f China. He is als a great thinker, statesman, and educatr in ancient China. Fr thusands f years, Cnfucius culture has had a psitive impact n Chinese educatin and the frmatin f Chinese peple's gd qualities.
That's my suggestins and I' m lking frward t yur cming t China quickly.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，收到你的美国朋友艾伦（Ellen）的来信说要来中国旅游，请你给他回信帮忙推荐最具中国文化代表性的旅游景点。你的回信内容如下：
1.旅游地点：山东曲阜； 2.参观景点：三孔景区（孔庙、孔府、孔林）、孔子文化园；
3.推荐原因：几千年来，孔子文化对中国的教育和中国人优良品质的形成，有着积极的影响意义。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：recmmend, representative turist sites, Three-hle Scenic Spt, Cnfucius Cultural Park, UNESCO Wrld Heritage Site, philspher, thinker, statesman, educatr, psitive impact.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文以一般现在时为主。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Hearing that yu are ging t visit China运用了非谓语动词和宾语从句；The mst famus cultural sites here are Three-hle Scenic Spt and Cnfucius Cultural Park, which attract numerus turists frm bth hme and abrad annually. 和Cnfucius was the first philspher wh established a philsphical system in the histry f China.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。