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1.全国卷书面表达体裁为应用文,以考查书信和电子邮件为主。2018年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达比较特殊,要求考生为校宣传栏写一则通知,而通知是生活中非常实用且高频的写作形式,这就更加强调了英语写作的实用性。2.提纲类书面表达是全国卷命题的主要形式,开放性逐渐增强,只给出写作方向,对写作内容限制较少,这有利于考生充分发挥自己的写作水平。3.话题贴近考生的生活实际。这种考查方式不仅体现了高考重视对考生英语能力的考查,而且也引导考生关注英美国家的文化和社会生活,关注中国传统文化和社会主义核心价值观,引导学生在传承和发扬中华优秀传统文化和伟大民族精神的同时,坚定理想信念,增强“四个自信”。
1.熟记满分流程:三步出美文第一步,认真审题,圈出要点。包括审文体、审时态(主要用什么时态)、审人称(写给谁,以第几人称写)、审要点。根据情景说明和写作要点思考要写哪些内容,并在试卷上圈出来。第二步,列出提纲(重点词组),译成英语。根据文体需要或主题需要,再结合常识,将不成句的要点拓展成5~7个句子(一般说来,有主语有谓语就是句子,即某人做某事或什么是什么等)。将上述句子用英语表达出来,注意不要生硬地逐字逐句译,要根据英语基本句型的结构或文体的要求等用正确得体的英语表达出来即可。当遇到难词表达不了时,就用近义词或句型,将大概意思表达出来就行。
第三步,连句成篇,润色誊写。将上述句子连成一篇通顺连贯的短文,注意高级的句法和词汇的使用,必要时可能需要增加连词连成并列句或主从复合句,或增加连接性副词,如hwever,besides等。一手漂亮的英文字可能会让阅读老师为你的作文提高一个档次。多得2分,你的人生可能会变得精彩万分!
2.遣词造句下功夫,提升润色内在气质美高档次的书面表达既要要点齐全,还得具备高颜值的书写,注重外在美的同时还要包含丰富、高级的词汇。(1)精准选词,妙笔生花
(2)短语优先活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此,我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法。
状元笔记最常见的换词手段:形容词=f+同根名词●very imprtant 很重要的→f great imprtance●very harmful 非常有害的→f great harm●very valuable 很有价值的→f great value●very significant 至关重要的→f great significance●very useful 非常有用的→f great use●very helpful 非常有帮助的→f great help
(3)“具体化”单词优先
3.句式多样,表述地道避免句式单一、重复,尽量使用地道的语法结构或高级句式,提升表达水平。(1)利用复合句式,提升文章档次复合句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)①增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次,在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句,或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句,这些都能为文章增加亮点。Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage,which will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival.(2019全国Ⅲ)
②吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中,状语从句是经常用到的句型,它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。I am s regretful t knw that yu are ging t return t yur hme befre lng.(结果状语从句)(2019浙江)I think I am qualified fr this jb,because I have learned Chinese painting since childhd.(2019全国Ⅰ)If yu have any pinin abut the film,please send emails t studentunin@126.cm.(2018全国Ⅱ)
③提升档次的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句,是写作中常见的高级表达方式。I d believe that I am very qualified fr this vluntary wrk,because I have a gd cmmand f spken English.(宾语从句)(2018浙江)It is knwn that we can benefit a lt frm playing ping-png.(主语从句)(2017全国Ⅲ)I have the cnfidence that yu will have a great time.(同位语从句)
(2)利用句式变化,增加得分亮点①强调句型It is yu wh shared with me rich knwledge f English and English culture.(2019浙江)It is thrugh this vluntary wrk that it will enable me t learn English better and meanwhile t braden my hrizns.(2018浙江)②倒装句Never will I frget yu and yur kindness.(2019浙江)③省略句While studying in China,yu always spent yur free time in helping me plish up my ral English.(while ding...)(2019浙江)As(it is) scheduled,we participated in several instructive activities.(2016天津)
④虚拟语气I wish that yu culd grasp this pprtunity t learn traditinal Chinese culture further.(2017全国Ⅱ)⑤with复合结构In the picture,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.⑥并列句型T be hnest,vters smetimes feel annyed,nt because they hate vting,but because they are divided between emtin and fairness.⑦it句型I think it great fun t learn the pems written in the Tang Dynasty with yu.(it作形式宾语)
(3)非谓语动词,表达言简意明恰当地运用非谓语动词,不仅句型多样、句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。①分词作状语Lcated behind the library,the newly-built stadium lks really beautiful.Hearing that yu are recruiting sme vlunteers t welcme the cming freign students,I am gladly writing t apply fr this jb.(2018浙江)
②动词不定式If I am lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer,I can shw visitrs arund the gallery and answer their questins abut the paintings,after sme prper training.(2019全国Ⅰ)T get admitted,I have made gd preparatins befrehand,trying t knw as much as I culd abut my city.(2017天津)
【基础句式练技法】Ⅰ.完成句子1.我们还将一起度过有趣的时间,唱歌、跳舞和做游戏。(现在分词作伴随状语)We’ll als spend sme fun time tgether . 答案:singing,dancing and playing cmputer games2.我想请你为我校英文报写篇文章。(不定式作宾补)I’d like t ask yu fr ur schl’s English newspaper. 答案:t write an article
3.我们还将一起度过一段有趣的时间,我们希望这会使他们非常开心。(定语从句,“我们希望”作插入语)We’ll als spend sme fun time tgether, . 答案:which,we hpe,will make us very happy4.是因为交通十分拥挤我才迟到的。(强调句) I arrived late. 答案:It was because the traffic was very heavy that5.如果你方便的话,我们就八点半在校门外见面。 ,let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. 答案:If it is cnvenient t yu
Ⅱ.句式升级1.We will g t the Spring Muntain and there we can have a climb.(定语从句)→We will g t the Spring Muntain, . 答案:where we can have a climb2.When we apprached the city center,we saw a stne statue f abut 10 meters in height.(用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句子)→ ,we saw a stne statue f abut 10 meters in height. 答案:Appraching the city center
3.As the sciety develps rapidly,it’s necessary fr us t have a gd knwledge f English and cmputer.(用with复合结构改写句子)→ ,it’s necessary fr us t have a gd knwledge f English and cmputer. 答案:With the sciety develping rapidly4.That they had had prfessinal training impressed me mst.(用主语从句和表语从句改写句子) they had had prfessinal training. 答案:What impressed me mst was that
5.Our parents have devted their uncnditinal lve t us,which indeed deserves ur appreciatin and reward.(用强调句强调主语改写句子)→ ,which indeed deserves ur appreciatin and reward. 答案:It’s ur parents wh have devted their uncnditinal lve t us6.My favrite hbbies are reading bks and newspapers.They have becme a necessary part f my daily life.(用定语从句合并句子)→My favrite hbbies are reading bks and newspapers, . 答案:which have becme a necessary part f my daily life
4.三法并举,增加细节“凑”词数在试题“注意”中有明确规定:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数,又指定了充实文章的方法,即“适当增加细节”。下面介绍几种常见的“增加细节”的方法,然后依据这些方法对习作进行修改。(1)追加成分1)列举具体的实例进行补充说明①此外,你最好带一些小礼物,例如一本书或一个中国节。(2018全国Ⅰ)Besides,yu’d better bring sme little gifts,such as a bk r a Chinese knt.
②我想大体上介绍一下中国的传统文化,尤其是中国绘画。I’d like t talk briefly abut Chinese traditinal culture,especially Chinese painting.③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩,我非常喜欢体育运动,尤其是户外运动。无论何时我有空,我会去远足或与同班同学一起爬山。I am a healthy by full f energy s I like sprts very much,especially utdr activities.Whenever I have time,I’ll g hiking r muntain climbing with my classmates.在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出。
2)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。河里的水很清澈。I went swimming in the river f the west f the village nw and then.The water in the river is very clear.(背景渲染)②大餐过后这位胖男士慢慢地走向了卧室。After a rich meal,the fat man slwly made his way t his bedrm.(神态、动作)
3)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、目的、地点等内容①作为一名学生,我建议老师选择更多吸引我们青少年的英语电影,因此让英语学习更有趣。As a student,I suggest that the teacher shuld chse mre English films that appeal t us teenagers,thus making English learning mre interesting.②演讲时要面带微笑,这会让你放松;要讲慢些,讲清楚些,从而给观众和评委留下好印象。Be sure t wear a smile n yur face when yu speak,which will make yu relaxed.Besides,remember t speak slwly and clearly s that yu can leave a gd impressin n the audience and judges.
③慈善义卖得来的钱将送给急需的人。这将不仅帮他们渡过难关,还给他们温暖和幸福。The mney cllected in the charity sale will be sent t thse in great need.This will nt nly help them thrugh difficulties,but als give them warmth and happiness.
(2)添加过渡根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语,甚至过渡句,可以使文章浑然一体,衔接自然,同时能充实文章。【典例】话题:是否禁止广场舞I dn’t think square dancing shuld be frbidden.The reasns are as fllws:First f all/T begin with,dancing is a gd way t take exercise,which can help peple t build themselves up.It als prvides a chance fr peple t cmmunicate with each ther.What’s mre,the square is a gd place fr peple t wrk ut.
状元笔记书面表达中高频过渡连接词:(1)添加信息 furthermre,besides,mrever,in additin,what is mre...(2)因果关系:because,fr this reasn,because f,as a result,thus,therefre,s,cnsequently,f curse,accrdingly...(3) 意义的转折或对比:althugh,hwever,n the cntrary,therwise,despite,nevertheless,thugh,in fact,n the ther hand,as a matter f fact...(4)事件发生的时空顺序:first,secnd,third,after that,meanwhile,then,befre,next,frmerly,later,finally,in the end,at last...(5)列举:firstly,secndly,fr ne anther,first f all,t begin with,then,last...(6)举例、解释:fr example,fr instance,that is,namely,t illustrate...(7)总结:in shrt,t sum up,in cnclusin,n the whle,t cnclude
(3)结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等①Althugh I was very tired this summer hliday,I felt very happy fr what I did.(个人感受)②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)③ In a wrd,if she wuld like t learn Chinese,I hpe she will d it well.(愿景)④ As students,it’s ur duty t prtect ur schl envirnment and make it clean.(倡议)
【基础语篇练技法】词数扩充专练假如你是李华,你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:1.向他表示祝贺;2.请他介绍成功的经验;3.希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,I hear that yu have wn first prize Yurs,Li Hua
[考生作文]Dear Li Ming, I hear that yu have wn first prize in the English Recitatin Cntest fr middle schl students,s I am writing t yu t give my cngratulatins t yu. As yur best friend,I am prud f yu.I hpe I can succeed like yu.S I want yu t tell me abut hw yu imprve yur English.Yur experience will be very helpful t me in my English learning.Wuld yu like t help me?I’m lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分 请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式
答案:Dear Li Ming, I hear that yu have wn first prize in the English Recitatin Cntest fr middle schl students,s I am writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu frm the bttm f my heart. As yur best friend,I am prud f yu.I knw yu have always been hard-wrking.Yur effrts pay ff eventually.Yur prnunciatin and fluent English left me a deep impressin.I hpe I can be successful like yu ne day.S culd yu share with me hw yu imprve yur English?Yur experience will be f great help t me in my English learning.Wuld yu like t help me?I’d appreciate it if yu culd write me back and give me yur advice.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
应用文高频文体——普通书信/电子邮件【阅卷寄语】一、布局谋篇三段式英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,其开头、结尾常常都会给出,正文可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构为:
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I am very glad t have received the letter yu sent me tw days ag.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。2.Nthing makes me happier than t receive yur letter.再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。3.Srry t reply t yur letter s late.抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
(二)主体部分常用语1.I’ve been thinking abut the questin yu wrte in the letter.In my pinin,yu shuld...我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。在我看来,你应该……2.If necessary,we can arrange a face-t-face discussin smetime this week.如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。(三)结尾常用语1.I’d appreciate it if yu culd make a respnse at yur earliest cnvenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。2.Expecting t hear frm yu as sn as pssible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。
典题感悟(2019安徽安庆二模)假定你是李华,你的家乡将举行庆祝首个“中国农民丰收节”(Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival)活动,请你写封邮件,邀请你的新西兰朋友Eric来参加,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容(民俗文化表演、美食品尝及观光活动等)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
技巧点拨一、布局谋篇“四定”审题,“三段”谋篇
答案:(1)电子邮件 (2)第三人称为主 (3)一般将来时(4)引出话题,发出邀请 (5)基本情况:时间及具体的活动(6)表达心情,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Eric,Hw is everything ging?I am writing t invite yu t participate in the celebratins f the first Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival in my hmetwn.It will be held n the square frm September 22 t September 24.It will last frm 9:00 am t 5:00 pm.The lcal gvernment will hst sme activities fr the festival.If it is cnvenient t yu,yu are welcme t visit my hmetwn.Yu can get t knw Chinese culture thrugh the activities.I believe that yu will spend an unfrgettable time during the festival.Best wishes,Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Eric,Hw is everything ging?I am writing t invite yu t participate in the celebratins f the first Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival in my hmetwn,(1) (改为定语从句).(2) (用expect 改写). The lcal gvernment (3) (升级修饰词sme),(4) (用举例子增加细节).If it is cnvenient t yu,yu are welcme t visit my hmetwn.Yu can (5) (升级get t knw) f Chinese culture thrugh the activities.I believe that yu will spend an unfrgettable time during the festival. Best wishes,Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)which will be held n the square frm September 22 t September 24(2)It is expected t last frm 9:00 am t 5:00 pm.(3)will hst varius (kinds f) activities fr the festival(4)such as flk culture perfrmances,tasty fd tasting and sightseeing(5)have a better understanding
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1假定你是李华,正在加拿大访学。你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章,发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信,内容包括:要点如下:1.赞赏对方介绍中国文化;2.指出错误;3.希望更正;4.词数100左右。参考词汇:赛艇—rwing bat 龙舟—dragn bat
参考范文 Dear Sir,I am Li Hua,a visiting student frm China.I’m writing t vice my pinin n yur article abut the Chinese Dragn Bat Festival.I’m much grateful t yu fr sharing ur Chinese culture by intrducing the Dragn Bat Festival t yur peple,which will definitely bridge the gap between us tw cuntries.Hwever,I fund a flaw in the picture that ges with the article.Actually,we dn’t cmpete with yur familiar rwing bats but dragn bats because dragns are cnsidered as a symbl f ur Chinese culture.I sincerely hpe yu can revise the bat infrmatin s that readers will have a better understanding f China.Thank yu in advance fr the effrts yu will make.Yurs,Li Hua
Li HuaB组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2019全国Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Chris,I’m writing t infrm yu f the upcming vlleyball game that yu are suppsed t prepare fr.The game is scheduled t be held in the newly built stadium f ur schl next Friday afternn.As a member f the team,yu shuld be well prepared fr it.Firstly,please cme up with a wrkut schedule and stick t it s that yu can get in shape sn.Secndly,yu shuld attend the team training sessins and meetings t study the visiting team tgether with the teammates.Since ur schl attaches great imprtance t this game,I hpe we can devte urselves t becming a strnger team and beat ur ppnent.Yurs,Li Hua
邀请信【阅卷寄语】邀请信一般是邀请某人出席某仪式、参加某活动的信件或电子邮件。邀请信一般由三部分构成:第一部分进行自我介绍、问候寒暄;第二部分清楚地表达邀请的意图以及具体时间、地点、场合,以及被邀请人需要做什么准备、会进行哪些活动等;第三部分表达期待之意,以及联系方式等。一、布局谋篇三段式
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语:发出邀请On behalf f them,I am writing t invite yu...作为他们的代表,我写信是想邀请你……I’m nw writing n behalf invite yu t cme and attend it,if yu can spare the time.我代表……写信邀请您来参加,如果您能抽出时间的话。I sincerely invite yu t watch shw because...我诚挚地邀请您来看演出,因为……I wnder if yu’d like t g with me.我想知道您是否想和我一起去。
(二)主体常用语:活动内容Here is a brief schedule (abut this activity).First and fremst, additin, but nt least,...这是(关于这次活动的)简要日程计划表。首先,……其次,……最后但同样重要的是,……There will be many activities,such s n.将会有很多的活动,例如……(三)结尾常用语:期待对方接受邀请I sincerely hpe yu can accept ur invitatin/jin us and I have the cnfidence that...我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们,并且我相信……Please let me knw yur decisin if it is cnvenient fr yu.方便的时候请告知我你的决定。
典题感悟(2019全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)邀请信 (2)第一、二人称为主 (3)一般将来时(4)引出话题,发出邀请 (5)活动具体情况 (6)表达欢迎,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Allen,Hw is everything ging?Our schl will hld a music festival next Saturday mrning in the schl hall.As an rganizer,I’m writing t invite yu t jin us.The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am,and the schlmaster will deliver a speech.Fllwing the speech is a ne-hur lecture with the title f “A Brief Histry f Chinese Music” by Prfessr Gu,and then there will be varius fantastic perfrmances played by talented students.Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage.And it will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Allen,Hw is everything ging?(1) (增加相关信息).Our schl will hld a music festival next Saturday mrning in the schl hall (2) (增加细节).As an rganizer,I’m writing t invite yu t jin us. The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am,and the schlmaster will deliver a speech.Fllwing the speech is a ne-hur lecture with the title f “A Brief Histry f Chinese Music” by Prfessr Gu,(3) (改为定语从句) played by talented students.Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage,(4) (改为定语从句). Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)I learn frm yur last letter that yu are ging t pay a visit t yur Chinese friend.Here are several relevant details yu have t pay attentin t(2)t enrich students’ after-schl life(3)after which there will be varius fantastic perfrmances(4)which will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019山东潍坊一模)假如你是李华,想邀请你的朋友Jhn在周六晚上去观看科幻电影 The Wandering Earth,请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.发出邀请;2.介绍电影(主题:保护人类共同的家园;观众评价等);3.请求回复。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Jhn,Knwing that yu are interested in science fictin,I’d like t invite yu t see a film this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shwn these days,whse theme is t save the earth and prtect ur cmmn hme.Viewers describe it as a breakthrugh f the Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range f psitive reviews s far.Shall we g t watch the film if yu are available?Hw abut this Saturday evening?Please cntact me at yur earliest cnvenience s that I can bk the tickets in advance.Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2017全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Mr.Henry,I’m writing t invite yu t pay a visit t the Chinese Paper-cutting Art Exhibitin tgether with me,which is t be held in ur schl.The event is intended t take place in the gallery hall frm 8:00 am t 10:00 am n May 9.All the students as well as the teachers f ur schl are expected t attend it.We’ll appreciate a variety f wnderful paper-cutting wrks,including flwers,birds,fishes and s n.I believe it is a gd pprtunity fr yu t have a better understanding f Chinese culture.We’d appreciate it if yu culd cme and jin us.Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
询问信【阅卷寄语】询问信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分。一、布局谋篇三段式1.说明自己的计划或目的,也就是询问信息的原因。2.征询具体信息。3.期待回复并表示感谢。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语:提出询问内容1.I am writing t see if it is pssible fr yu t prvide me with infrmatin regarding...我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。2.Wuld yu be s kind as t tell 您能告诉我……吗?3.I’m writing t ask fr mre infrmatin abut it.我写信来询问更多关于它的信息。
(二)主体部分常用语:询问信中的内容1.There is n dubt that I will get gd grades.毫无疑问我可以取得好成绩。2.The mst significant thing yu shuld keep in mind is that...你应该牢记的重要的事情是……3.By the way,d yu need any ther help?Please dn’t hesitate t let me knw.顺便问一下,您需要其他的帮助吗?请不要犹豫,随时告知我们。
(三)结尾常用语:表达感激,提出希望1.I wuld be mst grateful if yu culd send me infrmatin regarding/cncerning...如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。2.Besides,is there anything that I shuld pay special attentin t?此外,有没有我要特别注意的事情?3.Lking frward t yur early reply./Hpe t hear frm yu sn.期待您及时答复。
典题感悟(2018全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)询问信 (2)第一人称为主 (3)一般现在时 (4)引出话题 (5)询问的具体内容 (6)表达祝福,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Terry,Hw are yu ding these days?I hear yu are invited t dinner at yur Chinese friend’s huse.Hwever,I d have a few suggestins fr yu.I strngly advise yu t arrive 5 minutes earlier.Yu may take a gift with yu.It makes sense t take sme fruit with yu.Let them knw ahead f time that yu need a frk r spn.Lking frward t seeing yu!Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Terry,Hw are yu ding these days?I hear yu are invited t dinner at yur Chinese friend’s huse.(1) (增加过渡细节).Hwever,I d have a few suggestins fr yu.(2) (增加细节:让对方守时的原因),I strngly advise yu t arrive 5 minutes earlier. Yu may take a gift with yu,(3) (增加细节,对所带礼物的要求).It makes sense t take sme fruit with yu.(4) (增加细节:让对方练习一下筷子的使用) let them knw ahead f time that yu need a frk r spn. (5) (增加细节:相信对方很快融入).Lking frward t seeing yu! Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)As fr this I dn’t think there is much fr yu t pay attentin t(2)Since sme peple are very cautius abut time(3)but it desn’t have t be smething f great value(4)And yu’d better practice using chpsticks in advance r(5)Dn’t wrry.I believe yu can fit int the Chinese family
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019甘肃兰州一中6月模拟)假定你是高三应届毕业生李华,打算毕业后到英国一所大学留学。请用英语致信这所大学询问相关情况,要点包括:1.简要介绍你的学习情况:2.询问入学要求和你关心的事项(包括英语要求,入学程序和奖学金)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam,This is t request mre infrmatin abut yur internatinal student entry requirements fr yur plitical science.I am Li Hua,a Chinese student t graduate frm high schl with an verall scre f 650 ut f 750.I am planning t study plitical science this year at yur university.I wuld be very grateful if yu culd help me ut and let me knw abut the English requirements,admissin prcedures and schlarships in yur university.If the evidence f high grades in written examinatin f required r preferable subjects fr entry t yur curse is required,I will prvide it fr yu.Thanks in advance fr any help yu can give.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2018全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Peter,I am s delighted t have received yur letter.Yu asked me in yur last letter abut the physical exercise in ur schl and the fllwing infrmatin may give yu sme help.T my great jy,a famus new stadium has been put up,which has becme the landmark in ur schl.Besides,with the stadium built,a wide range f sprts activities can be carried ut,f which table tennis,ftball as well as running cmpetitins enjy great ppularity.I am particularly fnd f basketball because it has been giving me strength t cnfrnt the challenge in my life.Finally,I sincerely invite yu t visit ur schl and jin in the sprts we bth like.Yurs,Li Hua
建议信【阅卷寄语】建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
一、布局谋篇三段式具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secndly,thirdly或t begin/start with,then,later,last but nt least等依次陈述建议,具体为:第一段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。第二段:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。第三段:对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I knw yu have truble reading yur letter.I am writing t give yu sme suggestins/ffer yu sme advice.在读了你的信后,我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。2.Yu’ve asked me fr advice with regard I’ll try t make sme useful suggestins here.关于……你向我征求建议,在此,我尽力提出一些有用的建议。3.The fllwing are my suggestins./My suggestins are as fellws.
(二)主体部分常用语1.In my pinin/Persnally/As far as I’m cncerned,it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。2.I think it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd...我认为如果你能……可能会更有利。(三)结尾常用语I hpe yu will find these suggestins useful.我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。
典题感悟假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文,请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视;3.学唱中文歌曲;4.交中国朋友。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)建议信 (2)第二、三人称为主 (3)一般现在时,一般将来时 (4)引出话题 (5)具体建议和理由 (6)表达祝愿
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Peter,I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestins.First,it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse.Then,it als helps t watch TV and read bks,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.It shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs,because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily.Yu can als make mre Chinese friends.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Peter,I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestins.First,it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse,(1) (解释原因,增加细节).Then,it als helps t watch TV and read bks,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.
(2) (增加连接成分),it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs,because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily.Yu can als make mre Chinese friends.(3) (解释原因,增加细节).Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)as yu’ll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students(2)Besides/What’s mre/In additin(3)They will tell yu a lt abut China and help yu learn Chinese
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019广东一模)假定你是李华,你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》(English Mnthly)向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件,内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.说明该报优点:内容丰富,指导英语学习;3.提出建议:多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear editr,I’m s glad t give my persnal pinins n my favrite newspaper English Mnthly set up by the Student Unin.I’m a high schl student wh is enthusiastic abut reading newspapers and I want t learn smething frm them.I think English Mnthly has many advantages.Fr ne thing,it’s rich in cntent,ranging frm ecnmy t civilizatin.Fr anther,it’s a guide t English learning.Thrugh it,I can have a gd knwledge f what’s ging n at hme and abrad and I’ve imprved my English reading skills.If nly yu culd intrduce sme mre abut Chinese traditinal culture and inspiratinal stries in the culture clumn.Here I really hpe English Mnthly will attract mre readers.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2011全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Glbal Mirrr周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editr-in-Chief,Cngratulatins n the 5th anniversary f Glbal Mirrr!
参考范文 Dear Editr-in-Chief, Cngratulatins n the 5th anniversary f Glbal Mirrr! I’m a regular reader f yur newspaper.I like it very much mainly fr the fllwing tw reasns.First,it cvers bth natinal and internatinal news s that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all imprtant things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stries f wrld-famus peple,which help me understand hw a persn can wrk hard t make the wrld a better place.As a yung student,I suggest that Glbal Mirrr carry articles t guide us in ur English learning,and I hpe that it will becme even mre ppular.Sincerely yurs, Li Hua
申请信【阅卷寄语】申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织、活动的申请、报考申请、学位或留学申请等等。其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是求职信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类文章常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I learned n yur website that...我从你们的网站上得知……2.I am writing t express my interest in yur recently advertised psitin fr...我特地写信给贵方,对于您最近在广告上登出的招聘……的信息,我很感兴趣。3.I’m writing t apply fr the jb/pst/psitin as...我写信申请……的工作/职位。4.I am writing this letter t recmmend myself as a qualified candidate fr...我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
(二)主体部分常用语1.As an get alng well with my classmates.作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。2.Fr ne thing,I can anther,I can imprve my English,make mre friends,and enrich my life.一方面,我能帮助……另一方面,我能提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,丰富我的生活。3.I am cnfident that I’m suitable ’m qualified t d./equal t (ding)sth.我确信,我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任做……
(三)结尾常用语1.I wuld be grateful if yu culd cnsider my request,and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.如果您能够考虑一下我的请求,我将不胜感激,盼望您的早日回复。2.I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。3.Shuld yu ffer me an interview,I wuld be mst grateful.Lk frward t yur reply sn.如果您能给我提供面试机会,我将非常感激。期待您早日答复。
典题感悟(2018浙江)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)申请信 (2)第一人称为主 (3)一般现在时 (4)引出话题 (5)个人基本情况:口语及相关经验 (6)表达感谢,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Sir r Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am writing t apply fr the pst f vlunteer fr ur schl English assciatin.I have an experience f tw years in Canada.I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English.I believe that I am a perfect candidate fr this psitin.I’m particularly interested in this psitin.I wuld welcme an pprtunity t meet with yu fr an interview.Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Sir r Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am writing t apply fr the pst f vlunteer fr ur schl English assciatin.(1) (改为with 结构),I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English.(2) (增加细节,自己的优势).I believe that I am a perfect candidate fr this psitin. I’m particularly interested in this psitin(3) (增加细节,说明理由). I wuld welcme an pprtunity t meet with yu fr an interview.Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)With an experience f tw years in Canada(2)Therefre I can easily get alng with freign students(3)partly because my friend Lgan is cming and I’d lve t see him again
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1假定你是高三学生李华,从网上获悉某国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。主要内容如下:1.写信目的;2.自我介绍;3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考范文 Dear Sir r Madam,I’m writing this letter t apply fr the jb as a vlunteer that yu have advertised n the Internet.In my pinin,nt nly can vlunteer wrk help me enrich my knwledge and experience,but als it can help thse wh are in need live better and becme mre cnfident.I will graduate frm senir high schl in June.In the past,I tk part in many scial activities in which I perfrmed well and gained rich experience.My interest and skill in English,cmmunicatin and teamwrk cntribute t my applicatin fr the jb.I wuld appreciate an interview at yur cnvenience.I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu in the future.With all my best regards!Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2019全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
参考范文 Versin 1:Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua,a student frm China fr further study in Lndn this summer vacatin.Learning frm the ntice that yur lcal art museum is recruiting sme vlunteers fr an exhibitin f Chinese paintings,I gt desperately delighted and thrilled.And I am nw writing t apply fr this psitin.
I’ve been lnging fr a chance t ffer service in such a fantastic platfrm s as t enhance my rganizatin ability as well as cmmunicatin skills.Being active,enthusiastic and energetic,I am cnfident t be cmpetent fr the vluntary wrk.Furthermre,my previus experience as a vlunteer enables me t be qualified fr the psitin with less training.Mst imprtantly,as a Chinese,I have been expsed t Chinese culture especially Chinese paintings since I was a little child,s I am cnvinced that I can make a vivid descriptin f the prfund meaning behind thse masterpieces t the visitrs.I d hpe that I can meet yur requirements.I wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply t me at yur earliest cnvenience.Yurs,Li Hua
Versin 2:Dear Sir/Madame,I am Li Hua,a student frm China wh is pursuing further study in Lndn this summer vacatin.Learning that an art museum in Lndn is ging t hld an art exhibitin f Chinese paintings and is in need f vlunteers,I am writing t yu t apply fr this psitin.First f all,cming frm China,I have been cmpletely invlved in traditinal Chinese culture including Chinese paintings since I was pretty yung.Therefre,I am equipped with a wide range f knwledge in this aspect,which can help peple in Lndn have a deeper understanding f Chinese paintings.Besides,having participated in lts f vluntary activities and having a gd cmmand f English give me the cnfidence and privilege t serve as the bridge between China and Britain t enhance the mutual understandings between ur tw cuntries.
I sincerely wish that yu culd ffer me this precius pprtunity.And I wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.Yurs,Li Hua
通知【阅卷寄语】通知一般分为书面通知和口头通知两种。其要素常常包括:时间、地点、事件、参与者、活动内容及注意事项等。要求:言简意赅、措辞得当。
通知开头语1.口头通知开头语(1)May I have yur attentin,please?请注意,好吗?(2)Attentin please,everyne.I have an annuncement t make.大家请注意。我有一个通知要宣布。(3)Be quite.There is smething imprtant I have t tell yu.请安静。我有重要的事情告知你们。(4)I have smething (imprtant) t tell yu.我有(重要的)事情告知你们。(5)I’m glad t tell yu smething imprtant.很高兴告诉你们一些要事。
2.其他常用语句(1)Everyne shuld be there n time.每个人都应该按时到这。(2)Be sure nt t be late.确保不要迟到。(3)Please be present n time.请按时到场。(4)Everyne is required t be present n time.要求每个人都按时到场。(5)Be sure t attend it n time.确保按时参加。(6)Everybdy is expected t attend it n time.每个人都要求按时参加。
(7)All teachers and students are required t...要求所有的老师和学生……(8)Our schl/The Student Unin will/is ging t hld...我们学校/学生会将举办……(9)A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in...今晚7点,在……将有一场讲座。(10)Please take yur ntebks with yu and be sure n time.请随身携带笔记本,并确保按时。(11)Thse wh are interested in it are warmly welcme.热烈欢迎对此感兴趣的人士。
典题感悟(2019四川眉山一诊)假设你叫李华,是班上的英语课代表。你班外教Peter请你代他在班上发一个关于课后作业的英语通知,内容如下:1.写一篇关于中国茶文化的短文(essay);2.与同桌交换并修改错误;3.上交作业的时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)通知 (2)第三人称为主 (3)一般将来时 (4)引出话题 (5)通知具体内容 (6)表达感谢
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Bys and girls,May I have yur attentin,please?Our freign teacher Peter asked me t arrange the writing exercise instead f him tday(1).First f all,the tpic fr ur writing is abut Chinese tea culture(2).Secndly,(3),we need t exchange it with ur partner,and crrect each ther’s mistakes(4) they are made in the essays.By the way,we (5)shuld write the essay f abut 100 wrds.Lastly,the deadline fr handing it in is this Friday mrning.That’s all.Thanks fr yur listening.
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Bys and girls,May I have yur attentin,please?Our freign teacher Peter asked me t arrange the writing exercise instead f him tday.(1) (增加概括句).First f all,the tpic fr ur writing is abut Chinese tea culture (2) (解释原因,增加细节).Secndly,(3) (增加时间状语),we need t exchange it with ur partner,and crrect each ther’s mistakes (4) (改为定语从句).By the way,we (5) (词汇升级) write the essay f abut 100 wrds.Lastly,the deadline fr handing it in is this Friday mrning. That’s all.Thanks fr yur listening.
答案:(1)Here are sme details abut what we have t d(2)because we have just learnt the text(3)after we have finished it(4)which are made in the essays(5) are suppsed t
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2018浙江宁波期末)假如你是李华,你们学校邀请到甬剧演员陈明先生来你校举办讲座,请你用英语向你校国际班的留学生用英语进行口头通知。内容要点如下:1.讲座时间地点:本周三下午4点,学校报告厅;2.讲座内容:甬剧发展史;3.邀请学生参加。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:甬剧 Ningb Opera
参考范文 May I have yur attentin please?Our schl has invited a famus Ningb Opera actr,Mr.Chen Ming,t give a lecture.The lecture will be held at 4 Wednesday afternn in the schl lecture will talk abut the histry and develpment f Ningb Opera in his lecture.If yu want t learn abut Ningb lcal culture,dn’t miss this chance.Yu will definitely find it fun and mre than fun.Be sure t cme n time!Thanks fr listening!
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2018全国Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grwing Tgether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.全国卷书面表达体裁为应用文,以考查书信和电子邮件为主。2018年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达比较特殊,要求考生为校宣传栏写一则通知,而通知是生活中非常实用且高频的写作形式,这就更加强调了英语写作的实用性。2.提纲类书面表达是全国卷命题的主要形式,开放性逐渐增强,只给出写作方向,对写作内容限制较少,这有利于考生充分发挥自己的写作水平。3.话题贴近考生的生活实际。这种考查方式不仅体现了高考重视对考生英语能力的考查,而且也引导考生关注英美国家的文化和社会生活,关注中国传统文化和社会主义核心价值观,引导学生在传承和发扬中华优秀传统文化和伟大民族精神的同时,坚定理想信念,增强“四个自信”。
1.熟记满分流程:三步出美文第一步,认真审题,圈出要点。包括审文体、审时态(主要用什么时态)、审人称(写给谁,以第几人称写)、审要点。根据情景说明和写作要点思考要写哪些内容,并在试卷上圈出来。第二步,列出提纲(重点词组),译成英语。根据文体需要或主题需要,再结合常识,将不成句的要点拓展成5~7个句子(一般说来,有主语有谓语就是句子,即某人做某事或什么是什么等)。将上述句子用英语表达出来,注意不要生硬地逐字逐句译,要根据英语基本句型的结构或文体的要求等用正确得体的英语表达出来即可。当遇到难词表达不了时,就用近义词或句型,将大概意思表达出来就行。
第三步,连句成篇,润色誊写。将上述句子连成一篇通顺连贯的短文,注意高级的句法和词汇的使用,必要时可能需要增加连词连成并列句或主从复合句,或增加连接性副词,如hwever,besides等。一手漂亮的英文字可能会让阅读老师为你的作文提高一个档次。多得2分,你的人生可能会变得精彩万分!
2.遣词造句下功夫,提升润色内在气质美高档次的书面表达既要要点齐全,还得具备高颜值的书写,注重外在美的同时还要包含丰富、高级的词汇。(1)精准选词,妙笔生花
(2)短语优先活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此,我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法。
状元笔记最常见的换词手段:形容词=f+同根名词●very imprtant 很重要的→f great imprtance●very harmful 非常有害的→f great harm●very valuable 很有价值的→f great value●very significant 至关重要的→f great significance●very useful 非常有用的→f great use●very helpful 非常有帮助的→f great help
(3)“具体化”单词优先
3.句式多样,表述地道避免句式单一、重复,尽量使用地道的语法结构或高级句式,提升表达水平。(1)利用复合句式,提升文章档次复合句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)①增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次,在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句,或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句,这些都能为文章增加亮点。Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage,which will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival.(2019全国Ⅲ)
②吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中,状语从句是经常用到的句型,它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。I am s regretful t knw that yu are ging t return t yur hme befre lng.(结果状语从句)(2019浙江)I think I am qualified fr this jb,because I have learned Chinese painting since childhd.(2019全国Ⅰ)If yu have any pinin abut the film,please send emails t studentunin@126.cm.(2018全国Ⅱ)
③提升档次的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句,是写作中常见的高级表达方式。I d believe that I am very qualified fr this vluntary wrk,because I have a gd cmmand f spken English.(宾语从句)(2018浙江)It is knwn that we can benefit a lt frm playing ping-png.(主语从句)(2017全国Ⅲ)I have the cnfidence that yu will have a great time.(同位语从句)
(2)利用句式变化,增加得分亮点①强调句型It is yu wh shared with me rich knwledge f English and English culture.(2019浙江)It is thrugh this vluntary wrk that it will enable me t learn English better and meanwhile t braden my hrizns.(2018浙江)②倒装句Never will I frget yu and yur kindness.(2019浙江)③省略句While studying in China,yu always spent yur free time in helping me plish up my ral English.(while ding...)(2019浙江)As(it is) scheduled,we participated in several instructive activities.(2016天津)
④虚拟语气I wish that yu culd grasp this pprtunity t learn traditinal Chinese culture further.(2017全国Ⅱ)⑤with复合结构In the picture,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.⑥并列句型T be hnest,vters smetimes feel annyed,nt because they hate vting,but because they are divided between emtin and fairness.⑦it句型I think it great fun t learn the pems written in the Tang Dynasty with yu.(it作形式宾语)
(3)非谓语动词,表达言简意明恰当地运用非谓语动词,不仅句型多样、句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。①分词作状语Lcated behind the library,the newly-built stadium lks really beautiful.Hearing that yu are recruiting sme vlunteers t welcme the cming freign students,I am gladly writing t apply fr this jb.(2018浙江)
②动词不定式If I am lucky enugh t be chsen as a vlunteer,I can shw visitrs arund the gallery and answer their questins abut the paintings,after sme prper training.(2019全国Ⅰ)T get admitted,I have made gd preparatins befrehand,trying t knw as much as I culd abut my city.(2017天津)
【基础句式练技法】Ⅰ.完成句子1.我们还将一起度过有趣的时间,唱歌、跳舞和做游戏。(现在分词作伴随状语)We’ll als spend sme fun time tgether . 答案:singing,dancing and playing cmputer games2.我想请你为我校英文报写篇文章。(不定式作宾补)I’d like t ask yu fr ur schl’s English newspaper. 答案:t write an article
3.我们还将一起度过一段有趣的时间,我们希望这会使他们非常开心。(定语从句,“我们希望”作插入语)We’ll als spend sme fun time tgether, . 答案:which,we hpe,will make us very happy4.是因为交通十分拥挤我才迟到的。(强调句) I arrived late. 答案:It was because the traffic was very heavy that5.如果你方便的话,我们就八点半在校门外见面。 ,let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. 答案:If it is cnvenient t yu
Ⅱ.句式升级1.We will g t the Spring Muntain and there we can have a climb.(定语从句)→We will g t the Spring Muntain, . 答案:where we can have a climb2.When we apprached the city center,we saw a stne statue f abut 10 meters in height.(用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句子)→ ,we saw a stne statue f abut 10 meters in height. 答案:Appraching the city center
3.As the sciety develps rapidly,it’s necessary fr us t have a gd knwledge f English and cmputer.(用with复合结构改写句子)→ ,it’s necessary fr us t have a gd knwledge f English and cmputer. 答案:With the sciety develping rapidly4.That they had had prfessinal training impressed me mst.(用主语从句和表语从句改写句子) they had had prfessinal training. 答案:What impressed me mst was that
5.Our parents have devted their uncnditinal lve t us,which indeed deserves ur appreciatin and reward.(用强调句强调主语改写句子)→ ,which indeed deserves ur appreciatin and reward. 答案:It’s ur parents wh have devted their uncnditinal lve t us6.My favrite hbbies are reading bks and newspapers.They have becme a necessary part f my daily life.(用定语从句合并句子)→My favrite hbbies are reading bks and newspapers, . 答案:which have becme a necessary part f my daily life
4.三法并举,增加细节“凑”词数在试题“注意”中有明确规定:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数,又指定了充实文章的方法,即“适当增加细节”。下面介绍几种常见的“增加细节”的方法,然后依据这些方法对习作进行修改。(1)追加成分1)列举具体的实例进行补充说明①此外,你最好带一些小礼物,例如一本书或一个中国节。(2018全国Ⅰ)Besides,yu’d better bring sme little gifts,such as a bk r a Chinese knt.
②我想大体上介绍一下中国的传统文化,尤其是中国绘画。I’d like t talk briefly abut Chinese traditinal culture,especially Chinese painting.③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩,我非常喜欢体育运动,尤其是户外运动。无论何时我有空,我会去远足或与同班同学一起爬山。I am a healthy by full f energy s I like sprts very much,especially utdr activities.Whenever I have time,I’ll g hiking r muntain climbing with my classmates.在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出。
2)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。河里的水很清澈。I went swimming in the river f the west f the village nw and then.The water in the river is very clear.(背景渲染)②大餐过后这位胖男士慢慢地走向了卧室。After a rich meal,the fat man slwly made his way t his bedrm.(神态、动作)
3)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、目的、地点等内容①作为一名学生,我建议老师选择更多吸引我们青少年的英语电影,因此让英语学习更有趣。As a student,I suggest that the teacher shuld chse mre English films that appeal t us teenagers,thus making English learning mre interesting.②演讲时要面带微笑,这会让你放松;要讲慢些,讲清楚些,从而给观众和评委留下好印象。Be sure t wear a smile n yur face when yu speak,which will make yu relaxed.Besides,remember t speak slwly and clearly s that yu can leave a gd impressin n the audience and judges.
③慈善义卖得来的钱将送给急需的人。这将不仅帮他们渡过难关,还给他们温暖和幸福。The mney cllected in the charity sale will be sent t thse in great need.This will nt nly help them thrugh difficulties,but als give them warmth and happiness.
(2)添加过渡根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语,甚至过渡句,可以使文章浑然一体,衔接自然,同时能充实文章。【典例】话题:是否禁止广场舞I dn’t think square dancing shuld be frbidden.The reasns are as fllws:First f all/T begin with,dancing is a gd way t take exercise,which can help peple t build themselves up.It als prvides a chance fr peple t cmmunicate with each ther.What’s mre,the square is a gd place fr peple t wrk ut.
状元笔记书面表达中高频过渡连接词:(1)添加信息 furthermre,besides,mrever,in additin,what is mre...(2)因果关系:because,fr this reasn,because f,as a result,thus,therefre,s,cnsequently,f curse,accrdingly...(3) 意义的转折或对比:althugh,hwever,n the cntrary,therwise,despite,nevertheless,thugh,in fact,n the ther hand,as a matter f fact...(4)事件发生的时空顺序:first,secnd,third,after that,meanwhile,then,befre,next,frmerly,later,finally,in the end,at last...(5)列举:firstly,secndly,fr ne anther,first f all,t begin with,then,last...(6)举例、解释:fr example,fr instance,that is,namely,t illustrate...(7)总结:in shrt,t sum up,in cnclusin,n the whle,t cnclude
(3)结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等①Althugh I was very tired this summer hliday,I felt very happy fr what I did.(个人感受)②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)③ In a wrd,if she wuld like t learn Chinese,I hpe she will d it well.(愿景)④ As students,it’s ur duty t prtect ur schl envirnment and make it clean.(倡议)
【基础语篇练技法】词数扩充专练假如你是李华,你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:1.向他表示祝贺;2.请他介绍成功的经验;3.希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,I hear that yu have wn first prize Yurs,Li Hua
[考生作文]Dear Li Ming, I hear that yu have wn first prize in the English Recitatin Cntest fr middle schl students,s I am writing t yu t give my cngratulatins t yu. As yur best friend,I am prud f yu.I hpe I can succeed like yu.S I want yu t tell me abut hw yu imprve yur English.Yur experience will be very helpful t me in my English learning.Wuld yu like t help me?I’m lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分 请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式
答案:Dear Li Ming, I hear that yu have wn first prize in the English Recitatin Cntest fr middle schl students,s I am writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu frm the bttm f my heart. As yur best friend,I am prud f yu.I knw yu have always been hard-wrking.Yur effrts pay ff eventually.Yur prnunciatin and fluent English left me a deep impressin.I hpe I can be successful like yu ne day.S culd yu share with me hw yu imprve yur English?Yur experience will be f great help t me in my English learning.Wuld yu like t help me?I’d appreciate it if yu culd write me back and give me yur advice.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
应用文高频文体——普通书信/电子邮件【阅卷寄语】一、布局谋篇三段式英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,其开头、结尾常常都会给出,正文可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构为:
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I am very glad t have received the letter yu sent me tw days ag.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。2.Nthing makes me happier than t receive yur letter.再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。3.Srry t reply t yur letter s late.抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
(二)主体部分常用语1.I’ve been thinking abut the questin yu wrte in the letter.In my pinin,yu shuld...我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。在我看来,你应该……2.If necessary,we can arrange a face-t-face discussin smetime this week.如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。(三)结尾常用语1.I’d appreciate it if yu culd make a respnse at yur earliest cnvenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。2.Expecting t hear frm yu as sn as pssible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。
典题感悟(2019安徽安庆二模)假定你是李华,你的家乡将举行庆祝首个“中国农民丰收节”(Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival)活动,请你写封邮件,邀请你的新西兰朋友Eric来参加,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容(民俗文化表演、美食品尝及观光活动等)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
技巧点拨一、布局谋篇“四定”审题,“三段”谋篇
答案:(1)电子邮件 (2)第三人称为主 (3)一般将来时(4)引出话题,发出邀请 (5)基本情况:时间及具体的活动(6)表达心情,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Eric,Hw is everything ging?I am writing t invite yu t participate in the celebratins f the first Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival in my hmetwn.It will be held n the square frm September 22 t September 24.It will last frm 9:00 am t 5:00 pm.The lcal gvernment will hst sme activities fr the festival.If it is cnvenient t yu,yu are welcme t visit my hmetwn.Yu can get t knw Chinese culture thrugh the activities.I believe that yu will spend an unfrgettable time during the festival.Best wishes,Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Eric,Hw is everything ging?I am writing t invite yu t participate in the celebratins f the first Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival in my hmetwn,(1) (改为定语从句).(2) (用expect 改写). The lcal gvernment (3) (升级修饰词sme),(4) (用举例子增加细节).If it is cnvenient t yu,yu are welcme t visit my hmetwn.Yu can (5) (升级get t knw) f Chinese culture thrugh the activities.I believe that yu will spend an unfrgettable time during the festival. Best wishes,Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)which will be held n the square frm September 22 t September 24(2)It is expected t last frm 9:00 am t 5:00 pm.(3)will hst varius (kinds f) activities fr the festival(4)such as flk culture perfrmances,tasty fd tasting and sightseeing(5)have a better understanding
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1假定你是李华,正在加拿大访学。你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章,发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟。请你给编辑部写一封信,内容包括:要点如下:1.赞赏对方介绍中国文化;2.指出错误;3.希望更正;4.词数100左右。参考词汇:赛艇—rwing bat 龙舟—dragn bat
参考范文 Dear Sir,I am Li Hua,a visiting student frm China.I’m writing t vice my pinin n yur article abut the Chinese Dragn Bat Festival.I’m much grateful t yu fr sharing ur Chinese culture by intrducing the Dragn Bat Festival t yur peple,which will definitely bridge the gap between us tw cuntries.Hwever,I fund a flaw in the picture that ges with the article.Actually,we dn’t cmpete with yur familiar rwing bats but dragn bats because dragns are cnsidered as a symbl f ur Chinese culture.I sincerely hpe yu can revise the bat infrmatin s that readers will have a better understanding f China.Thank yu in advance fr the effrts yu will make.Yurs,Li Hua
Li HuaB组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2019全国Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Chris,I’m writing t infrm yu f the upcming vlleyball game that yu are suppsed t prepare fr.The game is scheduled t be held in the newly built stadium f ur schl next Friday afternn.As a member f the team,yu shuld be well prepared fr it.Firstly,please cme up with a wrkut schedule and stick t it s that yu can get in shape sn.Secndly,yu shuld attend the team training sessins and meetings t study the visiting team tgether with the teammates.Since ur schl attaches great imprtance t this game,I hpe we can devte urselves t becming a strnger team and beat ur ppnent.Yurs,Li Hua
邀请信【阅卷寄语】邀请信一般是邀请某人出席某仪式、参加某活动的信件或电子邮件。邀请信一般由三部分构成:第一部分进行自我介绍、问候寒暄;第二部分清楚地表达邀请的意图以及具体时间、地点、场合,以及被邀请人需要做什么准备、会进行哪些活动等;第三部分表达期待之意,以及联系方式等。一、布局谋篇三段式
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语:发出邀请On behalf f them,I am writing t invite yu...作为他们的代表,我写信是想邀请你……I’m nw writing n behalf invite yu t cme and attend it,if yu can spare the time.我代表……写信邀请您来参加,如果您能抽出时间的话。I sincerely invite yu t watch shw because...我诚挚地邀请您来看演出,因为……I wnder if yu’d like t g with me.我想知道您是否想和我一起去。
(二)主体常用语:活动内容Here is a brief schedule (abut this activity).First and fremst, additin, but nt least,...这是(关于这次活动的)简要日程计划表。首先,……其次,……最后但同样重要的是,……There will be many activities,such s n.将会有很多的活动,例如……(三)结尾常用语:期待对方接受邀请I sincerely hpe yu can accept ur invitatin/jin us and I have the cnfidence that...我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们,并且我相信……Please let me knw yur decisin if it is cnvenient fr yu.方便的时候请告知我你的决定。
典题感悟(2019全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)邀请信 (2)第一、二人称为主 (3)一般将来时(4)引出话题,发出邀请 (5)活动具体情况 (6)表达欢迎,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Allen,Hw is everything ging?Our schl will hld a music festival next Saturday mrning in the schl hall.As an rganizer,I’m writing t invite yu t jin us.The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am,and the schlmaster will deliver a speech.Fllwing the speech is a ne-hur lecture with the title f “A Brief Histry f Chinese Music” by Prfessr Gu,and then there will be varius fantastic perfrmances played by talented students.Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage.And it will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival.Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Allen,Hw is everything ging?(1) (增加相关信息).Our schl will hld a music festival next Saturday mrning in the schl hall (2) (增加细节).As an rganizer,I’m writing t invite yu t jin us. The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am,and the schlmaster will deliver a speech.Fllwing the speech is a ne-hur lecture with the title f “A Brief Histry f Chinese Music” by Prfessr Gu,(3) (改为定语从句) played by talented students.Yu are particularly welcme t shw up n stage,(4) (改为定语从句). Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)I learn frm yur last letter that yu are ging t pay a visit t yur Chinese friend.Here are several relevant details yu have t pay attentin t(2)t enrich students’ after-schl life(3)after which there will be varius fantastic perfrmances(4)which will definitely add clr and fun t ur festival
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019山东潍坊一模)假如你是李华,想邀请你的朋友Jhn在周六晚上去观看科幻电影 The Wandering Earth,请用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.发出邀请;2.介绍电影(主题:保护人类共同的家园;观众评价等);3.请求回复。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Jhn,Knwing that yu are interested in science fictin,I’d like t invite yu t see a film this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shwn these days,whse theme is t save the earth and prtect ur cmmn hme.Viewers describe it as a breakthrugh f the Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range f psitive reviews s far.Shall we g t watch the film if yu are available?Hw abut this Saturday evening?Please cntact me at yur earliest cnvenience s that I can bk the tickets in advance.Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2017全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Mr.Henry,I’m writing t invite yu t pay a visit t the Chinese Paper-cutting Art Exhibitin tgether with me,which is t be held in ur schl.The event is intended t take place in the gallery hall frm 8:00 am t 10:00 am n May 9.All the students as well as the teachers f ur schl are expected t attend it.We’ll appreciate a variety f wnderful paper-cutting wrks,including flwers,birds,fishes and s n.I believe it is a gd pprtunity fr yu t have a better understanding f Chinese culture.We’d appreciate it if yu culd cme and jin us.Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
询问信【阅卷寄语】询问信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分。一、布局谋篇三段式1.说明自己的计划或目的,也就是询问信息的原因。2.征询具体信息。3.期待回复并表示感谢。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语:提出询问内容1.I am writing t see if it is pssible fr yu t prvide me with infrmatin regarding...我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。2.Wuld yu be s kind as t tell 您能告诉我……吗?3.I’m writing t ask fr mre infrmatin abut it.我写信来询问更多关于它的信息。
(二)主体部分常用语:询问信中的内容1.There is n dubt that I will get gd grades.毫无疑问我可以取得好成绩。2.The mst significant thing yu shuld keep in mind is that...你应该牢记的重要的事情是……3.By the way,d yu need any ther help?Please dn’t hesitate t let me knw.顺便问一下,您需要其他的帮助吗?请不要犹豫,随时告知我们。
(三)结尾常用语:表达感激,提出希望1.I wuld be mst grateful if yu culd send me infrmatin regarding/cncerning...如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。2.Besides,is there anything that I shuld pay special attentin t?此外,有没有我要特别注意的事情?3.Lking frward t yur early reply./Hpe t hear frm yu sn.期待您及时答复。
典题感悟(2018全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)询问信 (2)第一人称为主 (3)一般现在时 (4)引出话题 (5)询问的具体内容 (6)表达祝福,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Terry,Hw are yu ding these days?I hear yu are invited t dinner at yur Chinese friend’s huse.Hwever,I d have a few suggestins fr yu.I strngly advise yu t arrive 5 minutes earlier.Yu may take a gift with yu.It makes sense t take sme fruit with yu.Let them knw ahead f time that yu need a frk r spn.Lking frward t seeing yu!Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Terry,Hw are yu ding these days?I hear yu are invited t dinner at yur Chinese friend’s huse.(1) (增加过渡细节).Hwever,I d have a few suggestins fr yu.(2) (增加细节:让对方守时的原因),I strngly advise yu t arrive 5 minutes earlier. Yu may take a gift with yu,(3) (增加细节,对所带礼物的要求).It makes sense t take sme fruit with yu.(4) (增加细节:让对方练习一下筷子的使用) let them knw ahead f time that yu need a frk r spn. (5) (增加细节:相信对方很快融入).Lking frward t seeing yu! Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)As fr this I dn’t think there is much fr yu t pay attentin t(2)Since sme peple are very cautius abut time(3)but it desn’t have t be smething f great value(4)And yu’d better practice using chpsticks in advance r(5)Dn’t wrry.I believe yu can fit int the Chinese family
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019甘肃兰州一中6月模拟)假定你是高三应届毕业生李华,打算毕业后到英国一所大学留学。请用英语致信这所大学询问相关情况,要点包括:1.简要介绍你的学习情况:2.询问入学要求和你关心的事项(包括英语要求,入学程序和奖学金)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam,This is t request mre infrmatin abut yur internatinal student entry requirements fr yur plitical science.I am Li Hua,a Chinese student t graduate frm high schl with an verall scre f 650 ut f 750.I am planning t study plitical science this year at yur university.I wuld be very grateful if yu culd help me ut and let me knw abut the English requirements,admissin prcedures and schlarships in yur university.If the evidence f high grades in written examinatin f required r preferable subjects fr entry t yur curse is required,I will prvide it fr yu.Thanks in advance fr any help yu can give.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2018全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear Peter,I am s delighted t have received yur letter.Yu asked me in yur last letter abut the physical exercise in ur schl and the fllwing infrmatin may give yu sme help.T my great jy,a famus new stadium has been put up,which has becme the landmark in ur schl.Besides,with the stadium built,a wide range f sprts activities can be carried ut,f which table tennis,ftball as well as running cmpetitins enjy great ppularity.I am particularly fnd f basketball because it has been giving me strength t cnfrnt the challenge in my life.Finally,I sincerely invite yu t visit ur schl and jin in the sprts we bth like.Yurs,Li Hua
建议信【阅卷寄语】建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
一、布局谋篇三段式具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secndly,thirdly或t begin/start with,then,later,last but nt least等依次陈述建议,具体为:第一段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。第二段:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。第三段:对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I knw yu have truble reading yur letter.I am writing t give yu sme suggestins/ffer yu sme advice.在读了你的信后,我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。2.Yu’ve asked me fr advice with regard I’ll try t make sme useful suggestins here.关于……你向我征求建议,在此,我尽力提出一些有用的建议。3.The fllwing are my suggestins./My suggestins are as fellws.
(二)主体部分常用语1.In my pinin/Persnally/As far as I’m cncerned,it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。2.I think it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd...我认为如果你能……可能会更有利。(三)结尾常用语I hpe yu will find these suggestins useful.我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。
典题感悟假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文,请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视;3.学唱中文歌曲;4.交中国朋友。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)建议信 (2)第二、三人称为主 (3)一般现在时,一般将来时 (4)引出话题 (5)具体建议和理由 (6)表达祝愿
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Peter,I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestins.First,it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse.Then,it als helps t watch TV and read bks,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.It shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs,because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily.Yu can als make mre Chinese friends.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Peter,I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestins.First,it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse,(1) (解释原因,增加细节).Then,it als helps t watch TV and read bks,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible.
(2) (增加连接成分),it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs,because by ding s yu’ll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily.Yu can als make mre Chinese friends.(3) (解释原因,增加细节).Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)as yu’ll be able t learn frm the teacher and practice with yur fellw students(2)Besides/What’s mre/In additin(3)They will tell yu a lt abut China and help yu learn Chinese
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2019广东一模)假定你是李华,你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》(English Mnthly)向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件,内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.说明该报优点:内容丰富,指导英语学习;3.提出建议:多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文 Dear editr,I’m s glad t give my persnal pinins n my favrite newspaper English Mnthly set up by the Student Unin.I’m a high schl student wh is enthusiastic abut reading newspapers and I want t learn smething frm them.I think English Mnthly has many advantages.Fr ne thing,it’s rich in cntent,ranging frm ecnmy t civilizatin.Fr anther,it’s a guide t English learning.Thrugh it,I can have a gd knwledge f what’s ging n at hme and abrad and I’ve imprved my English reading skills.If nly yu culd intrduce sme mre abut Chinese traditinal culture and inspiratinal stries in the culture clumn.Here I really hpe English Mnthly will attract mre readers.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2011全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Glbal Mirrr周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editr-in-Chief,Cngratulatins n the 5th anniversary f Glbal Mirrr!
参考范文 Dear Editr-in-Chief, Cngratulatins n the 5th anniversary f Glbal Mirrr! I’m a regular reader f yur newspaper.I like it very much mainly fr the fllwing tw reasns.First,it cvers bth natinal and internatinal news s that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all imprtant things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stries f wrld-famus peple,which help me understand hw a persn can wrk hard t make the wrld a better place.As a yung student,I suggest that Glbal Mirrr carry articles t guide us in ur English learning,and I hpe that it will becme even mre ppular.Sincerely yurs, Li Hua
申请信【阅卷寄语】申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织、活动的申请、报考申请、学位或留学申请等等。其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是求职信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类文章常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。
二、遣词造句背句式(一)开头常用语1.I learned n yur website that...我从你们的网站上得知……2.I am writing t express my interest in yur recently advertised psitin fr...我特地写信给贵方,对于您最近在广告上登出的招聘……的信息,我很感兴趣。3.I’m writing t apply fr the jb/pst/psitin as...我写信申请……的工作/职位。4.I am writing this letter t recmmend myself as a qualified candidate fr...我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
(二)主体部分常用语1.As an get alng well with my classmates.作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。2.Fr ne thing,I can anther,I can imprve my English,make mre friends,and enrich my life.一方面,我能帮助……另一方面,我能提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,丰富我的生活。3.I am cnfident that I’m suitable ’m qualified t d./equal t (ding)sth.我确信,我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任做……
(三)结尾常用语1.I wuld be grateful if yu culd cnsider my request,and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.如果您能够考虑一下我的请求,我将不胜感激,盼望您的早日回复。2.I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。3.Shuld yu ffer me an interview,I wuld be mst grateful.Lk frward t yur reply sn.如果您能给我提供面试机会,我将非常感激。期待您早日答复。
典题感悟(2018浙江)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)申请信 (2)第一人称为主 (3)一般现在时 (4)引出话题 (5)个人基本情况:口语及相关经验 (6)表达感谢,期待回复
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Dear Sir r Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am writing t apply fr the pst f vlunteer fr ur schl English assciatin.I have an experience f tw years in Canada.I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English.I believe that I am a perfect candidate fr this psitin.I’m particularly interested in this psitin.I wuld welcme an pprtunity t meet with yu fr an interview.Yurs,Li Hua
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Dear Sir r Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am writing t apply fr the pst f vlunteer fr ur schl English assciatin.(1) (改为with 结构),I can cmmunicate well with native speakers f English.(2) (增加细节,自己的优势).I believe that I am a perfect candidate fr this psitin. I’m particularly interested in this psitin(3) (增加细节,说明理由). I wuld welcme an pprtunity t meet with yu fr an interview.Yurs,Li Hua
答案:(1)With an experience f tw years in Canada(2)Therefre I can easily get alng with freign students(3)partly because my friend Lgan is cming and I’d lve t see him again
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1假定你是高三学生李华,从网上获悉某国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。主要内容如下:1.写信目的;2.自我介绍;3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考范文 Dear Sir r Madam,I’m writing this letter t apply fr the jb as a vlunteer that yu have advertised n the Internet.In my pinin,nt nly can vlunteer wrk help me enrich my knwledge and experience,but als it can help thse wh are in need live better and becme mre cnfident.I will graduate frm senir high schl in June.In the past,I tk part in many scial activities in which I perfrmed well and gained rich experience.My interest and skill in English,cmmunicatin and teamwrk cntribute t my applicatin fr the jb.I wuld appreciate an interview at yur cnvenience.I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu in the future.With all my best regards!Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2019全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
参考范文 Versin 1:Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua,a student frm China fr further study in Lndn this summer vacatin.Learning frm the ntice that yur lcal art museum is recruiting sme vlunteers fr an exhibitin f Chinese paintings,I gt desperately delighted and thrilled.And I am nw writing t apply fr this psitin.
I’ve been lnging fr a chance t ffer service in such a fantastic platfrm s as t enhance my rganizatin ability as well as cmmunicatin skills.Being active,enthusiastic and energetic,I am cnfident t be cmpetent fr the vluntary wrk.Furthermre,my previus experience as a vlunteer enables me t be qualified fr the psitin with less training.Mst imprtantly,as a Chinese,I have been expsed t Chinese culture especially Chinese paintings since I was a little child,s I am cnvinced that I can make a vivid descriptin f the prfund meaning behind thse masterpieces t the visitrs.I d hpe that I can meet yur requirements.I wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply t me at yur earliest cnvenience.Yurs,Li Hua
Versin 2:Dear Sir/Madame,I am Li Hua,a student frm China wh is pursuing further study in Lndn this summer vacatin.Learning that an art museum in Lndn is ging t hld an art exhibitin f Chinese paintings and is in need f vlunteers,I am writing t yu t apply fr this psitin.First f all,cming frm China,I have been cmpletely invlved in traditinal Chinese culture including Chinese paintings since I was pretty yung.Therefre,I am equipped with a wide range f knwledge in this aspect,which can help peple in Lndn have a deeper understanding f Chinese paintings.Besides,having participated in lts f vluntary activities and having a gd cmmand f English give me the cnfidence and privilege t serve as the bridge between China and Britain t enhance the mutual understandings between ur tw cuntries.
I sincerely wish that yu culd ffer me this precius pprtunity.And I wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.Yurs,Li Hua
通知【阅卷寄语】通知一般分为书面通知和口头通知两种。其要素常常包括:时间、地点、事件、参与者、活动内容及注意事项等。要求:言简意赅、措辞得当。
通知开头语1.口头通知开头语(1)May I have yur attentin,please?请注意,好吗?(2)Attentin please,everyne.I have an annuncement t make.大家请注意。我有一个通知要宣布。(3)Be quite.There is smething imprtant I have t tell yu.请安静。我有重要的事情告知你们。(4)I have smething (imprtant) t tell yu.我有(重要的)事情告知你们。(5)I’m glad t tell yu smething imprtant.很高兴告诉你们一些要事。
2.其他常用语句(1)Everyne shuld be there n time.每个人都应该按时到这。(2)Be sure nt t be late.确保不要迟到。(3)Please be present n time.请按时到场。(4)Everyne is required t be present n time.要求每个人都按时到场。(5)Be sure t attend it n time.确保按时参加。(6)Everybdy is expected t attend it n time.每个人都要求按时参加。
(7)All teachers and students are required t...要求所有的老师和学生……(8)Our schl/The Student Unin will/is ging t hld...我们学校/学生会将举办……(9)A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in...今晚7点,在……将有一场讲座。(10)Please take yur ntebks with yu and be sure n time.请随身携带笔记本,并确保按时。(11)Thse wh are interested in it are warmly welcme.热烈欢迎对此感兴趣的人士。
典题感悟(2019四川眉山一诊)假设你叫李华,是班上的英语课代表。你班外教Peter请你代他在班上发一个关于课后作业的英语通知,内容如下:1.写一篇关于中国茶文化的短文(essay);2.与同桌交换并修改错误;3.上交作业的时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:(1)通知 (2)第三人称为主 (3)一般将来时 (4)引出话题 (5)通知具体内容 (6)表达感谢
二、要点全、表达准,中档作文保基本分Bys and girls,May I have yur attentin,please?Our freign teacher Peter asked me t arrange the writing exercise instead f him tday(1).First f all,the tpic fr ur writing is abut Chinese tea culture(2).Secndly,(3),we need t exchange it with ur partner,and crrect each ther’s mistakes(4) they are made in the essays.By the way,we (5)shuld write the essay f abut 100 wrds.Lastly,the deadline fr handing it in is this Friday mrning.That’s all.Thanks fr yur listening.
三、巧润色、增细节,高档美文得高分Bys and girls,May I have yur attentin,please?Our freign teacher Peter asked me t arrange the writing exercise instead f him tday.(1) (增加概括句).First f all,the tpic fr ur writing is abut Chinese tea culture (2) (解释原因,增加细节).Secndly,(3) (增加时间状语),we need t exchange it with ur partner,and crrect each ther’s mistakes (4) (改为定语从句).By the way,we (5) (词汇升级) write the essay f abut 100 wrds.Lastly,the deadline fr handing it in is this Friday mrning. That’s all.Thanks fr yur listening.
答案:(1)Here are sme details abut what we have t d(2)because we have just learnt the text(3)after we have finished it(4)which are made in the essays(5) are suppsed t
考点集训A组 模拟语篇提能力Passage 1(2018浙江宁波期末)假如你是李华,你们学校邀请到甬剧演员陈明先生来你校举办讲座,请你用英语向你校国际班的留学生用英语进行口头通知。内容要点如下:1.讲座时间地点:本周三下午4点,学校报告厅;2.讲座内容:甬剧发展史;3.邀请学生参加。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:甬剧 Ningb Opera
参考范文 May I have yur attentin please?Our schl has invited a famus Ningb Opera actr,Mr.Chen Ming,t give a lecture.The lecture will be held at 4 Wednesday afternn in the schl lecture will talk abut the histry and develpment f Ningb Opera in his lecture.If yu want t learn abut Ningb lcal culture,dn’t miss this chance.Yu will definitely find it fun and mre than fun.Be sure t cme n time!Thanks fr listening!
B组 真题语篇通高考Passage 2(2018全国Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Grwing Tgether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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