(通用版)高考英语三轮写作冲刺07 提取与整合:高考英语概要写作解读之道
展开What are they ding?
What is happening t them? And why?
Indr Air Pllutin
Indr Air Pllutin in Schls
主题语境:人与自然语篇类型:说明文话题范围:室内空气污染学习目标:了解产生室内空气污染的原因、污染物的来源及危害、以及了解相关防止方法。阅读技能:信息提取(抓主题词)写作技能:信息整合(概要写作)思维能力:逻辑思维能力(分析、归纳、概念建构)
主题阅读:文章信息梳理
词汇学习:语篇中的重点词汇
ccupanturbanizatinawarenessaccumulatevehicle exhaustsventilatinrespiratry prblems
[1]Tpic(话题): [2]Purpse(目的)(a)t tell a real stry; (b)t tell a made-up stry;(c) t describe a persn, place, r thing; (d) t explain hw t d smething;(e)t find smething ut; (f)t give an pinin; (g)t ask smething;(h)ther:
[3]Audience(潜在读者)Write answers t these questins. (a)Wh will read my writing? (b)What d they already knw abut my tpic? (c)What d I want them t knw? (d)What part f my tpic wuld interest them much?
提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容提要。考查重点:(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(3)上下文的连贯性;(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
知识储备:语篇的宏观与微观结构
中心思想(主题/中心)
语篇布局文字排列段内组织衔接手段语篇风格
词汇语法句法关系语义连贯思维表达意义传递
Generally speaking, a schl has far mre ccupants per square meter than an ffice building. The fact is that with increasing urbanizatin, the student ppulatin in many schls is still grwing. Therefre, an awareness f pssible indr air quality prblems is imprtant fr teachers and students alike. Mst indr air pllutin in schls cmes frm surces inside the schl building. Fr example, phtcpiers, manufactured wd prducts like desks and chairs, and carpeting cleaning prducts and pesticides may all send ut harmful elements int the air. Other pllutants may als accumulate in specific areas such as labratries and tilets. Meanwhile, utdr air that enters a schl building thrugh windws and ther penings can als bring vehicle exhausts int the classrms. Outdated ventilatin systems in sme lder schls increase the risks f indr air quality prblems. Pr indr air quality can cause serius respiratry prblems. Yunger students in particular are affected. Children’s respiratry systems are still develping. They are mre sensitive t the air pllutants. Children als have higher respiratry rates than adults. As a result, they are likely t breathe in mre f the pllutants than adults d.There is a lt that we can d and shuld d. Fr instance, increasing ventilatin rates, banning smking, string paints and pesticides in clsed cntainers, and using thse pllutant surces in perids f lw r n ccupancy are all easy and effective means t prevent the prblems. Of curse, f all the measures t take, educatin is n tp f the list. When everyne in the schl fully understands the matter, a safer and healthier learning envirnment with cleaner air can be created.
(5)列段落主题句(“一个句子”)
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Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Indr air pllutin shuld be paid mre attentin.
Key wrds: an awareness f indr air pllutin
The pllutin cmes frm the equipments in the schl.
The pllutin can give rise t serius respiratry prblems.
We shuld and can d many things t prevent the pllutin.
Key wrds: frm surces inside the schl building
Key wrds: cause serius respiratry prblems
Key wrds: a lt that we can and shuld d
(6)补支撑分论点(“一个短语”)
Key wrds: student ppulatin/still grwing
Key wrds:prducts/specific areas/ utdr air/ventilatin system
Key wrds:yuger students in particular affected
Key wrds: easy/effective means/ educatin
with the increasing f students
such as that frm wd prducts and specific areas, as well as...
especially t the students sensitive t the pllutants
including such effective means as banning smking, keeping air clean, etc., with educating peple t be the mst imprtant
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