【同步练习】译林版初二英语上册 Unit8 写作主题：自然灾害与人身安全

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译林版八上Unit  8 Natural disasters写作主题：自然灾害与人身安全 一、话题分析本单元的话题是“自然灾害与人身安全”，要求学生能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍一种自然灾害或者人身安全或灾害防范的基本常识，内容包括自然灾害或者突发事件发生的时间、地点、经过和结果、人身安全或灾害防范的各方面注意事项等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1. 能用过去进行时描述自然灾害或者突发事件发生的经过；2. 能用when,while,as等连词连接句子；3. 能正确使用标点符号；4. 能正确书写英语句子。二、写作步骤步骤一：确定介绍一种自然灾害或者人身安全或灾害防范的基本常识的内容和顺序。步骤二：列举介绍一种自然灾害或者人身安全或灾害防范的基本常识的句型，多多益善。步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。三、词汇积累1 wake up 醒来2 crash into 撞上……3 fall from 从……上跌落下来4 mop up 把……拖干净5 wash away 冲走6 catch fire 着火7 feel a slight shake 感到轻微震动8 run out of 从……中跑出9 in all directions 四面八方10 come down 坍塌11 not…at all 一点也不12 a moment of fear 片刻的恐惧13 calm down 冷静下来14 shout for help 呼救15 move away 移开16 find one’s way out 找到出路17 at last 最后，终于18 break down 出故障，坏掉19 because of 因为，由于20 as…as possible 尽可能四、句型积累1 Who will mop up the water if I go home without you? 如果你不跟我回家，谁将拖干水呢？2 There was a heavy storm with thunder and lighting. 有一场暴风雨，电闪雷鸣。3 Lighting hit a classroom building and it caught fire. 闪电击中了一栋教学楼，并引发了火灾。4 I was sleeping when the earthquake started. 地震发生时我正在睡觉。5 Outside, people were running in all directions while pieces of glass and bricks were failing down. 外面，人们四处奔跑，成片的玻璃与砖头纷纷落下。6 A moment of fear went through my mind, but I told myself to calm down since I was still alive. 我的脑海里闪过片刻的恐惧，但我告诉自己要冷静，因为自己还活着。7 Luckily, there was just enough space for me to move. 幸运的是，有足够的空间来容我移动。8 …I was trying to find my way out, I suddenly heard some noise above me. 当我正在尽力寻找出路时，我突然听到楼上有嘈杂声。五、写作训练1．每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样保护自己?请根据以下提示，以"How to protect ourselves"为标题写一篇发言稿.安全对每个人都很重要交通：外出时遵守交通规则食品:吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活动:进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己不私自下河游泳自我保护是重要技能之一交友需谨慎远离危险之人遇到危险要保持冷静然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助尽可能避免受伤害保证自己的安全　　　　　参考词汇：safety, traffic rules, hurt oneself, without permission, self-protection, stay away from. . , be careful, be in danger, keep calm, call. . for help要求∶1）语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。2）短文应包括表格中所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3）词数80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。How to protect ourselvesDear friends, Everyone has only one life, so we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. That's all. Thank you!2．请你根据下面提示,以A landslide（山崩）为题, 写一篇70词左右的短文（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）。①上周一早上, 在连续下了两天大雨之后发生了山崩(landslide)。②我和妈妈在家, 爸爸下午回来。雨很大。他叫我和妈妈赶快带伞离开。③就在那时, 房子开始摇晃, 我们非常害怕, 迅速跑开了。④第二天上午回家时, 我们发现房子没有了, 到处是碎玻璃和砖块, 我们感到很悲伤。A landslide    Last Monday morning, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Experience(一次难忘的经历)”为题的征文活动。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，向该报社投稿。提示：2017年8月8日夜晚9：20左右，一场突如其来的地震发生在九寨沟。假如你是Liu Mei，正和爸爸妈妈在九寨沟旅游。请根据下面的表格描述一下地震发生时的情况。要求：100～120词左右。PersonDoingPlaceMother and Iwatching the showsat Jiuzhaigou Art & Culture   Square Fathershoppingin a store near the squareAn Unforgettable Experience________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________        1．【参考范文】How to protect ourselvesDear friends,Everyone has only one life, so we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions.First, safety is very important for everyone. So we should obey the traffic rules when we go out. As for food, we should eat healthier food and less junk food. We should make sure not to hurt ourselves when we exercise. By the way, even though it's getting hotter and hotter these days, we mustn't swim in the river without permission.Secondly, self-protection is one of the key skills. We should be careful when we make friends and try our best to stay away from dangerous people. But if we are in danger, we should keep calm first. Then call the police on 110 or ask the teachers or parents for help.In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.That's all. Thank you!【解析】这是提纲类命题性英文写作。在写作时要使用题目中说过的材料进行书写，文章的内容要围绕题目进行的书写。文章的内容要包含题目所给的所有的信息。在书写时，文章中句子的时态使用一般现在时和第一人称，文章的层次要清楚，逻辑关系要合理。文章的语句要通顺，文章中不要出现任何语法和拼写错误。【点评】这篇英文书写写出了保护自己的几个建议。文章中使用了常用的句式结构。例如倒装句式 Here are some suggestions. ；even though引导的让步状语从句 even though it's getting hotter and hotter these days, we mustn't swim in the river without permission. 含有when引导的时间状语从句的主从复合句和if引导的条件状语从句的主从复合句。 We should be careful when we make friends and try our best to stay away from dangerous people. But if we are in danger, we should keep calm first. 常用的短语：obey the traffic rules ;go out ; As for ; junk food ; make sure ; By the way ; even though ; one of the key skills ;  be careful ; in danger ;  try our best to  do; stay away from ; In a word 等。文章句式结构简单，容易理解。2．【参考范文】A landslide Last Monday morning, after two days' heavy rain, a landslide happened. I was at home with my mother. Father came back in the afternoon. It was raining heavily/hard. He asked us to leave quickly with umbrellas. Just then, the house started to shake. We were very afraid and ran away quickly. The following morning, we went back home. We found that there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. We felt very sad.【解析】这是一篇提供提纲的命题作文，题目本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。因为描写的是“上周一早上”发生的事情，所以首先确定文章用一般过去时，注意动词过去式的使用。【点评】在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。3．【参考范文】An Unforgettable Experience     In the summer of 2017, my family had a trip to Jiuzhaigou. I was lost myself in the colorful water.    However, a terrible event happened. On the night of August 8, at about 9：20, suddenly there was an earthquake. At that time, my mother and I were watching the wonderful shows at Jiuzhaigou Art & Culture Square. My father was buying something in a store near the square. I felt very scared.  Luckily, we saw my father and other visitors rush out safely. To my excitement,  a lot of people took an active part in saving others.    I saw that people helped each other when the earthquake happened. I will never forget this trip.【解析】这是一篇命题作文，时态是一般过去时。首先介绍地震情况；然后介绍刘梅、爸爸妈妈正在做什么，最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词。【点评】作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：have a trip to；there be；see...doing sth.；to one's excitement；take an active part in等。过去进行时的运用为文章增色不少，如was/were+动词ing等。连词and、but、however、luckily，when等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。