【同步练习】译林版初二英语上册 Unit8 单元话题满分范文必背

这是一份【同步练习】译林版初二英语上册 Unit8 单元话题满分范文必背，共9页。
Unit 8 Natural disasters单元话题满分范文必背1．暴风雨是常见的自然灾害之一。某社区正在开展主题为“What should we do before a rainstorm?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些居民。请据此用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。居民主要观点你的观点*买足够的食物*尽量不要外出*确保收音机正常工作*准备手电筒、蜡烛和火柴……要求：1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；2.词数：80左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Last week  , I did a survey about what we should do before a rainstorm. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Last week  , I did a survey about what we should do before a rainstorm.Many people say the first thing is to buy enough food. Then we should try not to go outside because the rainstorm may come at any time. It’s also important to make sure the radio works well so that we can know the information about the rainstorm. What’s more  , we should prepare flashlights  , candles and matches for the coming rainstorm.In my opinion  , we also need to prepare some medicine and warm clothes.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给提示内容写一篇短文，内容是参与主题为“What should we do before a rainstorm?”的讨论，并阐述自己的观点，注意提示内容要写全。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，第三人称为主；文章开头已经给出，第二段写大家认为暴风雨前应该做什么，第三段写自己的观点。写作时涵盖要点，不要遗漏，要求语句通顺，无单词语法错误，可适当发挥使行文连贯。2．根据以下提示写一篇有关自然灾害的文章(80词左右)。1. 4月21日，一场龙卷风(tornado)袭击了湖南衡阳(Hengyang);2.一开始，天变黑，大家能听到一阵奇怪的噪音，很害怕，无人知道正发生什么;3.几分钟后，人们听到雷声，看到闪电，然后一切开始移动，最后，它突然停止;4.在这次灾难中，7人死亡，2400多房屋倒塌，数千人无处居住，学生无处上课;5.灾难后，人们开始互救，许多警察来帮忙;6.如果大家都乐于帮助需要帮助的人，世界将充满爱。                                      【答案】On April 21st  , a tornado hit Hengyang in Hunan.At the beginning  , the sky became dark. Everyone could hear a strange noise. They were very afraid. But nobody knew what was happening. A few minutes later  , people heard the thunder and saw the lightning. Then everything began to move. Finally  , it suddenly stopped.During the disaster  , seven people lost their lives. Over 2  ,400 houses fell down. Thousands of people had nowhere to live. The students had no classrooms to have lessons.   After the disaster  , people began to help each other. Many policemen came to help. I think everyone should be willing to help people in need  , and the world will be full of love.【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据提示描写发生在湖南衡阳的一场龙卷风，题目中给出了具体的写作内容，详细叙述了这次灾害发生的过程以及灾后的影响，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知，这篇短文记叙的是过去发生的一件事，故全文应以一般过去时为主来叙述，注意应将动词变为过去式，尤其应注意不规则动词的过去式形式。文章最后的感受可以用现在时态。写作中应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能依据提示逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语、句型，句式以简单句为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升文章档次，可穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他复杂句式。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求和提示，介绍了发生在湖南衡阳的这次自然灾害。首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中所要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。文章中作者按照时间的顺序，描述了灾难发生前、灾难中的情景以及灾难造成的损失和影响，并发表了自己的感受。层次清晰，结构有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时为主，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。文章中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如But nobody knew what was happening. 、A few minutes later  , people heard the thunder and saw the lightning.、Thousands of people had nowhere to live. The students had no classrooms to have lessons、I think everyone should be willing to help people in need  , and the world will be full of love.等。3．地震是一种自然灾害。学会在不同的地方用不同的自救方法非常重要。请结合下表内容，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一些自救常识。注意表达规范，书写工整。【答案】 An earthquake is a kind of natural disaster. It may lead to serious results and make lots of people lose their homes or even lives. So it is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.          If you are at home  , it's safe to hide under the bed or strong tables. Cover your head and arms. If you are in a classroom  , stay under the desk. After the shake stops  , you can run outside as soon as possible. When you are outside  , you should quickly run to an open space. Stay away from buildings or trees. When you are driving a car  , stop it by the roadside at once  , and stay inside. Never stop your car near a bridge.          Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an earthquake starts.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。结合所给材料，介绍地震来临时，我们要掌握的一些自救常识。根据内容可知本文主要考查一般现在时态、条件状语从句和祈使句，主要人称为单数第二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，注意一些常见句式的应用和短语，比如：If……，It is +形容词 +for sb. to do sth.；Remember to do sth.；keep calm。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。【亮点说明】这篇短文介绍地震来临时，我们要掌握的一些自救常识。并且并包含了图表中所列举的全部信息。其中条件状语，固定句型和短语的使用准确、代词运用恰当，介绍时条理清晰，有条不紊，是一篇不错的英语范文。4．结合你所经历的一次自然灾害写一篇短文，提示内容如下  ,省略号标出的地方请发挥几句。去年6月25日，一场暴雨袭击了我的家乡。因为雨大，李老师让我们早点回家。在回家的路上，我看见许多人在车站等车。一阵大风吹跑了我的雨伞，我几乎跌倒。当我回到家，我浑身湿透了。大雨下了一夜，第二天……(请发挥1-2句话)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A strong rainstorm hit my hometown. It happened on June 25th last year. I was at school. Because it rained heavily  , Mr Li asked us to go home early. On my way home  , I saw many people waiting for the bus at the station. A strong wind blew away my umbrella. I nearly fell over. When I got home  , I was all wet. It rained for the whole night. On the second day  , the rainwater was everywhere. The traffic was very bad because of the rainstorm. We were all late for school.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。考点：提纲类作文5．请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。1.8月17日（星期六）发生了一次山崩（landslide）；2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生；3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开；4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞；5.这是房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了；6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文There was a landslide on Saturday  , 17th August. After two days of heavy rain  , the landslide happened in the morning.A girl was at home with his mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave the flat. Because of the heavy rain  , he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly.Suddenly the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning  , they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. They girl felt very sad.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，根据汉语提示的要点写一篇报道。写作时要包括山崩的时间、地点、过程及危害。2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述事件内容；时态采用一般过去时。叙述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且事件发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。6．为了让同学们了解地震的有关知识，做到防患于未然，某中学成立了“地震自救知识”社团。假如你是社团的一名成员，请根据下列提示写一份英语稿件，向同学们宣传地震自救知识，做好自我保护。◆在室内，不要从高楼跳下去，远离窗户与大家具，远离火源，躲在坚固的床或桌下；地震停止，立刻从楼里逃生，逃生时不要用电梯。◆在室外，远离楼房、路灯、高压线、桥梁和树木；在山中注意落石；在海滩尽快远离大海并转移到高处。要求：1.包含信息提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。2．词数80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hey  , friends! We don't know when earthquakes will happen but we need to know what to do during an earthquake. Here's my advice:When we're inside  , don't jump out of high buildings. Stay away from windows and heavy furniture. Hide under a strong bed or table. When the earthquake stops  , leave the building quickly. Remember not to use the lift.When we're outside  , move away from buildings  , street lights  , power lines  , bridges and trees. If we're in the mountains  , pay attention to falling rocks. If we're on the beach  , run away from the sea and go to higher ground at once.The most important thing is to keep calm. Follow the rules we learned and then we can be safe and help others.【解析】1. 题干解读：本题要求介绍地震自救知识，体裁属于说明文；写作时需结合提示信息分室内和室外进行介绍，提出自我保护的建议。2. 写作指导：本文的写作对象是学生，考生宜用第一人称we展开介绍，显得亲切；时态用一般现在时。写作内容需包含信息提示中的所有信息，但不可翻译材料。写作中，可从室内和室外两个方面作介绍，使叙述完整、条理清晰、表达流畅。7．根据提示，以“A Disaster in My Hometown”为题写一篇短文，第四句发挥1—2点。1．2013年七月家乡发生了洪水，把村庄冲走了。水覆盖了路面。2．人们可以在街上划船，在家捕鱼。雨下了将近半个月，许多人被困，无法上学和上班。3．幸运的是，当地政府为我们提供了食物和水。4．洪水真可怕啊！我们应该……保护我们的地球。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Disaster in My HometownA terrible flood hit my hometown in July  , 2013. The flood washed the village away. The water covered the roads. People could even boat in the streets and catch fish in their houses. It rained for nearly half a month Many people were trapped. They couldn't go to school or go to work. Luckily  , the local government provided us with food and water. How terrible the flood is! We should plant more trees to protect our earth.【解析】英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。wash   away冲走8．请你根据下面提示  ,以A landslide（山崩）为题，写一篇短文。1.上周一早上，在连续下了两天大雨之后发生了山崩(landslide)。2.我和妈妈在家，爸爸下午回来。雨很大。他叫我和妈妈赶快带伞离开。3就在那时，房子开始摇晃，我们非常害怕，迅速跑开了。4.第二天上午回家时，我们发现房子没有了，到处是碎玻璃和砖块，我们感到很悲伤。A   landslide【答案】Last Monday morning  , after two days’ heavy rain  , a landslide happened. I was at home with my mother. Father came back in the afternoon. It was raining heavily/hard. He asked us to leave quickly with umbrellas. Just then  , the house started to shake. We were very afraid and ran away quickly. The following morning  , we went back home. We found that there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. We felt very sad.【解析】这是一篇写洪灾的作文，英语作文要注意人称和时态，主要用第一人称和一般过去时态；注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。9．冬日来临，一场突如其来的暴风雪上周袭击了淮安。请以“Snowstorm hit Huai’an”为题写一篇80字左右短文介绍这次暴风雪的过程。内容包括以下要点：1.这场暴风雪何时降临的；2.暴风雪来临时你及周边人的情况；3.暴风雪结束后你们进行了哪些自救工作。Snowstorm hit Huai’an________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A snowstorm hit Nanjing on Wednesday  , 29th January. It got worse in the afternoon. I was at school and Mr Wang told us to go home early. On my way home  , the weather was really terrible. We could only hear the wind. Snow continued to fall around us. Suddenly  , a strong wind came from behind. We lost our umbrellas in the wind and I nearly fell over. We could do nothing but walk slowly in the storm. At last  , we got on a bus and went home. The next day  , I heard the noise of traffic. I looked out of the window and saw people were in a hurry to remove the snow. 【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。10．近年来，世界多地自然灾害频发，引起了全球对环境保护以及动物保护的思考。假如你是李萍，要求你用英文写一封加入动物保护协会的申请信，要点如下表：姓名Li Ping学校/年级No. l Middle School/8电话0512-82835988邮箱8344506@ qq.com爱好拍摄大自然四季照片，例如，拍摄春天（或夏，秋，冬选一个季节）的……原因1.喜爱自然，想要更多地了解各种动物的习性；2.保护动物，使它们远离危险；3.加入该协会后将做……空闲每周日全天 要求：必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；词数：100词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Chairperson  ,I would like to join the Animal Protection Society.     __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely  ,Li Ping【答案】例文：Dear Chairperson  ,I would like to join the Animal Protection Society. I am Li Ping and I am a Grade 8 student. I study at No. 1 Middle School now. I like taking photos of the nature  , especially taking photos of Spring flowers. I want to join the society because I enjoy the nature. I want to learn more about the qualities of all kinds of animals. I also want to do something to protect the animals from danger. If I was lucky enough to join the society  , I would take action to protect the animals. First  , I will encourage more people to take part in the activities. Second  , I will tell people not to kill the animals for their fur. Finally  , I will advise the government to make laws and build more nature reserves for the wild animals.I am free every Sunday  , so I can take part in activities the whole day. Please call me at 0512-82835988 or email me at 8344506@ qq.com. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours sincerely  ,Li Ping【解析】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封申请信，开头和结尾已给出。要求根据表格内容来写一封加入动物保护协会的申请信，要求包括表格所有要点，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：该信应该用第一人称来描述个人信息；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述个人信息时，应描写细致、贴合实际、合情合理；信件需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。