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图表作文1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 当今社会,短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一,日前,某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查,结果如下:获取短视频内容的类型受访者平均使用时间占比(该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间)辅助学习类48%娱乐休闲类31%生活技能类12%其他9% 请简单描述该图表,并结合自身或他人情况,谈谈你的看法。(文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)2.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.国际经合组织(OECD)对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查,结果如下图。请联系自身实际,谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.假设你是李华,你的英语老师把你班同学分成几个小组来调查班里患近视(short-sightedness)的同学的人数和原因。你们小组调查后做了如下图所示的统计,请分析下面的饼状图,并谈谈你的看法及建议。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.下列图表反映的是某高中2010年与2013年学生健康状况调查的部分数据,请你用英语为某报写一份报告,反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况,分析其中原因,并提出一些改进措施。注意事项:1.报告必须包括图表中所有内容,但不要逐条罗列;2.词数100左右。开头语已为你写好。A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因,请根据你对图表和漫画的理解,用英语写一篇短文。写作要点:1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势;2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因;3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。注意:1.可参照图表、漫画及下面文章开头所给的提示进行必要的发挥;2.词数100左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。Many animals are in danger of dying out.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass more laws to forbid killing wild animals. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.6.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.近期,你就影响选择大学也的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研,结果如图所示,请结合图表信息写一份调研报告,须包括以下内容:1. 图表产生的背景和基本内容:2. 就你个人而言,你会考虑哪些因素?请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素,并说明理由。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.目前,网络语言(Internet Slang)在青少年中极为盛行,你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查,调查结果见下面饼状图(pie chart)。请根据图中信息,用英语写一篇短文,介绍同学们的看法,并表达你自己的观点。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着电脑普及率的提高,老师、家长和学生对手写字的重视程度降低了。下图是一项调查显示中学生不想改善字迹的理由。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.近来,一系列“拍照搜题”的软件大受学生的欢迎,这些只要拍照就能搜到解题思路和答案的“神器”却让许多家长和老师犯了愁。你的学校对于学生使用这些学习软件开展了一次调查,下图是调查结果。请你就此写一篇文章,必须包括以下内容:1.简要描述图表;2.分析该现象,并谈谈你的看法。10.Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是王伟,你的好朋友卢华想要做些适合初中生看的关于英语语法学习的微视频,但他不知道每个微视频该做多少分钟。请你根据一下图表的信息,写信就视频长度和内容给他建议。你的文章须包含以下内容:1. 描述该图片 2.根据图片中获得的信息给出建议________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案:1.A survey conducted by a website is aimed at figuring out the situation about high school students’ use of short videos as a channel for gaining information. As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills. And 9% is spent on random contents.As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos. Thus, it is no wonder that a large proportion of their time is spent on short videos. I am sure that this trend will continue and last forever.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。【详解】1.词汇积累旨在:be aimed at→ be intended to do与……相关:related to→ with regard to除此以外:in addition→ additionally提高:improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills.拓展句:In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos that are relevant to some important life skills.【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.(运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos.(运用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+for sb. to do sth.的结构)2.The ORGANISATION for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD) asked 600,000 teenagers what worried them most about their lives.It turns out that forty percent of the students in their academic assignments feel pressure; thirty percent of the students on their relationship with their parents feel a little nervous; twenty-five percent of the students in their own image more care about, giving them some confusion.The remaining five percent of the students feel anxious and concerned about other things. As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study. It makes me feel anxious and confused and sometimes helpless. Maybe because of a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood. To improve their psychological quality, I think we students should be better improved. I think we should get more help from parents and teachers.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对国际经合组织(OECD)对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行调查的结果,联系自身实际,谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。【详解】1.词汇积累压力:pressure→ stress担心:be concerned about→ be worried about就我而言:as far as I am concerned → personally speaking无助的:helpless→ unassisted2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句: Maybe because of a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood .拓展句: It is maybe because of a failure in an exam thatI will be in a bad mood.【点睛】【高分句型1】twenty-five percent of the students in their own image more care about, giving them some confusion.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语。)【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study.(运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。)3.Recently, we conducted a survey on short-sightedness among the fifty students in our class. According to the survey, twenty students have good eyesight, while thirty students are short-sighted. We found that eighteen students became short-sighted due to watching TV or sitting in front of a computer for a long time. Nine students said their poor posture led to their short-sightedness. Three other students had other reasons for their poor eyesight. Thus, the main reason for short-sightedness is that some students don’t use their eyes properly.Our eyes are very important to us. We should protect them all the time. We should not watch TV or surf the Internet for hours without breaks. We should also read in a correct way. Furthermore, doing eye exercises is good for our eyes.【解析】【分析】这是一篇图表类作文。要求考生对饼状图所统计的关于班里近视情况的数据进行分,并谈谈自己的看法及建议。【详解】1.词汇积累开展:conduct→carry out由于:due to→because of导致:lead to→contribute to休息:break→rest2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Our eyes are very important to us. We should protect them all the time.拓展句:We should protect our eyes all the time, which are very important to us.【点睛】[高分句型1] Thus, the main reason for short-sightedness is that some students don’t use their eyes properly. (运用了that引导的表语从句) [高分句型2] Furthermore, doing eye exercises is good for our eyes. (运用了动名词作主语)4.One possible version:A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. The number of short-sighted students has increased from 77% in 2010 to 93.5% in 2013, while that of overweight students from 38% to 57.2%.Nearly 15% more students don’t have enough sleep because of more homework. Besides, over 21% more students become mentally unhealthy.It seems to me that the reasons for this lie in heavier burden of study and more homework, thus making students unable to spare any time to take exercise or have enough sleep. To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be healthier. Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight. With their heavy burden removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文,要求考生根据图表写一份你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况的报告。【详解】1.词汇积累大约:nearly →about此外:Besides →Moreover充足的:plenty of →enough增加体重:put on weight →gain weight2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:To improve students’ health, we call for less homework.拓展句:In order that students’ health can be improved, we call for less homework.【点睛】[高分句型1] To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. (运用了不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2] Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be healthier. (运用了部分倒装结构)5. Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past three decades. As a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2015.There are several reasons for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因,请根据你对图表和漫画的理解,用英语写一篇短文。【详解】1.词汇积累一些:several→some减少:decrease→reduce因此:as a result→therefore导致:result in→lead to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason.拓展句:The reason why this problem gets so serious is that the polluted environment, natural disasters and illegal killing are more common.【点睛】[高分句型1] Many animals are in danger of dying out. (运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)6.One possible version:With the college entrance examination approaching, some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities. So we did a research on the problem among 500 students in Grade Three. According to the research, about 175 students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the way leading to success.They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in. However, 150 students think that whether the college is famous is the most important. Only in a famous college will they be able to have a good job in the future. About 90 of the students, however, consider it is the amount of the fee that matters a lot, for, they say, they will not add too much abandon to their parents. Interestingly, 70 students think it is important whether to go to the school is convenient.They say that they will stay the school for about 4 years, so the location of the school is important. In my opinion, interest is the most important of all.Without interest you can't study the subject very well and may have more difficult with your career. Besides, the advice offered by their parents or teachers is worth considering because they have more social experience than us. So we should attach importance to their advice.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇图表作文,要求考生就影响大学选择的因素写一篇调查报告。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的:famous →well-known重要的:important →vital在某人看来:in one’s opinion →in one’s view除此之外:besides → in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:With the college entrance examination approaching, some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.拓展句:As the college entrance examination is approaching, some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.【点睛】【高分句型1】According to the research, about 175 students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)7. With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey. The results are as follows. Some students are in favor of it while some are opposed. 35% students feel it active and fashionable to say Internet Slang. And 33% students think it is full of humor and wisdom. Quarter students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang. While 7% students view it as a simple thing. They think Internet Slang wasn't used by most people and if it is used too often, it will cause misunderstanding. As far as I am concerned, Internet Slang is a double-edged sword. If we use it in a proper way, our online communication will be more colorful.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生就网络语言在同学中极为盛行的现象的调查结果进行阐述,并表达自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越多:more and more→increasing支持:support→in favor of认为:think→hold the opinion that我认为:I think→As far as I am concerned2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey. The results are as follows.拓展句:With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.【点睛】[高分句型1]With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey.(with的复合结构)[高分句型2]Quarter students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang. (同位语从句)8. Nowadays,with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore,in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in the future.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生说明该调查显示的中学生不想改善字迹的理由的这种现象并发表自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累调查:survey→research各种各样的:various→ all kinds of提高:improve →enhance认为:think→ consider2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.拓展句:Beautiful and neat calligraphy is good for students, which is especially for middle school students.【点睛】【高分句型1】10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)9. Recently, there is a steady growth in the popularity of several learning apps which enable students to obtain solutions to tricky problems by simply uploading a snapshot of the exercise. Nevertheless, it is the same apps that have become a headache for concerned teachers and parents. On account of this controversial phenomenon, our school has conducted a survey, the result of which unveils an ascending trend among students. With slightly over 40% of freshmen frequently using such apps, the percentage peaks at around 90% when it comes to the senior students.Behind the phenomenon and the trend are the desperate need of students to solve their problems at hand and the eagerness to present a flawless copy of homework. If applied to proper use, such learning apps can be an effective and efficient aid to the students with an extremely tight schedule.On the flip side, the very apps can also be more of a hindrance than a help to those lacking in self-discipline, who may take advantage of these apps to rush through their homework or even cheat in the exams. In that case, the false impression will arise that they are doing well in study, which is bound to hold back their academic progress.As can be seen from the above analysis, these prevailing apps are like a double-edged sword. Only through our self-discipline and appropriate use can we make the best of these tools and meanwhile minimize the downsides on us.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,近来,一系列“拍照搜题”的软件大受学生的欢迎,这些只要拍照就能搜到解题思路和答案的“神器”却让许多家长和老师犯了愁。你的学校对于学生使用这些学习软件开展了一次调查,下图是调查结果。请你就此写一篇文章。【详解】1.词汇积累获得:get→obtain由于:because of→on account of解决:settle→solve揭示:reveal→unveil2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:With slightly over 40% of freshmen frequently using such apps, the percentage peaks at around 90% when it comes to the senior students.拓展句:Slightly over 40% of freshmen frequently use such apps while the percentage peaks at around 90% when it comes to the senior students.【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, there is a steady growth in the popularity of several learning apps which enable students to obtain solutions to tricky problems by simply uploading a snapshot of the exercise. (运用了which引导定语从句)[高分句型2] Only through our self-discipline and appropriate use can we make the best of these tools and meanwhile minimize the downsides on us. (运用了部分倒装)10.Dear Lu Hua,Knowing that you are willing to make some micro videos about English grammar learning suitable for junior high school students and you don’t know how many minutes you should make for each micro video, I’m writing to give you some suggestions for you to refer to.As we all know, the attention level of students in class is closely related to the length of class time. In the class of less than 10 minutes, students' attention gradually decreases as time goes by and students pay the most attention at the beginning of a class. If you want to make a micro class, you should follow this rule. First of all, in terms of content, we should make interesting content to catch students' eyes and attract students' attention at the very beginning. Secondly, in the grasp of micro class time, try to control the class time within 5 minutes or so, so as to ensure the quality of content and improve the learning efficiency of students.In a word, it is not easy to make a micro class. It needs to be considered from every detail. Wish a complete success.Yours,Wang Wei【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是图表作文。你的好朋友卢华想要做些适合初中生看的关于英语语法学习的微视频,但他不知道每个微视频该做多少分钟。要求考生根据图表的信息给卢华写信,就视频长度和内容给出建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累合适的:suitable→ appropriate建议:suggestion→ advice下降:decrease→ decline确保:ensure → make sure2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:In a word, it is not easy to make a micro class. It needs to be considered from every detail.拓展句:In a word, it is not easy to make a micro class, which needs to be considered from every detail.【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are willing to make some micro videos about English grammar learning suitable for junior high school students and you don’t know how many minutes you should make for each micro video, I’m writing to give you some suggestions for you to refer to.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] If you want to make a micro class, you should follow this rule. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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