高中英语Unit 2 Iconic Attractions教课内容课件ppt
展开描写标志性动物
本单元的写作任务是描写标志性动物。这种类型的文章属于介绍类说明文,是对一种标志性动物进行说明或描述的写作。
它通常要求抓住该动物的主要特征进行描述,写作内容可以包括体态描述、栖息地、食物、现状等的说明,要求语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,描写详略得当。这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
[基本框架]
1.开头:主要介绍要描写的标志性动物及目的。
2.主体:详细描写标志性动物的主要特征。
3.结尾:进行总结概括。
注意事项:
1.仔细审题:明确要描写的标志性动物,要主次分明,抓住其主要特征。
2.选择合理的说明顺序,分层进行说明,注意条理清晰。
[常用词块]
1.rare species稀有物种
2.care for them关心它们
3.take active measures采取积极的措施
4.protect the wildlife保护野生动物
5.prevent them from being hurt防止他们受到伤害
6.be polite and friendly to visitors对游客都很有礼貌和友好
7.on the edge of dying out在死亡的边缘
8.do something to change this situation做些什么来改变这种情况
9.in the southwest of China 在中国西南部
10.have the responsibility to do something有责任做某事
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.Animals are our close friends.
动物是我们亲密的朋友。
2.Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year.
现在每年都有越来越多的野生动物濒临灭绝。
★正文佳句
1.Second,we would like to promote the people's awareness of protecting wild animals.
第二,我们要提高人们保护野生动物的意识。
2.The species cannot naturally survive outside bamboo forests which are cool and wet.
这种物种不能在凉爽潮湿的竹林之外自然生存。
3.Why not donate some money or do something nice to change this situation?
为什么不捐点钱或者做点好事来改变这种情况呢?
★余味结尾
1.I am strongly convinced that we will live with them in peace with your help.
我坚信,有了你们的帮助,我们将与它们和平共处。
2.Keep in mind that protecting animals is protecting ourselves and thus it is our duty to do it well.
请记住,保护动物就是保护我们自己,因此做好这件事是我们的责任。
假如你是李华,请你给学校英文报纸的“动物世界”栏目写一篇80词左右的说明文,介绍一下我国特有的动物大熊猫。
[学生习作]
The panda is native of centralwestern and southwestern China.It is easy recognized by its large black patches around the eyes,over the ears,and across its round body.It has a diet which is 99% bamboo.It may eat honey,oranges,and bananas when available.It is a conservationreliant endangered species.Reports show that the number of wild pandas is on the rise.Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas live in the wild peacefully. | 点评: 该习作语言准确,而且使用了省略句、复合句等,总体来说是一篇不错的作文,但也存在一些问题。 1.文章没有分段,缺少框架意识,把所有内容混搭在一起,给阅卷老师判卷增加了难度,从而影响了得分。 2.文中出现了一些简单的语言错误。如is native of应该是is native to;easy recognized应该是easily recognized。 3.句式不够丰富多变,且衔接不够顺畅。 |
[升格作文]
The panda is a mammal classified in the bear family,native to centralwestern and southwestern China.
It is easily recognized by its large,distinctive black patches around the eyes,over the ears,and across its round body.It has a diet which is 99% bamboo and it may eat honey,oranges,and bananas when available.It is a conservationreliant endangered species.
Although reports show that the number of wild pandas is on the rise,scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild peacefully.
你校校报的英语角栏目要举行以“人类与动物和谐相处”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章,向校报投稿。内容包括:
1.介绍你的宠物;
2.喜欢它的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已为你写出。
My Dog
【参考范文】
My Dog
I have a pet dog,whose name is Pang Dun.She is covered with long,brown curly hair and looks like a Teddy Bear.She is cute and can do a few tricks.Now we have been living together for three years and she has become part of our family.
Every day when I come home,she always jumps up to me happily,with her eyes opening wide and her tail wagging.She is my faithful listener.As time goes by,the relationship between us has become closer and closer.Therefore,I think of her as an important member in my family.I really enjoy her company.
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