2021-2022学年牛津深圳版英语七年级下册作文讲解与训练课件

这是一份初中牛津版 (深圳&广州)本册综合备课课件ppt，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了Writing，写作训练1，第一人称和第三人称，purpose，activity，success，improve，Para 1，Para 2，Para 3等内容，欢迎下载使用。

写作训练1 ：Abut Tree Planting Day
3月12日，上星期天，为了帮助同学们了解保护环境的重要性，我们学校在白云山举行了植树节活动。根据以下提示完成报道，字数不少于80词。
记叙文；讲述学校举办的植树节活动
Para 1: 介绍活动（时间地点目的等）Para 2: 介绍植树具体过程Para 3: 抒发个人感受
参考词汇：目的: purpse 活动: activity 铁锹：spade 桶: bucket场地: area我认为：in my pinin成功: success改善: imprve环境: envirnment
常用句型：The purpse f sth. is t d sth. 的目的是
句型训练：这次活动的目的是帮助我们了解保护环境的重要性。
句型训练：学习的目的是为了让我们更优秀。
参考答案：The purpse f learning is t make us mre excellent.
参考答案：The purpse f the acitivity is t help us realize the imprtance f prtecting ur envirnment.
常用短语：hld/have an acitivity 举办活动
句型训练：我们学校在白云山举行了植树节活动。
句型训练：上周六我们在公园举办了一场活动。
参考答案：Last Saturday, we held an activity in the park.
参考答案：Our schl held an activity abut planting trees at Baiyun Muntain.
in my pinin
句型训练：就我看来，学习英语很有趣。
句型训练：我认为刘老师不但聪明，而且漂亮。
参考答案：In my pinin, Miss Liu is nt nly clever, but als beautiful.
参考答案：In my pinin, it is interesting t learn English.
常放于句首，引出个人观点或看法
常用短语：be a great success 取得圆满成功
句型训练：这次活动很成功。
句型训练：我们的会议取得圆满成功。
参考答案：Our meeting was a great success.
参考答案：The activity was a great success.
常用短语：imprve sth. 改善/改进/提高
句型训练：我们帮助改善了环境。
句型训练：我们要多看英语书来提高我们的英语水平。
参考答案：We shuld read mre English bks t imprve ur English.
参考答案：We helped t imprve the envirnment.
Last Sunday, ur schl held an acitivity abut planting trees at Baiyun Muntain. It was Tree Planting Day. The purpse f the acitivity is t help us realize the imprtance f prtecting ur envirnment.
T help us realize the imprtance f prtecting ur envirnment, ur schl held an acitivity abut planting trees at Baiyun Muntain n March 12th.(t d 或 in rder t d 表目的)
介绍事件先后顺序的连接词：first; next; then; after that;
First, Mary carried a spade and a bucket t the tree planting area.
Next, Alan tk sme small trees t the area.
Then sme students started digging and sme students started planting.
After that, sme students watered the trees.
After watering the trees, all f us cleaned the area tgether carefully.
Finally, Sarah tk phts fr us.
In my pinin, the activity was a great success. Because we nt nly had a great time, but als helped t imprve the envirnment.
Tree Planting DayT help us realize the imprtance f prtecting ur envirnment, ur schl held an acitivity abut planting trees at Baiyun Muntain n March 12th.First, Mary carried a spade and a bucket t the tree planting area. Next, Alan tk sme small trees t the area. Then sme students started digging and sme students started planting. After that, sme students watered the trees. After watering the trees, all f us cleaned the area tgether carefully. Finally, Sarah tk phts fr us.In my pinin, the activity was a great success. Because we nt nly had a great time, but als helped t imprve the envirnment.（105字）
写作训练 2 ：Abut planting trees in Alipay
记叙文；介绍蚂蚁森林的活动
Para 1: 开门见山（文中已给出）Para 2: 介绍做法和好处Para 3: 提出号召
Hell, everyne! I'm Jasn. I want t tell yu hw t plant trees in Alipay.
句型学习：I want t tell yu hw t d sth.
句型训练：我想告诉你如何提高英语。
参考答案：I want t tell yu hw t imprve yur English.
句型训练：我想告诉你如何与父母沟通。
参考答案：I want t tell yu hw t cmmunicate with yur parents.
I g t schl n ft every day.= I walk t schl every day.
I pay with Alipay when I g shpping.
On the ne hand, I g t schl n ft every day. It helps reduce CO2, s I can make energy in Alipay. On the ther hand, I pay with Alipay when I g shpping. It is als a gd way t make energy. After that, I cllect the energy and help the tree in Alipay grws up. When it grws up, Alipay will plant a tree in the real wrld.
帮助Alipay小树长大
1. 是时候要采取行动保护我们的地球了。
It is time t take actin t prtect ur earth.
2. 我们一起过绿色生活吧。
Let’s live a green life tgether.
3. 我希望每个人可以做些有助于减少空气污染的事情。
I hpe everyne can d smething t help reduce air pllutin.
It is time t d sth.
Let’s d sth.
I hpe everyne can d sth.
I hpe everyne can take part in this activity t make ur Earth greener.