(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（一）（含答案解析）

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Dad and Mm had gt t g n a fur-day business trip. They taught their elder sn Daniel and yunger daughter Jane hw t feed and lk after their dg, Spt, hw t take gd care f themselves—learning t ck if they culd, r rdering pizza—with mney left n the table—if they were busy, and tld them t keep their rms clean and tidy. They asked Daniel t be in charge.
On the very mrning when the parents left, Mm kissed them and said t Daniel gently, “Yung man, d take care f Spt and Jane.” Daniel prmised, “I will, Mm.”
T excited t fall asleep again, Daniel and Jane jumped ut f bed, calling ut each ther t get up. Their pet dg, Spt, heard the similar vice and rushed in, with a ball in its muth. Jane stuck(伸) her head int Daniel’s rm,“Spt gt up an hur earlier. Let’s walk it.” Daniel said excitedly, “I’m cming, but, Jane, dn’t frget t keep yur rm clean and tidy.” “I will.”
They ran with the dg in the yard and threw the ball away fr Spt t bring it back. They had fun playing with Spt the whle mrning. Washing Spt was slw and tiring as it was the first time they had dne it. Then Daniel settled dwn t his hmewrk while Jane did her reading with interest.
The fllwing day, Jane begged her brther t rder pizza fr lunch. Daniel agreed excitedly, “We haven’t tasted that fr lng and we behave urselves, right?”After a while, he added, “We shuld save mney, t.” Within half an hur, they treated themselves t a big pizza. Hwever, in the afternn, Spt lked sick, lying lazily and unwilling t mve. Daniel was cncerned abut the dg and tk it t the pet clinic immediately with Jane as their parents had dne.
注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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When Dad and Mm arrived a day earlier, they were amazed t find everything in a mess.
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Daniel ran int his rm, with tears in his eyes,“ Jane, there is n need t explain and Mm wn’t trust me any lnger.”
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了爸爸和妈妈要去出差四天，他们教年长的儿子丹尼尔和小女儿简学会独立生活并照顾好狗Spt。父母离开之后，丹尼尔和简兴奋得睡不着觉，他们和Spt玩的非常开心。他们给学会给Spt洗澡，订披萨当午餐。然而Spt生病了，他们把Spt带到了动物诊所。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当爸爸和妈妈提前一天到达时，他们惊奇地发现所有的东西都是一团糟。”可知，第一段可描写父母非常生气。
②由第二段首句内容“丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释了，妈妈不会再相信我了。””可知，第二段可描写爸爸妈妈了解了真相并向丹尼尔道歉。
2.续写线索：出差——兴奋——洗澡——生病——生气——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大喊：shut/rar
②.用完：used up/run ut f
③.理解：understand/make sense f
情绪类
①. 生气的：angry/in anger
②. 焦急地：anxiusly /wrriedly
增分句型：
1. Hearing the little daughter’s wrds, Mm understd that the reasn why they had n time t clean the huse was that they waited fr Spt at the clinic all day.（现在分词作状语、关系副词why引导的定语从句和连接词that引导的表语从句）
2. She aplgized t Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “yu are really grwing up int a yung man.”（现在分词作状语）
三：续写单句训练
当爸爸妈妈一天前到达时，他们惊讶地发现一切都一团糟。

妈妈很生气，喊道：“听我说，年轻人，我让你负责了。我们以为你会表现得像个成年人，但看看这一团糟。

买食物的钱已经用完了，但为什么Spt看起来仍然很饿呢？

你用我们剩下的钱做了什么？

简焦急地解释说：“妈妈，斯波特病了，所以我们把剩下的钱把它带到了宠物诊所。”

丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼睛里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释，妈妈也不再相信我了。”

爸爸安慰妈妈平静地说：“可能一切都是有很好的解释的。”

听到小女儿的话，妈妈明白他们没有时间打扫房子的原因是他们整天在诊所等现场

妈妈后悔这么生气，对丹尼尔学会对别人负责感到满意。

她真诚地向丹尼尔道歉，并把他抱在怀里，说“你真的成了一个年轻人。”

四：佳作展现
When Dad and Mm arrived a day earlier, they were amazed t find everything in a mess. Mm was angry and shuted, “Listen t me, yung man—I left yu in charge. We thught yu wuld act like an adult, but lk at the mess. The mney fr fd has been used up but why des Spt still lk hungry? What did yu d with the mney we left?” Jane explained anxiusly, “Mummy, Spt is sick, s we spent the rest f the mney taking it t the pet clinic.”
Daniel ran int his rm, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is n need t explain and Mm wn’t trust me any lnger.” Cmfrting Mm, Dad said calmly, “There is prbably a gd explanatin fr everything.” Hearing the little daughter’s wrds, Mm understd that the reasn why they had n time t clean the huse was that they waited fr Spt at the clinic all day. Mm regretted acting s angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt t be respnsible fr thers. She aplgized t Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “yu are really grwing up int a yung man.”
五：课后练笔
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grandparents ften have interesting names. My sister-in-law was knwn as Mimi. Her husband ges by Peeka. Why? Their firstbrn grandchild decided n thse names.
My firstbrn grandchild named me as well. I will never frget the day Jshua hugged me and, in frnt f a rmful f peple, called me “Dll. My Dll Baby!” Frm that pint n, I was knwn as Dll r Dll Baby. Even my sns-in-law call me Dll. Friends f my children and grandchildren call me Dll. It’s a given.
Fr the mst part, it’s fine, even endearing, t hear my grandchildren call me Dll. But there was ne time… My daughter and her husband were ging ut f twn, s the plan was fr me t pick up five-year-ld Spencer frm kindergarten, take him t their huse t wait fr Jshua’s schl bus, and bring bth bys hme t spend the night with us. Spencer and I arrived lng befre the schl bus. While we waited fr Jshua, Spencer wanted t shw me a new trick he learned n his skatebard.
Spencer was pretty gd. He had learned hw t step n the back f the skatebard s that the frnt tipped up（一边翘起）, and then put his frnt ft dwn n the bard and take ff. Cl!
Then it was my turn. I had played arund with skatebards in my day. Of curse, they weren’t the high-tech kind f tys my grandchildren enjyed. Ours were made by munting the wheels f ur ld sidewalk rller skates t the bttm f a plank f wd. Still, I had this. I put my right ft n the back f the bard and tipped up the frnt. S far, s gd. I brught my left ft dwn with every intentin f rlling frward.
Gd intentins. Bad frm. I fell hard n my elbw as the skatebard flew acrss the cncrete driveway. My injury was minr, but Spencer raced int the huse and gt B-B Bunny frm the freezer t bring me cmfrt. It helped my arm, but nt my pride.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I made my way hme safely with the bys, my husband blamed me. ____________
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My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriusly. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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六：单句训练
当我和我带着孩子们安全回家的时候，我丈夫责怪我。

“你知道那会有多糟糕吗？””我丈夫喊道。“我的意思是，如果你撞到头，失去知觉怎么办？”

他是对的。那天晚上，斯宾塞爬到了我们床上的我们中间。

汤姆称赞他得到了流浪兔，并照顾了我。

“如果多尔受了重伤呢，斯宾塞呢？”你知道在紧急情况下该怎么办吗？””汤姆问。“是的！”请拨打911号电话！

斯宾塞为他记得该怎么办而感到自豪。

我的丈夫帮助斯宾塞练习拨打911紧急电话，假装我的头部严重受伤了。

他举起手，好像是电话，拇指是耳机，小手指是喉舌。

“9-1-1.你的紧急情况如何？斯宾塞拿起他的假手机，用手指清晰地说话。“请提供帮助”

我的娃娃落在滑板上，伤了头！

汤姆和我笑了。我很难忍不住要笑了。

“嗯，斯宾塞，”汤姆说。“也许有时候你需要打电话给她奶奶。”

参考答案
三：单句训练
When Dad and Mm arrived a day earlier, they were amazed t find everything in a mess.
Mm was angry and shuted, “Listen t me, yung man—I left yu in charge. We thught yu wuld act like an adult, but lk at the mess.
The mney fr fd has been used up but why des Spt still lk hungry?
What did yu d with the mney we left?”
Jane explained anxiusly, “Mummy, Spt is sick, s we spent the rest f the mney taking it t the pet clinic.”
Daniel ran int his rm, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is n need t explain and Mm wn’t trust me any lnger.”
Cmfrting Mm, Dad said calmly, “There is prbably a gd explanatin fr everything.”
Hearing the little daughter’s wrds, Mm understd that the reasn why they had n time t clean the huse was that they waited fr Spt at the clinic all day.
Mm regretted acting s angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt t be respnsible fr thers.
She aplgized t Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “yu are really grwing up int a yung man.”
六：单句训练
When I made my way hme safely with the bys, my husband blamed me.
“D yu realize hw bad that culd have been?” my husband shuted.
“I mean, what if yu hit yur head and were uncnscius?”
He was right. That evening, Spencer crawled up between us in ur bed.
Tm cmmended him fr getting the B-B Bunny and taking care f me. “What if Dll had been badly hurt, Spencer?
D yu knw what t d in an emergency?” Tm asked. “Yes! Call 911!” Spencer was prud he remembered what t d.
My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriusly.
He put up his hand as if it were the phne, his thumb the earphne and his little finger the muthpiece.
“9-1-1. What’s yur emergency?” Spencer brught up his pretend hand phne and spke clearly int his fingers. “Help!
My Dll fell n the skatebard and hurt her head!”
Tm and I smiled at each ther. It was hard t keep frm laughing.
“Uh, Spencer,” Tm said. “There are prbably times yu need t call her Grandma.”
四：佳作展现
（一）
When Dad and Mm arrived a day earlier, they were amazed t find everything in a mess. Mm was angry and shuted, “Listen t me, yung man—I left yu in charge. We thught yu wuld act like an adult, but lk at the mess. The mney fr fd has been used up but why des Spt still lk hungry? What did yu d with the mney we left?” Jane explained anxiusly, “Mummy, Spt is sick, s we spent the rest f the mney taking it t the pet clinic.”
Daniel ran int his rm, with tears in his eyes,“Jane, there is n need t explain and Mm wn’t trust me any lnger.” Cmfrting Mm, Dad said calmly, “There is prbably a gd explanatin fr everything.” Hearing the little daughter’s wrds, Mm understd that the reasn why they had n time t clean the huse was that they waited fr Spt at the clinic all day. Mm regretted acting s angrily and was satisfied that Daniel learnt t be respnsible fr thers. She aplgized t Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “yu are really grwing up int a yung man. ”
（二）
When I made my way hme safely with the bys, my husband blamed me. “D yu realize hw bad that culd have been?” my husband shuted. “I mean, what if yu hit yur head and were uncnscius?” He was right. That evening, Spencer crawled up between us in ur bed. Tm cmmended him fr getting the B-B Bunny and taking care f me. “What if Dll had been badly hurt, Spencer? D yu knw what t d in an emergency?” Tm asked. “Yes! Call 911!” Spencer was prud he remembered what t d.
My husband helped Spencer practice calling 911 emergency call, pretending I hurt my head seriusly. He put up his hand as if it were the phne, his thumb the earphne and his little finger the muthpiece. “9-1-1. What’s yur emergency?” Spencer brught up his pretend hand phne and spke clearly int his fingers. “Help! My Dll fell n the skatebard and hurt her head!” Tm and I smiled at each ther. It was hard t keep frm laughing. “Uh, Spencer,” Tm said. “There are prbably times yu need t call her Grandma.”