新目标九年级 英语 Unit 7 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材
展开写作指导
谈论家规
写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)
每个家庭都有自己的家规，好的家规有利于孩子的成长、家庭的和睦。你认为你家家规中的哪一条不合理？为什么？你认为这条家规应该如何修改？请你就这三个问题在你的日记本中倾吐自己的心声。
【审清题目】
内容：你认为哪一条家规不合理、理由及应该如何修改
文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
语块
The rule you disagree with | Why you disagree with it | How it should be changed |
I’m not allowed to / I can’t watch TV. | Not all TV programs are bad for students. I need to relax sometimes instead of studying all the time. ... | I should be allowed to watch educational TV programs. I should be allowed to watch TV on weekends. ... |
I’m not allowed to / I can’t have a mobile phone. | It’s a convenient way to communicate with others on a mobile phone, especially in an emergency (紧急情况). Using a mobile phone can be helpful to my study. I can use a mobile phone to listen to music, play games or watch movies. ... | I should be allowed to use my mobile phone once or twice a week. I should be allowed to use my mobile phone at least an hour a day. ... |
I must be home for dinner every day. | I want to make my life more interesting. I don’t have chances to spend time with friends. ... | I should be allowed to have dinner with friends as long as I don’t stay out too late. ... |
... | ... | ... |
句型
1. One of my family rules is that ... 2. I’m (not) allowed to ...
3. ... think that ... 4. I don’t agree / disagree with ...
5. I think I should be allowed to ... 6. I would like to ...
7. I think I can / could ... if I ...
【谋篇布局】
【点评范文】
1. 内容：文章内容全面，作者先亮明了不合理的一条家规，接着论述了不合理的原因(三点)，最后表达了自己的愿望——父母应该如何修改这条家规。
2. 语言：在论述“为什么这条家规不合理”时，使用了表示列举的词first, second和third，使得文章很有条理；在由“为什么这条家规不合理”过渡到“应该如何修改这条家规”时，使用了表示推论的词语for these reasons，起到了承上启下的作用；固定句式(One of my family rules is that ...，... it’s a convenient way to ...，It’s not good to ...，I think I should be allowed to ... )的使用，使得文章提升了一个档次。
