山东高考英语作文分类训练:申请信
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这是一份山东高考英语作文分类训练:申请信,共18页。试卷主要包含了期望和祝福,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容,欢迎下载使用。
Vlunteers wanted fr part-time wrk at lcal wildlife park
·A lve fr animals,
·Knwledge f wildlife.
·Fluency in spken English.
·9 am t 3 pm five days a week.
Cntact:
Qfwwrld@163.cm
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置做答。
2.假定你是李华,你所在的城市正在创建文明城市。在创建的过程中,需要大量志愿者,因此成立志愿者俱乐部,你想成为一名志愿者,请你用英语给俱乐部负责人写一封信,内容包括:
1、自我介绍,申请加入;
2.加入的理由;
3.期望和祝福。
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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3.假定你是李华,你校英语社团公众号计划为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片,现招募英文字幕编写者,你想申请加入,内容包括:
1. 提出申请;2. 你的优势;3. 期待加入。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:英文字幕English subtitles 纪录片dcumentary
4.假定你是李华,你校交换生David有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部(Sunshine Club),向你咨询相关情况,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示支持;
2.主要志愿活动;
3.申请方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.假定你是李华, 你所在的城市将举办“国际旅游博览会(the Internatinal Turism Fair)”, 计划招募志愿者, 你希望报名参加。请你用英语写一封申请信, 内容包括:
1.表达意愿; 2.你的优势。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
6.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者,其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化,组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语,请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.申请原因;
2.你的优势;
3.相关经历。
注意:1. 词数不少于 100;2. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that vlunteers fr Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华, 英国某高中为你校学生提供交换生机会, 你想申请参加。请你根据以下要点提示, 写一封申请信, 内容包括:
1. 提出申请;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
8.假如你是李华,得知美国好友Eric已成功申请北京大学(Peking University),现请你用英文给他写封电子邮件向他表示祝贺,内容要点包括:
1.成功的祝贺;2.努力的肯定;3.未来的祝愿。
注意:1、词数80左右;2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.假定你是李华,正在美国某中学学习。你校乒乓球社团即将招募新成员。请你给社团负责人Mr Smith写一封信,内容包括:
1、自我介绍,申请加入;
2、加入的理由;
3、希望获准。
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.假定你是李华,打算报名参加2022年北京冬奥会全球志愿者。你的新西兰笔友Tim有相关经验,请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的打算;
2. 寻求帮助;
3. 期待回复。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1.Dear Sir/Madam (Qfwwrld@163.cm),
I am Li Hua, a student frm China. Having read yur advertisement n the Internet, I’m writing t request a valuable chance t be a part-time vlunteer at the lcal wildlife park. The fllwing are my strengths.
Having a lve fr animals, I enjy being with animals. What’s mre, I have such a gd knwledge f wildlife that I have n difficulty taking care f animals. Apart frm that, I am s fluent in spken English that I can cmmunicate with the ther members in English. I have time and I can wrk frm 9 am t 3 pm five days a week.
I am sure that I am suitable fr this psitin. I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封求职信,申请做一名当地野生动物园的兼职志愿者。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
机会:pprtunity→chance
优点:advantage→strength
喜欢:like→enjy
口头的:ral→spken
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Having a lve fr animals, I enjy being with animals.
拓展句:Because I have a lve fr animals, I enjy being with animals.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Having read yur advertisement n the Internet, I’m writing t request a valuable chance t be a part-time vlunteer at the lcal wildlife park. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词的完成式作状语)
【高分句型2】Apart frm that, I am s fluent in spken English that I can cmmunicate with the ther members in English. (运用了s… that句型,that引导结果状语从句)
2.Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a middle schl student. Learning ur city is recruiting vlunteers fr creating the civilized city, I wuld like t apply fr a psitin as a vlunteer with reasns as fllws.
Firstly, I am in favr f the idea that everyne shuld make great effrts t develp ur city .Then, enthusiastic and cnsiderate, I am always ready t ffer a hand t thers. Additinally, I am independent, that is, I have the ability t deal with sme certain prblems. Finally, I sincerely hpe ur city will be better and better.
I wuld be very grateful if yu give me the pprtunity. I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs truthfully
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给俱乐部负责人写一封信,申请加入志愿者俱乐部。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
招募:emply→ recruit
支持:supprt→ in favr f
努力做:try hard→ make great effrts t d
感激的:thankful → grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句:I am in favr f the idea and everyne shuld make great effrts t develp ur city .
拓展句:I am in favr f the idea that everyne shuld make great effrts t develp ur city .
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Learning ur city is recruiting vlunteers fr creating the civilized city, I wuld like t apply fr a psitin as a vlunteer with reasns as fllws.(运用非谓语动词放在句首作状语)
[高分句型2]
Firstly,I am in favr f the idea that everyne shuld make great effrts t develp ur city .(运用that引导同位语从句,解释说明idea的具体内容)
3.Dear Sir r Madam,
Hearing that vlunteers wh can write English subtitles are needed fr the cming dcumentary fr the life f senir three students, hardly can I wait t apply fr the psitin.
As a senir student, I have a better understanding f this tugh but very meaningful year, because f which I can write mre tuching and dramatic subtitles fr the wnderful scenes in the dcumentary. Besides, what qualifies me mst is that my gd cmmand f English makes me have n difficulty in writing. Additinally, with enthusiasm and respnsibility, I d hld the belief that I am perfectly qualified fr it.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。因考生学校英语社团公众号计划为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片,现招募英文字幕编写者,考生想写信申请加入。要求考生内容包括:提出申请、考生的优势和期待加入三部分。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
有意义的:meaningful→ significant
此外:besides → what’s mre
考虑: accunt→ cnsideratin
了解:have a gd knwledge f→have a better understanding f
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Hearing that vlunteers wh can write English subtitles are needed fr the cming dcumentary fr the life f senir three students, hardly can I wait t apply fr the psitin.
拓展句:As I have heard that vlunteers wh can write English subtitles are needed fr the cming dcumentary fr the life f senir three students, I can hardly wait t apply fr the psitin.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Besides, what qualifies me mst is that my gd cmmand f English makes me have n difficulty in writing. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Additinally, with enthusiasm and respnsibility, I d hld the belief that I am perfectly qualified fr it.(运用了助动词d表强调,that引导的同位语从句)
4.【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad t knw yur desire t be a vlunteer f the Sunshine Club. As a member, I d regard it wrthwhile t be engaged in vlunteering and I’m writing t give yu my full supprt.
As fr majr activities, regularly, we are cmmitted t raising funds and dnatins fr thse in need. Smetimes we hld events in the lcal cmmunity t raise peple's awareness f envirnmental prtectin.
Once yu have decided, please fill in the applicatin frm attached and send it t me. Lking frward t yur participatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你校有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部(Sunshine Club)的交换生David写一封回信,告知相关情况。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴:happy →glad
想要:want →desire
参加:participate in →be engaged in
认为:think= regard
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Smetimes we hld events in the lcal cmmunity t raise peple's awareness f envirnmental prtectin.
拓展句:Smetimes we hld events in the lcal cmmunity,which aims t raise peple's awareness f envirnmental prtectin.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As a member, I d regard it wrthwhile t be engaged in vlunteering and I’m writing t give yu my full supprt.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的结构。
[高分句型2] Once yu have decided, please fill in the applicatin frm attached and send it t me.这句话运用了nce引导的条件状语从句。
5.Dear Sir r Madam,
I have seen yur recruitment infrmatin fr vlunteers n the newspaper.I’d like t apply t be ne.
First f all, I’m willing t prvide service fr the public.The Internatinal Turism Fair is an imprtant event t be held in ur city.I’d feel hnred if I have a chance t d vluntary wrk fr the guests frm all ver the wrld.Secndly, I speak English fluently, which enables me t cmmunicate well with freigners.Last but nt least, I have the experience f ding vluntary wrk.
Please take my applicatin int cnsideratin and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语写一封申请信,报名参加“国际旅游博览会(the Internatinal Turism Fair)”的志愿者招募活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
首先:first f all→t start with
愿意:be willing t d sth.→wuld like t d sth.
重要的:imprtant→significant
机会:chance→pprtunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First f all, I’m willing t prvide service fr the public.
拓展句:First f all, I’m willing t prvide service fr the public, which is undubtedly meaningful.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I’d feel hnred if I have a chance t d vluntary wrk fr the guests frm all ver the wrld.(if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]
Secndly, I speak English fluently, which enables me t cmmunicate well with freigners.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that vlunteers fr Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. I’m writing t apply fr this psitin.
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty fr me t ffer the best vluntary service t ur freign guests and meanwhile prmte Chinese culture.
I believe I’m qualified fr the jb. I have a gd cmmand f English and I’m cnfident in giving players guidance and help as required. What’s mre, I have an extensive knwledge f winter sprts, which will prve helpful in cmmunicating with players. In additin, I have been invlved in several internatinal exchange prgrams, and enjyed spreading ur culture t freigners.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity. Thank yu fr yur time and cnsideratin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文写一封申请信,申请成为北京冬奥会志愿者。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供:prvide→ffer
促进:bst→prmte
大量的:massive→extensive
另外:in additin=besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I believe I’m qualified fr the jb. I have a gd cmmand f English and I’m cnfident in giving players guidance and help as required.
拓展句:I believe I’m qualified fr the jb because I have a gd cmmand f English and I’m cnfident in giving players guidance and help as required.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I have learned that vlunteers fr Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s mre, I have an extensive knwledge f winter sprts, which will prve helpful in cmmunicating with players.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.One pssible versin:
Dear Sir,
I’m eager t be an exchange student in yur schl.
Since we live in a glbal village, n cuntry can develp n its wn; nbdy can achieve persnal grwth by himself r herself. Therefre, we shuld learn frm each ther. In additin, such a learning experience is nt nly a great chance fr me t imprve myself, but als a precius pprtunity t spread Chinese culture t my British friends.
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请信,申请成为英国某高中的交换生。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 提出申请;
2. 说明理由。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be eager t(渴望去做某事); an exchange student(交换生); live in a glbal village(住在一个地球村); n ne’s wn(独自的); learn frm(向……学习); spread Chinese culture(传播中国文化); lk frward t(期盼)
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m eager t be an exchange student in yur schl.
2. Since we live in a glbal village, n cuntry can develp n its wn; nbdy can achieve persnal grwth by himself r herself.
3. Therefre, we shuld learn frm each ther.
4. In additin, such a learning experience is nt nly a great chance fr me t imprve myself, but als a precius pprtunity t spread Chinese culture t my British friends.
5. I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系: nt nly…but (als),in additin
2. 表因果关系:Therefre
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Since we live in a glbal village, n cuntry can develp n its wn; nbdy can achieve persnal grwth by himself r herself. 由于我们生活在一个地球村,没有一个国家可以自己发展;没有人能自己实现个人成长。(since引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] In additin, such a learning experience is nt nly a great chance fr me t imprve myself, but als a precius pprtunity t spread Chinese culture t my British friends. 此外,这样的学习经历不仅是我提高自己的一个很大的机会,也是向我的英国朋友传播中国文化的宝贵机会。(nt nly…but als…连接的并列句)
8.Dear Eric,
Learning that yu have been admitted t Peking University, I'm writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins.
Undeniably, pprtunities favr thse wh are well prepared. In the past three years, yu've been explring, accumulating and prgressing steadily in yur study. Nw yur effrts have paid ff. Yu've made it t yur ideal university. And I am sure, at Peking University where mre chances will be available fr yu t exhibit yur cmpetence, yu will make even mre remarkable achievements.
Cngratulatins again and best wishes fr yur bright future.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给已成功申请北京大学的美国好友Eric写封邮件向他表示祝贺。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时、现在完成时和一般将来时和少量现在完成进行时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表达对成功的祝贺;
2.表达对努力的肯定;
3.表达对未来的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be admitted t Peking University; extend my heartfelt cngratulatins; pay ff; be available fr yu; exhibit yur cmpetence; make even mre remarkable achievement; best wishes fr yur bright future
第三步:连词成句
1. Learning that yu have been admitted t Peking University, I'm writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins.
2. Nw yur effrts have paid ff. Yu've made it t yur ideal university.
3. Yu've made it t yur ideal university.
4. And I am sure, at Peking University where mre chances will be available fr yu t exhibit yur cmpetence, yu will make even mre remarkable achievements.
5. Cngratulatins again and best wishes fr yur bright future.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:and
3.表转折对比关系:Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Learning that yu have been admitted t Peking University, I'm writing t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins.(现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. And I am sure, at Peking University where mre chances will be available fr yu t exhibit yur cmpetence, yu will make even mre remarkable achievements.(where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型3]. Cngratulatins again and best wishes fr yur bright future.(固定句型best wishes fr)
9.Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student in ur schl. I'm writing t apply t be a member f ur schl ping-png team. I have cnfidence that I am a wise chice fr the team.
T begin with, I am enthusiastic abut ping-png and started playing it in primary schl. In additin, I have played in several ping-png matches and perfrmed well. Last but nt least, it is playing ping-png that cnnects yur cuntry with mine clser, s I'd like t take this chance t make friends with mre peple wh als enjy playing ping-png.
I really hpe t jin yu. I'd appreciate it if yu can supprt me and give me sme necessary help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给社团负责人Mr Smith写一封信,向他申请加入学校的乒乓球社团。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法
要求:
1、自我介绍,申请加入;
2、加入的理由;
3、希望获准。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
apply t; have cnfidence that; be enthusiastic abut; in additin; make friends with; jin; supprt
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm writing t apply t be a member f ur schl ping-png team.
2. I have cnfidence that I am a wise chice fr the team.
3. T begin with, I am enthusiastic abut ping-png and started playing it in primary schl.
4. In additin, I have played in several ping-png matches and perfrmed well.
5. Last but nt least, it is playing ping-png that cnnects yur cuntry with mine clser, s I'd like t take this chance t make friends with mre peple wh als enjy playing ping-png.
6. I really hpe t jin yu.
7. I'd appreciate it if yu can supprt me and give me sme necessary help.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last,. In additin, Last but nt least
2.表因果关系:S
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Last but nt least, it is playing ping-png that cnnects yur cuntry with mine clser, s I'd like t take this chance t make friends with mre peple wh als enjy playing ping-png. (运用了wh引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I have cnfidence that I am a wise chice fr the team. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
10.Dear Tim,
I am eagerly planning t apply t be a vlunteer fr Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games. Knwing yu have relevant experience, I’m writing t ask a favr frm yu.
T begin with, please tell me what I shuld prepare in advance and since a cnvincing applicatin is f vital imprtance, culd yu give me sme directin n hw t write it? What’s mre, I wuld appreciate it if yu culd share yur vlunteer experience with me in detail, which I think will help me becme smewhat familiar with this kind f wrk.
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邮件给新西兰笔友Tim,了解相关情况。
【详解】
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信;假定你打算报名参加2022年北京冬奥会全球志愿者。你的新西兰笔友Tim有相关经验,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.你的打算;2.寻求帮助;3.期待回复。人称使用第一人称;时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:apply t申请;relevant experience相关经历;ask a favr请求帮助;vital imprtance至关重要;prepare in advance提前准备;in detail详细等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如T begin with, please tell me what I shuld prepare in advance as well as the respnsibilities and rights f vlunteers.宾语从句的运用;What’s mre, I wuld appreciate it if yu culd share yur vlunteer experience with me in detail, which I think will help me becme smewhat familiar with this kind f wrk.定语从句的运用,全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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