2023年中考复习作文高分范文

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2022年中考复习作文高分范文 书面表达评分标准：一档（12-15）内容切题，层次清楚，语言流畅，基本无语言表达错误二挡（8-11）内容切题，层次比较清楚，语言比较流畅，语言表达错误较少三挡（5-7）内容基本切题，层次不够分明，语言表达错误较多四挡（1-4）有一定内容，但语法错误较多（注意：书面表达依法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分，单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分，抄袭卷中阅读材料，不给分）开头句：1.There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.（难忘的事）2.I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday. It's a beautiful city and I had a wonderful time there.（上个假期）3. My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him.（影响深的人/最好的朋友）4.How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. （初中生活）5. My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him.（朋友）建设文明城市Nowadays we are trying our best to make Xining become a civilized city. As students, we must know what we should do and what we shouldn’t do.2. As citizens of Green City, we should not only protect our environment but also follow the traffic rules.保持健康1. As teenagers, it's very important for us to keep safe. But sometimes accidents may happen around us. So how can we keep safe?2. Summer holiday is coming. And swimming safety becomes a big problem. So I'd like to give you some advice to keep off the danger. 中间句1. As for my dream，I want to be a teacher，I'll make friends with my kids.（梦想）2. My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. （父亲）3. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”（父亲/母亲）4. He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him. 文明城市    To make it more and more beautiful, I often don't litter everywhere to make the school environment cleaner.2. Firstly, when we are on the way to school from home, we should follow the traffic lights and rules to avoid the traffic accidents.保持健康To keep yourself safe，you mustn't go somewhere dangerous.2. In the school, I take an active part in P.E. lessons. Sometimes we play football and volleyball. Sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport.  结尾句：1. After reading so many books, I get a lot of knowledge and also feel relaxed. （书的益处）2. As a student, I think I should always try my best to work for our school. （校园生活）3. This is my best dad/mom. I love him/her and I'm so proud of him/her.（父亲/母亲）4. I had great fun in my last summer vacation.（上个假期）5. Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me.（自己）6. She is great. Let's wish her a better future.（朋友） 7. Because I thought nothing was important than friendship. What's more, I became very happy after I forgave him. （朋友/友谊）8. How lucky I am to be his/her daughter!（父亲/母亲）9. It's really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future.（初中生活） 文明城市1. It's our duty to do what we can do to make our city more beautiful. I believe if everyone makes an effort, Xining will be one of the most beautiful cities in our country.2. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can do to make ourselves and Suqian city more civilized.  背诵佳句：Not only do I feel good to help others, but also I get chances to do what I love .If you give up in winter, you will miss the hope of spring, the beauty of summer, the fulfill of autumn. If I were you , I would say “ Don’t give up, if you hold on to your dream, it will come true one day!”Practice makes perfect; 熟能生巧A friend in need is a friend indeed;患难见真情Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health. 早睡早起有益于健康。 The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday. If you study harder, you will be better. It is one of the most warm-hearted that I have ever seen . 好句子1.It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb. to do sth. 2. It takes sb time to do sth/ sb spend time doing sth3. used to be/do sth ; be/ get used to doing sth4. It’s known/ reported/ said/ believed that ..并列关系：and，  both…and,  neither …nor, not only…but also转折关系：but, however选择关系：or，either …or…,连接词if, unless, as long as范文一在过去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老师。言爱学校英语广播电台开展了“I love you, my English teacher”英语征文活动，请你根据下面要点指导和要求，写一封英语广播稿。要点指导：1. 中等身高，戴眼镜；性格外向，善于交流； 喜欢运动，经常和同学们打篮球。2. 爱工作，严格对待和关爱每一个学生，帮助家庭有困难的学生。3. 课堂有趣充满活力，经常开展丰富多彩活动；课后帮助学困生，同学英语成绩好。参考词汇：medium; outgoing; communicate; strict; care about; in trouble; colorful; Thanks to 写作要求：1. 词数80－100(短文的开始和结束语已给出，不计入总词数); 2. 内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。I love you, my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher, Mr. Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about  him.___________________________________________________________________________I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you forever!【审题】1. 依据所给题目及开头结尾句可知，作文人称主要采用第三人称“He(Mr. Huang)”，描写自己的感受时用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时；2. 由于已经给出3点要点指导，写作时需条理清楚、意思连贯、要点齐全，并且正确使用所给参考词汇。(注意句子连贯性，切忌逐句翻译)。【要点指导】 my English teacher要点提示素材串联要点1外貌：中等身高(be of medium height)，戴一副眼镜(wear a pair of glasses)性格：性格外向(outgoing)，善于交流(be good at; communicate)爱好：喜欢运动(sports)，经常和同学们打篮球(play basketball with...)要点2工作态度： 爱工作(work)，严格对待(be strict with)和关爱(care about)每个学生，帮助(help)家庭有困难(in trouble)的学生要点3教学方面：①课堂有趣、充满活力(lively)，经常开展丰富多彩的活动(colorful activities)②课后帮助学困生(have difficulty in doing sth.)，同学英语成绩好 【范文】I love you, my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher, Mr. Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him. Mr. Huang is of medium height. He often wears a pair of glasses. He is outgoing and good at communicating with others. He likes sports and always plays basketball with us together. Mr. Huang loves his work very much. Though he is strict, he cares about every student. He's always ready to help students from poor families when they are in trouble. In class, he always makes it lively and active. So we often have different kinds of colorful activities. After class, he usually helps the students who have difficulties in learning English. Thanks to him, our English has improved a lot. I love you, my English teacher！I will never forget you forever！范文二中考结束后，你将告别熟悉的校园。三年的初中生活也许会成为你一生中的“永恒记忆”。请你根据下列图中所给的四个方面，以“Three Years’ School Life”为题写一篇小短文，回顾你的初中校园生活。要求：(1)词数在80～100词。     (2)条理清晰，语句连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。【审题】由所给背景材料可知要求回顾自己的初中校园生活，因此人称用第一人称“I”，介绍自己三年的校园生产，时态用一般现在时；根据所给思维导图提示的四个方面，学生需展开合理想象，注意内容的完整性。【指导】三年的学校生活要点提示素材串联开头：引出话题介绍自己是九年级的学生、离校的时间(下月)、此时的心情：紧张与兴奋(nervous and excited)正文：四个方面的回忆●同学与朋友：和睦相处，互相帮助 (get on well with; help each other) ●老师：友善、帮助(friendly; helpful)              ●学科：最喜欢英语与体育，经常课后运动(like English and P．E. best)              ●学校活动：每学期郊游(go on a school trip each term)总结：表达感受表达对初中学校生活的不舍，爱学校与老师，永远不会忘记三年的学校生活(never forget) 【范文】                                Three Years’ School LifeI’m a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior middle school next month after I finish the exam. I’m feeling a bit nervous and excited. I study in a middle school. It is big and nice. There are many students and teachers in it. I get on well with my classmates. We often help each other. We study many subjects in school. I like English and P. E. best. We often do sports in the afternoon after class. Of course，we all spend much time on study. We work very hard. Our teachers are quite friendly to us. They are also helpful. We can ask them for help at any time. We go on a school trip each term and we really enjoy it. In a few days I have to say “goodbye” to my school. I feel sorry about it. I love my school and all my teachers and classmates. I will never forget my three years’ school life.  范文三最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents？”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。一、写作要点提示1. 与父母和谐相处很重要。2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：(1)理解与尊重父母(如倾听与有礼貌表达想法)；(2)多与父母交流(如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼)；(3)为父母做一些力所能及的事。3. 与父母和谐相处的感受。二、写作要求短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80－100词。【要点指导】如何与父母和谐相处？要点提示素材串联开头：点明重要性跟父母和谐相处非常重要(get on well with sb.; be of great importance)正文：具体做法1.最重要的是：理解、尊重父母(The most important thing is that...; understand, respect)2.与此同时，和他们多交流(Meanwhile; communicate with sb.)3.最后，但同等重要的是：帮助父母做家务(Last but not least; do some housework)结尾：感受如果这样做，就能拥有一个幸福的家庭(If we do...we'll...; full of ) How to Get on Well with Our Parents?Getting on well with parents is of great importance. But many children have trouble in communicating well with their parents. Here are some suggestions on this problem.The most important thing is that we should understand and respect our parents. We can listen to what they think and express our thoughts politely. Meanwhile（以此同时）, communicate with them as often as possible to share happiness and sorrows. Last but not least（最后但并不是最重要）, we can help them do some housework.If we do like this, we'll have a family full of happiness.范文四随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在，手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案。部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向手机求助。自己的观点：1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。注意：1. 文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；2. 词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。(参考词汇：the students' abilities, make proper use of)Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.【审题】本文要求考生对“作业帮”等手机运用软件这一现象给出看法，文中给出的几条信息提示必须都涉及到，可以适当拓展。【要点指导】对“作业帮”的看法要点提示素材串联开头：表明观点现在，一些学生对网络有了一个新的使用方法……(Some students now have a new use for the Internet...)正文：陈述理由1. 一些学生认为他们有太多的作业……(Some students say/think that they have so much homework...)2. 并且还有一些问题对于他们来说解决出来很困难。(And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out.)3. 然而，查找作业答案不能提高学生的能力……(However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities...)结尾：自己的看法在我看来，我们可以更合理地使用网络……(In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet ...)  Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they don't have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.    However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can't depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is studying (to study) by oneself. 范文四假如你所在的城市正在创建“国家级卫生城市”, 作为该城市的一员, 你会有许多感触和想法。请以“How to set up a national healthy city? ”为题, 根据所给提示写一篇80-100个单词的英语短文。                How to set up a national healthy city?Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city. As a member of the city, I think we should obey the rules. We can’t throw rubbish here and there. We can’t talk loudly in public, such as in the library or in the museum. We can’t spit and smoke in public as well. When we are on the bus, we should give our seats to the old and children, as well as some women with babies in their arms. During our daily lives, we should be polite to others. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red. We must go across the road when the traffic light is green. Finally, we should also turn off the lights before we leave the room.I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful as long as we all try our best to do something for it!