高中英语外研版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 6 Survival多媒体教学课件ppt

写一篇生存故事

本单元的写作项目是写一篇生存故事，属于记叙文写作范畴。

[基本框架]

1．开头(the beginning)——引出故事；

2．主体(the middle)——具体过程；

3．结尾(the ending)——自我感受。

[常用词块]

1．set off for a place动身去一个地方

2．an unforgettable experience一次难忘的经历

3．look back on the past回首往事

4．remind me of the event让我想起那件事

5．show our determination 表明我们的决心

6．be worth having a try值得一试

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．I did have an unforgettable experience when I was a child.

当我还是孩子的时候，确实有一次难忘的经历。

2．The story reminded me of the own experience in an earthquake.

这个故事让我想起了自己在一次地震中的经历。

★丰满主体

3．When I came to myself，I found I was lying in bed in hospital.

当我苏醒的时候，我发现躺在医院的床上。

4．When I just went to the middle of the street，a car suddenly appeared and came directly toward me.

当我到了路中间的时候，一辆小汽车突然出现了，直接冲我来了。

5．Hearing the cry，I immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water without taking off my clothes.

听到哭声，我立即冲到岸边，没脱衣服就跳进了水里。

★余味结尾

6．The girl's parents were very grateful to me and many people were greatly moved by my deeds.

女孩的父母非常感激我，许多人都被我的行为所感动。

假如你是某中学高一学生赵明，不久前经历了一次地震，你和邻居一起救出了一个受困的人。请你根据下面四幅图片的顺序，写出事情的全过程。

注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．词数80左右。

提示词：锹，铲spade；担架stretcher

    Last Saturday morning，a severe earthquake suddenly happened.____________

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【学生习作】

Last Saturday morning，a severe earthquake suddenly happened.I was reading in the room.Suddenly the light，clock，and many things inside were shaking.Someone shouted“Earthquake！” I rushed outside without hesitation.

Outdoors I heard a crash behind me and someone shouting“Help”．I looked back and found a house had collapsed.I，together with my neighbors，tried to find the one trapped in the ruins，using spades and even our hands.We found an old man，his leg broken. We carried him to a safe place on a stretcher and waited for an ambulance.

We are tired but we were glad we had saved the old man.

点评：

1．条理清晰；

2．要点齐全；

3．缺少有效的衔接；

4．句式较为简单，没有复杂句式。

【升格作文】

Last Saturday morning，a severe earthquake suddenly happened.I was reading in the room when the light，clock，and many things inside were shaking.Meanwhile，someone shouted“Earthquake！” I rushed outside without hesitation.

Outdoors I heard a crash behind me and someone shouting“Help”．I looked back and found a house had collapsed.I，together with my neighbors，tried to find the one trapped in the ruins，using spades and even our hands.After a few minutes，we found an old man，his leg broken. We carried him to a safe place on a stretcher and waited for an ambulance.

Though tired，we were glad we had saved the old man.

你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。下面5幅图画表现了野外训练的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。

注意：日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：指南针：compass 手电筒：flashlight 急救包：first­aid kit 宿营地：campsite

Saturday Apr.20th Sunny

    Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.________________

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We learned to use knowledge gained in class training to solve problems.It was quite an experience for us both，which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.

【参考范文】

Saturday Apr.20th Sunny

Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.

Early in the morning，we set out.Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack and in mine there was a flashlight，a map，a knife，a first­aid kit，some matches，candles，food，and clothes.

On the way to the campsite，we climbed a hill，and then we swam across a river，pushing the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river.As we got into a forest，we lost our way.Luckily，we found the right direction with the compass.By the time we arrived at the campsite，it had already been dark.Li Ming then put up the tent，and I made a fire and started cooking.The two of us spent the night in the forest.

We learned to use knowledge gained in class training to solve problems.It was quite an experience for us both，which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.