译林版高中英语选择性必修第四册UNIT2表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇介绍汉语学习流行的短文
本单元要求写一篇介绍汉语学习流行的短文,属于现象类短文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出现象
主体(the body)——分析原因
结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1.reflect our economic development反映我们的经济发展
2.Confucius Institute 孔子学院
3.the charming of Chinese language 汉语的魅力
4.ignore the importance of their mother language 忽略了他们母语的重要性
5.take the responsibility to popularize it承担起推广它的责任
6.contribute to the Chinese learning为汉语学习做贡献
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.More and more foreigners are learning Chinese in recent years.
2.There are three main reasons contributing to the Chinese learning fever.
★正文佳句
1.With the deepening of China's reform and openingup,more foreigners would like to invest in China,do business with Chinese people and travel around China.
2.Traditional Chinese culture is generally accepted by the world in the postindustrial age.
★余味结尾
1.In my opinion,it is a natural phenomenon for people to learn another language with the aim of deepening international understanding.
2.It can be predicted that with the continuous development of China,the Chinese learning fever will keep booming.
近几年,“汉语热”(Chinese Rush)在世界各地不断升温。请结合提供的要点,以“Chinese Rush”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下各种学汉语的活动以及“汉语热”的原因。
要点:①各种电视汉语节目、汉语比赛越来越流行;
②来中国学习汉语的人越来越多;
③中国有悠久的历史、丰富的文化(rich culture);
④中国越来越富有、强大……
要求:1.词数80左右;
2.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.______________________________________________________________
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[学生习作]
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.More and more programmes of Chinese learning and competitions are on TV.More than 200 Confucius Institutes have been set up in over 60 countries.More and more foreign students come to China to learn Chinese every year.
There are three main reasons why Chinese is so popular in the world.First,China has a long history and rich culture,which many foreigners are interested in.Second,China is getting richer and stronger.Last but not least,many largescale events let the world learn China better.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,全面翔实地分析“汉语热”这一现象,并具体分析了其原因。
2.该篇写作能够使用定语从句等高级句式,同时使用first,second,last but not least等连接词,使得文章更加连贯通畅,是一篇上乘的学生习作。
[升格作文]
Chinese Rush
As a Chinese,I'm very proud of the popularity of Chinese in the world.There are more and more programmes of Chinese learning and Chinese competitions on TV.More than 200 Confucius Institutes have been set up in over 60 countries.The number of foreign students who come to China to learn Chinese increases every year.
Why is Chinese becoming so popular in the world? There are three main reasons,I think.First,China has a long history and rich culture.Many foreigners are interested in them.Second,China is getting richer and stronger.Last but not least,many largescale events let the world learn China better.
随着手机功能日益增多,越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动,成为“手机控”。假定你是某校学生,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,向某英文报投稿,谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
要求:
1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右;
3.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:“手机控”(phone freaks)
Today,many people,especially young people,are phone freaks._________
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【参考范文】
Today,many people,especially young people,are phone freaks.They are addicted to their mobile phones,so they have less time to communicate with their friends and family members.They often feel anxious without mobile phones.
Depending on mobile phones too much is a kind of illness,which is bad for our health.Looking at the mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes and it is also a waste of time and gets in the way of study.
Phones can help us a lot.If we can use them at proper time and proper situations,they can help us have a better and happier life.