高考英语书面表达--概要写作 写的环节 课件

这是一份高考英语书面表达--概要写作 写的环节 课件，共20页。PPT课件主要包含了内容介绍，重难点突破，独立表达自己的观点， 因果关系， 转折关系， 对比关系， 选择关系， 递进关系， 条件关系， 让步关系等内容，欢迎下载使用。
同义替换 （paraphrase）
要点与要点间的关系
due t\ n this accunt\ since\ result frm\ wing taccrdingly\ fr the reasn\ therefre\ cnsequentlylead t \ cntribute t \ result in
hwever\ still\ yet\ while \nevertheless...
remte t\ different frm\ppsed t\rather than\ inferir t
neither…nr\ either…r\ bth…and
in spite f \ despite\even if \ althugh\ thugh\ as
nt nly…but als\ as well as…
if\ whether
词性转换；词与词、短语、固定句式替换
应用语言结构、词汇的准确性
段落与段落之间的关系 （句子承接 连接副词）
并列递进因果转折比较时间解释结论
equally\additinally\as well
mrever\ what’s mre\ what’ wrse
since\ hence\ therefre\ thereby\
nevertheless\nnetheless\actually\in effect\n the cntrary
by cntrast\ in cntrast t
the mment\meanwhile\befre lng
that is\in ther wrds\fr instance\ and s n\ and the like
in a wrd\n the whle\in shrt\briefly\t sum up\ in all
Nt all screen time is equally bad fr …perfrmance; watching TV and playing vide games negatively impacted …Watching Tv impacted teens in…and yunger children in…; teen scres appeared t be wrse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability f …Playing vide games nly impacts the academic cmpsite scre in teens…been linked t declines in.. imprve mtr…Mre research is needed. …changed…thrughut the day… measurement tls
Nt all screen time is equally bad fr …perfrmance; watching TV and playing vide games negatively impacted …fr ...
nt equally bad
the influence varies
negatively impacted
d harm\ d bad fr sb\damaging
解释关系：while\ and\ t be exact
A study reveals that the influence f screen time n children varies, while watching televisin and playing vide games can d the harm.
2. Watching Tv impacted teens in…and yunger children in…; teen scres appeared t be wrse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability f …
affect\ influence
ccupy\take up \ waste
time spent living a nrmal\ healthy life
time spent studying,sleeping, talking and getting sme exercises
reduce the ability
weaken\ decrease the ability
ccupy\take up
要点间的关系—对比因果
TV watching exerts negative influence n teens wh suffer mre than yunger nes, as it wastes time, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking.
3. Playing vide games nly impacts the academic cmpsite scre in teens…been linked t declines in.. imprve mtr…
academic cmpsite scre
academic perfrmance
要点间的关系--解释、对比
Teens’ academic perfrmance is affected by their playing vide games, decreasing memry and sleep while f help t ther abilities.
4. Mre research is needed. …changed…thrughut the day… measurement tls
necessary\ be in need
vary\ develp
thrughut the day
increase in time
measurement
ways t measure
necessary\ be f need
要点间的关系—因果、并列
T keep track f children’s interactins with technlgy as time ges by, mre studies are necessary.
interactin with technlgy
A study reveals that the influence f screen time n children varies, and watching televisin and playing vide games can d the harm.
TV watching exerts negative influence n teens wh suffer mre than yunger nes, as it ccupies the time spent living a nrmal life, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking.
Hwever\ Actually,
Fr ne thing,
要点全面，四段共四个要点，缺一不可。有否抄写原文。人称时态是否正确，全文用第三人称写，四个段落全部用一般现在时，说明一个客观问题。是否有语法、拼写错误。衔接连贯。第二点和第三点是并列关系，都是讲述电子产品对孩子的危害，所以可以用“besides”“what’s mre”“additinally”等。词数控制。全文控制在60词左右，不少于40词，不多于80词。
A study reveals that the influence f screen time varies, while watching televisin and playing vide games harm. Fr ne thing, TV watching negatively affects teens, as it wastes time, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking. Fr anther, teens’ academic perfrmance is affected by their playing vide games, decreasing memry and sleep while f help in ther ways. Actually, t keep track f children’s interactins with technlgy as time ges by, mre studies are necessary. (79 wrds)