2018-2022年安徽中考英语5年真题1年模拟汇编 专题07 书面表达(学生卷+教师卷)
展开5年(2018-2022)中考1年模拟英语真题分项汇编(安徽专用)
专题07 书面表达
(2022年中考真题)
61.假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件,向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下:
1.风趣幽默,深受喜爱;
2.团队合作,历险克难;
3.追逐梦想,永不言弃。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:character(n.人物);overcome(v.克服)
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】
例文
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(2021·安徽中考真题)
假定你是李华,曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括:
1.事情经过;
2.个人感悟。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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【答案】One possible version
Once I Was Praised
Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.
One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.
I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题,结合提示进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍事情经过;第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(2020·安徽中考真题)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4. ......
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
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Yours,
Li Hua
例文:
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份,给自己的英国笔友Mike写信,给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称来叙述,内容应包括:首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题,并引出文章的主题;然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法,这一部分是文章的主体,可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍,并对第四条进行补充;最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意:短文按内容表达的需要,分成三段,每一段一个主题;内容应包括题目中的所有要点,不能遗漏;课根据表达需要,增加细节内容,使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整,可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分,使行文连贯,表达流畅。
(2019·安徽中考真题)
假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:
1.熟悉家乡;
2.乐于交流;
3.擅长英语。
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: journalist (n.记者);column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1. 题干解读:本题属于书信作文,信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先表达写信目的,然后根据要点提示介绍自己,最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:hope to do sth.;a member of;such as;besides;used to do sth.;work as;do a very good job;be ready to do sth.;communicate with;moreover;have a good knowledge of;be skillful at;in English;look for。
句型:and连接并列句;省略that的定语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。
(2018年安徽省中考真题)
66.某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:
1.严格要求;
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;, .....
注意:
1. 词数80~ 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】
I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to studyharder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, lve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.
Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.
【解析】
这是一篇要求感谢自己老师的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一,三人称,一般过去时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
1.(2022·安徽合肥·一模)
假如你是李华,近期你校开展了课后延时服务。请你用英语写一篇题为 “We Have After-school Services” 的短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括;
1. 活动内容;2. 个人感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文题目已给出,不计入总字数。
参考词汇: ease the burden(减负) extra training courses(校外培训) benefit(有利于)
We Have After-school Services
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例文
We Have After-school Services
I’m Li Hua. Recently, our school has provided after-school services for us. Every day, we have nearly two hours’ after-schoool services. During the time, we can finish our homework with the help of our teachers. We can also attend classes of interest or do some exercise.
We finish our homework at school. This helps us to ease the burden of homework. Then we can have enough sleep at night. In this way, we may feel relaxed and energetic during the day. At the same time, with the help of our teachers, we may find it easier to do our homework, so we needn’t go to extra training courses.
All in all, I think both students and parents will benefit from this kind of service.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本文要求以李华的名义,以“We Have After-school Services”为题写一篇短文,介绍学校的课后延时服务。
2. 写作指导:写作时以第一人称为主;时态用一般现在时;文章分为三段式:第一段介绍了课后延时服务的具体内容。第二段介绍了参加课后延时服务的好处。第三段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
2.(2022·安徽·安庆市教育教学研究室二模)
目前,一些中小学生的精神压力仍然不小,这一现象引起了学校和家长的高度关注。为了减轻学生的压力,学校英文报社向在校学生征求意见。假如你是李华,请以“How to reduce(减少)our stress”为题,用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。
内容包括:
1. 精神压力产生的原因;
2. 减轻压力的建议和方法(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to reduce our stress
Nowadays, some students still have much stress.
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【答案】One possible version
How to reduce our stress
Nowadays, some students still have much stress. It’s mainly from our school and our family. At school, some teachers give us too much homework so we have to stay up late doing it. Meanwhile, we have to face the competition from our classmates. Also, our parents expect us to work hard to get good grades.
If you ask me how to reduce our stress, here is the advice. I think it’s necessary for us to have less homework and not to judge us only by grades. We are allowed to do some outdoor or indoor activities. Our parents should spend more time communicating with us and give us plenty of support. All in all, our teachers and parents may do something to help us be relaxed.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示内容写一篇作文,关于学生的精神压力以及如何去减少压力。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时行文;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时,包含要点,不要遗漏,可适当使用复合句使文章更出彩,在介绍自己的建议和方法时,可以适当的发挥,围绕主题叙述,确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
3.(2022·安徽池州·一模)
劳动是日常生活中不可或缺的部分。德智体美劳全面发展,做新时代的中学生是我们的奋斗目标。请结合生活中所参与的劳动实际,用英语写一篇短文。词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
内容包括:1. 结合生活实际,谈谈参与劳动的重要性;
2. 列举生活中参与的劳动,并阐述参与劳动的益处(至少两个方面);
3. 发出积极参与劳动的号召。
We often hear of the sentence “Labor is a glorious thing.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
We often hear of the sentence “Labor is a glorious thing.” For middle school students, it’s not enough to just get good grades at school. Doing housework is also important. I think sharing housework can make us become independent.
Last weekend, I tidied my room. While seeing how clean my room was, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction and achievement. I learned real life skills too.
Doing housework is a good way for teenagers to develop independence. During the day when parents are not around, we must take care of themselves. Let’s take action to do housework!
【解析】
1. 题干解读:该题目属于材料作文,要求结合生活中所参与的劳动实际,说明参与劳动的重要性、益处以及发出号召。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。第一段说明了劳动的重要性,第二段结合自己的经历,说明了劳动的好处,最后一段号召大家积极参与劳动。力求语言准确,行文连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
4.(2022·安徽合肥·模拟预测)
某英语杂志社正在开展“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动,谷爱凌在本届北京冬奥会勇夺两金,为国人树立了良好的榜样。请结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。
Gu Ailing’s Personal information
Birth
2003.9
Job
freestyle skier, model and student
Personality
hard-working, positive
Achievement(成就)
•learned skiing in 2006
•won two gold medals for China at the
Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics
内容包括:
1.谷爱凌个人信息;
2.你的个人感悟。
注意:1.词数: 80-100词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校姓名。Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文:
Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? Now let me introduce her to you.
Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier, is a model as well as an excellent student. Gu Ailing was born in September, 2003, and she started to learn skiing at the age of only three because she loves the feeling of snow. The 18-year-old girl won two gold medals for China at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and made history.
Gu’s positive attitude and hard work help her achieve great success. We should learn from her and never give up when we are in trouble. She sets a good example for us, and I want to learn from her and make full use of my time and make contributions to our country.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容,写一篇征文稿,介绍谷爱凌个人情况及她在北京冬奥会勇夺两金的成就,并表达自己的感悟。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。本文分为三段式,第一段引出话题要介绍谷爱凌,第二段介绍她的个人情况及取得的成就,第三段写自己的感悟。写作要确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
5.(2022·安徽滁州·二模)
暑假即将来临,很多同学已经开始计划如何度过初中阶段的最后一个假期。假如你是李华,请以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为话题给你的好友Mike回信。
要点:
1. 尝试做一些志愿者工作,提高自立能力;
2. 保护自己,远离河流等危险的地方;
3. 多读书锻炼,增长知识,增强体魄;
4. ……
注意:
1. 词数80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:志愿者工作volunteer work 培养develop
Dear Mike,
How are you going now? I’m writing to tell you how I will spend my last holiday in junior high school safely and meaningfully.
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How will you spend your holiday? I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going now? I’m writing to tell you how I will spend my last holiday in junior high school safely and meaningfully.
Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the voluntary work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rivers and remember to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also our duty to make our home clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday? I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”为题给Mike写一封回信,讲述自己的“暑假计划”。
2. 写作指导:本文主要以第一人称为主;时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时;文章分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍自己的暑假计划;第三段询问对方的暑假计划。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
6.(2022·安徽·合肥市第四十五中学一模)
假定你是李华。某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,请你用英语写一篇标题为Where there’s a will, there’s a way(有志者,事竟成)的短文向报社投稿。
内容包括:
1. 该谚语的含义;
2. 表达该谚语含义的个人经历;
3. 个人感悟。
注意:
1. 词数 80~100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:proverb (n. 谚语)
Where there’s a will, there’s a way
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例文
Where there’s a will, there’s a way
Among all the meaningful proverbs that give people advice, the one I like most is “where there is a will, there is a way”. This short, beautiful sentence tells us the truth that cannot be doubted: If you have a dream and stick to it, you’ll realize it sooner or later.
For me, the saying has a special meaning. When I was in Grade 8, I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. But my head teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time I lost heart. He used to say, “A little more effort and you’ll make it.” Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student.
It is through this unforgettable experience that I have realized the meaning of the proverb. Therefore, I believe that as long as I have a dream and keep trying, I’ll surely make it.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文要求写一篇关于英文谚语征文,题目是“Where there’s a will, there’s a way”,提示中给出了要写的重点内容,写作时注意包含全部要点。
2.写作指导:本文人称采用第一人称与第三人称相结合,介绍谚语时,时态用一般现在时,叙述个人经历时,用一般过去时;写作时可分为三段,第一段介绍该谚语的含义,第二段叙述个人经历,第三段表达自己的感悟。注意主谓一致和时态的变化,力求无语法和拼写错误。
7.(2022·安徽滁州·一模)
“双减”政策落地后的首个寒假,“背着书包赶培训班”的现象已然不再,也没有太多的寒假作业要写。作为中学生的你是如何度过这个寒假的?请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
内容包括:
1. 锻炼身体;
2. 阅读;
3. 做家务;
4. ……
注意:
1. 词数:80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
My winter vacation
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例文
My winter vacation
I had a great winter vacation this year. I did something meaningful during winter vacation.
First, I spent some time playing sports to keep healthy and strong. I am much stronger than before. Second, I read some interesting books about Spring Festival. I have learned more about the Chinese traditions and enjoyed Spring Festival. Third, I helped my parents do housework. For example, I swept the floor and did the dishes. Moreover, I volunteered in my community. I helped keep the community clean and tell people how to prevent COVID-19. I learned how to provide the public with good services.
It was a really wonderful winter vacation!
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容写一篇作文关于如何度过“双减”政策落地后的首个寒假。
2.写作指导:本文时态是以一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称为主。写作时涵盖要点,不要遗漏,可适当发挥,使行文连贯,确保无单词语法错误,语句通顺。
8.(2022·安徽亳州·一模)
某英文报正开展以“中学生使用短视频软件的利与弊”为题的征文比赛活动,请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿参赛。
1.短视频软件的好处;2.短视频软件的危害;3.你的看法。
参考词汇:短视频软件short video apps
注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名;4.短文的开头已给出,不计人总词数。
In recent years, plenty of short video apps are springing up on the Internet. Does it do good or harm to us? I’d like to share my opinions with you.
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例文:
In recent years, plenty of short video apps are springing up on the Internet. Does it do good or ham to us? I’d like to share my opinions with you.
On the one hand, videos posted on these apps usually bring us lots of fun and laughter. We can even open up our eyes through these videos since some of them are educational. On the other hand, however, it’s easy to lose yourself in these videos. You may even forget the time when watching them. So some think it’s a waste of time.
To my point of view, we should carefully choose the videos on the apps to watch. Also, use these apps in a proper way. Always bear in mind that they should help but not harm us.
【解析】
1.题干解读:文章要求以“中学生使用短视频软件的利与弊”为题写一篇短文,需要包含三点内容提示。
2.写作指导:本文是一篇有关短视频软件的好处与危害的文章并且发表自己的看法,所以时态上以一般现在时为主。写文章时,可先说明一下互联网上涌现出大量的短视频软件,再接着写短视频的好处与危害,最后发表自己的看法。确保语言连贯、符合英文表达习惯,无语法和拼写错误。
9.(2022·安徽·安庆市教育教学研究室一模)
双减背景下,家庭作业的变化是同学们关注和讨论的话题。假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike来信向你了解你校英语家庭作业的情况。请你结合下面表格内的要点用英语给他写一封回信,介绍你校英语家庭作业的变化,并谈谈你喜欢的作业类型以及原因。
过去的家庭作业
现在的家庭作业
作业量大,用时长;主要是抄写单词、背诵课文、做题等。
作业量适中,用时短;作业形式多样,如听英语歌、讲英语故事、绘制英语手抄报等。
你喜欢的作业类型和原因(至少一种)
注意:
1. 词数80—100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:recite(背诵);amount(数量);handwritten English newspaper(英语手抄报)
Dear Mike,Glad to hear from you. I’m OK. You want to know something about English homework in our school. Now let me share some with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Could you please tell me something about your homework? I’m looking forward to your letter again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文
Dear Mike,
Glad to hear from you. I'm OK. You want to know something about English homework in our school. Now let me share some with you. Our English homework has changed a lot. Our English teacher used to give us too much homework, such as copying words, reciting texts and doing exercises. We had to stay up late to finish it. Nowadays, we just need to do proper amount of homework and it takes us a short time. Our teachers design many different kinds of English homework for us, like listening to English songs, telling English stories and making handwritten English newspapers, so we are interested in it.
For me, I like practicing conversations with my friends because it helps improve my spoken English. Meanwhile, it can also make us more confident.
Could you please tell me something about your homework? I'm looking forward to your letter again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,根据表格要点提示介绍英语家庭作业的变化,以及阐述喜欢的作业类型和原因。
写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合,一般过去时用于介绍“双减政策”前的家庭作业,一般现在时用来介绍现在的家庭作业;人称用第一人称;在写作时可适当加入自己对这种变化的感受;最后结合现在的作业,写出自己最喜欢的形式以及原因。注意保持主谓一致,无语法和标点的错误。
10.(2022·安徽·一模)
我们生活的环境越来越显得重要,保护环境,人人有责,如今,低碳生活已成为时尚。作为中学生,我们能为环保做些什么呢?请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一份倡议书,呼吁你们班同学爱护环境、保护环境。要点提示:①使用环保塑料袋;②循环使用旧课本;③少乘电梯,节约用水、用电;④多植树;⑤最好步行或骑自行车上学。⑥合理垃圾分类。
注意:词数 80 左右(格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);可适当增加细节。
My fellow students,
Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment.
I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.
【答案】
例文
My fellow students,
Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?
To reduce white pollution we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping. Use cloth bags instead. We should try to reuse old textbooks, so people needn’t cut down more trees to make paper. In order to save energy we should use the lift less and take the stairs instead. We should also save water and electricity. And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Besides, it would be better if we walked or rode a bike to school.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment.
I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“环境保护”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为四段式:第一段和最后两个段落已给出;第二段围绕如何保护环境提出相应的建议和做法。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
11.(2022·安徽合肥·一模)
假如你是李华,你校将举办“社团开放日”活动,你打算邀请你的英国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
●时间:6月5日—7日;
●地点:五楼学生剧场;
●内容:魔术表演、歌舞展示等。
注意:1.词数:80-100词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the Club Open Day社团开放日
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in our school clubs.
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Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in our school clubs. I want to invite you to our school. Our school will hold the Club Open Day on 5th June. It will last three days and end on 7th June. We will have it in the student theatre on the fifth floor. We will have a lot of activities. You can enjoy some magic shows. There will be dance and sing shows. And you can learn more about our school clubs, such as swimming club, sports clubs and so on. Then you can decide which one to take part in.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇电子邮件。向Mike介绍学校的“社团开放日”。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时。从时间,地点和活动内容上介绍“社团开放日”的情况,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
12.(2022·安徽合肥·一模)
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter因要参加高中入学考试(SSAT)而感到焦虑,来信向你倾诉。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件,提出建议。
1. 考试态度(放松心情、无需焦虑……);
2. 功课准备(用心做功课、学习方法恰当……);
3. 减压方式(……);
4. 表达祝愿。
要求:
1. 根据提示内容,不要逐字翻译;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数90左右。
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例文:
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. Here are some suggestions that help you.
It’s very important for you to be in a good mood. Don’t be much nervous and you should relax yourself, which can give you enough courage to face the exam. Finish your schoolwork carefully and listen to your teachers in class carefully. You can make a plan to help you study well and choose the suitable way to study. When you have difficulty learning your subjects, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Besides, you can listen to some music or do some sports to relieve stress.
I hope that you can pass the exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目是书信类书面表达,根据彼得的来信,结合题目要求,向彼得提出建议。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段讲述得知彼得担心即将到来的考试;第二段提出具体的建议,可以帮助彼得;第三段向彼得表示祝愿;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第二人称,时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:be worried about;have difficulty doing sth.;ask sb. for help;listen to music;do some sports。
句型:that引导的限制性定语从句;it’s+形容词+for sb. to do sth.;which引导的非限制性定语从句。
13.(2022·安徽·淮南市龙湖中学二模)
中学生的学习生活中时而会出现让人苦恼的事情。假如你是张丽,你的好朋友江平遇到了一些烦恼的事情。请根据下面的提示,给她写一封信提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Jiang Ping’s problems
a little fat.
can’t get good grades in physics.
don’t have many friends at school.
Dear Jiang Ping, I am sorry that you have so many problems. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Li
【答案】
例文
Dear Jiang Ping,
I am sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, you say that you are a little fat. I think you should do some exercise every day and have a balanced diet so that you can have a strong body. What’s more, if you find physics is difficult and often get poor grades in exams, you should ask your teacher or your classmates for help. They will be happy to help you. Finally, you think you don’t have many friends at school. I think joining some clubs is a good idea. You can make some friends with the same hobby as you.
I hope my advice can be of help to you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是根据题干表格中朋友的问题针对性地提出建议,适当增加细节,使文章更加顺畅。
2.写作指导:本文以第二人称和一般现在时为主。第一段引出主题;第二段针对她的不同问题提出不同的建议;第三段表达祝愿。写作时运用不同的句式和连接词使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,无单词拼写和语法错误。
14.(2021·安徽亳州·二模)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike写信表达了他对即将到来的高中生活的看法,并询问你心目中的高中生活是什么样子的。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封回信,说说自己的想法。
提示:1.介绍你想去的学校;
2.谈谈你理想中的学校生活:
3.……
要求:1.不能出现真实的个人信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.词数80~100,格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:senior high school 高中 challenge 挑战
Dear Mike,
How is everything going with you? Thank you for telling me your ideas about senior high school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going with you? Thank you for telling me your ideas about senior high school life. The school life you imagine is really colorful and meaningful.
As for me, I want to go to No. 1 Middle School near my home. In my mind, senior high school life will be full of happiness and challenges. Teachers and classmates will be friendly and helpful, and there will be lots of after-school activities to take part in. However, the subjects will be much more difficult. When I start my new school life, I will make a plan for different subjects and work hard to get better grades. I will also join clubs to learn new things and have fun. I can’t wait to enter the senior high school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目是写一封书信。要求根据提示向美国笔友Mike回信表达自己理想的高中学校以及高中生活,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来叙述,时态上以一般将来时为主。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词,注意上下文联系紧密,结构清晰,表达具有条理性。
15.(2022·安徽马鞍山·一模)
假定你是李华,为了鼓励同学们积极参加劳动,获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战,学校英文社团请你写一封倡议信。内容包括:
倡议的原因
为了解决生活中的问题,我们必须学习一些生活技能(in our daily life...)
倡议的内容
1.帮助父母做家务(do some housework);
2.参加学校与社会劳动(take part in...,labour劳动);
3.珍惜现在来之不易的生活(cherish today’s life)。
发出倡议
我们不仅需要学习文化知识,还需要学习一些基本的技能(not only...but also...)。
【注意】
1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students, We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life. To solve the problems properly by ourselves in our daily life, we must learn some basic living skills and face the difficulties independently.
First, we should use our free time to help parents do some housework, which not only reduces the burden of our parents but also helps us master some skills to live better. Second, we should take part in some labour activities at school or in society, which is helpful to making friends with others and dealing with some problems more properly when facing them later. Finally, We should know about how hard the life is by doing labour so that we can cherish today’s life.
Life is a process of learning, during the process , we not only need to study knowledge but also need to learn some basic skills.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据表格内容提示,写一篇作文鼓励同学们积极参加劳动,获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一人称为主。在写作时,涵盖表格所给要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯,确保语句通顺,无单词错误,条理清晰。
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