高中英语建议信写作课件

这是一份高中英语建议信写作课件，共27页。

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Free talkAs a new student in senir ne, d yu have sme prblems?
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua,———————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Best wishes. Yurs, xxx
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Step1：analyze (审题)
first persn
suggestin letter
suggetins f learning English
simple present tense
Dear Li Hua, Yu have asked me fr my advice n hw t learn English well. Here are my sme suggestins. Firstly, dn' t lse yur heart. Secndly, yu shuld listen t the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, yu can speak English with yur classmates and teachers, which can imprve yur listening and speaking abilities. What's mre, it's gd idea t read English bks befre the class and after the class. I hpe my suggestins will be helpful fr yu. Best wishes. Yurs, xxx
Step2. structure（结构）
prblems and purpses f writing
suggestins f learning English
hpes and wishes
______ parts
Step3: find key pints（要点）Brainstrming
ways t imprve English
Step4: rganize yur writing（组织语言）transitin wrds（过渡词）开始然后最终递进
first, firstly, at first, first f all, t begin with
next, after that, and then
at last, in the end, last but nt least
what's mre, mrever, furthermre, in additin, nt als, fr ne anther..., what's wrse, t make things wrse, wrse still
Step4: rganize yur writing（组织语言）transitin wrds（过渡词）转折因果结论观点
hwever, but, n the cntrary
s, therefre, fr this reasn, as a result, as a cnsequence
in shrt, in brief, in a wrd, in cnclusin, t sum up
in my pinin, as far as I'm cncerned, frm my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by grups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）para1：Purpses and Prblems 1.I’m glad t receive yur letter, asking fr my advice n hw t ... 2.My suggestins are as fllws. 3.I've received yur letter, saying... 4.Here are sme suggestins fr yu. 5.Yu have asked me fr my advice n hw t…
Step5: write a draft（草稿）para2：yur suggestins1.When it cmes t such a situatin, I wuld like t make a suggestin that yu (shuld)…2. Dn't yu think it mre beneficial if yu culd …3. Have yu cnsidered S why nt In my pinin, it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）para3：hpes and wishes1. I believe yu will take my advice int cnsideratin.2. I will be mre than happy t see imprvements in this regard.3. I hpe yu will find these suggestins useful/ helpful.4. I d hpe that my ideas will wrk.
Step6. plish yur writing（润色）
Hw t plish yur writing？
Plish yur cmpsitin by imprving yur handwriting（书写）
Cmpare these tw sentences.Which sentence d yu think can attract the teachers?
Plish yur cmpsitin by imprving yur language
1. Yu tell me that English is diificult t learn.2. I'm infrmed that yu have truble in learning English.
A. excellent wrds and phrases(词汇短语的选择灵活新颖)B. a variety f sentence patterns(句型结构运用高级多变）
Adpt a variety f sentence patterns 丰富句型
1. I am happy t receive yur letter.(改为感叹句） _____ happy I am t receive yur letter.2, It is a useful way t imprve yur English.(改为感叹句）_____ a useful way it is t imprve yur English!
Use a variety f sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English bks helps a lt.(改为强调句）___ is reading English bks _____ helps a lt.4.I hpe my suggetins will be f great help.(改为强调句）I____hpe my suggestins will be f great help.
5. In this way, yu can make great prgress in English.(改为倒装句）_____ in this way, ____ yu make great prgress in yu are having class, yu shuld listen carefully.(改为省略句）When ______ class, yu shuld listen carefully.
7. Yur English will imprve by talking with thers in English.(改为状语从句）___yu talk with thers in English, yur English will imprve.8. Yu shuld have a gd attitude twards learning English. It helps a lt.(改为定语从句）Yu shuld have a gd attitude twards learning English，______ helps a lt.
Use a variety f sentence patterns
9. I want t suggest yu reading mre English bks.(改为名词性从句）______ I want t suggest is _____ yu can read mre English shuld watch English films, because it can develp yur listening skills.(改为定语从句加名词性从句）The reasn _____ yu shuld watch English films is _____ it can develp yur listening skills.
Enjy ne pssible versin frm yur classmate.
beautybe attractive, finished in a limited time!
假设你是学生李华，你的朋友Tm在生活中遇到了一些困难，害羞胆小，在学校没有好朋友，因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样结交好朋友。请你给他回复你的建议。注意： 1．词数：100左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。