08 读后续写：助人型（故事构造“三部曲”）-高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）

读后续写：助人型
Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人） 1
Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲 4
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） 4
第二步：助人过程呈现（（想到办法+动作链） 5
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） 6
Part3：助人场景描写 7
一、帮助他人之后 7
二、发生水灾之后 8
三、发生误解之后 9
四、发生火灾之后 10
五、感受善良之后 11
六、感受幸福之后 11
七、发生误解之后 12
八、获得勇气 13
九、获得自信 14
十、接收礼物之后 15
十一、老师的帮助 16
十二、陌生人的帮助 17
Part4：灵活应用 18
例1：老夫妇帮助我 18
例2：帮助老妇人 20
Part5：高考真题再现 23
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】 23
真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】 25


Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When the employees at the Domino’s pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn’t received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn’t right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino’s branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sarah said.
Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry.
A few Domino’s drivers had mentioned that they hadn’t seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate.
Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk’s place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the police arrived at the place,
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Para.2:
A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital.
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【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Domino’s employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doing their job.
当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Domino’s personally with some homemade cookies to say thank--you to Sarah and the Domino’s staff. The Domino’s mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirk’s story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since.
几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。

【解析】
【分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。
2. 续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大声求救：cry for help /shout for help /scream for help
②受到赞扬：received a lot of praise / be praised greatly
③照顾，护理： caring for/taking care of/
情绪类
①.感谢：say thank--you / express appreciation / show appreciation /show his gratitude/be grateful
②.体贴：thoughtfulness /being considerate
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)
[高分句型2]. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)

Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
 
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
 
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.     
2. One's eyes got misty.  
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
 

 困难处境
1. As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）
3. But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）

第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race

（2）动作链
Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】

第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...     
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
 
（2）有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙

（3）感谢
1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）

（4）感动
1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考）
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考）
4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）
5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）

（5）升华
1. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
2. Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
3. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考）
4. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省联考）
5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.

Part3：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。

I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。

二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。

Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。

三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。

Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry..It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。

四、发生火灾之后
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。

Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。



五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。

That day my father andI went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young." He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream?。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。

六、感受幸福之后
The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, "What do you mean?" The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”

Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”

七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. "Where is my wallet?" he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,"You stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。

The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。

八、获得勇气
The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼

The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson--the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。

九、获得自信
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。

Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…." Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。

十、接收礼物之后
I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Let's see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。

I have always remembered that Christmas fondly: It had such an impact on me. As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can now understand my mom's actions.I see actually, she was not ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whenever I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、老师的帮助
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。


Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…" Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.

沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深深地吸了一口气。 十分钟后，全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。


2.
Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pulled out with their horns honking.But on that particular day,Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe."I don′t want to leave you." He sobbed with red-rimmed eyes. Mr. Rowe comforted him,"I will miss you, too."
那一年时间过得很快，我们还没意识到，那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，车上按着喇叭离开。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前，低着头，热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，犹豫了一下，然后跑回来拥抱Mr。罗伊。“我不想离开你。”他用红边缘的眼睛抽泣着。Mr.罗安慰他，“我也会想念你。”

Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom, dressed in the Marine Corps uniform. The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven! Mr. Rowe and I couldn't believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! "I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!"It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back to say, simply to say a very simple word of THANKS.
许多年后，当一个穿着海军陆战队制服的英俊年轻人走进我们的教室时，罗先生和我感到惊讶。 那个年轻人站得高高的，很骄傲。 是史蒂文！ 我和罗先生简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。 他敬礼，紧紧地拥抱罗先生！ “我今天回到学校只是为了感谢你！ “我希望每一位老师都有这样的经历，一位以前的学生回来说，简单地说一个非常简单的“谢谢。

十二、陌生人的帮助
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling."Need some Mg?"he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed." "Follow me!" he said, sounding like sort of an order.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。

We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was oosened up."You just need a bit of effort. Haha!" George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being alel to set off again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。


Part4：灵活应用
例1：老夫妇帮助我
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.
I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.
Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me.
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, it’s you! you ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!”
我走进商店，其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇，他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿，是你！”你曾经帮助过我，记得吗？我兴奋地对他们说。是的，老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”

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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.
过了一会儿，他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前，发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我，当他们一开始经营商店的时候，没有人花时间写声谢谢，但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信，他们真的很高兴。


例2：帮助老妇人
“Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called to her brother. Marcus caught up just as the school bus arrived. The doors opened and they got their first look at the new bus driver, Mr. Cross. There was no smile on his face. He just nodded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wondered if he ever smiled. “I miss our old driver,” she whispered.
The bus traveled two more blocks, then stopped in front of a house with no one in sight. “Hey, we don’t usually stop here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Cross opened the bus doors.
Millie waited to see who would get on, but nobody did. Still, Mr. Cross nodded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus boarded the bus. Then he closed the doors.
“Did you see that?” Millie said. “He just opened the doors and nodded at someone, but nobody got on!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus continued on the route, and the usual kids got on. Mr. Cross nodded at each one.
During school that day, Millie kept thinking back to what had happened that morning. It didn't make sense. At the end of the day, when she and Marcus got on the bus to go home, Marcus said, “I think I figured it out. He probably stopped to pick up a ghost kid!”
“A ghost kid?” Millie gulped (倒吸气).
“Maybe Mr. Cross can see ghosts,” Marcus said.
“No,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rode home, Millie thought about it. What else could it be? Why else would he open the doors?
The next two days, the same thing happened. The bus stopped and the doors opened. Smileless, Mr. Cross nodded, and the doors closed. Millie began to panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Who is this ghost kid? What if he’s sitting next to us?” They gathered courage to find out the truth.
On Friday morning, the bus stopped at that house again. Their hearts raced.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him.
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Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done.
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【答案】
When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him. Millie said, “Excuse me, Mr. Cross, who gets on at this stop every morning?” Mr. Cross replied, “I am afraid that there are some misunderstandings between us. I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in front of the house. I can also see her in the distance and know that she is healthy and safe. I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside. ”
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”

Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the house and see what can be done. As approaching the house, they saw an old woman sitting on a chair with a dog next to her. They introduced themselves to this old woman. From then on, they often came to help the old woman with some housework on weekends. With the generous help of Millie and Marcus, the old woman no longer felt lonely. She often told them some old stories and they became good friends.
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”

【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来，并没有任何人上车，司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天，他们决心弄清楚这件事情。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机叫克罗斯，他们觉得新司机很陌生，脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是，校车每次过两个街区，克罗斯先生就会把车停下来，并没有任何人上车，但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异，弟弟马库斯猜测说，克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不这么想，但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样，他们忍不住了。终于有一天，他们鼓起勇气，决心把这个事情弄明白。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当克罗斯先生打开门，对着无人的地方点头示意时，他们向他走去……因此，接下来应该续写，司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会，克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近，这位老朋友是个老妇人，年龄大了，自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候，老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手，他也能从远处看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。
第二段开头是：听到这个故事，他们松了一口气，决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人，并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务，他们也成了很好的朋友。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wave at，in front of，in the distance，no longer等高级词汇；定语从句I have an old friend who lives in the old house at the end of this block；结果状语从句I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside；运用了With the generous help of...的with复合结构等高级句式。


Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.

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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.To be honest, after working hard for several hours, I was so hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “no!”The girl said with a smile, “Come on! Join us.The Mexicon sandwich is delicious!” With moved tears rolling around my eyes, I took the sandwich.After eating it like wolf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked about my trouble and feelings and they shared their interesting stories in the life.Then, the girl’s mother had another sandwich and some fruit place din a paper bag and handed it to me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had to go now.” I showed my heartfelt gratitude to them and saw them disappear in my sight.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.

真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
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The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”

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When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
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When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数：164)