2022-2023学年第一学期九年级英语期末复习专题 书面表达作文真题汇编Ⅴ

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书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）Ⅴ
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________

一、话题作文
1．（2019·江苏南京）最近 ,你们学校公众号“佳文共赏”栏日将以“My hero”为题开展一次作文 评选 ,请以此为题写一篇短文 ,介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人 ,向该栏目投稿。
My hero
Useful expression:
Talents and achievements
have a gift for, win an award for, ...
Difficulties he / she met and how
he / she dealt with them
never give up
achieve success through, ...
Charity work
far more than, devote...to...
Your opinion(s) about him / her
be famous for / as, ...

要求：1. 80 词左右 ,语句流畅通顺；2. 文章需涵盖以上要点 ,并作适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现任何考生真实

二、材料作文
2．（2020·江苏·景山）书面表达
盐城市政府正在努力发展旅游业 ,宣传广告“盐城 ,一个让人打开心扉的地方”正在CCTV4播放 ,请你根据思维导图中提供的信息 ,为这则广告写一篇宣传稿 ,介绍盐城的风土人情。
要求：1）表达清楚 ,语法正确 ,上下文连贯；   
2）必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息 ,并适当发挥；  
3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数）；
4) 参考词汇：the coast of the Yellow Sea, one of the world’s most important wetlands, red-crowned cranes, rare birds

Welcome to Yancheng! Yancheng is a place to open up your mind.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
East or west, Yancheng landscape is best! We are here waiting for you.
3．（2020·江苏盐城）书面表达
安全 ,牵系每个人的生活 ,为增 强中学生的安全意识 ,提高自我保护能力。请你以How to keep safe为主题 ,根据以下要点提示写一篇100词左右的安全倡议书。（开头已给出 ,不计入总词数）
注意事项：
1.词数: 100词左右(文章开头已给出 ,不计入总词数)；
How to keep safe
Internet safety
Road safety
Food safety
   
1.look through healthy web pages
2.don’t meet e-friends alone
3. ...
1.obey traffic rules 2.avoid listening to music while riding
3.  
1.don’t eat junk food
2.read instructions and dates carefully
3....
    
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息 ,并作适当发挥。
Dear all:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in our mind.
4．（2019·江苏南京）书面表达
假如你是李华 ,上周接受了一次九年级学生娱乐活动的问卷调查。请根据问卷内容 ,用英文写一篇题为“Ways to relax ourselves”的短文 ,向你校英语报刊投稿。
A survey
1. Which of the following do you choose for relaxing after school?
●Enjoying music.
●Watching TV programmes.
●Seeing movies.
●Reading detective stories.
....
2. How long do you usually spend on it?
3. Why do you choose this activity?
4. What can you learn from this activity?

注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；  
2．语言通顺 ,意思连贯 ,条理清楚 ,书写规范；  
3．词数80左右 ,文章的开头已给出 ,不计入总词数。Ways to relax ourselves
As a Grade 9 student, we have too much homework. However, we still have our own ways to
relax ourselves. ▲
5．（2018·江苏·南通市启秀）书面表达
最近科学家研究发现 ,现在的年轻人走路很少。现在请你根据下表写一遍英语短文 ,以提醒身边的人们要重视运动 ,关注健康。以下是短文的内容要点：
发现
18-24岁的年轻人中有四分之一每天步行不到5分钟 ,这对于他们的健康不利
原因
1.大多数人把步行少归因于科技的发展（technology development）;
2.有些年轻人觉得没有人一起散步也是步行少的一个原因；
3.有些年轻人学习或工作太忙 ,没有时间步行。
建议
1.经常步行 ,不要总是开车或乘公交车；
2……. （请考生自拟至少两点内容）。

注意：
1.短文须包括表格内所给要点 ,要求语句通顺 ,意思连贯；
2.可展开合理想象 ,作适当发挥；
3.词数90左右 ,短文的开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数。
Recently, scientists have made a survey about young adult’s walking habits.
The survey shows that

Just remember. The more you walk, the healthier you will be.
6．（2019·江苏·扬州市梅岭）假如你是一名九年级学生李林 ,你刚认识的美国笔友 Mike 想了解你的情况。请你根据以下表格所提供的信息给他写一封邮件介绍你自己。
注意：内容应包含所给信息 ,可适当发挥。词数 100 左右。邮件开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数。
生肖
龙
个性特征
善良 ,活泼 ,喜欢暖色……（补充两点）
爱好
阅读充满神秘、恐怖的侦探小说；听中国古典音乐
烦恼
父母要求严 ,过于关注分数；作业多 ,睡眠不足 ,经常感到疲倦
解决方法
和父母交流；仔细计划好一天
愿望
作业少一些 ,希望寒假里有足够的时间放松自己……（补充一点）

Dear Mike,
My name is Li Lin. I am a Grade 9 student.

What about you? Can you tell me more about your school life? I hope to hear from you
soon.
Yours sincerely, Li Lin
7．（2019·江苏苏州）书面表达
假定你是李华 ,本学年有一位新外教Roy来你班任教。你的班级计划举办一个简短的欢迎仪式。请你根据下表所列出的要点写一篇英语发言稿。
介绍班级的概况
同学相处融洽
英语水平不一
(自拟至少一点)
期待外教的帮助
解答难题
了解文化   
(自拟至少一点)
介绍常熟的情况
历史名城
(自拟至少一点)
表达美好的希望
享受在常熟的生活
(自拟至少一点)

要求:
1.所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息 ,并作适当地发挥;
2.词数90左右。开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear Roy,
Welcome to our school.
Thank you!
8．（2018·江苏泰州）2017 年一月份江苏省文明办等单位开展“百名美德少年”的评选表彰活动。我们身边涌现了许许多多 的“美德少年” ,请根据下面的要点提示 ,以“ A Virtue Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文 ,介绍你身边的一位“美 德少年”候选人（李明）。
简介
1. 外貌：中等身高、圆脸、笑眯眯的眼睛2. 个性：慷慨 ,……（举一例说明）；自信 ,……（举一例说明）
3. 爱好：读书 ,因为……（自拟）
表现
1. 在家：尊敬父母、热爱劳动；2. 在校：努力学习、团结同学
3. 在社会：……（自拟两点）
感想
1. 李明具有……（自拟）2. 我希望……（自拟）
注意：1. 词数 100 个左右 ,短文开头不计入总词数；2. 必须包括上述所有要点 ,语句通顺 ,意思连贯 ,并适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名和地名。
My classmate, Li Ming, is lucky enough to be chosen as one of the Virtue Teenagers in Jiangsu.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

9．（2018·江苏连云港）新学期 ,你校的学生会需要一名新主席。校长号召全体同学积极推荐合适的人选。假设你叫Peter ,请根据以下提示和要求给校长写一封推荐信。（要求：词数80左右 ,句意连贯 ,语法正确。）
内容要点如下：
1. 推荐Simon 担任学生会主席；
2. 推荐理由：1）积极、自信、勤奋好学、成绩优秀 ,是你班的班长；
             2）乐于助人 ,经常为同学解决难题；
             3）对人大方、为人善良 ,同学们愿意与他交朋友；
             4）聪明、富于创造力和想象力 ,能想出很多新主意；
             5）有耐心 ,有条理 ,能计划好每一件事情 ,并关注细节。
Dear Principle,
I am writing to recommend Simon as the chairperson of the Students’ Union.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Peter
10．（2018·江苏徐州）书面表达
假设某中学生英文报组织学生开展一场如何建立良好师生关系的讨论 ,请你根据下表所提示的信息 ,以How to build a good teacher-studen trelationship为题 ,用英语写一篇稿件 ,向报社投稿 ,简述有利于建立良好师生关系的教师行为和学生行为 ,并就你所理解的存在的问题提出建议。
How to build a good teacher-student relationship
教师方面

关心学生 ,热爱学生；
耐心引导 ,严格要求；
更多交流 ,更多鼓励
学生方面

尊重老师 ,相互理解；
勤奋好学 ,专心听讲；
存在问题及建议
请根据你的理解列出一个问题 ,并提出相应建议

注意：1词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好 ,不计入总词数。
2短文应包括上表中所示内容 ,句式规范 ,字迹工整。
3可以适当发挥 ,使条理清晰 ,内容完整 ,意思连贯。文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
How to build a good teacher-student relationship
A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and interesting for the students and teaching important and meaningful for a teacher______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2016·江苏泰州）“世界上最远的距离是我在你身边 ,你却忙着抢红包” “盯得眼花 ,戳得手疼 ,抢得心跳”......这些都是春节抢红包火爆场面的生动写照。这两年 ,春节抢红包 ,全民狂欢 ,乐此不疲。抢红包为何如此热？火热的背后该如何冷静思考？假如你叫李华 ,你班最近就此开展了一个调查 ,请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信 ,介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。
70%的学生参加过抢红包游戏活动
75%的学生表示赞成
1. 带来更多乐趣
2. 更易与人相处融洽
3. 传统中国文化和现代技术(technology)相结合
25%的学生表示担忧
1. 浪费时间和金钱
2. 与家人交流少
3. 用时太多 ,以至于......(1句话展开合理想象)
你的观点
......
注意：1. 信中须包括表格中所有提示内容 ,要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
         2. 表格中“你的观点”须用2~3句话展开合理想象 ,作适当发挥；
         3. 词数100左右 ,信的首尾已给出 ,不计入总词数；
         4. 短文内容请写在答题卷指定位置上。
参考词汇：抢红包 grabbing red packets
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.







Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

三、书信作文
12．（2018·江苏苏州）书面表达
假如正在上海学习的美国交换留学生Henry想要结交更多的中国朋友 ,通过他们来更好的了解中国的文化 ,因此他写了一封交友信 ,作了自我介绍 ,并希望大家积极回复。请你用英语给他回信。
Dear friend,
I'm Henry from the UK. I want to make more Chinese friends. Can you tell me something about you?
What's your personality?
What's your favourite colour? Why?
I like listening to rock music and watching science fiction films in my spare time. What about you?
Who do you admire most? You parent, teachers, or famous stars? Why?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes
Henry

要求 1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息 ,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名;
3.词数90词左右 ,短文开头结尾已为你写好 ,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry ,
I'm lucky to see your email on the Internet. I'm very glad to make friends with you.

I hope you will have a food time in China.
Yours ,
Sandy
13．（2018·江苏苏州）书面表达
假如你是李华 ,你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件 ,想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件 ,根据信中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复 ,词数90左右。
To: lihua@china.com
From: bi11006@america.com
Subject: Your dream job
Dear Lihua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.
Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?
◆What is your dream job?
◆Why do you like the job?
◆Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?
◆What do you need to do for your dream job?
Drop a few lines if you have time.
Best wishes,
Bill

注意:1.开头和结尾已写好 ,不计入总词数。
2.回复必须包括所有要点 ,可适当发挥 ,使全文连贯通顺。
3.文中不得提及人名 ,校名等相关信息。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.
______________________________
Tell me about your ideal job !
Yours,
Lihua
14．（2018·江苏苏州）书面表达
假如你是李华 ,你和英国一所友好学校的学生Robert做了笔友。最近你收到他的第一
封信 ,他在信中向你提出了一些问题。请你根据他的来信 ,写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? I'm so glad that we've become penfriends. I want to know much around you and I'm interested in Chinese festivals. Would you please tell me the Following things?
●What personalities do you have?
●How do you like your school life?
●How do Chinese people celebrate the Spring Festival?
●What will you do in the coming winter holiday?
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Robert

注意:1.词数90左右 ,开头和结尾已经写好 ,不计入总词数:
2.回复须包括所有要点 ,可适当发挥 ,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Robert.
I am so glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you the things you asked me before.
I'm a student in Grade 9.
Hope to meet you in China as soon as possible!
All the best,
Li Hua

四、讲稿
15．（2019·江苏常州）书面表达
假如你是“航天英雄杨利伟事迹报告团”成员之一 ,请你以报告团成员的身份向世各界人士介绍我们中国的航天英雄杨利伟的有关情况。要点如下：

出生
1965年6月21日 ,辽宁省绥中县 ,教师家庭 ,童年幸福。
天赋
成绩优异 ,有数学天赋 ,获得过许多数学竞赛奖。
个人经历
1.中学毕业后 ,在中国人民解放军空军第八航空学院(the No.8 Aviation College of the Air Force of the People’s Liberation Army)学习。
2.学习刻苦 ,后来 ,成为战斗机飞行员(a fighter pilot)。
3.表现出色 ,儿年后 ,被选拔接受宇航员训练 ,1996和1997年 通过宇航员考试。
4.2003年10月15日 ,成为我国进入太空的第一人。
你的感想
……(至少发挥两点)

要求：词数不少于100字（文章的开头已经写好 ,不计入总词数）
Ladies and gentlemen,
Yang Liwei was bom on June 21st ,1965 in Suizhong, Liaoning Province in a teacher’s family.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考答案：
1．My hero
I like Chinese Kung Fu and My hero is Bruce lee, he is an actor and famous for performing Chinese KungFu.He has a gift for Kung Fu and have been made great achievements.Unfortunately, he died young, at the age of 33.He is an important founder of Chinese Kung Fu and has won the "lifetime achievement award" of the Hong Kong film awards.
When he was very young, Bruce lee was very diligent in learning Chinese Kung Fu. He was not afraid of difficulties and never gave up.He was also a warm-hearted person. He loved his family and was willing to help people in trouble.
He was ready to help others and always gave a hand to those in need.Although he is no longer alive, I admire him very much.
【详解】本文以《My hero》为题 ,要求写作自己敬佩的名人。学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的中心。在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。
高分句型：he is an actor and famous for performing Chinese KungFu.他是个演员 ,以表演中国功夫而闻名。He has a gift for Kung Fu and have been made great achievements.他有功夫天赋 ,已经取得了很大的成就。Unfortunately, he died young, at the age of 33.不幸的是 ,他英年早逝 ,年仅33岁。He was not afraid of difficulties and never gave up.他不怕困难 ,从不放弃。He was ready to help others and always gave a hand to those in need他乐于助人 ,总是帮助那些需要帮助的人。学会使用材料中提供的短语；学会使用连词和插入语。例如材料中的Talents and achievements天赋和成就；have a gift for在.....有天赋；win an award for荣获……奖项；never give up 永不放弃；achieve success through通过……获得成功。
【点睛】注意写作过程中 ,将要点展开并表达清楚 ,注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。
2．范文
Welcome to Yancheng! Yancheng is a place to open up your mind. Yancheng is a seaside city that lies on the coast of the Yellow Sea.You can get there by bus.It is named after the salt fields around it. It has a Chinese Sea Salt Museum that displays the sea salt civilization.We can learn a lot from it.Yancheng Nature Reserve is home to Wild animals.Yancheng is famous for its red culture.For example, the New Fourth Army memorial, there you can learn stories about Anti-Japanese War.
East or west, Yancheng landscape is best! We are here waiting for you.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇广告宣传稿。盐城市政府正在努力发展旅游业 ,宣传广告“盐城 ,一个让人打开心扉的地方”正在CCTV4播放 ,请你根据思维导图中提供的信息 ,为这则广告写一篇宣传稿 ,介绍盐城的风土人情。
2.例文点评：这篇短文应使用一般现在时态 ,注意使用正确的语法结构、句型和短语 ,不要逐词翻译 ,写汉语式的英语。在文章中使用一些连词 ,使上下文意思连贯、流畅。
3.高分亮点：
短语：open up ；your mind；lie on ；the coast of the Yellow Sea；get there； by bus；is home to Wild animals。
句型：It has a Chinese Sea Salt Museum that displays the sea salt civilization.
Yancheng Nature Reserve is home to Wild animals.
Yancheng is famous for its red culture.
3．[例文]
Dear all:
Safety is very important for students. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, we should use the network carefully. We should browse healthy web pages. Don’t make friends alone. Don’t post some of your personal information on the Internet. Second, we should obey the traffic rules. Avoid listening to music when cycling. You can’t cross the road when it’s red. Third, don’t eat junk food. Read instructions and dates carefully. I hope you can have a healthy body.
As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇倡议书 ,安全 ,牵系每个人的生活 ,为增强中学生的安全意识 ,提高自我保护能力 ,请你以How to keep safe为主题 ,根据以下要点提示写一篇100词左右的安全倡议书。（开头已给出 ,不计入总词数） ,文章必须包括文中所给提示:网络安全；交通安全；食品安全。
2.例文点评：本题目要求学生以安全为话题写一篇演讲稿。所给要点比较详细。在写作前 ,可以先翻译这些要点 ,然后再考虑将这些要点有条理的组合在一起 ,构成篇章 ,当然在写作中我们也可以适当发挥 ,但所给要点一个也不能少。
3.高分亮点：
短语：First of all；some of；your personal information；obey the traffic rules；avoid doing sth.；listening to music。
句型：
1. Don’t make friends alone.
2. Don’t eat junk food.
3. Read instructions and dates carefully.
4. I hope you can have a healthy body.
4．范文：
One possible version:
As a Grade 9 student, we have too much homework. However, we still have our own ways to relax ourselves. Usually, I prefer to watch TV programmes to relax myself and I spend about 2 hours watching TV every week.
Watching TV is one of the most popular free time activities. There are all kinds of TV programmes, such as chat shows, drama series, cartoons, and so on, so people of all ages are interested in watching TV. TV programmes can improve our knowledge of the world. For example, we can learn a lot about history, nature, and real-life events by watching documentaries.
In my opinion, watching TV not only helps me relax but also gives me knowledge.
【分析】本篇为材料作文 ,要求按照提示完成一篇你如何“放松自己”有关的短文 ,内容包括：选择课后放松自己的方式；结合已选的方式进行细节描述（花多长时间和为什么选择这项活动）；总结自己从这项活动中学到了什么。要求短文要包含所有的提示内容 ,语言通顺 ,意思连贯 ,条理清楚 ,书写规范。
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份 ,用第一人称的方式按照提示完成一篇你如何“放松自己”的短文 ,叙述日常的状况 ,用一般现在时；书写时要注意用全所给材料 ,文句通顺 ,内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨 ,层次分明。开篇紧扣主题 ,介绍自己选择课后放松自己的方式是看电视、自己看电视的时间；正文部分详细地介绍各种各样的电视节目以及这些节目让自己学到什么知识；文章布局合理 ,内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。用短语have our own ways to relax ourselves.； prefer to；句式spend…doing sth 介绍自己的放松方式；用短语one of the most popular free time activities； all kinds of ；be interested in； improve our knowledge of the world； learn a lot about ；介绍电视节目以及节目的知识性；用连词not only…but also…总结看电视的好处 ,文句精彩 ,行文通畅。
【点睛】本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题 ,确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；关注题材的格式（记叙文） ,注意文章的篇章结构；书写时要紧扣主题 ,做到中心突出 ,内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。
5．Recently, scientists have made a survey about young adult’s walking habits.
The survey shows that a quarter of 18- to 24-year-olds walk less than five minutes a day, which is bad for their health. With the popularity of electric bicycles, most people believe that less walking is due to the development of technology. In fact, some young people feel that having no people to walk with is also a reason for walking less. In addition, some young people are too busy studying or working to have time to walk. We should pay attention to sports and health. To be healthy, we should often walk instead of always driving or taking buses. Take a walk outside with your family on weekends, or go fishing with your friends.
Just remember. The more you walk, the healthier you will be.
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语 ,为文章增色不少 ,如make a survey ,walking habits ,less than ,be bad for ,with the popularity of ,be due to ,in fact ,in addition ,busy doing ,too…to ,pay attention to ,instead of等。The survey shows that a quarter of 18- to 24-year-olds walk less than five minutes a day, which is bad for their health./ In fact, some young people feel that having no people to walk with is also a reason for walking less. / With the popularity of electric bicycles, most people believe that less walking is due to the development of technology.等复杂从句结构的运用 ,丰富了短文内容 ,使表达多样化。而三句As a…的运用 ,使短文很有条理 ,是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语 ,写作时就可以适当引用 ,使文章表达更有逻辑性 ,也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英 ,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维 ,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以 ,考生不能遗漏要点 ,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式 ,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．Dear Mike,
My name is Li Lin. I’m a student of Grade 9. My Chinese zodiac is a dragon. I am a kind and lively person. I like warm colours such as orange and yellow, because they can bring me success and cheer me up. I like to read detective stories full of mystery and horror, And I like listening to Chinese classical music. But my parents were very strict with me, they were too concerned with grades. I always have a lot of homework every day. I don't get enough sleep and I often feel tired.So I communicate with my parents and plan each day carefully. I hope I will have less homework and I’m looking forward to having enough time to relax myself during the winter holidays.
What about you? Can you tell me more about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin
【详解】这是一篇书信作文。假如你是一名九年级学生李林 ,你刚认识的美国笔友 Mike 想了解你的情况。要求你根据表格所提供的信息给他写一封邮件介绍你自己。文章时态用一般现在时 ,人称主要用第一称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体 ,故需要准确表达。在写作时 ,注意连句成篇 ,保持文章的连贯性 ,要层次清楚 ,要点分明 ,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构 ,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式 ,最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词 ,确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样 ,可以为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】首先认真审题 ,看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容 ,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点 ,动笔写作 ,在写作过程中 ,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡 ,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词 ,使文章过渡平稳 ,自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺 ,词汇书写无误 ,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查 ,确保正确无误。
7．Dear Roy,
Welcome to our school. I'm Li Hua ,a 16-year-old girl.Now let me introduce something about our class for you.  There are 52 students in our class, including 30 boys and 22 girls. The students get along very well, but our English is not the same. We hope you can help us solve problems and help us understand western culture. Changshu is a famous historical city, it has a long history and ancient culture. I hope our classmates can be good friends with you. and I hope you live a very happy life in Changshu.                                                
Thank you!
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文 ,新外教Roy要来你班任教 ,假如你是李华 ,要求根据表格中所给出的内容 ,写一篇发言稿 ,对Roy的到来表示欢迎。文章时态主要用一般现在时 ,人称主要用第一和第二人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体 ,故需要准确表达。在写作时 ,注意连句成篇 ,保持文章的连贯性 ,要层次清楚 ,要点分明 ,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构 ,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式 ,最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词 ,确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样 ,可以为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】首先认真审题 ,看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容 ,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点 ,动笔写作 ,在写作过程中 ,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡 ,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词 ,使文章过渡平稳 ,自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺 ,词汇书写无误 ,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查 ,确保正确无误。
8．My classmate, Li Ming, is lucky enough to be chosen as one of the Virtue Teenagers in Jiangsu.
Li Ming is a boy of medium height. He has a round face and smiling eyes. He is generous enough to share what he has with others. He is also confident. He likes to give a speech in front of others. Reading is his favorite because he thinks reading can open up a whole new world to him.
At home, Li Ming respects his parents. He’s willing to help them do housework. At school, he studies hard and gets along well with his classmates. In society, Li Ming takes an active part in charity activities. He often works as a volunteer to help people in need.
Li Ming has many strong qualities to be chosen as the Virtue Teenager. I hope everyone can learn from him and vote for him.
【详解】本文属于材料作文 ,介绍你身边的一位“美德少年”的候选人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态 ,上下文意思连贯 ,符合逻辑 ,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文 ,很好的完成了试题规定的任务 ,语言表达符合英语习惯 ,准确运用时态、主谓一致 ,特别适用一些亮点词句 ,如enough ,share with ,respect
be willing to ,gets along well with ,takes an active part in ,in need。增强逻辑关系 ,增加上下文意思连贯 ,用词准确 ,句子通顺 ,行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求 ,抓住要点 ,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲 ,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的 ,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥 ,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪 ,就可以动笔写作了 ,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词 ,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外 ,还要检查语法结构是否合理 ,有无重复、啰嗦的语言 ,大小写是否正确 ,格式是否正确 ,词数是否符合要求等。
9．【参考范文】
Dear Principle,
I am writing to recommend Simon as the chairperson of the Students’ Union.
Simon is the monitor of our class. He is very active and confident. He is hard-working at his lessons. He is also a top student in my class. He is very helpful, too. He often helps us solve problems. He is kind and generous to his classmates. We all like to make friends with him. He is clever, creative and imaginative. He often comes up with new ideas. He is also patient and organized. He can plan things well and pay attention to details. I think he has all the qualities to be a good chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Peter
【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰 ,内容饱满 ,表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语 ,例如the Students’ Union ,the monitor of ,at his lessons ,in my class ,help sb. do sth. ,solve problems ,like to do ,make friends with sb. ,come up ,pay attention to ,be a good chairperson ,agree with等。而I am writing to recommend Simon as the chairperson of the Students’ Union./ He is also a top student in my class./ We all like to make friends with him./ He often comes up with new ideas.多种句式、时态的运用 ,使本文内容丰富 ,表达流畅 ,是短文的最大亮点。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文 ,根据提示内容可知用一般现在时 ,可把提示内容逐条翻译成英文 ,同时结合实际展开合理的想象 ,在行文中注意使用一些常见的短语 ,会给习作增色。
10．How to build a good teacher-student relationship
A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and interesting for the students and teaching important and meaningful for a teacher.
Good teachers should have good behaviour. They should care for students and love them. In teaching they should teach them carefully, and also be strict with them. They should often communicate more with their students and encourage the students more.
As students, we should be polite to our teachers and understand them. We should work hard and listen to teachers carefully in class. We can do something meaningful for teachers.
But sometimes teachers make us stay up too late. And we often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. I think teachers should encourage us to have more after-school activities and we students should work even harder at our lessons. It needs the efforts of both teachers and students to build a good teacher-student relationship.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文 ,话题是How to build a good teacher-student relationship ,本文时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读有关提示 ,弄清试题提供的所有信息 ,明确有哪些要点 ,列好提纲。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译 ,而是要适当添加些内容 ,使文章看起来更充实 ,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意添加的内容要紧扣文章主题 ,给出的要点都要包括 ,缺一不可。语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态 ,上下文意思连贯 ,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】：这是一篇比较优秀的作文 ,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语They should care for students and love them. In teaching they should teach them carefully, and also be strict with them , As students, we should be polite to our teachers and understand them等 ,本文语言表达符合英语习惯 ,准确运用时态 ,用词准确、句子通顺、表达清楚条理、行文连贯。
11．Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. 75% of them think it can bring them more fun. It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. However, 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say it’s a waste of time and money to take part in it. They don’t have enough communication with their family members. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that they often forget to do their homework.
I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文 ,给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信 ,介绍对参加春节抢红包的调查结果并谈谈我的观点。结合所给材料 ,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态 ,人称为第一 ,三人称 ,注意主谓一致问题 ,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构 ,注意一些常见句式的应用 ,比如：I am writing to…… ,70% of the students……. ,The activity brings…… ,25% of them are worried about……. ,They don’t have…… ,some students spend…… ,I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词 ,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序 ,符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑 ,语言简练。开头介绍了对参加春节抢红包的调查结果 ,接下来介绍学生抢红包的害处 ,最后表达我的观点。此处tell sb about sth, take part in, get along well with, be worried about, a waste of, spend time doing sth, forget to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
12．参考范文：
Dear Henry ,
I'm lucky to see your email on the Internet. I'm very glad to make friends with you.
I am Sandy and I come from Beijing, the capital of China. I am a cheerful, active and easy-going girl. My Mom and Dad are very fond of me, but I like my grandmother most, because she is a singer and can play the piano very well. Although she is very old, she is still working hard to play the piano,and I really appreciate her spirit.
I am usually busy studying. Sometimes, I like to watch sci-fi movies in my spare time. It feels great, and can make me relaxed and increase my knowledge. I especially like the vast universe, because the mysterious deep purple is my favorite color.                                                                              
I hope you will have a food time in China.
Yours ,
Sandy
【详解】学生首先要认真阅读材料中Henry回信的内容,认真审题,确定文章的中心。本文是写一封回信。依据文中给出的回信的开头和结尾 ,可知回信要把自己当作Sandy,写作时要注意Henry来信中的问题都需要回答或涉及到。比如：
1、你的个性是什么？
2、什么是你最喜欢的颜色？ 为什么？
3、Henry喜欢在业余时间听摇滚音乐和看科幻电影。 你呢？
4、你最欣赏谁？ 你的父母 ,老师还是着名的明星？ 为什么？
此外 ,写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。
高分句型：I like my grandmother most, because she is a singer and can play the piano very well. 我最喜欢我的祖母 ,因为她是一个歌手 ,钢琴弹得很好。本句中用了最高级 ,most的表达方法。I especially like the vast universe, because the mysterious deep purple is my favorite color.我特别喜欢浩瀚的宇宙 ,因为神秘的深紫色是我最喜欢的颜色。Although she is very old, she is still working hard to play the piano,and I really appreciate her spirit.虽然她很老了 ,但她仍然努力学习弹钢琴 ,我真的很欣赏她的精神。
【点睛】注意写作过程中 ,将要点展开并表达清楚 ,注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。
13．I hope I can become a doctor in the future.When I was little,I watched many TV series and movies about doctors. I thought they were so great.Therefore,I made up my mind to be a doctor.In my opinon, doctors  can help patients get out of sickness and pain. I also want to  help others.However,being a doctor needs so much professional knowledge and there is a long way to go.So I have to work harder  in order to go to a good college.
【详解】这是一篇书信作文 ,也是提纲类作文。假如你是李华 ,你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件 ,想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件 ,根据信中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复 ,结合所给材料可知本文时态是一般现在时、一般过去时。认真阅读提示 ,审清主题 ,根据提示要点 ,列出本文的写作提纲 ,要包含所给的所有内容并适当发挥。写作中可适当使用连词 ,注意表达顺序 ,表达要有条理性 ,语句通顺 ,意思连贯 ,要符合逻辑关系 ,字数要在90词以上 ,不要写的太少。写完以后 ,注意再读一遍 ,看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【点睛】本书面表达是一封电子邮件 ,这篇文章语言规范 ,叙事清楚 ,时态运用正确 ,叙述清楚条里 ,语句通顺 ,意思连贯 ,使文章更具条理性 ,思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结 ,牢记一些固定句式及短语 ,写作时就可以适当引用 ,使文章的表达更有逻辑性 ,更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子 ,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。  （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
14．请参考范文：
Dear Robert ,
Thank you for your letter ,I'm so glad that we've become penfriends. I'd be happy to answer your questions about Chinese traditional festivals.
I am outgoing and easy-going with a wide range of interests.For example, I like reading novels and collecting books.I also like sports and I'm good at table tennis and volleyball.I like school life and I often play sports with my good friends after school.
The winter holiday is coming. My friends and I will have a table tennis match. If our group gets the first place, I will have a good Spring Festival.When it comes to the Spring Festival,it is the most solemn festival for Chinese people.On this day, many Chinese families will post Spring Festival couplets, have parties and prepare sumptuous dinners.Children can also set off fireworks in some places.I really hope to spend the Spring Festival with you one day.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】学生首先要认真阅读材料中Robert回信的内容,认真审题,确定文章的中心。本文是写一封回信。假如你是李华,你的笔友Robert来信询问你一些事 ,内容如下：1、你有什么个性？2、您对学校生活有何看法？3、中国人如何庆祝春节？4、即将到来的寒假 ,你会做什么？写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认
真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。
高分句型：I'd be happy to answer your questions about Chinese traditional festivals.我很高兴回答你关于中国传统节日的问题。I am outgoing and easy-going with a wide range of interests.我性格开朗 ,容易相处 ,兴趣广泛。When it comes to the Spring Festival,it is the most solemn festival for Chinese people.说到春节 ,它是中国人最隆重的节日。
【点睛】注意写作过程中 ,将要点展开并表达清楚 ,注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。
15．Yang Liwei was bom on June 21st,1965 in Suizhong, Liaoning Province in a teacher’s family.Yang Liwei had a happy childhood with his parents.Not only he was a good student in school,but he also had a gift for math.He won a lot of math competition prizes.
After graduating from middle school,Yang Liwei continued his studies at the No.8 Aviation College of the Air Force of the People’s Liberation Army. He studied very hard. Later, he became a fighter pilot. Because of his excellent abilities, several years  later,
Yang Liwei was chosen to receive the astronaut training. Yang Liwei did very well and passed astronaut tests in 1996 and 1997.
October 15,2003, Yang Liwei became the first man who went into space in China. He devotes his lifetime to Chinese space program.
Yang Liwei is the pride of our country and we all think highly of him. I believe that China will make greater progress in space flight in the future.
That's all. Thank you!
【详解】首先这是一篇报道型文章 ,必须结合所给材料信息 ,其次注意在个人经历写作时要注意要用过去时为主 ,并且时态以第三人称为主 ,所以在一般现在时态中 ,要注意三单形式。
重点单词短语：was chosen被选入；continue继续；fighter pilot战斗机飞行员；devotes to致力于；make greater progress取得更大进展；in the future在未来；
重点句型：
（1）    Yang Liwei was born on June 21st,1965 in Suizhong, Liaoning Province in a teacher’s family.杨利伟1965年6月21日生于辽宁省绥中一个教师家庭。Be born in…出生于某地；具体的某一天用时间介词on.
（2）    Not only he was a good student in school,but he also had a gift for math.He won a lot of math competition prizes. 他不仅是一个好学生在学校 ,他也有天赋的数学 ,他赢得了许多数学竞赛奖。have a gift for sth对某事物有天赋；not only… ,but also…不仅…而且…。
（3）    October 15,2003, Yang Liwei became the first man that went into space in China. 2003年10月15日 ,杨利伟成为中国第一个进入太空的人。关系代词that引导的定语从句