模板09 日记-备战2022年中考英语书面表达满分作文万能模板

09 日记
1. 体裁解读
日记常用来记述一天中所发生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用来叙述自己当天触景而发的感受等。日记的主要体裁通常是记叙文或简单的议论文。
2. 写作攻略
英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成。书端是专门记载写日记的日期及天气状况的。正文的格式与其他文章相近，一般缩进4个字母，也可以顶格写。由于日记所写的事件都是发生过的事情，所以日记通常用一般过去时。因为日记多为记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己的感想，所以一般用第一人称。
写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤：
第一步：介绍事件：
第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节；
第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。
写日记要注意以下几点：
1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。
2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生动，也可以使用一般现在时。
3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。
4. 日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。
典例赏析：
（2021·广东广州·中考真题）
今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点：
1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生；
2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范等；
3.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion)；
2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson.
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例文：
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson. The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping named Li Hua. He is 14 years old, and he is also the student of Hongxing Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it well. We were interested in the sports. He answered some questioned and told his experience to us. I learned that the best way to do something best is by practicing it a lot. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lesson we had!
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。


介绍今天是什么日子，引出事件
Day of the week Date Weather
Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________.
详细描写了今天所做的事情
In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.
表达感想
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.
【模板范文】
Sunday May 10th Fine
Today is Mother's Day. I did some meaningful things to show my love to my mother.
In the morning, I bought my mother some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon, I went shopping and then cooked a delicious dinner for my family. After that, I gave mother the card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day" to her. I told her I would study hard and never let her down. Hearing this, my mother was moved to tears.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!

亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示天气
fine adj. 晴朗的 cloudy adj. 多云的
snowy adj.下雪的 rainy adj. 下雨的
windy adj. 有风的 hail n. 冰雹
2. 抒发感想
moved adj. 感动的 enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
memorable adj. 值得纪念的 meaningful adj. 有意义的
worry about 担忧 delicious adj. 美味的
3. 其他
finish v. 完成 classmate n. 同学
voluntary adj. 志愿的，义务的 although conj. 虽然
经典句子背诵：
开头句
1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。
2. Today is... 今天是……
3. I went to the park to... 我去公园……
4. We decided to go out for a picnic today.
我们决定今天出去野餐。
5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.
我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。
中间句
1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working.
我们首先分成了三个组，然后开始工作。
2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches.
第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。
3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.
第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。
结尾句
1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today.
我今天玩得很高兴。
2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。
3. What a warm and meaningful day!
这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！
4. I will never forget the memorable day!
我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！
5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.
虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。

（2021·湖南常德·中考真题）
假设你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Alan, 请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述对话中所发生的事情。
注意：
1. 要点包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等；
2. 不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；
3. 请按以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
June 20th, 2021
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例文：
June 20th, 2021
On my way to school this morning, I saw a traffic accident. A boy was riding a bicycle, listening to music. At a crossing road, the traffic lights were about to turn red when a car appeared. Because the driver was on the phone, he didn’t notice the traffic lights and didn’t stop on time. The boy who was riding a bike fell off his bike and hurt his knee. What a terrible accident!
I think we must be careful on our way to school, don’t catch up, don’t listen to music, especially when crossing the road.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据第二节材料中的Alan的叙述，描写目睹的事情情况，包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣材料内容，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2019·天津·中考真题）
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为…．
参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit
挤向座位push towards the seat
争吵havea quarrel
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed
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【范文】
Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.
As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily.
From my perspective,I wish we all can help each other when someone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better.
【详解】
这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为…。写出自己的想法。这几个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。
句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。
句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not only…but also…：不但……而且……。
【高分句型三】
Only in this way can our world become better and better.只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。
这句话是由only引起的倒装句。
（2019·湖北咸宁市·中考真题）
运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5月10 日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。

写作要求：
1．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰；
3．词数80~100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子100米赛跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒装句。
【2018年浙江宁波市中考】
今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。

导图一 导图二
注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip.


【答案】Possible version 1:
Friday. May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
(98 words)
Possible version 2:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!
（99 words）
体即可。
【2018年湖北省孝感】
本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点：
1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……
3.感想：Tony……，我……
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；
3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

Writing 1
（2021·黑龙江香坊·三模）
今天是6月2日，天气晴。假如你是刘京，刚刚结束了你校组织的校外劳动实践活动（work practice activity）。请你根据以下内容，完成今天的日记。
写作要点：
1.这是本学期的第一次校外活动。
2.活动介绍：
（1）参加人员：一、二班的全体师生；
（2）活动时间：周一到周三；
（3）活动内容：在星光农场参加劳动实践。
3.说说此次活动给你带来了哪些收获。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加人细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练，表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
June 2, Wednesday
Sunny
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【范文】
June 2, Wednesday
Sunny
This was the first work practice activity this term. All the teachers and students of classes 1 and 2 took part in the activity from Monday to Wednesday. We took part in labor practice at Xingguang farm. We fed chickens and pigs and helped milk on the farm. We also helped farmers pick apples on the farm. They were very grateful to us. We were tired but happy.
It was an unforgettable experience.This activity brought me great fun. We learned a lot from it.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是日记，以你校组织的校外劳动实践活动，根据所给要求提示，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作中注意常用句式，注意动词的过去式。全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，上下文注意连接的流畅度。
Writing 2
（2021·宁夏·银川市兴庆区教师发展中心二模）
假如你和你的同学在5月8日 (星期天) 到敬老院慰问了老人，请你把活动的情况用英语写一篇日记。日记的格式及开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。日记的内容还应包括以下要点：
1.来回的时间及方式；
2.活动内容：扫地，洗衣，……；
3.活动感受：很累但很愉快；要照顾尊重老人。
参考词汇：respect vt.尊重
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 所给的要点提示必须都用上，并作适当发挥。
May 8, 2012 Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People’s Home.
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例文：
May 8, 2012 Sunday
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People’s Home. It was very sunny today, so we got there by bike.
We helped the old people sweep the floor, washed their clothes, cooked the meal and so on. What’s more, the old people there told us some interesting stories and we sang and danced for them. At 4 in the afternoon we came home happily.
We were tired but happy because we can do something helpful for the people who really need help. From this experience, I know that we should care about and respect old people.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求就自己今天去敬老院的事情写一篇日记，日记的格式已经给出，题中也给出相关的细节信息，在写作时所有的要点都要用上，也可适当发挥，使文章更加饱满。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇日记，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称。文章要把活动的时间、交通方式、活动内容以及活动感受都要包含在内。在写作过程中，运用不同的句式使文章逻辑清晰、层次清楚。
Writing 3
（2021·天津滨海新·二模）
在成长过程中，我们经常会面临来自老师的提醒、责备或批评。有的同学不理解，有的甚至会做出过激的反应。5月13日，是星期四，在你们班发生了一件事，这件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
（1）在英语课上，李明不听讲而是看小说。
（2）老师几次提醒他要认真听课，他依旧如此，老师把他书拿走。
（3）李明什么也没说，突然站起来冲出教室。
（4）老师拦住了他，让他冷静下来并把他带回教室。
（5）课后老师与他进行了沟通，他认识到了自己的错误并鼓起勇气向老师道歉。
（6）你认为……
参考词汇：提醒remind 拦下stop 鼓起勇气pick up one’s courage
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Thursday, May 13th, 2021 Fine
I still remember the day when I had an English class. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
Thursday, May 13th, 2021 Fine
I still remember the day when I had an English class. Li Ming read a novel instead of listening to the teacher in the English class. Our English teacher reminded him several times to listen to her carefully, but he still did so, the teacher had to take away his book. To my surprise, Li Ming stood up suddenly and rushed out of the classroom without any words. Our teacher stopped him, and took him back to the classroom. After class, our teacher had a talk with him, he realized his mistake. Finally, he picked up his courage and said sorry to our English teacher.
In my opinion, it is important to stay calm when our teachers point out our mistakes, because it’s good for our development.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和要点，写出班里发生的事情，要写具体事情的经过以及最后的结果并表明自己的观点，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 4
（2021·天津南开·二模）
假设你是玲玲，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，记述你的朋友小丽参加达人秀节目的事情，并表达自己的想法。
（1）小丽喜爱唱歌。上周日参加了达人秀节目，但是惨遭淘汰。
（2）小丽十分难过，无心学习， 并打算放弃这个爱好。
（3）作为好朋友，你很担心小丽。
（4）你告诉小丽要享受参加节目的乐趣，不必太在意结果。
（5）你认为中学生应该……
参考词汇：talent show 达人秀节目 eliminate v. 淘汰
要求：
（1）词数∶ 80～100个。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
（3） 要点齐全。行文连贯, 可适当发挥。
Wednesday Fine
My friend Xiao Li likes singing very much. Last Sunday she ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[例文]
Wednesday Fine
My friend Xiao Li likes singing very much. Last Sunday she attended a talent show but was eliminated. She was feeling down and not interested in study because of this. As her best friend, I was worried about her very much. I told her to enjoy the show and don’t take the result too seriously.
It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight. In addition, there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can we achieve our goals. As a teenager, we should spare no efforts to study and develop our interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich our future life.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为日记作文，要求根据题目所给要点，对小丽参加达人秀节目被淘汰导致闷闷不乐的事情继续叙述并发表自己的看法。题目要点要齐全，并可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导：写作时应用第一、三人称，叙述过去发生的事情时应用过去时，其他部分可用现在时。作文应逻辑清晰、层次分明、要点齐全，注意不同时态的准确使用，单词拼写要正确。
Writing 5
（2021·湖南·模拟预测）
假设你是李华，假期你与家人去潜水，在圣地印尼四王岛(Raja Ampat)度假，那里风景优美，海水清澈，你与家人非常放松、惬意。在最后一天的潜水活动中，你看到了各种各样的海洋生物，还在海底发现了一些塑料垃圾，这引起了你的深思。请根据提示写一篇日记，记录你在假期最后一天的见闻、感受和思考。
要求:
1、不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2、文中不出现个人真实信息;
3、不要逐字翻译，可以适当增加细节。
提示词:去潜水go diving
Dear Diary.
This is the last day of our vacation Raja Ampat.
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例文
Dear Diary.
This is the last day of our vacation Raja Ampat. This is a beautiful place and the water is very clear. We all felt very happy and relaxed in the past few days. But today, we went diving in the sea where we not only saw all kinds of sea creatures, but also saw some plastic rubbish. These rubbish will damage the marine environment. The clear water will become muddy in many years. We will never see such beautiful scenery.
So I want to call on everyone to protect the environment together. It is also our common home.
【详解】
题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求写一篇日记关于记录在假期最后一天的见闻、感受和思考的作文，主要围绕海底垃圾、环境污染进行论述。最后检查文章要点是否齐全，语法是否正确。
写作指导：本文应以一般过去时和第一人称为主，采取两段式写作，第一段对于发现垃圾提出思考，对环境保护和对海洋污染危害进行描述；第二段号召大家保护环境。
Writing 6
（2021·天津西青·二模）
假如你是北京市红光中学的学生李明，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，记述你周末到杨柳青游览的经历，并表达自己的想法和感受。
1. 上午参观了年画博物馆，看到了怎样制作年画，并购买了一些年画。
2. 接着导游带我参观了石家大院，欣赏了相声。
3. 下午坐船游览了运河，并沿途拍照。
4. 品尝了各种小吃，并和当地人进行了交流，发现当地人很善良友好。
5. 我……
参考词汇：运河canal；年画yearly painting；石家大院ShijiaYard；小吃snacks；相声 cross talk
要求：
(1)词数:80〜100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全, 行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Saturday
I went to the famous ancient town Yangliuqing today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Saturday
I went to the famous ancient town Yangliuqing today. In the morning, I visited the Yearly Painting Museum and watched how to make yearly paintings. I thought they were so interesting that I bought some for my parents. Then the guide showed us around the Shijia Yard and we enjoyed the cross talk there. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour along the canal and took many beautiful photos. After that, we tried different kinds of local snacks and communicated with the local people. They were really nice and friendly!
I think Yangliuqing is a wonderful old town which is worth visiting. I believe more and more people will go there and enjoy the beautiful scenes and interesting culture.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为日记写作，格式已给出，学生根据要点提示进行内容写作即可。题目要求记述周末到杨柳青游览的经历，并表达自己的想法和感受。
2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，记叙的是发生过的事，故此部分应用过去时，表达感想应用现在时，记叙时应按题目要点顺序逐条展开，文章要做到条理清晰、层次分明，要点齐全。
Writing 7
（2021·福建省惠安荷山中学模拟预测）
6月20日，你班组织了一场美化家园的义务劳动，主题为“To Be a Greener Person”。请结合分组情况用英语写一篇日记，并发表你的看法。词数80左右。
To Be a Greener Person
Group One
collect rubbish
Group Two
tell the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees
Group Three
spread the importance on protecting the environment
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. ________________________________________________________________
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例文
June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. The students were divided into three groups: Group One collected rubbish, Group Two told the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees, and Group Three spread the importance on protecting the environment.
Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving our own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recycle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on. Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try our best and we will make a difference.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇日记写作，要求按照所给信息描述义务劳动的分工，并阐述自己的观点。写作时要按照题干中所给内容进行描写，紧扣题目，并适当发挥。写作时要先理顺内容，可以分为两层，第一层先描述每个组的工作内容，第二层阐述自己的观点。力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。
2. 写作指导：动笔前要先构思写作要点，第一段主要采用第三人称，时态使用一般过去时来描述劳动的主要内容；第二段主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时来发表自己的看法。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。