专题12 书面表达15篇-2023届九年级英语名校真题分类汇编(江苏专用)
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专题12 书面表达15篇
一、话题作文
1.(2022·江苏苏州·九年级期中)在成长过程中,我们都会遇到各种各样的问题和烦恼。请以“My growing pain”为题,用英语写下你成长过程中的问题或烦恼。故事需包括问题和解决。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名,校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My growing pain
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【答案】范文:
My growing pain
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have a happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was from my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends.
I couldn’t stand the strict rules! So I wrote a letter and told my parents I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork. I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents, they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like.
Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文,写自己成长中的情况;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括成长遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼;
第二步,介绍对应问题的解决方案;
第三步,最后得出结论要善于沟通。
[亮点词汇]
① come to an end结束
② not only…but (also) 不但……而且……
③ allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
④ make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
① they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like. (that引导的宾语从句)
② Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.(不定式作后置定语)
2.(2022·江苏南通·模拟预测)云“百善孝为先”,自古以来“孝文化”承载着中华传统美德。“孝”字老在上,子在下,请结合自身经历,以 “Respecting the elders”为题写一篇短文。
注意:
90词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
内容中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
开头已写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:filial piety 孝顺 virtue 美德 responsibility 责任
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue. I am proud of what I have done for my grandparents.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头;要求我们关于“孝”这个这个主题,并联系实际,发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称为主来叙述;时态采用一般过去时为主;紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。
二、材料作文
3.(2022·江苏·淮安市淮安区教师发展中心学科研训处九年级期中)成长像一次长途旅行,在成长的过程中有收获,也有困惑。请以“Growing up”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在成长过程中的点滴及感受。
如何了解世界
1. 书本:开阔视野,获得很多的知识,了解更多的人和事;
2. 父母:教会你做个善良的人;
3. 其他(自拟一点)。
如何解决烦恼
1. 你的烦恼是什么;
2. 如何解决的(举例说明)。
你的感受
1. 遇到困难不言弃;
2. 成长比成功重要;
3. 其他(自拟一点)。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。内容必须包括表格中所有要点,可以适当发挥。
3. 词数在80-100之间。信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Growing up
Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way.
I learned about the world in different ways. I like reading books which can help me open up my mind, get lots of knowledge and learn more about people and things. And I also learned a lot from my parents. They taught me how to be a kind person. At school, I learned how to get along well with my classmates and teachers.
On the way I had my problems. For example, I could not achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Then my head teacher told me to make a study plan and work out the time I can spend on my hobbies.
I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily. And having a good relationship with parents, teachers and classmates is important in our lives. Growing up is more important than success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作主题已给出,围绕主题根据表格内要点展开写作,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,书写成长是什么,点名主题;
第二步,具体描写成长过程中如何了解世界,如何解决烦恼;
第三步,表达自己在成长过程中的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①open up my mind开拓视野
②get along well with与……相处融洽
③achieve a balance取得平衡
④work out想出
[高分句型]
①I like reading books which can help me open up my mind, get lots of knowledge and learn more about people and things. (whichy引导的定语从句)
②I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily.(时间状语从句+宾语从句)
4.(2022·江苏扬州·九年级期中)时间飞逝,转眼间同学们进入九年级已有两个多月了,在繁忙的学习生活中,学生和家长倍感压力,在学习和生活方面也易产生分歧,该如何解决呢?根据下面要点写一篇文章,并谈谈你会如何处理这些分歧。
学生表现:
1.作业多,紧张,易生病
2.想看电视,打游戏,睡觉
家长反应:
1.担心考试成绩
2.周末增加额外作业
解决方法:
1.尊敬父母,多沟通
2.……
注意:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,书写规范;2.词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Now students are busy with subjects in the ninth grade ,but both students and parents are under the pressure (压力).
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【答案】例文:
Now students are busy with subjects in the ninth grade, but both students and parents are under the pressure. The students have so much homework to do that they feel nervous and get angry easily. They want to have time to watch TV, play computer games or sleep. However, their parents are worried about their children’s marks of study. So parents want their children to do extra homework at home at the weekend.
In my opinion, we should respect our parents first, and we had better learn to talk with our parents. Tell them what we thought about the exams. Secondly, we should do some sports to relax. We also listen to music to reduce the pressure. Finally, we should keep on having enough sleep. Be sure that better understanding leads to better study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意重点说明在学习和生活方面与家长产生分歧时,该如何解决,适当添加细节,并突出写作重要。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“学生和家长都承受着压力”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“学生表现,家长反应和解决方法”几个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②in my opinion在我看来
③keep on doing继续做某事
[高分句型]
①The students have so much homework to do that they feel nervous and get angry easily.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②In my opinion, we should respect our parents first, and we had better learn to talk with our parents.(and连接并列句)
5.(2022·江苏扬州·九年级期中)小组合作(group work)是课堂上的活动形式,也是提升学习效率的方法。“双减”政策出台,英语课上小组合作学习越来越显得重要。最近在你班的英语课上,老师组织了一次题为“Is group work useful for us to improve English?”的讨论。请你根据以下的讨论结果及要求完成一篇英文总结报告。
部分同学
其他同学
你的想法及建议
1. 可以自由交流;
2. 可以相互学习;
1. 浪费时间;
2. 害怕犯错;
……(至少两点)
要求:
1)不少于100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2)语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。
3)内容必须包括以上所有要点,须根据要求补充完整。
4)文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。Is group work useful for us to improve English?
Group work is important and often organized in the English class. These days we had a discussion on whether group work is useful to improve English. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Is group work useful for us to improve English?
Group work is important and often organized in the English class. These days we had a discussion on whether group work is useful to improve English.
Some of my classmates think it is a great way to improve English, because we can talk freely during class to exchange ideas. At the same time, it’s a good chance to learn from each other. However, some students disagree. They think it wastes too much time. And someone may be afraid of making mistakes, so they keep silent all the time.
In my opinion, I like the way we study. It is very interesting and useful. In the meanwhile, it makes our classroom lively and students active.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:应用文
②时态:一般现在时为主
③提示:题目要求根据所给提示就小组合作学习的讨论结果完成一篇英文总结报告,写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步,开门见山,指出写作主旨。(已给出)
第二步,根据所给要点,依次介绍学生对这种学习形式的观点,包括支持和反对两种意见,根据提示描述。
第三步,阐述自己的观点,不少于2条。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②learn from跟……学
③be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
①At the same time, it’s a good chance to learn from each other. (it作形式主语)
②They think it wastes too much time(it作形式宾语)
6.(2022·江苏无锡·九年级期中)人生如旅,在你的成长过程中,许多人影响着你,比如父母、老师、朋友、公众人物或者身边的普通人。最近,你校正开展以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语征文活动,请你根据以下提示完成征文。
注意:
1.必须包含表中所有提示内容,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4.100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Miss. Lin, my English teacher. She is about thirty years old. She is tall and slim. You will not find anything unusual about her until you know more about her.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help anyone. Whenever I have problems with my study, she will give a helping hand to me. She once advised me to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies when I felt stressed. Moreover, she has worked as a youth worker in a community center since COVID-19 broke out.
Now, I realize she has a heart full of love.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”为主,综合运用各种时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示内容,并作适当发挥,注意不要遗忘了“对所介绍人物的评价”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍人物的基本信息,从“姓名、职业、外形”等方面介绍;
第二步,具体阐述人物的品性,从“个性,做过的事”等方面详细阐述;
第三步,对所介绍的人物进行简单评价。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to准备
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③ achieve a balance达到平衡
[高分句型]
①Whenever I have problems with my study, she will give a helping hand to me. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②You will not find anything unusual about her until you know more about her. (not... until结构)
7.(2022·江苏·九年级单元测试)看电视是我们日常生活中不可缺少的—部分,但是看太多的电视有时候也有不良的影响。相据以下信息,以Watching TV为题,写篇—篇80词左右的短文。
要点:
1. 看电视是人们最喜欢的活动之一。电视节目种类繁多,如:……(列举至少三种)所以各年龄层次的人都对看电视感兴趣。
2. 看电视的好处:放松身心;了解时事新闻,……
3. 看电视的坏处:长时间观看会伤眼睛;不如看书能让人思考并变得聪明,……
4. 你对看电视的看法。
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【答案】 例文
Watching TV is one of people’s favourite activities. There are all kinds of TV programmes, such as chat shows, drama series, cartoons and so on, so people of all ages are interested in watching TV.
We can relax ourselves and learn about up-to-date news by watching TV. TV programmes can improve our knowledge of the world. However, if you watch TV for too long, it will do harm to your eyes. You don’t need to think when watching TV, while you need to think when reading books. So reading make you clever. Moreover, if you spend much time watching TV, you will have less time to do something more meaningful.
I think we can spend some time watching TV when we are free and try to watch programmes which can give us knowledge.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的内容,并适当增添细节,使文章结构紧密、逻辑通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步:陈述要点1中的所有内容,并列举至少三种电视节目。
第二步:先论述看电视的好处,再论述看电视的坏处,可以在要点提示的基础上,适当增添细节,使内容更丰富。
第三步:结合看电视的好处和坏处,阐述自己对看电视的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②up-to-date news 时事新闻
③do harm to 对……有害
④spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Watching TV is one of people’s favourite activities.(“one of+sb’s+favourite+可数名词复数“句型)
②We can relax ourselves and learn about up-to-date news by watching TV.(“by doing sth.”作方式状语)
③You don’t need to think when watching TV, while you need to think when reading books.(“while”引导并列句,表转折,译为“而”)
8.(2022·江苏·九年级课时练习)Daniel是你的同学,你们班的尖子生之—,有很多适合当学生会主席的突出品质。你想推荐他当学生会主席。请根据下列内容要点,用英语给Mr. Wu写—封推荐信。
1. 自信,工作力求高标准,常常能想出很多好点子;
2. 有—颗爱心……(举例);做事有条理……(举例);
3. 他擅长打篮球,曾带领校队获得全市第一;
4. 学习努力,上学期成功获得奖学金;能保持学习和爱好的平衡;
5. 我相信……
注意:
1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点;要求语句通顺;意思连贯;;
2. 第2点和第5点用1~2句话展开合理想象,并作适当发挥。词数90左右(开头和格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many great qualities for this position.
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Yours sincerely,
Millie
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr Wu.
I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many great qualities for this position.
Daniel is a confident boy. He works to high standards. He can often come up with many good ideas. He has a heart full of love. Whenever he is wanted, he will come to help us. Besides, he is organized enough to keep everything in good order. For example, he will make a list before he goes shopping.
Moreover, he is good at playing basketball and he once led our school team to win first place in our city. He studies hard. Last term, he succeeded in getting a scholarship. Also, he can achieve a balance between his schoolwork and hobbies.
I believe Daniel is the most suitable person to be the chairperson of the Students’ Union.
Yours sincerely.
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中性格、外貌、能力、爱好等,可以适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,题干开头已经给出写作意图,首先介绍他的聪明才智,举例说明有爱心,做事有条理。
第二步,介绍其爱好及成就,以及学习上的优异表现。
第三步,再次点明写作意图。
[亮点词汇]
① confident自信的
② come up with想出
③ first place第一名
④ between…and在……之间
[高分句型]
① Whenever he is wanted, he will come to help us. (whenever引导的状语从句)
②he is organized enough to keep everything in good order. (动词不定式作原因状语)
9.(2022·江苏宿迁·三模)为了贯彻“双减”政策,阳光中学在课后服务时间开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。假如你是校学生会成员李飞,请你向全校同学介绍部分社团及活动内容,并向同学们阐述参加社团的好处。
社团名称
活动内容
好处
阅读社团
阅读不同类型的书籍,讨论阅读内容
放松自我,开阔视野
篮球社团
学习篮球技巧,参与校队比赛
强身健体,学习团队精神
其他社团
……(至少一个)
……(至少一点)
注意事项:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
2.必须包含表格中所有要点,并适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息;
4.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Fei. I am a member of the school Students’ Union. Let me introduce some after-class clubs to you.
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I hope these clubs will be of great help and all of us can enjoy our school life.
【答案】例文:
Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Fei. I am a member of the school Students’ Union. Let me introduce some after-class clubs to you.
If you’re interested in reading, you can join the Reading Club. The members will read different types of books together and discuss what to read. It can not only relax yourself but also open up a whole new world to you.
If you like playing basketball, I think the Basketball Club is a perfect choice. The coaches can teach you some basketball skills and you can have a chance to take part in the school basketball competition. After a hard day’s study, playing basketball is a good way to make you stronger and more energetic. You can also learn team spirit from it.
If you are not good at spoken English, you can join the English Corner. Here you can practise your spoken English with foreigners and watch some English videos. Also, you can make new friends and improve your English quickly.
I hope these clubs will be of great help and all of us can enjoy our school life.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给表格提示,向全校同学介绍部分社团及活动内容,并向同学们阐述参加社团的好处。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第二人称为主,其他人称为辅。叙述时,至少需要包含三个社团,除了所给的阅读和篮球社团,自己再加一个。行文要注意语意连贯,表达清晰,做到无单词语法错误。
10.(2022·江苏·苏州市金阊实验中学校一模)2022 年伊始,全国多地疫情频发,在抗疫期间,每天都会涌现出许多令我们感动的人和事。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1. 你觉得最令你感动的人是谁;
2. 你为什么觉得他/她最让你感动;
3. 你最想对他/她说的话。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名, 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒肺炎(NCP)
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【答案】One possible version:
The fight against NCP has lasted for several weeks. During the fight, doctors and nurses are real heroes—they tried their best to protect us and they fought for us.
My aunt who is a doctor, moved me a lot. For the past years, my aunt was just an ordinary relative to me. But the decision she made on April 3rd changed my thought completely—she asked to go to Shanghai to help the patients there. Though her daughter is only three years old, she still decided to leave for Shanghai. For her, it is the thing that she must do. I was really moved.
I want to tell my aunt that I am proud of her and I hope she can keep healthy and come back safely.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示,写一篇作文介绍令你感动的人和事情。
2.写作指导:本文在描述令你感动的事情时使用一般过去时,描述令你感动的人以及你想对她/他说的话使用一般现在时。写作可分为三段式,第一段介绍最令你感动的人;第二段叙述为什么这个人最让你感动;最后一段表达你想对她/他说的话。行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
11.(2022·江苏·南通市新桥中学一模)2021年3月30日,教育部发布了《关于进一步加强中小学生睡眠管理工作的通知》,引起了家长、学校和社会的广泛关注和热烈讨论。你校英文广播站Our voice发起学生睡眠情况的专题调查,请以“We need a good sleep”为题,写一篇英文调查报告。
现状与原因
睡眠不足,……;作业负担重,……。
建议与希望
学校
减少作业;制定学校作息时间,……。
家长
督促按时就寝不熬夜;营造温馨舒适的就寝环境。
学生
……(至少两点)
注意:
(1)要求语句通顺,意思连贯。
(2)词数100个左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。(3)参考词汇:督促(urge)
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【答案】例文
We need a good sleep
As we know, most of us students don’t have enough sleep. As a result some feel sleepy in class. That’s because we often have too much homework to do and we have to stay up late. On the other hand, some of us don’t have a good living habit, like being crazy about playing computer games at night, It’s also the reason why they don’t sleep well.
To solve the problems and improve our sleep, we should do something and have some charges. First, schools should make a particular timetable for sleep, and teachers should reduce our homework. We can be given talks about the knowledge of sleep. Second. our parents, should urge us to go to bed on time and not stay up late, They also can make us a warm and comfortable sleeping place Finally, as students, we should plan out time carefully and try to finish our homework at school. Moreover we can do some exercise in the day time, it can help us sleep well.
I hope all of us can have a good sleep and grow up healthily.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示要点,以“We need a good sleep”为题写一篇作文关于中小学需要更好的睡眠。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时行文;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时首先要涵盖要点,在叙述要点时可以使用一些过渡词,如first,second,finally,moreover等使文章更加通顺。最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
12.(2022·江苏盐城·二模)你的学校正在开展主题为“The most beautiful volunteer”的征文活动,请根据下列提示用英文写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的最美志愿者。
1. Who is he/she?
2. What did he/she do? (What does he/she do?)
3. What can you learn from him/her?
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
The most beautiful volunteer
In my mind, the most beautiful volunteer is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The most beautiful volunteer
In my mind, the most beautiful volunteer is Danny. He is a pupil in Xinhua primary school. He organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family. The boy got a serious disease. With Danny’s help, the boy was cured after the operation. Last year, he found his classmate Lily had to leave school. He wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.
Danny is helpful and warm. He is willing to help others and never asks for rewards. We should learn the spirit from him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The most beautiful volunteer”为题,结合提示问题,介绍心目中的最美志愿者。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段,第一段引出话题,介绍心目中的最美志愿者是谁以及他/她做了什么事情;第二段介绍自己从他/她身上学到了什么。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
13.(2022·江苏泰州·二模)人生不是一帆风顺的,任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长,会成就更美好的自己。
某英文网站正在开展以“Learning from Failure (失败)”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的故事。内容包括:你的失败经历,你的态度,以及你的收获。
要求∶
1. 必须包括导图里的所有要点,并适当拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100字左右(文章开头不计入)。
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. We may experience failure in our life. When I was in Grade 8, I found it easy to learn physics. So I paid little attention to the teacher in class. As a result, I did badly in the first exam. When I saw the score, I couldn’t help crying. After class, I went to the teacher for help. My teacher had a long talk with me and helped me realize my problem. From then on, I listened carefully in class and corrected my mistakes in time. Through my efforts, I came first in the mid-term exam.
From the experience, I know we should treat our study seriously. What’s more, it’s important to be brave to ask for help whenever we have difficulty.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“从失败中学习”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己经历了什么失败,是怎么处理的,从中有什么收获,即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上,条理要清晰。
2. 写作指导:本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山,引出失败这一话题;第二部分根据要求展开,分述失败的经历和怎么处理解决的,要具体;第三部分总结全文,表达感受,感情升华,阐述从这次经历中有什么收获。
三、电子邮件
14.(2022·江苏镇江·模拟预测)假如你是李华。你在某英文网站看到一则招聘中国志愿者的广告。请根据该广告中所提供志愿者项目,结合你的实际情况选择其中的一个项目并给项目负责人写一份email,表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望,并阐述理由,
Project One
Place: A small village in a poor area of China Activities:
① teach children English
②visit the old people’s home
③work on the farm
Project Two
Place: A school in Japan Activities:
①set up a culture exchange center
②give Chinese lessons
③play games with Japan children
要求:
1. 邮件中必须包含招聘广告中的信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文章不少于 90 个词。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范(
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. I’m willing to go to a small village in the west of China. I know something about China. I will be glad to take part in the Project1. I have been good at English since I was a student, I’m also willing to be a teacher to teach children English. In my opinion, helping people in need is meaningful. I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers. I can do a lot of work on the farm. Also, I can visit the old people’s home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on. It’s meaningful for me to do something for others.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件,主要是选择其中一个项目进行应聘志愿者。项目一的邮件中应包括:教学生英语;拜访老人的家;在农场工作。项目二应包括:建立一个文化交流中心;教汉语课;和日本孩子做游戏。不管选哪个项目,要点缺一不可。写作时还应注意承接开头和结尾。
2.写作指导:写作时以第一人称进行叙述,且注意时态为一般现在时;写作时围绕主题,思路清晰,语言流畅,表达完整。
四、讲稿
15.(2022·江苏·盐城市盐都区实验初中一模)水滴石穿,绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情,成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿,参加毕业典礼的心得分享活动。
﹡What do you always keep doing ?
﹡Why do you keep doing that?
...
注意:1. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that knowledge may be acquired through many ways, and the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broadens their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival. Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题,讲述自己坚持做的事是阅读;第二段介绍为什么一直坚持阅读;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
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