Unit 4 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津译林版）

Unit 4 Do it yourself

单元话题满分范文必背

1．假如你叫Tom，是一名交换生，在美食主题活动班会上，需要你向大家介绍一下水果沙拉得制作过程。请以“How to make fruit salad”为题，向大家介绍如何做水果沙拉。

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【答案】参考范文：

How to make fruit salad

Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Here is one way to make fruit salad. Let me tell you.

To make fruit salad, we need one apple, two oranges, one fourth watermelon, three spoons of honey and one cup of yogurt. First, peel the apple and oranges and cut them up. Also cut the watermelon up. Next, put them into a big bowl. Then, pour the honey and yogurt into it. Finally, mix them all up.

Now the fruit salad is OK. It’s delicious. It’s time for us to enjoy it together.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧扣“水果沙拉”这个主题，合理地引出“如何制作”这个重点内容。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，描述制作过程时，使用祈使句更方便直观；写作时，需要保证过程完整、细致；同时注意衔接自然，条理清晰。

2．你觉得你健康吗?请你写一篇题为 “I Want to Be Healthy”的英语短文,谈谈你的想法。语句连贯，词数80个左右。

内容包括:

1 .健康的生活习惯的重要性;

2.你有哪些健康的或不健康的生活习惯;（饮食、锻炼和睡眠等方面）

3.你将如何做，以便让自己变得更健康;

4.健康的生活习惯将给你带来什么影响。

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【答案】例文：

I Want to Be Healthy

Three years ago, I often got up late and seldom had breakfast. I used to eat lots of junk food such as fried chicken, hamburgers and drinks like cola. I didn’t like eating fruits and vegetables. As a result, I was often ill. My parents were worried about me.

Later I learned some knowledge about healthy food. I got to know the importance of healthy food. Eating many fruits and vegetables is good for my healthy. I often run in the morning for an hour. And I exercise twice a week. I think it is necessary to have enough sleep. So I don’t stay up late. Now I am healthier than before.

I always remember: Eat the right food and keep healthy. I hope that everyone can keep fit.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，谈谈我如何保持健康的。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示，通过对比我的过去和现在的生活习惯，介绍我是如何保持健康的；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。

3．4月23日是世界读书日，各学校都开展“书香校园”读书系列活动，但目前一些中学生不重视阅读。请你根据表格内的提示写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析、提出建议并分享你的阅读体会。

要求：

1.词数90词左右。短文开头、结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: advantage好处As we all know reading makes a full man. But at present, only a few students do some reading after class. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope everyone can enjoy reading and be a good reader.

【答案】例文：

As we all know, reading makes a full man. But at present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.

Some students think they have too much homework and they are busy doing it every day. Others don't have a habit of reading. And they often spend their spare time on TV or the Internet.

However, reading has many advantages. By reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, reading can make our life more colorful. Also it can help us think better.

I like reading very much. I often read useful books for me. I often carry a book with me and do reading if I have time. I discuss with my classmates after reading. We share ideas with each other.

I hope everyone can enioy reading and be a good reader.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，按照表格中内容分析阅读现状，要点包括：阅读不受重视的原因、阅读的好处以及自己的做法。

2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时、第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，第一段开门见山，点明主题；第二段介绍阅读不受重视原因；第三段介绍阅读的好处；第四段介绍个人做法；最后一段总结全文。

4．（江苏苏州吴中区期中）根据以下要点，写一篇作文描述自己DIY水果沙拉的经历。

我喜欢DIY，所以上周日我决定亲自动手做一份水果沙拉。我去超市选了一些水果，例如：苹果、草莓、葡萄等，还买了一瓶沙拉酱。然后开工了。我把水果洗干净，切成小片。我把它们倒入大碗里面，倒入沙拉酱并用调羹搅拌。最终，完成了！ 这份沙拉不仅看起来色泽艳丽而且尝起来味道甜美。

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【答案】例文：

I like DIY, so I decided to make a fruit salad by myself last Sunday. I chose some fruit in the supermarket. For example, I bought some apples, strawberries and grapes. I also bought a bottle of salad cream. Then I started to make it. I first washed the fruit and cut them into small pieces. Then I put them into a big bowl, added some salad cream and mixed them together with a spoon. Finally, I finished. It not only looked colourful but also tasted sweet.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时注意要包含汉语提示的内容，描述自己DIY水果沙拉的经历。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍制作过程时，力求语言准确，条例清晰，制作顺序准确，制作过程完整。

5．每个人都不可能没有烦恼，当你有烦恼时，试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你的生活中的很多方面。所以生活中应当多相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母、朋友沟通。

请你展开想象，写一篇文章。

要求：

1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。

2、提示词：feel happy, mirror, the best, talk with, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express feelings       

3、不少于80个单词。 

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【答案】Possible version:

       Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects.

Here are some ways to make you feel better.

1. Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best in the world. I can do anything.”

2. Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.

【解析】

1、题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时首先介绍每个人都有不好的情绪，然后介绍不好的情绪带来的影响，最后提出能让你感觉好点的方法，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍情绪以及让你感觉好点的方法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

6．健康的生活习惯一直是人们关注的话题，针对班上同学的饮食习惯老师准备开展有关健康饮食的重要性的主题班会课。请以Good Living Habits为主题，写一篇发言稿，谈谈如何做到健康饮食以及健康的生活习惯的重要性。

提示:1、拥有健康的生活习惯对我们很重要;

2、现在很多学生经常熬夜，吃很多垃圾食品;

3、我们应该早睡早起、多运动；

4、我们应该多吃健康食物；

5、如果你想拥有健康的身体，你就必须有健康的生活方式。

要求:1.要点齐全，并补充适当的细节；

2.语言通顺,表达清楚，书写规范；

3.词数：80词左右，可适当发挥。

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【答案】One possible version:

Good Living Habits

Hello, everyone, let’s talk about living habits. It is important for us to have good living habits. Nowadays, many students often stay up late, they hardly do sports and they often eat a lot of junk food. I think we should go to bed early and get up early, we should eat more healthy food and exercise more. If you want to be healthy, you must have healthy life styles. Without good living habits, there is no healthy body and mind.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本篇属于材料作文，谈论健康生活习惯的重要性以及如何做到健康饮食。开篇点题，说明好的生活习惯很重要；然后谈论许多学生的坏习惯以及为了养成好习惯我们应该怎么做；最后点题，要有一个好的生活习惯，没有好的生活习惯就不会有健康的身体和头脑。

2.写作指导：全文主体时态为一般现在时，针对所给要点具体阐述，切记不要遗漏要点，可以适当增加情节使行文连贯。写作时尽量多使用所学过的单词、短语以及句型使文章出彩，如let's do, nowasays, do sports, more, without, there be以及it is adj. for sb. to do sth.等。

7．假如你叫Tom，你的朋友John在学习上、生活方面遇到一些问题和困扰，他很焦虑。请根据以下内容提示给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些建议帮助他克服焦虑。

提示：1.每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；2.要找人诉说你的烦恼；3.遇到困难可以和同学们，老师，家长交流。4.可适当发挥内容。80词左右。

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【答案】例文

Dear John,

It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. But I think talking to someone helps a lot.

Firstly, if you have problems with schoolwork or life, you should talk to your classmates, teachers or parents. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it! Secondly, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Last, it’s best to smile at yourself and never keep problems to yourself.

Please remember you are not alone. I believe we can overcome them in the end.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是写一篇电子邮件；假如你叫Tom，你的朋友John在学习上、生活方面遇到一些问题和困扰。根据题干提示给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些建议帮助他克服焦虑。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，以第二人称为主；文章第一段告诉对方，每个人都会遇到困难；第二段详细叙述如何解决困难和困扰；最后一段鼓励对方，最后总会克服这些困难。保证叙述完整，条理清晰；注意电子邮件格式。

8．假如你是李华，期中考试结束后你将作为优秀学生代表在家长会上发言，讲述一下你自己的学习生活以及和老师、同学及家人相处的方法。请你根据以下几点写出你的演讲稿，给同学和家长们一些好的建议。

内容包括：

1.学生应制定适合自己的学习计划。

2.课余时间多读有益的书，多进行体育锻炼。

3.与老师、同学和睦相处。

4.在家多和父母沟通，帮忙做家务。

5.父母不要给孩子太大压力。

注意：

1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m very glad to give a talk here.

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【答案】例文：

Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m very glad to give a talk here. Here are some ways of learning well.

It is very important and necessary for us to make a good study plan. The plan should be suitable for us. And we should read more books which are good for us and take more exercise.

At school, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.When we have problems, we should ask them for help. At home, we must help our parents with the housework. When we do housework together, we can communicate with our parents. And I don't think our parents should be too hard on us.

That's all I want to say. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，内容应该包括提示中给出的全部信息。可以分成两个主要方面：自己的学习生活、怎样与他人相处。

2.写作指导：文章要求写自己的学习生活以及和老师、同学及家长相处的方法，所以人称应该用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。由于需要表述的内容较多，可以分段写，并用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章有条理且连贯。

9．每个人在成长过程中都会遇到各种不同的烦恼，随着烦恼的增多，压力就会增大。为了更好地解决中学生的心理压力问题，你校举办了以“How to deal with pressure”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一篇发言稿，和大家分享一下你缓解压力的好办法。

要求：

1. 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 80词左右。

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【答案】例文：

Nowadays, society is more and more competitive than before, which, inevitably, will cause a lot of stress and pressure. So how to deal with pressure or even making full use of it has been to the top of the list. Here take students for example; I just want to give some suggestions.

Firstly, I firmly believe that communication with classmates, friends, teachers or parents, anyone you trust in is fine, is a good way. We can share our happiness and sorrows with them by communication. It is the same as stress and pressure. They will help us find the real reason why we feel stressed. And then give us some good advice, figure out a way to solve it, and lastly enjoy the pleasure of it together with you.

【解析】

1.题干解读：题目是一篇讲稿作文。要求以“How to deal with pressure”为主题，和大家分享一下缓解压力的好办法。

2.写作指导：写作时，时态以一般现在时为主。发言稿可分为两段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍缓解压力的好办法。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

10．许多学习和生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力。为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以 “Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学们分享，内容包括：

1、同学们中普遍存在的压力；

2、你的关于缓解压力的好建议。

要求：

1、80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、文中不得出现真实人名和校名。

Less Pressure, Better Life

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【答案】例文

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, everyone! As we all know, it’s normal to feel stressed. Some students have too much homework to do and they don’t have enough sleep. While others lack communication with their parents and their parents are too strict with them. What’s more, students have no time for after-school activities and they are in poor health.

I am always under pressure too. My parents want me to be the top student in class, so they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三和第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍当前学生面临的压力；第二段介绍自己的压力和解决的办法。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。