06 应用文之普通书信- 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文(通用版)
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研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文(通用版)
第一部分 应用文之普通书信体裁解读及写法点拨
体裁解读
信函和信件是中考中最常见的应用文写作类型,是人们相互交流信息的书面通讯方式。从写作对象上看,信函和信件通常分为公开信和私人信。从写作内容上看,信件(信函)主要有建议信、推荐信、求助信、告别信、感谢信等,中考中曾经出现过的写作类别为建议信。此外,信件(信函)还分为初次写信和写回信。因此,考生应当仔细审题,根据不同的信件(信函)类别写作。
书信写法点拨
在英语信件(信函)写作中尤其要注意书写格式:英文书信由信头、称呼、正文、结束语、结尾谦称几部分组成。
1.信头。指写信人的地址和写信日期,写于信纸右上角。地址由小到大写,日期写在地址下。称呼顶格写在左上角,后面的标点用逗号。
2.称呼。常以Dear开头,如果不清楚收信人性别,则写Dear Sir or Madam。
3.正文。在称呼下一行开始,可顶格,也可段首缩进。
正文的开头通常有两类:
(1)主动给对方写信,开头应当写明写信的目的或背景,再详细叙述。
常用开头有:I am writing to you to...我写信给你是为了.....
I am sorry to hear that ...得知....我很难过。
I am very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about ...很高兴写信给你,最近我们正在谈论.....
It's been a long time since we met last time.我们已经好久不见了。
(2)写回信给对方,开头应当先表明感谢收到来信。常用开头有:
Thank you for your letter From your letter I learnt that ..感谢你的来信,从你的信中,我得----.
I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.抱歉没有早些回信。
I am glad you ask me for help.感谢你向我求助。
4.结束语。在正文下自成段,表达祝愿或希望。常用的结束语有:
Best wishes!请接受我的美好祝福!
Looking forward to your reply!期待你的回信!
I hope to hear from you soon.期待不久能收到你的回复。
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.希望我的建议能帮到你。
I hope what I said can help you.希望我说的对你有所助益。
Have a good time!过得愉快!
5.结尾谦称。写于结束语下一行。如正文左顶格写,结尾谦称也左顶格。如正又段结尾谦称则从信偏右的地方开始写。注意首字母大写,后面使用逗号。常用的谦称有:Yours,
Yours ever,
Yours sincerely,
Truly yours,
Yours respectfully,
第二部分 应用文之普通书信万能黄金模板
Dear ,(称呼)
①Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.
②I'm writing to .(写作意图)Firstly, .(做法一)Secondly, .(做法二)Thirdly, (做法三)Fourthly, (做法四)。
③Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
模板内容要点
①与联系人家暄
②具体阐述写作意图并叙述做法或建议
③表达祝范
注;
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
必备亮点词汇
pleasure n.快乐;乐事 | regard n.尊敬 | invite v.邀请 |
congratulate v.祝贺 | inform v.通知 | share v.分享· |
hear v.听到;听说 | consider v.考虑 | information n.信息 |
wish v.希望,愿望 | talk about 谈论 | ask for 询问 |
hear from 收到来信 | receive a letter 收到信 | get a letter 收到信 |
would like to 想······,愿意 | write to 给······写信 | think about 考虑 |
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.好久不见了,很高兴收到你的来信。
Your letter came to me this morning.今天早上我收到了你的来信。
I'm writing to ask if...我写信是想问问是否······
I'm writing to inform you that...我写信是通知你·····
Sorry to reply to your letter so late.很抱歉这么晚给你回信。
There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.再也没有比收到你的信让我更开心的了。
出彩篇中句
I have been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter.我一直在思考你来信中提到的问题。图解
We consider it not proper to...我们认为·····不合适。
It's polite to greet teachers whenever we meet them.每当我们见到老师时,应该向他们问好,这是礼貌的。
We are supposed to get along well with each other and help each other to make progress together.我们应该和谐相处,互相帮助,共同进步。
精彩篇尾句
Please give my regards to your family.请代我向你家人问好。
I wish you still further success.预祝你取得更大的成功。
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.我希望尽快能收到你的回信。
Wish you a pleasant journey.祝你旅行愉快。
第四部分 模板范文演练
(长沙)假设你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory)规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声接打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求:
1.包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.字数:60~80词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.信中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名和地名。
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
万能模板套用分析
首先,引出主题,点名写作目的。(已给出)→主题
其次,交代具体问题。→具体问题
最后,表达祝愿。→祝愿
满分范文
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.Since we are living in the same dormitory together now,it is better to obey the rules and show respect to others.① Firstly(一二三原则,使用了过渡词。),when you get up,you'd better make your bed. If your bed is neat and clean,I believe that it will be more comfortable to stay in the dormitory.(句式多变原则,使用if引导的条件状语从句。)Secondly,when everyone is sleeping,you shouldn't make phone calls. ② If it is an urgent call, you may answer it outside the dormitory. Thirdly, you should not use or move others' personal belongings without permission.③Fourthly,to save energy and money,you should turn off the light before you leave the dormitory. Only all of us follow the rules can we have a good time(短语优先原则。)in the dormitory.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
你也可以这样表达
①Now that we are living in the same dormitory,we are required to obey the rules and show respect to others.
② Secondly, making phone calls is not appropriate when everyone is sleeping.
③ Thirdly,using or moving others' personal belongings without permission is forbidden.
范文译文
亲爱的王明:
我写信是想友好地提醒你宿舍的规定。既然我们现在都住在同一间宿舍,遵守规定和尊重他
人较好。第一,当你起床后,你最好整理一下床铺。如果你的床是整洁干净的,我相信待在宿舍
里会更加舒服。第二,当所有人都在睡觉时,你不能打电话。如果是紧急电话,你可以在宿舍外
面接。第三,没有别人的允许,你不能使用或移动其他人的私人物品。第四,为了节能省钱,你
应该在离开宿舍前关灯。只有我们所有人都遵守规定,我们才能在宿舍中过得愉快。
最美的祝愿。
李华
第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文
A
(2022·辽宁丹东·中考真题)
假如你是王阳,收到好友Tom的一封邮件,请根据邮件内容进行回复。
Dear Wang Yang,How’s it going? I have good news to tell you. I’ll go to your school as an exchange student. I’m interested in school activities. What activities are there in your school? Can you tell me something about them? Tom |
写作要求:
1. 语言表达准确,语意通顺连贵;
2. 书写工整规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 词数:70词左右。(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wang Yang
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.
I'm writing to tell you many interesting activities this year in our school.Firstly, we have English Day in January . I read English books and talk with my classmates in English. Secondly, the Art Festival is in May. I like drawing and I am good at singing. I think it’s really an exciting day.Thirdly, The school trips in October. I can play games and do many interesting things. So it’s my favorite month.
I think we can always have a good time at school.
Yours,
Wang Yang
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文,来信中明确写出要介绍学校的活动。
写作指导:本文主要以第一人称写作,时态主要为一般现在时。可以使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
B
(2022·湖南邵阳·中考真题)
“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临,假如你是Zhang Wei,你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的暑期计划,请你给他写一封回信,内容要点如下:
要求:1. 至少写四点暑期计划,可适当发挥;2.语言表达准确,语意通顺连贯;
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you? In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you? In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly, I want to have a good rest and relax myself. I will listen to some music or watch some TV. Secondly, I will read some books. I like reading very much. So I read a book every week to broaden my horizons. Thirdly, I will be a volunteer to help those in need. Finally, I will help my parents do some housework at home.
All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示,给英国笔友Tom回一封关于你今年的暑期计划的信。
- 写作指导:本文时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时包含要点,且自己需要再加一点暑期计划,可使用过渡词Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly以及Finally使文章更通畅,最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
C
(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题)
假如你是李平,你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息,给他写一封回信,谈谈你的看法,并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作要点:
1.因他的信任而高兴。
2.你的看法:
(1)遵守规则是重要的;
(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。
3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obey the rules)的中学生。
写作要求:
1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How’s it going?
Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you. I am very happy for your trust .You feel quite upset these days because you have too many rules to obey. Some of them are from your family and some from your school. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary. More often than not, obeying rules will make us popular among our classmates.
I'm writing to tell you to give you some advice for your problem. Firstly, it is important to obey rules .What can you do to obey the rules? The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart.Secondly,following the rules makes people welcome.Rules may limit your freedom, but they do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. In the school, you’d better not run after others, because it is dangerous. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel or even turn a cold shoulder towards them.
So much for my advice and wait for your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】1.题干解读:本文为一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示信息,就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
- 写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段要表达因得到对方的信任而感到高兴,并谈谈对遵守规则的看法:(1)遵守规则是重要的;(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。第二段要告诉对方具体如何做一名遵守规则的中学生,即提建议。提建议时,可用情态动词should和固定句式“You’d better not...”等,使语气更委婉。最后,总结全文、表达祝福,并署名。
D
(2022·广西柳州·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。
地位 | 最受欢迎的颜色之一 |
代表 | 幸福,好运 |
节日 | 春节等 |
形式 | 剪纸,灯笼,红包等 |
注意:
(1)词数70左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
受欢迎的popular 代表stand for 幸福happiness 好运good luck
春节the Spring Festival 剪纸 paper-cuts 灯笼lanterns 红包red packets
Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. Firstly, Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.Secondly,People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. Thirdly,the houses are also filled with red paper-cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封书信。针对“中国红”进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示,从地位、代表、节日和形式方面进行叙述。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出,可以接着从地位和代表两个方面介绍“中国红”;第二段可以从节日和形式方面进行介绍;最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。