03 记叙文 - 写景篇 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

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备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）第一章 记叙文 记叙文是一种以记人叙事为主要内容的文章,通常包括六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果,写作时各要素要交代清楚,但并不要求全部具备.写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外,还要注意以下几点：1.记叙方式.通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种.顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一种记叙方式,即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述.2.人称.一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作.第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙,通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈现在读者面前.3.时态.记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,因此常用一般过去时,还可根据上下文辅以其他时态. Part 3 写景.写法点拨在写景的时候,我们应从以下三部分着手：1.总体介绍景物的特点.文章的开头部分,可以就景物的位置、总体特征等进行描写,但注意叙述时要尽量简洁,不用展开描写,只需抓住总的特征即可.2.从一定的顺序或角度进行具体的描写.为了将景物最具有代表性的特点展示给读者,一定要充分发挥想象力,挖掘出景物的特征.此外,在描写的过程中,要遵循一定的顺序或选择一定的角度,这样才能使文章的条理清晰,描述的效果可以事半功倍.3.谈论对景物的总体评价或感受.在此处,可以叙述一下社会大众对景物的评价,也可以自己发表观点,表达一下对景物的感受.    必备词汇1 位置描写Be located in/lie in位于inside在······以内before/in front of在······前面outside在······之外anywhere任何地方local本地的top最高处／顶部bottom底部near靠近around在······附近everywhere到处somewhere某处2 季节、天气cold寒冷的warm温暖的cool凉爽的snowy下雪的sunny晴朗的rainy下雨的windy有风的cloudy多云的spring春天summer夏天autumn/fall秋天winter冬天3 景物river河流lake湖泊stream河；溪forest森林path小道road公路house房bridge桥building建筑物mountain山rainbow彩虹leaf树叶4对景物的描写或评价green绿色的misty有雾的；朦胧的vast广阔的dusty多尘的tiny极小的beautiful美丽的purple紫色的golden金色的  必备句型1 总体介绍景物的特点(1) Beijing is more beautiful in Autumn than other seasons.秋天的北京比其他季节的北京更美丽.(2) It is big and very modern with a population of...它又大又现代,有着······人口.(3)... is one of the most famous mountains in China.··.···是中国的名山之一.(4)... is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world.······因它的美丽景色而在世界闻名.(5)...is a/an...with a long history.·..·.是一个历史悠久的····.2 从一定的顺序或角度进行具体的描写(1) It is getting warmer and warmer. 天气变得越来越暖和了.(2) Flowers are opening everywhere.鲜花正到处盛开.(3) The golden leaves fall from the trees onto the ground.金黄色的落叶掉落在地上.(4) Standing on the top of...,you can have a whole view of...站在······的顶部,你可以看到······的全景.(5) It is more interesting to travel the island by boat.乘船游览这个小岛会更有趣.3 谈论对景物的总体评价或感受(1) The travelers were attracted by the beauty of the landscapes.游客们被美丽的景色所吸引.(2) Beauty is not only in the nature but also in people's mind.美丽不仅存在于自然中,而且存在于人们的心中.(3) I hope you will enjoy the scenes here.我希望你能喜欢这里的景色.(4) By visiting the places of interest, I greatly broaden my horizons.通过游览名胜古迹,我大大地开拓了我的视野. 美文引路题目：根据中文提示,以“My Hometown”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,介绍你的家乡.提示：1.我出生于山东一个美丽的乡村.那里的河流非常干净,村里有很多绿树.2.我们的乡村里大约有1000人.他们都非常慈善和友好.3.秋天是收获的季节,许多农民在田地里干农活.4.我们的家乡因为苹果而出名.秋天,许多商人来这里买苹果.5.我非常喜欢我的家乡.思路导航第1步：例文审题主体人称题目要求介绍“My Hometown”,故主体人称应为第一人称“I”.主体时态题目里要求描述的是“我”的家乡的一般状态,故主体时态用一般现在时.写作贴士题目给出5个要点,写作时根据要点适当组合,进行分段；注意词数要求.第2步：列提纲(1)总体概述家乡的情况；(2)详细描述家乡的特点；(3)表达对家乡的感情.第3步：参考词句(1) village; river; clean; tree...(2) kind; friendly; harvest; fields; businessman...(3)hometown...第4步：连句成篇My HometownI was born in a beautiful village in Shandong Province. The rivers there are very clean. There are also lots of trees in the village.In our village, there are about 1, 000 people. They are all very kind and friendly. Autumn is a harvest season. At that time, most of the farmers do the farm work in the fields. Our hometown is famous for apples. In autumn, a lot of businessmen come here to buy apples.This is my hometown, and I love my hometown very much. Do you like it?参考译文我的家乡我出生于山东省一个美丽的小山村.那里的河流非常干净.小山村里还有很多树.我们村里约有1000人.他们都很慈祥和友好.秋天是一个收获的季节.那时,大多数农民在田地里干农活.我们的家乡因苹果而出名.秋天,有很多商人来买苹果.这就是我的家乡,我非常喜欢我的家乡.你喜欢它吗? 自然景观范文1The Yellow MountainThe Yellow Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most well-known mountains in China. Every year, thousands of tourists at home and abroad come to visit it.It's a little far from the city. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. Climbing the mountain may make you a little tired. However, on the way to the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.You would be amazed by the wonderful scenery there. It is really worth visiting.参考译文黄山黄山位于安徽省的南部.它是中国的名山之一.每年,成千上万的中外游客去那里游览.它离市区有点远.坐汽车的话,大概要3个小时才能到达那里.爬山可能会使你有点累.然而,在向山顶前进的过程中,你可以欣赏环绕着你的云海、奇松和怪石.清晨,当太阳升起来时,天空看起来非常美丽.你会惊讶于那里的美丽景色.它真的很值得去游玩.亮点词汇1 thousands of成千上万的2 at home and abroad 海内外；中外3 tired/adj.疲倦的；劳累的4 unique /adj.独特的；独一无二的5 amaze /v.使惊讶；感到惊讶出彩句型1 ...is located in.........位于......2 It is one of the most well-known... 它是最著名的······之一.3 It takes you...to do sth.这会花费你··..··(时间等)去做某事.4 On the way to...,you can...在去······的路上,你可以······.5 It is worth doing sth.值得做某事.高分点评本文围绕中国的一座名山－黄山展开,介绍了它的概况、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等,呈现出绝美的山上奇景.作者的文笔非常出色,“sea of clouds”“unique rocks”等表达惟妙惟肖地展现了黄山之景.文中的句式多变,如“it”引导的形式主语句、动词的－ing形式作主语等,都是文章的加分点. 范文2Beihai BeachBeihai Beach is very famous in my city. The beach lies in the north of the city, about 8 kilometres away. It's one of the best beaches in the city.The sand on the beach is fine, soft and clean. And the water is clear with small waves. Therefore, it's very suitable for swimming and playing beach volleyball. Many people come here to spend their holidays. Everyone says it is a beautiful place to travel. Moreover, the people here are very friendly.I think you all can enjoy yourselves here. 参考译文北海滩北海滩在我的城市非常出名.这个沙滩位于城市的北部,距离城市大约8公里.它是城中最好的沙滩之一.沙滩上的沙质很好,又柔软,又干净.海水很清澈,带有小小的浪花.因此,这里非常适合游泳和打沙滩排球.很多人来这里度假.每个人都说这是一个适合游览的美丽的地方.而且,这里的人非常友好.我觉得你们都会在这里玩得很开心.亮点词汇1 soft /adj.柔软的2 wave /n.波浪3 suitable /adj.适合的4 beach volleyball 沙滩排球5 enjoy oneself 玩得开心出彩句型1 ...lies in...······位于······2 The water is clear with small waves.海水很清,带有小小的浪花.3 It's very suitable for... 非常适宜做······4 Many people come here to spend their holidays.很多人来这里度假.5 You all can enjoy yourselves here.你们都会在这里玩得很开心.高分点评本文将北海滩的美丽景色呈现在我们面前,充满了作者对这一片沙滩的热爱之情.文章中的句子均简单明了,如表示位置的“lie in...”,描述海水的“The water is clear with small waves”,都清楚地描述了海滩的朴素之美,展示了作者扎实的语言功底.  地方风情范文1A CityThere is a city in the north of China. It has a population of over 5 million.There are many places of interest and well-protected historical sites there. It is a famous tourist city. Many visitors across the country come here to spend their holidays. Besides, the city is very modern. On both sides of the wide roads, there are many tall buildings. You can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The people of the city-live a happy life. They are also very nice, who often help others.Many visitors think highly of the city. You are all welcome to visit this city.参考译文一座城市在中国的北方,有一座城市.它有超过500万的人口.那里有很多名胜古迹和保护得很好的历史遗迹.它是一座著名的旅游城市.全国的很多游客来这里度假.除此以外,这座城市非常现代化.在宽阔道路的两旁,有很多高高的建筑.随处可以看到高高的树木、美丽的花朵和绿草.城市中的人们过着幸福的生活.他们还非常友好,经常帮助别人.很多游客对这座城市评价很高.欢迎来这座城市参观.亮点词汇1 population /n.人口2 places of interest 名胜古迹3 historical sites 历史遗迹4 tourist city 旅游城市5 everywhere/adv.到处出彩句型1 ...in the north of.........在··.·.·的北面.2 It has a population of... 它有·····人口.3 On both sides of the wide roads, there are...在宽阔道路的两旁,有··..·4 ....live a happy life.··.···过着幸福的生活.5 You are all welcome to...欢迎你们来··....高分点评本文描写的是中国北方的一座城市,展现了其历史和现代并存的特点,突显了这座城市的与众不同和地方风情.文章的表达非常地道,如描写人口时,使用的“It has a population of...”句式,描写“某地有某物”时,使用的“there be”句式. 范文2A Beautiful TownIn the southwest part of China, there is a small town with a population of about 5,000.The town is very beautiful with high mountains around it. And the mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboos. Through the town runs a small stream. There is also a new railway outside the town. People in the town are all hard-working. Though they are having a rich and good life, they are still working hard to build their town into a modern one.It's a beautiful town, isn't it? Are you attracted by it? 参考译文一座美丽的小镇在中国的西南部,有一座小镇,小镇上大约有5000人.小镇非常美丽,四周有高山环绕.山上覆盖着各种各样的绿色竹子.有一条小溪穿过小镇.在小镇外面,有一条新的铁路.镇上的人都很勤奋.虽然他们过着富足的好生活,但他们还是努力将他们的小镇变得现代化.这是一座漂亮的小镇,不是吗?你有被它吸引吗?亮点词汇1 southwest /n.西南部2 bamboo/n.竹子3 stream /n.小溪；溪流4 railway /n.铁路5 hard-working 勤奋的；勤勉的出彩句型1 In the...part of...,there is...在······的······方位,有······2 The town is... with high mountains around it.小镇·····,被群山环绕着.3 ...are covered with...······被······覆盖着.4 Through the town runs a small stream.有一条小溪穿过小镇.5 It's a beautiful town, isn't it?这是一个漂亮的小镇,不是吗?高分点评本文描写了一个美丽的小镇,主要抓住两个特点－自然风景和人文风情,展现了小镇柔情的一面.文章的句式运用是一大出彩的地方,如倒装句“Through the town runs a small stream”,反意疑问句“It's a beautiful town, isn't it”,显示出作者扎实的语言功底.