06 多彩社团与课外活动2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

这是一份06 多彩社团与课外活动2022年中考英语满分作文赏析，共9页。
NO.1
（2022·湖南长沙·中考真题）新学期来了，学生社团又要招新啦！假如你是社团招新工作负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文，为同学们介绍社团的情况（包括名称、活动及目的）。
要求：
（1）介绍下表中第1和第2两个社团，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充介绍第3个社团；
（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Clubs Are Calling!The new term is here. Are yu ready fr an interesting and clrful schl life? Nw I’d like t intrduce sme f ur clubs.
In the club f Public Speakers, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Clubs Are Calling!The new term is here. Are yu ready fr an interesting and clrful schl life? Nw I’d like t intrduce sme f ur clubs.
In the club f Public Speakers, yu will practice speaking in public and give speeches. The purpse is t vice pinins clearly and cnfidently. By jining this club, yu can vercme yur fear and shyness and becme mre ut-ging. The Cl Cks club is really cl. It hlds activities such as designing healthy menus and learning hw t ck. Yu can taste different fd and develp a balanced and healthy eating habit. It will make yur life mre enjyable. If yu want t lse weight r just keep fit, the Sprts Club is yur best chice. There are many kinds f sprts in this club. Yu can chse yur wn favurite sprts and d exercise with friends and ther students. S yu will make mre friends at the same time.
Yu can chse mre than ne club, depending n yur interest and time. I believe these clubs will make yur schl life full f surprises. Jin us nw!
【解析】
1.题干解读：题干要求根据表格中所给的两个社团的信息，并补充第三个社团信息，介绍这三个社团，包括它们的名称、活动内容和目的。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现时和一般将来时，以第三人称介绍俱乐部。写作时承接所给开头，对三个俱乐部的活动和目的分别进行描述，最后另起一段表达期望并呼吁同学们加入。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。
NO.2
（2022·贵州铜仁·中考真题）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
提示词：
labr practice base（劳动实践基地）
digging the land（松土）；
respect（尊重）。
Clrful After-Schl Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad t share the clrful after-schl activities f ur schl. In ur schl, we can chse what we are interested in.
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【满分作文赏析】
Clrful After-Schl Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad t share the clrful after-schl activities f ur schl. In ur schl, we can chse what we are interested in.
If yu want t imprve yur ral English, yu can chse English Club. Yu can learn abut hw t recite here. If yu are gd at drawing, yu can jin Drawing Club. Yu can als learn abut paper-cutting. If yu are interested in grwing vegetables and planting, yu can jin Labur Practice. If yu want t keep healthy, yu can jin Sprts Club. Yu can learn hw t swim, play ftball and s n.
These after-schl activities nt nly enrich ur after-schl lives, but als teach us sme basic skills.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.3
（2022·四川泸州·中考真题）开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free-time Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你及朋友们的课外活动开展情况。
要点提示：
1. 内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读……。
2. 好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。
3. 个人观点：……。
要求：
1. 词数110词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语： vlunteer， relax， knwledge， skill
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers.
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【满分作文赏析】
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers.
My friends and I have a variety f free-time activities. First, we ften run fr an hur n weekends and we always play ftball after class because we all like playing it. If we have time, we will draw sme beautiful pictures t decrate ur schl. What’s mre, we ften help ur parents d the husewrk. Even sme f us d sme vlunteer wrk, such as cleaning the park and visiting the ld. And we als read sme interesting bks and share ur ideas tgether.
Free-time activities are beneficial t us. We can nt nly relax, but als we can learn sme knwledge that can’t be learnt in class. Besides, we can learn sme skills that are imprtant t ur life. The mst imprtant is that we can make many friends wh have the same interest.
In my pinin, we shuld spare sme time t d free-time activities in rder t grw up healthily.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Free-time Activities”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段从不同方面介绍自己和朋友的课外活动；第三段介绍课外活动的好处；最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.4
（2022·浙江丽水·中考真题）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
注意：
1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3）词数：80~ 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【满分作文赏析】
Dear David,
Glad t share my scial practice plan with yu.
As it will be the last summer hliday in junir schl, sme classmates and I plan t g n a graduatin trip t Hangzhu, the capital city f Zhejiang. By enjying the beautiful scenery and clrful cultures there, we can pen ur eyes and bring sme unfrgettable memries. After the trip, I will vlunteer t help in ur city library, srting ut bks, guiding readers t the right bkshelves, and f curse, cmmunicating with different peple. I’m sure this experience can nt nly enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning f learning by ding.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划；最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.5
（2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）读下面的文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。
D yu feel tired f the same everyday life? “Survival(生存) Hlidays” is fr children t g int the lnely place fr exciting activities. Abut 1,100 schls will take children int the great utdrs withut their parents this summer.
Why d peple like “Survival Hlidays”? Because they think being clse t nature is gd fr children. Many children in big cities spend all time watching TV and playing cmputer games. “Survival Hlidays” gives them an imprtant change.
Is “Survival Hlidays” a wnderful idea? It is. Children will have mre free time t play and learn t face danger. They dn’t knw what t d when they are in danger. Even smething like crssing a small river seems t be a hard challenge. Children are nt cmfrtable with danger. Even small danger like getting their feet wet r falling dwn seems very terrible t them.
Many peple think the survival activities are gd fr children. Even years later, they will still remember what they have learned. Sme have learned t stay clam in difficult times. Sme have learned hw t keep safe. Others have learned hw t wrk in a team. All these skills will help them a lt in their lives.
1. What is “Survival Hlidays”?
2. Why d peple like “Survival Hlidays”?
3. Is “Survival Hlidays” a wnderful idea? Why r why nt?
4. What are the gd pints f the survival activities?
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【满分作文赏析】
“Survival Hlidays” is fr children t g int the lnely place fr exciting activities. Peple like it because they think being clse t nature is gd fr children. It als gives them an imprtant change. “Survival Hlidays” is a wnderful idea because children will have mre free time t play and learn t face danger. What’s mre, they can learn t stay clam, keep safe and wrk in a team.
【解析】
1.题干解读：短文主要讲述了人们为什么喜欢“生存假期”以及它的好处。根据问题提示，按照题目要求，概括文章大意。
2.写作指导：写作时首先需要阅读全文，理解文章大意，然后根据文章给出的四个问题，在原文中找出对应的内容，最后用自己的话总结出大意。注意上下文连贯，使用适当的连词连接句子，保证语句通顺，无单词语法错误1. Public Speakers
Activities:
practice speaking in public and give speeches; …
Purpses:
t vice pinins clearly and cnfidently; t vercme fear and shyness; …
2. Cl Cks
Activities:
design（设计）healthy menus and learn hw t ck; …
Purpses:
t have balanced（均衡的）and healthy eating; t enjy life; …
3. ____Sprts____
Activities:
chse yur wn favurite sprts and d exercise with friends;…
Purpses:
t keep fit and lse weight; t make mre friends;…
Scial Practice Plan
What t d
Why t d s
●vlunteer t d...
●make a survey abut...
●have a graduatin trip t...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn mre abut...
●pen ne’s eyes...
●…
Dear David,Glad t share my scial practice plan with yu.
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming