高中英语人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第四册Unit 1 Science Fiction课文配套课件ppt

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科幻故事类记叙文写科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程。想象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感。故事类记叙文的写作要素：1．要交代清楚五要素的内容，即：where，when，what，who，how。2．事件可按时间或空间顺序叙述。3．时态通常是与过去有关的时态。[基本框架]第一部分：介绍故事的开始。第二部分：讲述故事发展的过程。第三部分：叙述故事的结局及意义。注意事项：1．要根据题目要求和提示，确定好主题并围绕主题展开合理而全面的想象，切忌根据自己的喜好而随意想象。2．要注意人称及时态的正确运用。3．要有丰富的表达方式，大胆使用一些较高级词汇及较复杂句式。[常用词块]1．science fiction films科幻电影2．search the universe探索宇宙3．artificial intelligence人工智能4．have a household robot拥有一个家用机器人5．more and more intelligent machines越来越多的智能机器6．the rapid development of information technology信息技术的飞速发展7．this highly­civilized creature这种高度文明的生物8．require continuous diligence and progress需要不断的努力和进步9．advanced devices and technology先进的设备和技术10．motivate us to reach for more激励着我们去追求更多[常用语句]★精彩开头1. It is seven o'clock in the morning when I wake up on April 4，2040.当我在2040年4月4日醒来时，已经是早上7点了。2．Once upon a time，a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.从前，有个年轻人在树林里散步，看见地上有一枚闪闪发光的戒指。★正文佳句1. Though the scientists never saw the real aliens，I still believe that besides human beings，life must exist in the universe.虽然科学家们从未见过真正的外星人，但我仍然相信除了人类之外，宇宙中存在另外的生命。2．When intelligent machines can do the thinking，will our brain get lazy and regress?当智能机器可以思考时，我们的大脑会变得懒惰和退化吗？3．I was so puzzled that I couldn't believe what I had seen.我很困惑，我不能相信我所看到的。★余味结尾1. In the future，people may heat their homes with atomic power.在将来，人们可以用原子能为房屋供暖。2．In a word，my life will be richer and more colourful.总之，我的生活会更加丰富多彩。你校校报英语角举办科幻故事征文比赛，请你写一个关于飞碟的故事参加比赛。内容包括：1．时间，地点；2．主要情节；3．你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2．故事题目已经给出，不计入总词数。The Saucer                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        [学生习作]The SaucerIt was hot at night.I couldn't fall sleep in the tent.I walked out of the tent to cool down.The sky was clear and stars were shining.Suddenly a bright light went across the sky.A flying saucer appeared near my tent.It looked like the one in the book I have read during the day.I quickly hid behind a stone and saw an alien come down through a round door.He walked in my tent and came out with something in his hand.The UFO then flew away.I ran into my tent.I found that my Pad was gone.I couldn't believe that I had seen.I decided that the next time I would talk to the alien.点评：全文结构清晰，意义连贯，达到预期的写作目的。但也存在一些问题：1.词数太多，达到了123，远远超过了要求的词数80左右。2.文中出现了一些简单的语言错误。如fall sleep应该是fall asleep；have read应该是had read；walked in my tent应该是walked into my tent；that I had seen 应该是what I had seen。3.词语不够亮丽，高级词汇太少。4.句式不够丰富多变，只用了一些简单句，缺少高级句式。[升格作文]The SaucerIt was hot at night and I couldn't fall asleep in the tent，so I crawled out of the tent and walked around to cool down.Suddenly a bright light flashed across the sky and then near my tent appeared a flying saucer.I quickly hid behind a stone and saw an alien walk into my tent and come out with something in his hand.The saucer then flew away.I was so puzzled that I couldn't believe what I had seen.But I decided that the next time the alien came，I would talk to him.某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头(不计入总词数)，续写一篇80词左右的幻想小故事参赛。Once upon a time，a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.He just stood，wondering and then the ring said，“Young man，a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead.If you are brave enough to rescue her，you will gain happiness.Put on me and I will help you.”                                                                                 【参考范文】Once upon a time，a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground.He just stood，wondering and then the ring said，“Young man，a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead.If you are brave enough to rescue her，you will gain happiness.Put on me and I will help you.”The young man didn't hesitate to put the ring on his finger，surprisingly discovering that he disappeared，invisible to other people.On approaching the castle，he put on the ring，and entered the castle.He learned that the girl couldn't move forever unless someone destroyed the witch's magical stick.With the help of the ring，he found the magical stick in a golden box，and destroyed it successfully，thus removing the magic spell put on the girl by the witch.The young man，together with the girl，defeated the witch，and they lived a happy life together.