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展开专题15---感激、感恩、感谢A(2022·湖北湖北·中考真题)在你的成长历程中,有许多值得感恩的人,如父母,老师,同学……他们或帮助过你,或影响到你,你最想感恩谁?请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文。要点提示:1. 他/她有什么特点(外貌,性格……)?2. 他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么?3. 你想怎样感谢他/她?写作要求:1. 词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);2. 根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇:be grateful to对……心存感激;have an influence on对……有影响;care about关心;unforgettable难以忘怀的The Person I Want to Express My ThanksIn my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文The Person I Want to Express My ThanksIn my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is my English teacher Mr. Lee. He is tall and thin. He has short black hair and wears glasses. He is always friendly and patient with us.When I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest. He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you”. With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot. Mr. Lee has a great influence on me, I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. I think that’s the best gift for my dear teacher.【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作,介绍你最想感谢的人,可适当增加细节。2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点;第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事;第三段讲述你会如何感谢他。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。B(2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题)亲爱的同学,恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中,你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师,表达你对他(她)的感激之情。内容包括:1.你对这位老师的印象;2.你感谢他(她)的原因;3.你对他(她)的祝福。注意:1.词数在80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);2.可适当举例或拓展;3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名,师生名字等)。It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,本文开头已经给出,选择一位你想要感谢的老师,表达感激之情,根据提示要点进行写作,可以适当发挥。2.写作指导:本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述,时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作,要求描述对老师的印象,感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。C(2022·广西贺州·中考真题)假如你是李华,在过去的三年,英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能,开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出,决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文。提示:你的英语老师1.外貌 2.性格……你学会了1.唱英文歌,欣赏英文电影 2.用英语讲小故事 3.用英语进行简单交流……感恩和决心1.感恩老师的教导 2.继续努力学习英语 3. 用英语向世界讲述中国故事…… 要求:1. 文章必须包括所给提示内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;3. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is Ms. Zhang. She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient with all of us.Ms. Zhang has taught me English for 3 years. I like her interesting classes. Learning English helps me become more open-minded. Now I can talk with others in English fluently and read some English books. I can also tell some stories in English. Besides, enjoying English songs and movies has become one of my hobbies.Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, to whom I want to say thanks. I decide to learn more English in the future, and try my best to tell the story of China in English to the world.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示,介绍下你的英语老师,描述你所学会的东西,以及感激英语老师的付出,决定将来继续学好并用好英语。2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句,使文章出彩有亮点。写作时确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。D(2022·江苏无锡·中考真题)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项:1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;3. 词数在100个左右,演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文The Person I Want to ThankIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容,写出最想感谢的人是谁;他/她的外表、性格;举例说明为何感谢他/她;以及对你的影响。2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容;叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时,叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性,保证词汇和语法的正确使用。 E(2022·云南普洱·模拟预测)I Thank My ________提示:转眼三年已过,我们又来到人生的分岔路口,我们即将挥别日夜相处的老师、同学和朋友,他们在你茫然的时候指引着你前进,因此我们应心怀感激,请以 “I Thank My ________” 为题写一篇英语短文,表达你对他们的感谢。要求:1. 将题目补充完整;2. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:I Thank My TeacherI have been studied in middle school for three years. In a few days, I will graduate. My favorite teacher is my English teacher. I thank her very much.My English teacher is a beautiful woman. She is kind but strict. She is also humorous. She is popular with us. Her class is very interesting and active. My spoken English was poor, and I failed an exam. She did not blame me. She helped me with my English after class. It helped a lot. My English became better and better. She’s always patient when I asked her some questions. I felt so moved and became more interested in English.I would like to thank her for all the help she gave me. I hope that she will be better and better. I want to say “Thank you, my dear teacher, and I will never forget you.”【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求以“I Thank My...”为题写一篇短文,叙述你想感谢的人,表达对他/她的感谢。2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主;文章可分为三段式:第一段指出你想表达感谢的人;第二段说明感激的原因;最后一段抒发你的感激之情。在叙述内容时,保证提示内容叙述完整,条理清晰,无语法和拼写错误。F(2022·山东淄博·二模)假设你是李华,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容写一篇100词左右的英语短文,用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐 注意:1. 书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名;3. 短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文A Letter to My ParentsDear Mum and Dad,I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.First of all, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for cooking for me every day and taking care of me when I’m sick. I would also like to thank you for your trust and care about my personal feelings. You encouraged me when I was in trouble. So I have to study hard to repay you. At the same time, I wish you keep healthy and happy.Thanks again for everything you have done for me.Love,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点及参考词汇写短文表达自己的父母的感激之情,可以按照信件格式写作,题目表格中的内容需要全部包括在内,字数要在100词左右,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:写作时要以第一、二人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。可分为四段式写作:第一段点题:第二段讲父母做了什么:第三段讲父母对自己的帮助和鼓励;最后一段收尾,与开头呼应。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。G(2022·江苏·景山中学三模)初中三年我们在老师的辛勤教诲、家长的悉心照料、同学朋友的关心下收获很多,如今即将毕业,你很想感谢他们。你校英语报正在征集感恩为主题的文章,请以“The Person I’d Like to thank most”为题,结合具体事例写一篇英语作文。Who do you want to thank?Why do you want to thank him/her? What can you learn from him/her?注意事项:1.词数:100 词左右;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息;3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文The Person I’d Like to thank mostThe person I want to thank most is my mother. My mother plays an important role in my life. She not only brought me up, but also taught me many skills. My family background is average, but my mother does not hesitate to invest money in my life and study, and she is not willing to buy clothes and delicious food for herself. I want to do something for her at home and help her clean up. I want to cook her a meal personally on her birthday.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The Person I’d Like to thank most”为题,结合具体事例进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍想感谢谁,为什么想要感谢他/她以及你能从他/她身上学到什么。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。H(2022·广东·广州大学附属中学二模)假如你是李明,初中三年你与同学们在一起学习,参加各种活动,互相帮助,彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业,校园网英语论坛开辟了Thank-you letter专题。请你按照要求给你的同学王星写一封感谢信,内容包括:1. 王星给你的印象(外貌、性格特征等)。2. 简述感谢的原因,包括王星对你的帮助和影响,适当举例。3. 你对未来的期待和对王星的祝福。词数80左右(信的开头已给出,不计入总词数),不能透露任何个人信息(如具体学校和姓名等等),否则不予评分。Dear Wang Xing, The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ming【答案】范文:Dear Wang Xing,The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to thank you.You’ve been kind and helpful since we knew each other. I’ll never forget all the help you’ve given me. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. You also encourage me to be confident. Since then, we’ve been very close friends. Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success in the future.Yours,Li Ming【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一封感谢信;要求包含所有提示内容。2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;采用第二人称和第一人称口吻;可采用3段落格式,第一段:表达写信目的;第二段:阐述对好朋友的印象、感谢的原因、他是如何帮助你的以及你对未来的期待;第三段:表达祝福。I(2022·广东深圳·模拟预测)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,2022年3月23日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员天宫授课,请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员。内容包括:1.感谢宇航员们的精彩授课;2.观看太空授课后的收获和感想;3.祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。注意:1.词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear astronauts,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wish you a triumphant return.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文:Dear astronauts,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on March 23, 2022.After watching the hour-long televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science. What’s more, I’m more enthusiastic about our country’s space exploration program. I’m so proud of our country’s advances in science that I’m determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.Wish you a triumphant return.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是写一封电子邮件。要求根据提示内容给神舟十三号三位宇航员发送一封电子邮件,短文开头和结尾已给出,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来叙述;时态上以一般现在时为主。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,结构清晰,表达具有条理性。