高考英语书面表达【概要写作】世界人口 课件

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It is necessary fr a hst family t prepare fr a cming exchange student. Firstly, the rm fr the student shuld be furnished accrding t his r her persnal preference. Secndary,find ut if the student has sme special needs. If s, try t satisfy his r her needs. Thirdly,if the exchange student is hmesick,cnsult the cunselrs f the exchange prgram r a family dctr.(67wrds)
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Attentin1: N paragraphing!(分段)
A new app “Pkemen G” ,released n July 6,which allws peple t spt Pkemn characters, is getting increasingly ppular,especially amng the yung peple. Sme players are reprted t have been injured when playing “Pkemn G”, which als leads t serius cnsequences.Althugh the game is installed with a built-in warning, sme players are s absrbed as t verlk thei surrundings,as a result f which,the accidents still cur,causing cnplaint amng the drivers.Players are als reminded t bey the law.Hwever,n the ther side, peple can catch Pkemn tgether even thugh they are ttal strangers.(100 wrds)
Attentin2: N verwriting!
Tip:wrds limit: abut 60s wrd:≤40 wrds & ≥80 wrds
The ways t get rid f dirt Peple have mixed pinins twards dirt n ur skin. Fr a lng time , peple f sme Eurpean cuntries, such as France, believed that dirt prtested peple rm getting ill. Hwever, peple began t change their attitudes 300 years ag. Peple have been tld that washing dirt ff ur bdy can keep us healthy. But sme scientists believe that expure t sme diet may help ur immune system.(67 wrds)
Attentin3: N titling!
Attentin4: N scrabbling!(乱涂乱写)
Scan the passage （览全文，定题材） Step1
Underline the main pints（划要点） Step2
Miss the details（省细节） Step2
Analyse the structure （析结构） Step3
Yke the sentences t a passage（连全文）Step5
Restate the pints（换表达） Step4
Hw t find the key pints？
Hw t paraphrase the key pints？
Hw t make a passage？
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Feeding the wrld’s grwing ppulatin is a big challenge, and it is abut t get bigger. Right nw, a little mre than 7.3 billin peple share the planet. By 2050, sme scientists estimate, the wrld’s ppulatin may reach 9 billin. Althugh many peple dn’t believe it, that is the cnclusin reached by sme scientists. Just three crps—wheat, rice and crn—prvide mre than tw-thirds f the calries that peple cnsume. Such crps, and a small number f ther imprtant crps, cme frm farming regins smetimes referred t as “breadbaskets”. These areas ften ccupy a relatively small prtin(部分) f the glbe. Wrse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flding r extended heat wave can kill crps. That’s especially true if the bad weather ccurs when a crp is yung, fruiting r appraching harvest.Unfrtunately, big crp failures in tw r mre breadbaskets culd lead t what researchers call a “fd shck”. That means an verall shrtage f fd wuld ccur. Extreme fd shcks used t happen every century. Or t put it anther way, that’s nly abut nce in very fur generatins f humans. Hwever, accrding t studies, as the climate warms, high and lw temperatures becme mre extreme, and by 2050, fd shcks culd ccur abut nce every 30 years. In ther wrds, a persn brn in the middle f the current century might live thrugh tw r three extreme fd shcks during their lifetime.S what can peple d t help avid fd shcks? Making agriculture efficient is ne chice. But ne f the mst effective ways t fight against fd shcks might be t cut dwn n fd waste. “If we culd cut fd waste in half,” said Seth Ck, a British envirnmental scientist, “we culd feed an extra billin peple.”
Step1 Scan the passage （览全文，定题材）
1. Type :2.Tpic：
Expsitin（说明文）
It is difficult t feed the wrld’s grwing ppulatin.
Tip1 ：The tpic is usually in the first paragraph.
Step2 Underline the main pints & miss the details （划要点&省细节）
Feeding the wrld’s grwing ppulatin is a big challenge, and it is abut t get bigger.
Right nw, than 7.3 billin 2050, wrld’s ppulatin may reach 9 billin.
Tip 2：Omit（省去） the detailed statistics/data
the breadbaskets are easily affected by ...
Wrse still,
These areas ften ccupy a relatively small prtin...
Breadbaskets
Tip 3：Pay attentin t typical wrds.
1.fr example，take…as an example
2. as a result; in a wrd, t cnclude, in fact, therefre...
4. what’s wrse, besides
3. hwever，but...
... big crp failures t “fd shck”.
Extreme fd shcks used t happen every century. Or t put it anther way,, 2050, fd shcks culd ccur abut nce every 30 years.In ther wrds...
Tip 4：Pay attentin t the repeated wrds and explanatin wrds
S what can peple d t help avid fd shcks?
1.Making agriculture efficient…… ne chice.
2.But ne f the mst effective ways…… cut dwn n fd waste.
Para. 4: S what can peple d t help avid fd shcks? Making agriculture efficient is ne chice. But ne f the mst effective ways t fight against fd shcks might be t cut dwn n fd waste. “If we culd cut fd waste in half,” said Seth Ck, a British envirnmental scientist, “we culd feed an extra billin peple.”
Tip 4：Ignre the qutatins. （引语）
Step3 Analyse the structure（析结构）
Expsitin（说明文）
Step4 Restate the pints（换表达）
Para. 1: Feeding the wrld’s grwing ppulatin is a big challenge, and it is abut t get bigger.
1.Feeding the _____ ppulatin is an ________________ challenge. （替换字词）
increasingly big
2.__ is a bigger and bigger challenge ____ feed the wrld ppulatin. （改变句式）
3.It is mre and mre ___________ t feed the wrld ppulatin.（改变词性）
challenging
4.With ________________________________, it is increasingly challenging t settle the_________ prblem.
wrld ppulatin grwing/the bming f the glbal ppulatin
同学佳句赏析：1.The issue f feeding the wrld’s increasing ppulatin is getting serius. 冉志强2.Feeding the wrld’s rising ppulatin is an ever-increasing bstacle. 童显云3.There is a hard issue f feeding the wrld’s grwing ppulatin.王庭婷4. The wrld is facing a great bstacle f the grwing ppulatin. 董文诗5.Nw it is f great difficulty t prvide mre and mre peple with fd.徐帧屹
Para2：Breadbaskets ften ccupy a relatively small prtin （部分）f the glbe. The breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather.
1.Breadbaskets are ften _______.
2.Breadbaskets are easily ___________________by bad weather.
influenced/impacted
Tip5：One sentence fr ne pint
3.The _______(有限的) breadbaskets are easily ______(影响) by bad weather,which makes things are nt nly limited, but als easily________(影响)by bad bad weather easily ______________(给...压力) the already limited breadbasket.
put stress n
同学佳句赏析：1.The breadbaskets which ccupy a small part f the earth can be influenced easily by bad weather.冉志强2.Sme imprtant breadbaskets ften pssess a small part f the glbe and are influenced by bad weather easily. 张好玟3.Because f the bad weather, the breadbaskets, a small prtin f the wrld, are easily affected.方振4.The reasn is that the breadbaskets which ccupy the small part f the glbe are easily impacted by the bad weather.刘程旭
Para3: big crp failures t ... “fd shck” fd shck used t happen every century fd shck culd ccur nce every 30 years...
1.Big crp failures culd_______________________ a “fd shck”.
accunt fr/cntribute t/result in
3.Fd shcks culd ccur/happen/____________ mre ___________ in the future.
2.A “fd shck” may_________________________ big crp failures.
be caused by/resulted frm/be triggered by
4.Big crp failures culd _________(解释)a “fd shck”,which culd ccur mre________(频繁)in the will happen mre frequently in the future is the “fd shck”, which _________ (由..导致)big crp failures.6. “Fd shck”, _________ (由..导致) the Big crp failure, will ________(爆发)mre frequently in the future.
results frm
resulting frm
同学佳句赏析：1.And a big crp failure will wrsen the situatin as well.阮文毕2.The big failures in breadbaskets will bring abut a “fd shck”. 邹鸿宇3.Big crp failures, hwever, which ccurred in tw r mre breadbaskets culd cause a “fd shck”.赵婧丹 4.“Fd shck” appear in tw r mre breadbaskets frequently, s there will be less fd in the future.方淑婷5.Anther reasn is that the crp failures can give rise t “fd shck”. 刘程旭
Para4：What can peple d t help avid fd shcks? 1.making agriculture efficient 2.cutting dwn n fd waste
1. Peple can_________(避免) fd shcks by making agriculture efficient as well as ________(reduce) fd waste.(改变字词)2. _______(make) agriculture effective and ______ (reduce) fd waste are _________(两种方法)t prevent fd shcks. (改变句式)3.Fd shcks ____________(can avid) by making agriculture effective as well as reducing fd waste.(改变语态)4.T slve the prblem, _________(使变好) agriculture and __________(充分利用)fd are tw effective ways. (理解句意)5.Making agriculture efficient as well as _______(waste) fd less can help prevent fd shcks.(改变词性)
ways/methds/appraches
can be avided
make full use f
同学佳句赏析：1.But, frtunately, there are sme slutins t this prblem. One is t imprve agricultural efficiency and the ther is t reduce fd waste .阮文毕2.One way t vercme it is making agriculture efficient and anther way is aviding wasting. 尚伦江 3.T handle it, ne chice is imprving agriculture efficiency while aviding wasting fd is the mst efficient way.冉志强4.T cpe with it, we shuld be cmmitted t prmting the agriculture technlgy and shrink the waste. 傅婉玲5.In rder t avid the prblem, making agriculture efficient and cutting dwn n fd waste are tw gd ways.周森全
同学佳句赏析：6. Making agriculture efficient is ne way t reslve it, but saving fd can be mre useful.王庭婷7. we can make agriculture efficient and lessen fd waste t avid it.蹇庆林8.Nevertheless human can take measures t handle it by making agriculture efficient and cutting dwn n fd waste. 汤祺9.But we can increase agricultural efficiency and decrease fd waste t cpe with it.刘程旭10.Therefre, making agriculture efficient and reducing waste is f vital imprtance t deal with it.曹端广
Step5 Yke the sentences t a passage（连全文）
It is increasingly challenging t feed the grwing glbal ppulatin.(pint1)The limited breadbaskets are easily influenced by bad weather.(pint2)Big crp failures culd accunt fr a “fd shck” ,which culd happen mre frequently in the future.(pint3) Effective ways culd help prevent fd shcks such as making agriculture efficient as well as wasting fd. (pint4)
Step5Yke the sentences t a passage（连全文）
It is increasingly challenging t feed the grwing glbal ppulatin._________________________the limited breadbaskets are easily influenced by bad weather.______________________big crp failures culd accunt fr a “fd shck” ,which culd happen mre frequently in the future. _________, effective ways culd help prevent fd shcks such as making agriculture efficient as well as wasting fd. （64wrds）
One f the reasns is that
Anther reasn is that
Hwever/Frtunately
Tip6：Add prper linking wrds r trasitinal wrds t plish the passage.
while; hwever; nevertheless; despite the fact that; in spite f; n the cntrary; .
therefre; as a result; cnsequently; because f; accrdingly; in this way; thanks t;
in shrt; in brief；t sum up; n the whle; in a wrd ；
what's mre; what's wrse; wrse still; besides; in additin; mrever; furthermre; nt nly ... but als;
Tip6：Add prper linking wrds r transitinal wrds t plish the passage.
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A Gd Summary Writing
1.N paragraphing2.N verwriting3.N titling4.N scrabbling