2023年高考英语二轮复习易错题精选（新高考专用）18书面表达-应用文（Word版附解析）

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专题18 书面表达 应用文
备战2023高考英语考试易错题（新高考专用）（解析版）

一 易错题类型

【易错题01】 不一致
１．主谓不一致
When he have money, he often buys what he want to.
【答案】 have 改为has; want改为wants
【错误分析】 没有注重英语中谓语动词需要和主语保持时态，语态，人称和数的一致。单纯的按汉语意思来翻译。
【写作思路】句子的核心谓语动词时刻保持人称一致，时态，语态合理运用，不可按汉语直译。
2. 前后指代不一致
We can also know the society by serving yourself.
【答案】 we 改为you; 或yourself改为ourselves
【错误分析】 句中人称代词 we 和反身代词yourself指代不一 致。
【写作思路】 保持前后指代一致。We can also know the society by serving it ourselves./ You can also know the society by serving it yourself。
３．句子不完整或者多词
There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
【答案】 将for 改为小写，前面句号改为逗号。
【错误分析】“For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。
【写作思路】There are many ways to know the society， for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.在句子写完以后，想加些补充说明时需要考虑句子结构和成分是否完整。
Not only this activity enrich your school life but also it can broaden your horizons.
【答案】 在only后面加can。
【错误分析】本句属于特殊句式中的倒装句。助动词漏用，，没有倒装。
【写作思路】Not only 用于句子开头时，句子使用部分倒装句型。助动词用于主语之前。故Not only can this activity enrich your school life but also it can broaden your horizons.
For the people who they are diligent and kind, they use money only to buy what they need.
【答案】去掉they
【错误分析】定语从句中关系代词充当成分，重复使用句子成分。
【写作思路】关系代词who充当定语从句中的主语，定语从句中多了人称代词。故For the people who are diligent and kind, they use money only to buy what they need.

4．词性误用
Sincere, I hope this activity will be of great benefit to you.
【答案】 在only后面加can。
【错误分析】词性误用一般表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等
【写作思路】遣词造句时，需要考虑词性与修饰的关系。故Sincerely, I hope this activity will be of great benefit to you.
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.
【答案】 将across改为was crossing
【错误分析】 across是介词，不能误用作动词。
【写作思路】 The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.
5．指代不清
Lily was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
【答案】 将her 改为my sister
【错误分析】本句话没有明确两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。代词与被指代的人或物关系不清或者先后所用的代词不一致。
【写作思路】写作是逻辑意思以及句子前后指代应当清晰一致。故 Lily was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

【易错题02】 低级词汇集中

1. 动词类
简单词汇 attend，cause, help, consider, consider, happen, have, improve, master, realize, remember, should, thank, use, tend, understand, can’t, decide, lie in, think of, try one’s best,
高级词汇 take part in/ be involved in/participate in ; lead to/result in/contribute to/ give rise to; do sb. a favor/ lend sb a helping hand; take ...into consideration/account; occur/ come about; possess/ improve ; promote; have a good command of; be aware of ; bear/keep in mind; be supposed to ; appreciate/ be grateful to sb.; make use of/ take advantage of; have a tendency to do sth.; make sense of/ figure out; have trouble/difficulty in doing sth; determine to do sth; be determined to do sth.; be located in /be situated in; sth occurs to sb.; spare no effort to do sth.;
【动词分析】 选词简单，不够高级，汉语意思直白翻译。
【选词思路】 注重积累，短语优先选择。
2. 名词类
简单词汇 chance; choice ; people ; result; shortcoming; more and more people; all kinds of
高级词汇 opportunity; alternative; individuals; consequence; drawback; an increasing number of people; a wide range of; a wide variety of
典例剖析
(2022 全国高考乙卷满分作文) Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
【高级词汇】an increasing number代替many
【选词思路】 注重积累，选词应当使用能够吸引阅卷老师目光的高级词汇和短语， 使句子出类拔萃。
3. 形容词类
简单词汇 good; difficult; enough; free; important; lucky; popular; proper; rich; tired; be angry with; be busy with; be bored with; be very happy; be interested in
高级词汇 outstanding/distinguished/ brilliant; challenging; adequate; available; essential/vital/ significant; fortunate; enjoy great popularity; appropriate; abundant; exhausted/ worn out; be annoyed with; be occupied with/ bury oneself in; be fed up with; be wild with joy; have a great passion for; be crazy about ; sth appeal to sb; be fascinated by
4. 副词类
简单词汇 finally; hardly; immediately; nowadays; so; suddenly; very
高级词汇 eventually/ ultimately; barely; without hesitation/delay; currently; consequently/therefore; all of a sudden; extremely
5. 介词类
简单词汇 considering; during; in fact; in a word
高级词汇 in view of; in the course of; as a matter of fact; to summarize/in conclusion/to sum up

【易错题02】 句子呆板不生动

1. 运用介词（短语）
Because he helped me, I finished the task on time.
→ Thank to his help, I accomplished the task on time.
【原句分析】 句型呆板，缺乏灵动性。
【写作思路】 注重积累，短语优先选择。可以运用介词短语对句子进行转化，可以使句子简洁有新意。
【知识拓展】 常用介词短语有because of, as well as, by doing; through, but for, despite, in spite of, on/upon thanks to等。
典例剖析
( 2022年全国高考新高考I卷应用文写作 ) The program with the theme “Culture differences” is intended to arouse students’ interest in different cultures especially western culture about American cuisine.
【选词思路】介词with短语作后置定语，增加句子的变化性，彰显出灵活的句子结构运用能力。
2. 运用定语从句和名词性从句
He has two sons and both of them are doctors. → He has two sons , both of whom are doctors.
We all know that he is a warm-hearted man. → What is known to us all is that he is a warm hearted man.
【原句分析】 句型较为简单，只运用了比较容易的并列句和宾语从句。
【写作思路】 不改变句意，运用定语从句和名词性从句可以对并列句进行升华，可以使句子脱颖而出。
3. 运用非谓语短语对祈使句和从句进行转化
He was told many times, but he didn’t memorize the rule. → Told many times, he didn’t memorize the rule.
They entered the forest in search of the missing boy. → They entered the forest to search for the missing boy.
As I was lying on the grass, I thought of my brother who was studying abroad. → Lying on the grass, I thought of my brother studying abroad.
【原句分析】 句型运用了比较容易的并列句和介词短语，比较单一。
【写作思路】 一篇高分文章应当多种句型运用丰富，非谓语的熟练运用是能体现高水准的表达方式之一，可以转化祈使句，并列句和从句。
二 举一反三

1. （2022年全国乙卷书面表达）
......It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English.
However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar.
【佳句赏析】 句意：事实证明，学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐，而不是像阅读书籍等传统方法。 然而，在我看来，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，因为这是增加词汇量和加强对语法理解的最好方法之一。句型运用It turns out that灵活生动。动词短语attach greater importance to 代替pay attention to高级不单调，实为背诵佳句。下段运用介词短语from my point of view于主语之前，句子显得很有新意。使用名词性从句作主语，写作中实为加分项。
2. (2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写)
... I quietly said, “David, if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh, that’s not a good enough reason.
【选词思路】熟练使用形容词enough; 副词quietly; 连词if, because等引导从句，句子生动不简单。
【佳句赏析】句意：我平静地说：“大卫，如果你因为害怕有人会笑而不跑步，那是一个足够好的理由。”if 引导条件状语从句，because引导原因状语从句，以及句子中形容词和副词的运用都显示出作者很扎实的基本功，适合背诵模仿。
3. (2022年全国高考新高考II卷)
This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.
【选词思路】 句子中高级词汇和短语熟练运用，amazing, share...with; have trouble in doing; plenty of; deal with。
【佳句赏析】句意：这是一个很棒的项目，你可以与学生们分享你的想法。现在，当他们在学习英语方面遇到困难时，很多学生都很想知道如何处理它。where引导的定语从句先行词表示抽象地点的program, 这是高考中语法填空的常考知识点，作者能将其运用于写作中，实乃妙句。When后运用了省略句，以及句子中大量的短语，都为作文加分亮点。
模拟题通关

应用文
1. (2022年全国高考新高考I卷写作)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【满分范文】One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
I am writing to invite you to attend our program “Talk and Talk” in our school broadcasting station at 7:00 p.m. next Friday. The program with the theme “Culture differences” is intended to arouse students’ interest in different cultures especially western culture about American cuisine.
As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your opinion will be of importance. In the program, you can communicate with our school students, which not only provides a platform for students to relieve their pressure and add spice to their dull routine, but also inspires their interest in western culture.
I’d appreciate it if you could spare your time to join us. An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
【佳作赏析】 第一段开门见山表达写信目的I am writing to invite you to ...。 紧接着便是节目话题介绍The program with the theme “Culture differences” is intended to arouse students’ interest in different cultures especially western culture about American cuisine.
第二段第一句表明邀请参加的目的As our distinguished fore.... 接着展开描写参加活动的意义In the program, you can communicate ...。其中倒装句not only...but also是一大亮点。
最后一段再次邀请.I’d appreciate it if you...。

2. (2022年全国高考新高考II卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作赏析】 1.句型“自从......以来多久了”It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established.
2. 省略句when having trouble的运用。
3. 短语搭配运用灵活share... with; have trouble in doing sth; urge to do sth; be available;
4. 虚拟语气句式运用I’d appreciate it if you...
3.（2022年1月浙江卷）
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua

【满分范文】Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作赏析】
1. 句型表示“自从......以来多久了”It has been a year since you came back to Ireland.
2. 定语从句 when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.
3. 强调句型 It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together,
4. 非限制性定语从句through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.
5. 名词性从句中主语从句和表语从句What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.
6. 让步状语从句Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year,
7. 短语灵活运用如：share...with; am pleased to ；are leading a happy life ； keep in touch .

5. ( 2022湖南雅礼中学测试卷）
假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 提出学习中文建议；
3. 期待与祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Muhammad,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】Dear Muhammad,
Welcome to be an exchange student at our school next year. As to how to learn Chinese, here come my tips.
First, you might as well take a Chinese course to lay a solid foundation. What’s more, it is a wise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs, which will enable you to access standard and authentic Chinese. Plus, befriending warmhearted Chinese friends around you is sure to better your oral Chinese. Meanwhile, it can enrich your knowledge of Chinese customs. Finally, I suggest you try e-mailing me in Chinese.
I hope my suggestions above may benefit you. Hope you will make sufficient progress in Chinese soon. I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作赏析】
1. Plus, not only is befriending warmhearted Chinese friends around you sure to better your oral Chinese, but also it can enrich your knowledge of Chinese customs.
2.What’s more, it is a wise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs, which will enable you to access standard and authentic Chinese. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3. Finally, I suggest you try e-mailing me in Chinese. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
4.词汇积累：
至于：as to→as for；
建议：tip/suggestion→advice；
明智的：wise→advisable；
此外：what’s more→besides

6.（2022年全国甲卷书面表达）
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【one possible version】
Our Oceans，Our Responsibility
Do you know June 8, which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chinese youngsters, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans?
The ocean is the home to all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. So we should shoulder responsibility to protect it. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more, to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection.
Do you agree with me? If so, let’s hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.（165）
【佳作赏析】
1. 运用定语从句which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chinese youngsters, but also ...， 并在其中穿插关联词组not only...but also...。
2. 目的状语To care for the ocean is to care for our future.中to do 不定式的运用。
3. 熟练运用短语arouse one’s awareness ...; be rich in; care for; to begin with; what’s more; in accordance with; take an active part in; hand in hand等。
7.（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．学习活动状况描述：
2．简单评论；
3．你的建议。

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducted. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking up 12% .
It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English.
However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly.
【佳作赏析】文中加分句型和短语都能运用自如。
1. There be句型的运用There are many things we can do to learn English well.
2. As引导的定语从句 As can be clearly seen from the statistics
3. 动名词短语作主语 appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50%
4. 定语从句who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning.
5. 动名词短语做主语Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%...
6. 句型It turns out that students...... 的运用.
7. 名词性从句中主语从句的运用what benefits students most is reading English books,
8.（2022重庆一中模拟）
假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。
内容包括：
1. 表示同意；
2. 计划拍摄的内容（1~2点）；
3. 邀请对方提建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear James,
How is everything going? It’s my great privilege to record a short video about my campus life for your classmates. I’m writing to tell you what will be included in the video.
First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture．In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life．
I wish such a video could live up to your expectations．If there is anything that needs improving, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。
1. First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture．(使用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作定语)
2. In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life．(使用了动名词短语做主语和from which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
3. 词汇积累：
荣幸：privilege
以……为中心 ：focus on
此外：In addition
需要：need
9.（2022湖南周南中学测试）
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Kim将于下周访问你校，你想邀请他参与下周学校组织的“劳动实践周”（Labour Week）活动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 邀请Kim参加活动；
2. 介绍活动目的和内容。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；       2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Kim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Kim,
It’s great to know you will visit our school next week and I’d like to invite you to join in the activity—Labour Week in our school.
The event, which will last a week as scheduled, is intended to raise our awareness of labour and remind us of how valuable and respectable hard work is. Various activities will be organized, ranging from planting vegetables on the school farm to sorting garbage in an eco-friendly way. Besides, each class will hold a meeting with the theme of a deeper reflection on this activity at the end of the week. I’m sure that you will enjoy this unforgettable experience and benefit a lot.   
Wish you a good journey and hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作赏析】
1. which引导的非限制性定语从句The event, which will last a week as scheduled, is intended to raise our awareness of labour and remind us of how valuable and respectable hard work is.
2. 运用了that引导的宾语从句I’m sure that you will enjoy this unforgettable experience and benefit a lot.
3. 词汇积累：
参加：join in
提高：raise
此外：besides
各种各样的：various
10 .（2022福建厦门测试卷）
你校英语俱乐部将要举办“职业规划”主题分享会，请你结合个人情况写一篇稿件，内容包括：
1. 理想职业；
2. 个人优势；
3. 相关准备。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Map Out My Career Path
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【答案】                                                                                                                     
Map Out My Career Path
Hello everyone, it is my great honor and pleasure to share with you my ideas on future career plan. As we all know, our future career has a great effect on our life, which requires our deep consideration.
As for me, I am determined to be a computer scientist in the future. There are several reasons for my choice. Firstly, I have been interested in computer science since I was a little boy and have spent a lot of time on self-teaching. I can say for sure that I am highly expert at computer knowledge. More importantly, computer science is closely related to most fields of science and has a deciding role in one country’s overall development. I am willing to combine my career with our country’s development and make my contributions.
To conclude, I have already made up my minds to study it with all my efforts and make use of all my spare time to learn related knowledge to prepare for my university study.
Thanks for listening.
【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于参加的国际高中生论坛，就自己未来的职业规划发表演讲。
1. 复合句More importantly, computer science is closely related to most fields of science, which has a deciding role in one country’s overall development.
2. 运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句As we all know, our future career has a great effect on our life, which requires our deep consideration.
3. 运用了since引导的时间状语从句Firstly, I have been interested in computer science since I was a little boy and have spent a lot of time on self-teaching.
4. 词汇积累
荣幸：honor
影响：effect
最后：to conclude
下定决心：make up one’s minds to