译林版高中英语选择性必修第四册UNIT1表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇善意谎言的短文
本单元要求写一篇关于善意谎言的短文，属于议论文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——陈述观点
主体(the body)——列举原因和证据
结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1．arouse people's concerns 引起人们的关注
2．bring a lot of benefits to us 给我们带来很多益处
3．can not resist the temptation 不能抵制诱惑
4．arrive at/draw a conclusion 得出结论
5．cope with the problems处理这些问题
6．cherish the wild animals 珍惜野生动物
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．There is a widespread concern over the issue that．．．but I think．．．
2．We've had a discussion about whether．．．
★正文佳句
1．Some people think that．．．while others argue that．．．
2．If we can make good use of time，there is no doubt that．．．
★余味结尾
1．From what has been discussed above，we can conclude that．．．
2．Therefore，I firmly believe that．．．
假定你是李华，本月是你校的读书月。作为校报的记者，你做了一项调查，发现很多学生忙于作业，没有时间进行课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章，阐述自己的看法，内容包括：
1．阅读的好处；
2．呼吁大家多读好书。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：课外阅读extracurricular reading
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[学生习作]
Last week，I carried out a survey on extracurricular reading in our school．In my opinion，reading plays an important part in your study and life．
First，reading can broaden your vision．You can gain knowledge from the books you read．You can also be inspired and encouraged by books．The more you read，the more attractive you may find reading is．
In short，reading is very useful．Read some good books every day，and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life．
点评：
1．本篇习作符合写作要求，能够提出观点，分析原因，简要总结，结构合理，内容充实。
2．能够使用动名词作主语、the more．．．the more．．．句型，以及“祈使句＋and＋陈述句”结构，使得文章表达流畅，语言丰富，更有层次感。
3．第一段两句话之间不衔接，缺少过渡语句。
[升格作文]
Last week，I carried out a survey on extracurricular reading in our school and found many students didn't do the reading because of their heavy homework．As far as I'm concerned，we students should pay attention to the reading．
Extracurricular reading can broaden our horizons．Not only can we gain knowledge from the books we read，but also we can get inspiration and encouragement．The more we read，the more attractive we may find reading is．
In conclusion，reading is of great use．Read some good books every day，and you'll find reading makes a difference to your life．
在许多校园内，浪费现象普遍，造成很多不良影响。请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文，建议同学们从自身做起，减少浪费。
1．很多同学形成浪费的习惯；
2．浪费容易形成坏的饮食习惯，对健康成长不利；
3．浪费会增加父母的经济负担；
4．浪费会使有限的资源得不到充分利用。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当添加细节；
3．开头已写好。
参考词汇：经济负担 financial burden；资源resources
Nowadays it's common to see students wasting things in school．__
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【参考范文】
Nowadays it's common to see students wasting things in school．Many students have formed the habit of wasting things．For example，some leave the lights on in the daytime，or let water running after washing their hands．
As we all know，these bad habits will have a bad influence on our character and behavior．They not only increase our cost at school and add financial burden to our parents，but also waste the limited resources．
In my opinion，it's high time that we should deal with this problem．And above all，we should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste．
