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2020
专题 6
书面表达
06
目录
微专题 01 阅读理解四大题型
微专题 02 书面表达之篇章打磨
（四十八）
（四十四）
（五十一）
（四十七）
微专题 01 书面表达之三大秘诀
（四十二）
（四十三）
（五十）
（四十六）
（五十二）
（五十三）
（四十五）
（四十九）
（五十四）
（五十五）
高考书面表达旨在考查考生书面运用语言的能力,那么高考书面表达究竟怎么考?考什么? 1.历年高考书面表达题均属于材料小作文。从严格意义上说材料只有两种:一种是文字材料;另一种是文字说明加图画(表)的材料。无论哪种材料,都给考生提供了巨大的自由发挥的空间,并且能有效地区分不同考生运用语言的能力。
2.从表达的题材方面看,大部分题材都非常贴近考生的实际生活,突出考查考生用简短、通顺、得体的一小段文字与外界交流、解决实际问题的能力,同时也充分体现了《考试大纲》对“写”所提出的要求。
3.主要考查考生以下几种能力:(1)观察和概括能力:要求考生观察情景所提供的内容,分析、提炼要点,理顺要点,概括考题所要求表达的全部意思。(2)运用能力:要求考生灵活运用词汇和句型,正确地遣词造句、连句成文,进行有效的信息表达与传递。
(3)逻辑思维能力:要求考生认真思考,选择正确的表达形式,正确使用连接词和过渡句,使表达的要点之间有很强的逻辑性,浑然一体。(4)书写能力:要求考生认真工整地书写,良好的书写能给人美感。
2016~2019年全国卷书面表达题比较
2016~2019年全国卷书面表达题比较
分析上表可知,全国卷在考查考生语言基础知识的同时,也注重语言运用能力的考查,强化语境意识,突出语篇整体感知和局部信息处理能力。所选材料丰富,语言地道,注重文化意识,彰显语言的人文性,注重培养考生的价值观和核心素养体系。 作文体裁:大多数为应用文,如书信(申请信、告知信、邀请信、求助信等)、通知等。
命题形式:中文提示。提示较简洁,常给出2~4个要点,有时不一一列出要点,如2016年全国Ⅰ卷书面表达。 题材内容:与考生的学习和生活密切相关,常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系等,特别重视中国优秀传统文化,如介绍到中国家庭做客的基本习俗等。
Passage 1[2019·全国Ⅰ]假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Equally important, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, so I have no difficulty in communicating with others. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and answer their questions about the paintings after some proper training. I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2 [2019·全国Ⅱ]假定你是校排球队队长李华,请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛, 内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Chris, I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the morning of July 8th. We will play against a team from Sunshine High School. For good performance in the match, we must get fully prepared and practice hard. So starting tomorrow, we all need to train for two hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have a healthy diet to keep fit. You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, I believe that we will beat the other team. Let’s try hard together!Yours,Li Hua
Passage 3 [2019·全国Ⅲ]假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Allen, How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Saturday morning in the school hall to enrich students’after-school life. As an organizer, I’m writing to invite you to join us. The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the headmaster will deliver a speech. Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are particularly welcome to show up on stage, which will definitely add color and fun to our festival. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
攻略1　评分标准档次给分范围及标准(满分25分)第五档(很好):(21~25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;2.覆盖所有内容要点;3.使用了较多的语法结构和词汇;4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,使用较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致;5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16~20分)1.完成了试题规定的任务;2.虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容;3.使用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;4.语法结构或词汇应用基本准确,些许错误主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;5.使用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;6.达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11~15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务;2.虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;3.使用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;5.使用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯;6.整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6~10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务;2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;3.语法结构单调,词汇知识有限;4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;5.较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性;6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1~5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务;2.明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求;3.语法结构单调,词汇知识有限;4.有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解;5.缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯;6.信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
攻略2　评分标准解读(一)如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”,就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题,确保要点“全而不漏”。要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。(二)如何理解“运用了较多的词汇”这里所说的“使用了较多的词汇”,是指词汇使用的多样性,如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。
(三)如何理解“使用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置疑,单调的句式结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调,缺乏生气和活力,而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩、生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而较好地反映出考生的语言运用能力。
微专题 01 书面表达之三大秘诀
写作时,要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯,做到“五审”:一审体裁。根据作文材料要求确定文章体裁,然后建立相应体裁的行文模式。我们常用的体裁有应用文(书信、日记、通知、发言稿等)、说明文、记叙文、议论文等。
二审人称。文章中人称选择恰当对表达文章的基本思想、描述事物及情节都很有帮助,应特别注意英文中人称的应用。三审时态。高考评分中,谓语动词的形式是极其重要的,一篇文章如果多处出现谓语动词错误,就要降档给分。因此,我们在审题时要给文章的时态定位,根据需要使用相应的时态。
四审要点。高考评卷中,作文的主要得分集中在文章的要点和要点的发挥上。一般来说,英语高考作文有4~6个要点,考生在读题时要边读边列出要点并写出要点中的关键词,这样既能保证要点齐全又能节省时间。五审层次。层次分明,脉络清晰,让读者一目了然。记叙文大多数以人物活动、时间顺序或事情发展过程为线索;说明文大多以时间、空间为线索;议论文的写作一般按先总后分或先分后总的顺序。
[2017·全国Ⅱ]假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.展览时间、地点; 2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
一、“五环节”审题1.体裁:书信(电子邮件)类应用文;2.人称:以第一人称为主;3.时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;4.要点:参观剪纸艺术展,展览时间、地点及内容;5.层次:分为三段。第一段表示问候;第二段邀请对方一起参观并告知对方展览时间、地点及内容;第三段为结束语。
写作秘诀▶
二、“润色”变美句考生写作时,除使用简单句外,还可使用并列句及复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)给短文润色,做到句式多样。长短句结合,句式多样,是高分作文的关键;醒目的关联词使人感觉文章层次分明;恰当的插入语给阅卷者以亲近感;如能得体地用上一句谚语,会使阅卷者认为该考生语言功底深厚,从而使文章更上档次。
三、写作“步步高”1.遣词“五环节”审题可基本确定所用的关键词语。关键词语:an art exhibition、 attend、 from...to、 not only...but also...、 a variety of、 present...to...、 broaden one’s horizons 
2.造句利用关键词语,用简单句把所要表达的意思写出来。简单句:(1)There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.(2)I’d like to invite you to attend the exhibition with me.(3)The exhibition,to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an,lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th.(4)The exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cutting works from different regions,but also presents the history and development of paper-cutting in China to us.
3.成篇通过使用关联词、引导词,把这些简单句整合起来,达到起承转合、运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
Dear Henry, How are things with you? There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese culture,I’d like to invite you to attend the exhibition with me.The exhibition,to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an,lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th. Featuring Chinese paper-cutting,the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cutting works from different regions,but also presents the history and development of paper-cutting in China to us.I am sure that it will broaden your horizons and that you will enjoy it. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
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Passage 1主题:环境保护　关注度: 假定你是李华,你校即将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,要点包括:1.倡导绿色生活的原因;2.实践途径(至少两点)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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我的大作▶
Boys and girls, ①I am very honored to give the speech. With the development of society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing ②surprisingly. ③As we all know, cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, human diseases and so on. ④In order to protect our environment, we should go green.
考生作文▶
⑤Firstly, we should attach great importance to going green. Secondly, using fewer private cars can make a great difference to the environment. 　⑥　, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on.   That’s all. Thank you.
1.用“It is+名词+不定式”改写句①  It is a great honor for me to give the speech.2.用介词短语替代②处副词surprisingly  at a surprising speed3.用it作形式主语改写句③
我来升格▶
It is well known that cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide,causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, human diseases and so on.
4.用句型“It is high time that...”改写句④  In order to protect our environment, it is high time that we went/should go green.5.把句⑤改为被动语态  Firstly, great importance should be attached to going green.6.在⑥处加上过渡语
What’s more/In addition
Boys and girls, It is a great honor for me to give the speech. With the development of society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing at a surprising speed. It is well known that cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, human diseases and so on. In order to protect our environment, it is high time that we should go green. Firstly, great importance should be attached to going green. Secondly, using fewer private cars can make a great difference to the environment. What’s more, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on. That’s all. Thank you.
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Passage 2主题:文化交流　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习。你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表示祝贺;2.希望她有机会来中国深造。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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我的大作▶
Dear Lucy, I’m pleased to learn you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you. I know you love Chinese culture, and now you’re studying in a local Confucius Institute. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study. Wishing you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours,Li Hua
考生作文▶
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我来升格▶
Dear Lucy, I’m pleased to learn you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially Chinese poetry, and you’ve been studying in a local Confucius Institute for years. I’m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country. Wishing you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours,Li Hua
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微专题 02 书面表达之篇章打磨
打磨1
发散思维,细化提纲
近三年高考英语全国卷基本上都是书信(包括电子邮件),为提纲类作文,但开放性在增强,例如2018年全国Ⅰ卷完全可以划归为半开放类作文。半开放类作文的最大特点就是让考生具备发散思维,在提纲所给要点的基础上进行拓展联想,从而让内容充实连贯。而且,在作文试题中一般都有这样的要求“可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯”。这里的“细节”,就需要发散思维,进行联想拓展。
下面介绍几种细化提纲的方法,让作文“有话可说”,达到基本的词数要求。一、追加成分 在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。这不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出。
1.(开设英语电影欣赏课)建议多选择英语电影。As a student, I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films that appeal to us teenagers, thus making English learning more interesting. 2.(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑;要讲慢些,讲清楚。Be sure to wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.
二、补加语句 根据行文走向,适当增加一些与主题相关的语句,或由要点衍生的句子,既能起到前后关联的作用,又能补充一些相关信息,帮助读者理解所写内容。
(提醒考生注意)要按时进入考场。 Be sure to enter the examination room on time. Whoever is late won’t be allowed to enter.
三、添加过渡 根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语,甚至过渡句,这样既可以使文章浑然一体,又能充实文章。
1.话题:是否禁止广场舞I don’t think square dance should be forbidden. The reasons are as follows. First of all/To begin with, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up. It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other. What’s more, the square is a good place for people to work out.
2.学习与锻炼 Recently, a hot issue has been under discussion in our class, which is whether it is necessary for us Senior 3 students to go running three times a day. Students’ opinions are divided. Some students hold the view that there is no need to do so. On the one hand, it is a waste of time; on the other hand, they find it difficult to calm down and concentrate on lessons after running. What’s worse, those who sweat may catch a cold easily.
However, others have the opposite opinion, arguing that running is the best way to refresh them and study efficiency can be improved. After running, they will be relaxed. As far as I am concerned, running of course does good to us, but there seems no need to run so many times a day.
四、不忘收尾书信中“适当的结尾”不仅能呼应开头,深化主题,还能表达祝愿,阐述愿望。书信常用的结束语如下:I’m looking forward to .../Looking forward to...I’m waiting for your early reply.Best wishes to you.I would be grateful if you .../I’d appreciate it if you...
打磨2
规避5类“惯性错误”,做到地道表达
错误1　动词、介词类错误 英语书面表达中,动词和介词的使用非常容易出现错误。这是因为英语中动词和介词后都可以带宾语,所以两者容易混淆。 1.动词的种类有很多,从句法功能上可分为实义动词、系动词、助动词和情态动词;根据句子成分可分为谓语动词和非谓语动词等。
(1)实义动词又可分为及物动词和不及物动词。写作中常出现的错误:①及物动词后多了介词;②不及物动词后少了介词。(2)系动词be在写作中非常活跃,但要用好be动词却不是一件容易的事。常见错误:①不及物动词与be动词构成了被动语态;②该含有be动词的句子出现遗漏be的情况。
(3)助动词和情态动词不能单独作谓语,写作中常见错误主要是倒装句中少用了助动词或情态动词。(4)谓语动词与非谓语动词的误用是考生最易出错的地方。需要注意:谓语动词作谓语,包括时态、语态、主谓一致、虚拟语气;非谓语动词可作除谓语以外的其他成分。
2.介词不能独立在句中作成分。介词一定要带宾语,其后必须与名词、代词或动名词构成介词短语。常见错误除了前面提及的实义动词后介词的多余和缺失外,还包括由于英汉语言的差异造成介词的多用或错用。
[2018·全国Ⅱ]你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
以下是一位考生的习作,其中有6处错误,每句中最多有两处,请找出并修改。Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join in us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
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第1段第3句中的in为多余的介词,故去掉in。join sb意为“加入某人(一起做某事)”。
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which are about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon in June 9th. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.
第2段第1句中的which are about the development中的be动词错用,应把are改为is。该定语从句修饰先行词Growing Together,先行词为单数名词。第2段第2句中的the movie will not only meaningful中情态动词后不能直接跟形容词,应在will后加be动词。第2段第3句中的in June 9th中的介词错用,具体到某一天应该使用介词on。第2段最后一句中的give和前面enjoying、having为并列的非谓语动词,故将give改为giving。
Looking forward to your participation. I have the confidence that you have a great time then.Students’ Union
第3段第2句中的you have a great time then所提供的语境应为将来时,故在have前面加will。
错误2　形容词、副词类错误 英语书面表达中形容词、副词的使用错误主要是由考生对其用法掌握不够牢固而造成的。下面主要介绍书面表达中易出错的形容词、副词的用法:
1.形容词主要说明事物或人的性质或特征写作时需要注意以下两点:(1)只能作表语的形容词无比较等级。如:afraid、asleep、alive、alone、awake、alike等。(2)有一类形容词本身就有比较的概念或者表示绝对概念或已达极限,此类形容词无比较等级。如:favorite、perfect、superior、excellent、wonderful、absolute等。
2.副词修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子写作时需要注意以下两点:(1)大多数形容词加-ly后成为副词。考生需要注意几个特殊的副词变换形式。如果单词本身具有形容词和副词两种词性,该单词加-ly的副词形式多表示抽象含义。如:close/closely(靠近/密切地,仔细地)、wide/widely(宽阔的/广泛地)、high/highly(高的/非常,高标准地)、deep/deeply(深的/深刻地)等。
(2)有些词虽然以-ly结尾,但不是副词而是形容词,在写作时一定要注意。如:friendly(友好的)、lovely(可爱的)、lively(生气勃勃的)、 lonely(孤独的)、 deadly(致命的)、orderly(有秩序的)、manly(有男子汉气概的)、daily(每日的)、weekly(每周的)、yearly(每年的)等。
某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容应包括:1.你最喜欢的季节;2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如:气候、景色、活动、感受……)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好;3.行文连贯,语篇完整;4.文中不得透露个人真实信息。The Season I Like Best
以下是一位考生的习作,其中有6处错误,每句中最多有两处,请找出并修改。The Season I Like Best A year consists of four seasons, each of which has its unique feature. It’s hard for me to tell which season is the best.
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My most favorite season is spring. First of all, it is neither too cold nor too hot. During this season, you will feel comfortably and you can go for a picnic with your close friends. With all living things come to life, you will energetic. Additional, as the saying goes, “An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.” So it is with spring. Spring is the very start of a whole harvest.
第2段第1句中的favorite表示“特别喜爱的”,没有最高级形式,故去掉most。第2段第3句中的feel为系动词,后应跟形容词作表语,故comfortably应改为comfortable。第2段第4句中含有with复合结构,things与come之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,故come应改为现在分词coming。第2段第4句中的energetic为形容词,其前缺少系动词be构成系表结构,故应在energetic前加be。第2段第5句中,在句子的开头应用副词来修饰整个句子,故把形容词Additional改为副词形式。
Taking all factors into consideration, I am fond of spring, not only because of its beautifully scenery but also its implication, which stands for hope.
第3段中修饰名词scenery应用形容词,故beautifully改为beautiful。
错误3　冠词、代词类错误 冠词和代词类错误在英语书面表达中经常出现,这是考生对基础知识掌握不牢或粗心而造成的。
1.英语中的冠词只有a、an、the三个词,它们被用来修饰名词或限定形容词。写作中需要注意以下两点:(1)a、an都表示泛指,an用在以元音音素开头的单词前,a用在以辅音音素开头的单词前;无论可数名词还是不可数名词,只要表示特指都要用the;不可数名词表示泛指时,其前不用任何冠词;单数可数名词加不定冠词或者无冠词的复数形式均可以表示泛指。
(2)在某些搭配中,有无冠词,含义是不同的。如:in front of(在……前面)/in the front of(在……前部)、at table(在吃饭)/at the table(在桌旁)、go to school(上学)/go to the school(去学校)、in hospital(住院)/in the hospital(在医院里)等。
2.书面表达中常见的代词错误:(1)人称代词主格和宾格的误用。主格在句子中充当主语,宾格在句子中作宾语,它们都有单复数。
(2)形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的误用。形容词性物主代词相当于形容词,置于名词之前,在句中常作定语。名词性物主代词相当于形容词性物主代词加上名词,所以相当于名词,后面不能再加名词,在句中作主语、宾语和表语。(3)反身代词的误用。反身代词与它所指代的名词或代词形成互指关系,应在人称、性质、数上保持一致。
[全国Ⅰ]假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
以下是一位考生的习作,其中有6处错误,每句中最多有两处,请找出并修改。Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
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I would make a introduction to it. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among our students. It carries articles are written by foreign friends about the cultures of your home countries. You must have good command knowledge about your country. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? We would especially welcome articles about how Americans enjoy them in their holidays and festivals, and American high school students’ life. You can write anything relevant as long as it’s interesting and informative. You should write about 400 words and hand in your article before June 28.
第2段第1句中的introduction的读音以元音音素开头,故其前的不定冠词应用an。第2段第2句中的our students用词不当。既然作者也是学生,就不能说“我们的学生”,而应说“我们学生”,故此处应用us students。第2段第3句中已有谓语carries, articles后面的部分为定语从句或作后置定语,故可在are written前加关系代词that/which构成定语从句或者去掉are而用过去分词written作后置定语。第2段第3句中的your指代有误,此处指代前面的外国朋友,故应用their。表示“精通;通晓”应用have a good command of,故第2段第4句中的command后应加of。第2段第6句中的enjoy后跟反身代词表示“玩得很高兴”,故them应改为themselves。
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua
错误4　名词、分词型形容词类错误 名词、分词型形容词类错误在英语书面表达中也较为常见。为避免这些错误,考生要学会区分可数名词、不可数名词以及掌握名词复数形式;要学会区分写人和状物的分词型形容词的区别。
1.常误加不定冠词或复数的不可数名词:information、news、housework、advice、fun、weather、progress、wealth、equipment、luggage/baggage、access等。2.由动词转换来的形容词,-ed型形容词用来描述人的感觉,表示“(某人)感到……的”;-ing型形容词用来描述引发此感觉的人或物,表示“令人……的”。特别注意在名词look、expression等前一般用-ed型形容词。
[全国Ⅱ]假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
以下是一位考生的习作,其中有6处错误,每句中最多有两处,请找出并修改。Dear Peter, I am exciting to tell you a good news. In order to protect the environment, our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.
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第1段第1句中的exciting使用错误,此处表示“(人)感到兴奋的”而非表示“令人兴奋的”,故应用excited。第1段第1句中的news为不可数名词,应去掉其前的a。
Protect the environment is the theme of the show. It will start from June 15th till June 17th.If you are interest, you are welcome to participate.
第2段第1句中的动词短语Protect the environment不能作主语,应把Protect改为Protecting。第2段第3句中的interest可作动词或名词,但此处位于are后,应用形容词,表示“感兴趣的”,故应用interested。
I know you take good pictures and want to do something for the environment. I remember you showed me some photo on that theme last time you visited our school.I advice you to take this chance to have a try. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua
第3段第2句中的photo为可数名词,既然是一些照片,就应该用photo的复数形式photos。第3段第3句中的advice为名词,此处作谓语应用动词形式advise。
错误5　并列连词、从句引导词类错误并列连词与从句引导词的用法也是考生容易出错的地方,下面主要介绍常见的一些错误类型。1.考生易受汉语干扰,导致状语从句中从属连词的重复使用。例如汉语中可以说“因为……所以……”和“虽然……但是……”,但在英语中用一个连词即可表示,用了though/although,就不能再用but;用了because,就不要再用so、therefore等词。
2.写作中经常用同位语从句给文章增色添彩,但引导词that的缺失是考生易犯的错误。3.表语从句的一个易错点是高级表达“The reason why ...is/was that ...”中that的误用,考生容易误用because。4.非限制性定语从句中that和which经常误用。
[2017·全国Ⅲ]假定你是李华,你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
以下是一位考生的习作,其中有6处错误,每句中最多有两处,请找出并修改。Dear Eric, I’m writing to tell you good news our school’s table tennis team is admitting new members. Since you are good at table tennis, so I’d like you to take this opportunity to join our school team. Some details about the team are as follows.
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第1段第1句中的news后的句子为同位语从句,应用that引导该从句且不能省略that,故news后加that。第1段第2句中的Since引导原因状语从句,逗号后应为主句,so为多余的词,应去掉。
Athletes from our school team have been won many gold medals of table tennis contests in recent years, of that we are very proud. Guiding by a professional coach team, members of the team have regular training every Friday afternoon from 3:30 pm to 5:00 pm. If you feel like participate, you can send your information to pingpong @123.com.The deadline is July 20th. 
第2段第1句中的Athletes与谓语动词win之间为主谓关系,谓语动词不能用被动语态,故去掉have后的been。第2段第1句中的years后为非限制性定语从句,此处介词of后的引导词应用which。第2段第2句中guide与members之间为逻辑上的动宾关系,应用过去分词作状语,故Guiding应改为Guided。feel like doing sth为固定用法,故第2段第3句中的participate应改为participating。
Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
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“美化词句”细推敲
“第四档”“第五档”差在哪
从第四档与第五档的评分标准来看,第四档与第五档的评分标准差别是微小的,主要集中在“亮点词汇”“亮点句式”“过渡衔接”“语法结构”等一些能力层级上,虽然这两个档次的评分标准区别比较细微,但第四档与第五档的分差却成为考生成绩平庸与优异的分水岭。
第五档中提到,“语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,是使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。”这就是说,考生如果仅使用基础词汇和基本句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不一定能得高分;相反,即使文章中有少量错误,如果是使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,文章仍可按最高档次给分。 第五档中“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”,这表明恰当使用过渡性词语可以使文章结构紧凑,过渡自然,从而提高得分档次。
[2018·全国Ⅲ]假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
“憋屈的”第四档作文（得分19分）
Dear Peter, I am very delighted to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may help you know more about it. To begin with, a new stadium has been built up, and it has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, many kinds of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football and running competitions are very popular. As for me, I’m interested in basketball since it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in my life. I sincerely invite you to come to our school.Yours,Li Hua
升格后的第五档作文(得分24分)
Dear Peter, I am more than delighted to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may help you have a better understanding of it. To begin with, a new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m interested in basketball since it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in my life. I sincerely invite you to come to our school.Yours,Li Hua
名师点拨　　左栏作文用词准确,分段合理,而且使用了with复合结构和of which引导的非限制性定语从句等,总体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是右栏提升后的作文语言更地道、更自然流畅,可谓妙笔生花,技高一筹。词汇的提升如have a better understanding of、a wide range of、enjoy great popularity的使用以及句式的提升如which引导的定语从句,体现了作者深厚的语言功底,同时也提升了得分档次
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打造适合阅卷老师的美文
通过逐步完善细节,一篇美文已经形成,但若要保证完美,考生还得整洁地将文章誊写到卷面上,提升书面表达的“颜值”。因为阅卷老师在有限的时间里必须快速高效地评卷,书写潦草的卷面会使长时间工作并且已经很疲劳的阅卷老师产生厌倦,留下不好的印象。因此字迹工整、卷面整洁的文章更容易吸引眼球,并得到阅卷老师的认真对待,也更容易被发现亮点。卷面书写应符合英文书写习惯,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称,无涂改、增补现象,切忌乱涂乱画。(为避免卷面涂鸦,建议考生在写作时一定要先写草稿,再修改,后誊写)
[2018·北京]假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim, —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Yours,Li Hua
Passage 1主题:交通规则　　关注度: 　　随着汽车的数量增加,道路安全问题变得越来越重要。假定你是李华,是校学生会主席,请你根据下面的写作要点,给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。1.列举街道上常见的交通违规现象;2.分析违反交通规则造成的后果;3.发出几点倡议(至少两点)。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear boys and girls, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  Yours,Li Hua
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Dear boys and girls, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’d like call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, with the number of vehicles is increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and other ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drove too fast in the street. All the behavior present potential danger. If we don’t obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accident. To keep the traffic smoothly, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walk in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think to lay stress on the traffic safety education is much necessary. Let’s take responsible for ourselves and others and take action now!Yours,Li Hua
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Dear boys and girls, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’d like call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, with the number of vehicles is increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and other ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drove too fast in the street.
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Dear boys and girls, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’d like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, as the number of vehicles is increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drive too fast in the street.
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To keep the traffic smooth, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think it is necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education. Let’s take responsibility for ourselves and others and take action now!Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:生日聚会　　关注度: 假定你是李华,上周参加了美国朋友David的生日聚会。请你写封感谢信,表达你对聚会的喜爱和对David的祝福。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
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Dear David, I’m writing to express my grateful feeling for your invitation.①Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party last week.It brought me lots of entertainment. During the party, what impressed me most was your happy family.Both your parents treated me kindly.I enjoyed it because it made me feel at home. The dessert and other snacks you offered me were tasty. Besides, the light music and candle light created a nice atmosphere. ②On account of that I was able to open my heart to your other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters. Thanks again for your dinner. The unforgettable experience will be stored in my mind forever.Yours,Li Hua
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Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party last week, which brought me lots of entertainment.
It is on account of that that I was able to open my heart to your other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.
Dear David, I’m writing to express my appreciation for your invitation. Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party last week, which brought me lots of entertainment.
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During the party, what impressed me most was your happy family. Both your parents treated me kindly. I was fond of it because it made me feel at home. The dessert and other snacks you offered me were tasty. In addition, the light music and candle light created an excellent atmosphere. It is on account of that that I was able to open my heart to your other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.
Thanks again for your dinner. The unforgettable experience will be stored in my mind forever.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(四十二)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:科技　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry对中国在科技领域取得的成就很感兴趣,发邮件向你询问有关信息。请你回一封邮件,内容包括:1.整体情况;2.具体事例;3.发出邀请。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Terry, I am writing to introduce to you more about the development of China’s science and technology. In recent years, with the cross integration of cloud computing, virtual reality, big data and other technologies as well as the wide application of artificial intelligence in various fields, China has made remarkable achievements in science and technology.
Take the world’s first AI news anchors for example. They are modeled on a human anchor and can deliver the news with the same impact as their human counterparts.What’s more, they can work at any time of the day. I’m looking forward to your visiting China soon.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:社会交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你和Tom打算去爬八达岭长城(the Badaling Great Wall)。请你写封电子邮件邀请你们的朋友Peter一起去。内容包括: 1.爬山时间; 2.活动安排:在你家集合,骑共享单车去; 3.携带物品:相机、太阳帽、太阳镜和登山鞋。 注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter, How’s everything going?　　Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
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Dear Peter, How’s everything going? Tom and I are planning to climb the Badaling Great Wall this Saturday. I’d like to invite you to go with us.
We will first get together at my home at 7:30 am, as it’s not far away from the Badaling Great Wall; we decide to go there by shared bike. The whole climbing will start at 8 am, and last for about three hours. Please wear climbing shoes as we may walk a long way, and don’t forget to wear sunglasses and a sun hat. What’s more, bring your camera; I’m sure the awesome view on the top of the Badaling Great Wall deserves a record.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(四十三)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:文化交流　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他暑假将来北京参加“外国人唱中国歌”大赛,希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.推荐曲目;2.推荐理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim, How is it going? I’m so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance.Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Jim, How is it going? I’m so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. As for the song, I highly recommend Molihua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese folk music.
My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there’s no doubt it will attract the audience’s attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfortable. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors. I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:社会交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,是校足球俱乐部的负责人。请你用英文写封电子邮件给在你校学习的美国朋友Tommy,邀请他加入足球俱乐部。内容包括:1.加入足球俱乐部的意义;2.俱乐部的日常活动安排。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tommy, I am Li Hua, the head of the football club in our school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Tommy, I am Li Hua, the head of the football club in our school. I’m writing to invite you to join our club since I’ve learned that you have a keen interest in football. Our club is the place where you can have a better understanding of football. You will make more friends in our club and can have a healthy lifestyle by learning how to play football.
We have professional coaches to train us every Wednesday in the Student Center. The training lasts two hours from 4 pm to 6 pm. Besides, there’s a football competition at the end of each school term, which is a special event everybody looks forward to! I hope you can take the opportunity and sign up immediately. Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(四十四)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:传统文化　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Paul 告诉你他对中国古典音乐很感兴趣。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.简单介绍中国古典音乐(乐器、音乐风格、与西方音乐的不同等);2.告知你会送他一张二胡音乐的 CD。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:古典音乐 classical music; 乐器 musical instrument; 西方音乐 western music
Dear Paul, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
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Dear Paul, How is everything going? I’m so glad to know you adore Chinese culture. Without doubt, Chinese classical music is one of the typical symbols. Actually, in China, Chinese classical music is never out of date. It is often played by many gifted musicians who play traditional Chinese musical instruments like the guzheng, the yangqin, the pipa, and the xiao.
Different from western music, Chinese traditional melody is connected to Chinese poetry, which makes it more charming. In order to let you know more about it, I will send you a CD of erhu music. After you experience elements from different cultures, you will know the power and the beauty of the music.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:公益事业　　关注度: 假定你是李华,今年的旅游节将于下个月在你们城市举行,组委会拟招聘一些高中生担任英语导游,你打算应聘。请给组委会写一封申请信,内容包括:1.自我介绍(年龄、性别等);2.英语水平(口语表达能力等);3.特殊优势(相关经历、对当地旅游景点的了解);4.你的承诺。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m very glad to know that__________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  Looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m very glad to know that the tourism festival will be held in our city next month. I’d like to be an English tour guide for the festival. My name is Li Hua. I’m a boy of 18, a Senior 3 student in a high school. I believe I can do a good job for the festival. First of all, I’m good at English and I can speak English fluently. Secondly, I’m fond of traveling and I’ve worked as an English tour guide for several great festivals in our city before. Most importantly, I know our local tourist spots quite well.
I promise I’ll try to offer my best services to the travelers from all over the world. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
对点集训(四十五)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:跨文化交流　　关注度: 假定你是李华,元宵节即将到来之际,你想请初来你校的英国交换生John一起体验这一传统节日。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.节日简介;3.希望对方回复。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear John, I’m very pleased to invite you to enjoy a traditional Chinese festival—the Lantern Festival. First, I’d like to tell you something about the festival, which is celebrated on the 15th day of first month of Chinese lunar calendar. It is one of the biggest holidays in China. Several days before it, people begin to make lanterns, which are made in the shape of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many other things. Meanwhile, people usually write riddles on them. On the eve of it, all the lanterns are hung up. People appreciate them and guess the riddles.
Why not come and enjoy the festival? Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:志愿者　　关注度: 　　假定你是李华,暑假在英国学习英语,其间看到某活动中心的一则志愿者招募广告。请你根据以下提示用英语给该活动中心写一封电子邮件,表达做志愿者的意愿并询问有关情况。内容包括:1.志愿者活动的时间及事项安排;2.对志愿者的要求;3.注意事项。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Sir/Madam, The other day I happened to read your ad, which really appealed to me. As a teenager, I’m interested in voluntary work and want to do whatever I can to help others in need.
There’s something I want to know about your ad. For one thing, could you tell me the time arrangement for the volunteer activities and what events are organized? Secondly, I’d be grateful if you could tell me if there’re any special requirements for being your volunteer. Finally, is there anything else that needs special attention to be a volunteer? Looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
对点集训(四十六)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:人际交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,得知故宫(the Forbidden City)这周六在夜间对公众开放,并有大型灯光秀。你想邀请正在北京语言大学学习中文的美国朋友Tom夜游故宫。请给他写一封邀请信。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.约定见面时间、地点;3.期待回复。 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Tom, Hearing that the Forbidden City will be open to the public at night this Saturday, I would like to invite you for a visit there. The Forbidden City, home to Chinese emperors in ancient times, will be lit up with countless red lanterns after dark. A dazzling light show will be displayed, probably with traditional Peking Opera on show.
Since you are learning Chinese and interested in Chinese culture, this trip will be helpful and valuable. If you’d like to go, let’s make it at 5 pm. I can pick you up at your school gate. Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:跨文化沟通　　关注度: 假定你是中国学生李华,准备参加英国牛津大学的暑期夏令营(Oxford Summer Camp 2020)。请用英语写一封电子邮件给相关负责人Mr William咨询相关事宜。要点如下:1.说明自己的情况;2.咨询课程安排及食宿问题。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr William, I’m Li Hua,a Chinese student.I really want to be part of the Oxford Summer Camp 2020. I’m writing to know more details about the camp.
I’m always an English-lover and have taken some optional courses related to English literature and culture. I’m wondering whether there are any courses in this camp. If there are, how many courses will be offered and what subjects will be covered? Besides, can you give me the schedule of these courses so that I can see whether I’ll have time to visit other places? Finally, do you provide accommodations during the Summer Camp? Looking forward to your reply!Yours sincerely,Li Hua
对点集训(四十七)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是李华,上周日你所在的班级组织全班师生去人民公园进行了一次户外郊游活动,这次活动受到了大家的一致好评。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括:1.活动时间、地点;2.活动内容;3.活动的意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary outing, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our class. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we walked to our destination, the People’s Park, talking and laughing. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, which was a visual feast. Additionally, some students gave us their marvelous performance, making us burst into laughter. We also organized some interesting games. By immersing everyone in the charm of nature, this activity definitely offers relaxation to us. Not only can it strengthen our perseverance, but it can enhance our friendship.
Passage 2主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是李华,作为高三毕业生代表,你将在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文做一次简短的告别演讲。内容要点如下:1.对三年高中生活的怀念;2.对老师的感谢;3.对母校的祝福。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students, In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school.  _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you!
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Dear teachers and fellow students, In a couple of weeks,we’ll say goodbye to our mother school.How time flies! Gone will be our senior high school days when we are full of dreams and efforts. Now it’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.
To make the journey safe and fruitful,our great teachers contributed their time,energy,love and the whole heart.Here,we are extremely grateful for all that you,dear teachers,have done for us. It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, but it is not the end. It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.Finally, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!
对点集训(四十八)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:人际交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,18岁生日后,你有一种长大成人的感觉。请你给爸妈写一封信,要点如下:1.父母对你的关怀;2.你今后的打算。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others.
I am now a Senior Three student, who is facing the college entrance examination. So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass it. I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me. I will make a difference. Best regards to you.Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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[2020·河南信阳中学月考]请观察所给的图画,并根据你对该图画的理解写一篇英语短文,内容包括:　 1.简要描述该图片所呈现的内容,并说明该图片所揭露的现象; 2.分析造成该现象的原因(至少两点); 3.提出自己的看法。
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The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.
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The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case. As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy for he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors that students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information nowadays.
There are some reasons for it. First, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information. Second, the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. Consequently, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development. In my opinion, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Doing tasks independently is of great significance.
对点集训(四十九)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是学校英语俱乐部主席李华,学校安排下周五下午举行毕业典礼。请你写一封邮件邀请外教Nana参加。内容包括:1.活动时间和地点;2.活动安排;3.欢迎她表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Nana, I’m Li Hua, chairman of the English Club. I’d like to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony. The graduation ceremony will be held from 1 pm to 3 pm next Friday on the playground. To begin with, we’ll hold the flag-raising ceremony. Then our principal will make a speech to inspire us to pursue dreams. Furthermore, wonderful performances prepared by ourselves will be on! You are particularly welcome to show up on the stage. Finally, a memorable photo of all the graduates together with all the staff will be taken. Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:跨文化沟通　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你想邀请你的英国留学生朋友Peter来你家乡和你一起过端午节。请写一封电子邮件给他。内容包括:1.简要介绍端午节;2.活动:吃粽子,观看龙舟比赛。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:端午节Dragon Boat Festival;龙舟赛dragon boat race
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Dear Peter, Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to experience the coming Dragon Boat Festival together with me. It is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals, which falls on May 5th of the Chinese lunar calendar and is related to an ancient Chinese poet.
On that day, we will eat zongzi, a special food for the festival. Then we will watch the dragon boat race to be held on the lake. Usually several teams will compete for the first place. Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua
对点集训(五十)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris来信询问你校开展“最美校园”活动的情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容(打扫卫生、办墙报、礼貌待人、开展体育活动等);3.活动意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Chris, I’m happy to hear from you. As you know, our school has started an activity called “Building the most beautiful campus”.
All the teachers and students in our school are taking an active part in the activity. Not only are we busy cleaning our school, but we have done colorful wall newspapers. What’s more, we are required to conduct ourselves in good manners, acting politely, being helpful and getting on well with each other. We also do sports to keep healthy. I’m sure better learning and living on campus will certainly contribute a lot to our studies.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是李华,最近你校开展了各种课外活动。你的英国朋友Peter对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点提示,给他写封电子邮件。1.你校开展课外活动的情况;2.课外活动带来的益处。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Peter, I’d like to introduce something about after-class activities in our school. Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts, sports, concerts and labor. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides, building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Taking an active part in after-class activities will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(五十一)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:传统文化　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter对中国的竹子非常好奇。请写一封电子邮件,介绍竹子。内容包括:1.竹子的形态特点;2.竹子的作用;3.竹子的象征意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
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Dear Peter, I am very glad to know that you are interested in bamboo. Now, I would like to introduce it to you. Bamboo is a kind of plant, which is hollow inside. It usually grows straight and thin, sometimes up to several meters with green leaves on it. Its tender young roots can be used as a kind of delicious food. People often use bamboo to build houses, or make desks, chairs and so on. Besides, bamboo can serve as food utensils, such as bamboo chopsticks.
Bamboo is very popular in our country. Because of its characteristics, it’s often seen as a symbol of honesty, modesty and nobleness. I hope my introduction can help you have a knowledge of bamboo. Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:未来规划　　关注度: 假定你是李华,今年高考之后将有一个较长的假期。请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的暑期计划。内容包括:1.聚会;2.旅游;3.学习某种技能。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear John, How is everything going? As you know, I’ll have a long holiday after the College Entrance Examination.
I’ve already come up with a good plan. First of all, getting together with friends is a must. I also plan to travel to other places to experience different cultures and make some new friends. What’s more, I can’t wait to learn a musical instrument,because I am really fond of music. Besides, I am supposed to pass the driving test for the driving license,too. Therefore, a rich and colorful holiday is waiting for me ahead. So what’s your plan? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(五十二)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假如你是李华,今天早上你突然感觉身体不适,下午不能去学校上外教Nana 的英语课。请你给她发一封电子邮件,向她请假。内容包括:1.说明请假原因;2.征求弥补方式;3.表示歉意。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Nana, I’m Li Hua.I’m sorry to ask for a casual leave of absence from your English class this afternoon. This morning I didn’t feel well with a bad headache and stomachache, and definitely, I am to have myself examined thoroughly. I’m wondering if I could do something to make up for my lost lesson. Could I come to your office to have a lesson? Or may I ask my deskmate to record what you teach in class? Don’t worry about me. I will be fine in a couple of days.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:学校生活　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你校即将举行一年一度的“校园书市 (a campus book fair)” 活动,其目的是给同学们提供一个交换、利用图书的机会。请你用英语写信给你的新西兰笔友Mike, 介绍此次活动的有关情况。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容:买书,卖书,交换图书;3.活动意义。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike, How are you doing these days?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better. Yours, Li Hua
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Dear Mike, How are you doing these days? Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their books with their peers.
As a regular visitor, I’ve found myself increasingly drawn by the fair. For one thing, the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics, motivating us to further develop our reading habits and broaden our horizons. For another, most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer. Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(五十三)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:传统文化　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你想邀请留学生朋友Peter观看京剧表演,但Peter不在家。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.来访目的;2.介绍京剧;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:Peking Opera 京剧;quintessence 精华;精粹;ornate 华丽的
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Dear Peter, I came to see you but you were out.I’d like to invite you to see Peking Opera with me next week, since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture.
With a history of more than 200 years,Peking Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture. The performers in ornate costume perform various historical stories to audience by singing,dancing and motions. I can tell you more about it when we meet. Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance.Yours,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:人际交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你所在的城市今年刚开通了地铁。你的英国笔友Mike得知此事并对其很感兴趣。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.地铁的开通给你所在的城市带来的变化;2.邀请Mike来家乡做客。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike, How is everything going?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　 Yours, Li Hua
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Dear Mike, How is everything going? I’m very glad to tell you something about the subway, which has recently come into use in our city.
Great changes have taken place in my hometown after that. Many people prefer to take a subway instead of driving cars because it is fast and environmentally friendly. With the help of the subway network, traffic jams and road accidents have been reduced, and it is convenient for people to travel. More importantly, the subway network has connected our city with towns and countryside around, which is bound to promote the development of local economy. I’d like to invite you to visit our city soon. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
对点集训(五十四)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:传统文化　　关注度: 假定你是学校艺术社团的社长李华,你们社团将举行一次中国书画比赛。你作为社长向同学们介绍此次比赛,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.比赛要求;3.参赛作品提交时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua, leader of art association. Today I’m going to tell you a piece of good news. Aimed to raise students? awareness of our precious traditional art, a Chinese calligraphy and painting competition will be held. Everyone possessed with love and enthusiasm is welcome to participate. Your work should include the fundamental elements of Chinese art with a good theme and cheerful contents. If you are interested, please hand in your work to the art association before this Saturday. There are abundant prizes waiting for you. Thank you.
Passage 2主题:校园生活　　关注度: 为了丰富同学们的课余生活,倡导健康的生活方式,你校近期将举行篮球比赛。假定你是李华,请以班级体育委员的身份,写一篇动员全班积极参与此次活动的倡议书。内容包括:1.积极参加体育锻炼的重要意义;2.鼓励同学们积极参与比赛。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear everyone, May I have your attention, please? Recently, our school is going to hold a basketball match. As far as I am concerned, this game is a very good chance for us. For one thing, doing sports will not only do good to our health, but also make us learn more efficiently. For another, it is an activity in which everyone can participate and contribute to the glory of the whole class. Last but not least, this basketball game will provide us with a precious opportunity to share the sports spirit. Therefore, I strongly suggest that everyone of our class take part in it.
对点集训(五十五)(时间:50分钟)Passage 1主题:人际交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,即将步入大学生活,请你根据所给提示给你的外籍老师Miss Smith 写一封感谢信:1.表示感谢;2.描述老师的帮助和鼓励;3.表达美好祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Miss Smith, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for all the efforts you have made to help me during the past three years.
My English used to be poor, but I gradually became interested in it. Thanks to your help, I’ve got good scores in the College Entrance Examination. Besides, with your encouragement, I have become more confident. Whatever difficulty I meet, I will never give up. What I have done will lead to my success eventually. Thank you once again and I wish you all the best. Yours sincerely,Li Hua
Passage 2主题:人际交往　　关注度: 假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter作为交换生下学期将到你校学习。他发来电子邮件向你询问中国日常生活中常用的一些身势语(body language),请根据下面要点用英语给他回信。1.身势语的意义;2.期待他的到来。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to our school. I’m writing to tell you some Chinese body language in our daily life.
We usually greet each other with nodding, smiles, hand shaking and so on. During the conversation, it’s good manners to have eye contact instead of staring directly at others. In class, students are required to raise their hands if they have any questions. Moreover, it’s common to see youth of the same sex hold hands or hug in public places. Whenever necessary, I’m always here to give you a hand.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua