2023届新高考英语读后续写特训亲情类（故事构造“三板斧”）学案

这是一份2023届新高考英语读后续写特训亲情类（故事构造“三板斧”）学案，共27页。

第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等） PAGEREF _Tc16117 \h 3
第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等） PAGEREF _Tc5988 \h 4
第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等） PAGEREF _Tc18852 \h 6
Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系） PAGEREF _Tc29742 \h 7
一、母子关系 PAGEREF _Tc5342 \h 7
二、父子关系 PAGEREF _Tc25940 \h 9
三、 父女之间 PAGEREF _Tc25104 \h 12
四、 姐妹之间 PAGEREF _Tc20593 \h 13
五、 兄弟之间 PAGEREF _Tc2755 \h 14
六、 祖孙之间 PAGEREF _Tc29146 \h 15
七、 夫妻之间 PAGEREF _Tc18210 \h 16
Part4：灵活应用: PAGEREF _Tc402 \h 17
例1：圣诞节的礼物 PAGEREF _Tc21916 \h 17
例2：爸爸带我体验生活 PAGEREF _Tc30939 \h 19
Part 5： 高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜 PAGEREF _Tc29878 \h 21
Part1：经典例文（送花）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Recently I graduated frm high schl, and as a gift I received a huge hunch f flwers, 40 t be exact! I had s many that I didn't knw what t d with them. The next weekend my niece and nephew, Sue and Mike, aged 6 and 7, came and suddenly I had an idea. I might let them give ut these flwers t peple they met n the street, and in this way they culd learn hw t be friendly t thers. S I tld them abut my plan and explained that these flwers wuld make peple feel happy and smile. They lved the idea and were eager t have a try. S at nce we tk every single flwer and tied a smile card t it. We then went t the street with the flwers.
The first flwer went t a pliceman. As sn as she saw the pliceman, my niece ran up t him and handed him a flwer. His smile was s big, but hers was even bigger!
In n time, we neared the end f ur flwers. It was lunch time and we went t Subway fr lunch. There the kids gave a flwer t the waitress, wh was really excited t receive the flwer. As we were eating ur lunch, the waitress came up t the kids with tw big chclate ckies! She said the chclate ckies were fr them and that she really liked the flwer! As they ate the ckies, my niece and nephew lked at me with the biggest smiles I had ever seen.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With just ne flwer left, I said it shuld be given t the persn wh needed it mst.
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It turned ut t be a great day fr us.
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【答案】With just ne flwer left I said it shuld be given t the persn wh needed it mst. Just then, my nephew caught sight f an ld wman in a wheelchair nearby. “I think she’s the very persn fr the flwer. She lives a hard life because f bad health. She needs smiles mst,” said my nephew. With these wrds, my nephew, fllwed by my niece, tk the flwer up t her. Yu can imagine hw happy the ld wman lked! She smiled, and gave each f the kids a big kiss.
It turned ut t be a great day fr us. We spread a lt f smiles by giving ut flwers, and received a lt f smiles in return. The flwers nt nly made us feel gd abut urselves, but als made 40 ther peple feel happy. I feel there is nthing mre enjyable than being friendly t peple. Meanwhile, the kids learned an imprtant lessn in the prcess. In fact, they can’t wait until next time they have such a chance again. They want t give ut mre flwers!
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者高中毕业时收到了很多鲜花，他打算让侄子侄女们把花送给别人，用这样的方式让他们知道如何对别人友好。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：只剩下一朵花了，我说应该给最需要的人……，所以应该写谁是最需要这朵花的人。要详细描述为什么这个人是最需要这朵花的，同时要刻画当这个人收到花时的感受与表现等。第二段开头是：这对我们来说是伟大的一天。本段应该写我和侄子侄女通过送花这件事的感受及明白的道理。
【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：catch sight f；mre…
than；can’t wait ；give ut等高级词汇；With these wrds，fllwed by my niece复合结构作状语等高级句式。
Part2：亲情类故事构造“三板斧”
第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）
只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。
1、生气
1. 我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）
My mther glanced at me. Smething she never did befre I had a stepfamily. “Yu culd have picked it up. ” she said. “That wuld have been the kind thing t d.”
他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。
He flded his fist angrily, but his yunger brther waved his hands excitedly.
3.Jacksn试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）
Jacksn kept saying smething, but s angry was Carter that he culdn’t even hear a wrd .
2、后悔
1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。
I realized hw prly I tied the string n my skirt which was ver leggings. I shuld have asked mm fr help.
3、内疚
一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。
Thinking abut what I had dne t him, regret and guilt verwhelmed me like endless tides.
每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。
Whenever I thught f Henry’s wet bk, my face turned red.
4、烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frwned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）
5、伤心
当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）
Amanda felt as gray as the sky utside when she lked acrss the table at her three-year-ld sister.
6、犯错
T cver his terrible actin（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）, the terrified by glued the pieces tgether hastily and put the vase back t its place.（2021 广一模）
Fearing punishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）, the suddenly inspired by said that a neighbur’s cat jumped in frm the windw and he culdn’t drive it away n matter hw hard he tried.（2021 广一模）
Glancing at the chclates with hesitatin,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the by timidly raised his head befre his mther. （2021 广一模）
第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）
1、道歉
1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jacksn的头。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
“I’m s srry.”he said, gently petting Jacksn’s head.
2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He put dwn his hand, glanced cautiusly at Carter and lwered his head.
3.T her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her aplgy fr ignring my lneliness （为她忽略我的孤独道歉）as well as my difficulty with English cmmunicatin.（2021年沈阳市一模）
2、原谅
1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021 广一模）
His mther silenced him by gently putting her finger n his lips，gave a sft kiss n his frehead and walked ut f the study.
3、开心
1. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
“I wanted t surprise yu!” he pinted at a neatly wrapped bx with his eyes gleaming.
2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（ding非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
Seeing his families sitting tgether and staying tgether harmniusly, Cater felt a surge f happiness.
欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模）
Cheerful singing flating in the rm, the tw sisters immersed themselves in the beauty f the music.
4、感激
1. 如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。（2021年南通市二模）But fr Henry’s help, I wuldn’t have finished my perfrmance smthly.
2. I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主格结构)（2021年沈阳市一模）
3. Afterwards, it was my turn t give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude t my mm and friends, bwing(bw) t them several times. （定语从句，非谓语）
5、回忆
1. 在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；ding非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
At that mment, unexpectedly, the memry f the sight f Billy crying n the grund ccurred t Carter, hvering in his mind and reminding him smething .
2.看着Jacksn，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
Lking at Jacksn, Carter culdn’t help imagining his little brther spending the whle day carefully painting the car.（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）
3. “I just wish I knew hw t help her,” Amanda said t herself, thinking f Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）. （2020.11温州一模）
第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）
1. Frm then n, the three chclates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended t lie, reminding him t be hnest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021 广一模）
2. I ndded firmly, knwing a flwer f kindness and friendship began t blssm（善良和友谊之花开放） in bth f ur hearts.（2021年南通市二模）
3.This experience transfrmed my attitude twards Henry and ur relatinship has als been harmnius（我们的关系变得和谐） since then.（2021年南通市二模）
4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）
It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth frm ur family. I will treasure it with all my heart.

Part3：亲情类场景描写（七大关系）
一、母子关系
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D yu mean that eve flwer has its wn beauty asked my mther thughtfully.I ndded withut hesitatin, as if a secnd wasted culd deprive the dandelins f thei life."The same t yu," she added, her vice sft""Nt everyne can be a rse,and it is als an hnr t be a dandelin." Knwing that my mther had realized my pain, I tk ff the mask that I had wrn fr the whle lunch time and pured ut my unease heartily She listened t me patiently and patted me n the back tenderly.Suddenly she stpped, as if t say smething.
“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。 我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。 “你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一种荣誉。” 我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。
"But yu will be a beautiful narratr." Mm said. She reminded me f hw fluently I culd deliver my part at hme.It was at that time that I understd that maybe I was mre suitable fr a rle back stage like a narratr. Frm then n, I practiced my lines heart and sul with my mther at lunch time fr weeks. And the perfrmance apprached ultimately Standing backstage, nervusness came flding in me.What encuraged me t vercme it was the inspiratin frm the beautiful yellw dandelins. The perfrmance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderus applause, I tk pride in my rle and firmly believed that even a dandelin had its wn beauty.
“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者。”妈妈说。她让我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那个时候，我明白也许我更适合像叙述者这样的角色。从那时起，我在午餐时间和母亲一起练习了好几周。演出最终站在后台，紧张情绪涌上心头。鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。当晚的演出最终大获成功。听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。
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"D yu mean that every flwer has its wn beauty?" asked my mther thughtfully. My lips parted with nthing uttered, my eyes drped t the grund. The dandelin blssm spread in the air, light and all silent. I felt a sinking in my heart, and my heart in my thrat.A mixed sentiment f fear and desire clung upn my mind."Similarly, every individual has his wn beauty," said my mther in a cmfrting vice. My eyebrws furrwed, my fists clenched, I murmured timidly, "but I failed playing the princess fr the lines despite all the practice."
“你是说每一朵花都有自己的美丽吗？” 妈妈若有所思地问。 我的嘴唇张开了，什么也没说，我的眼睛下垂到地上。 蒲公英的花朵在空中蔓延开来，淡淡的，所有的寂静。 我感到我的心在下沉，我的心在我的喉咙。 一种恐惧和欲望混合在我的脑海里。 “同样，每个人都有自己的美丽，”母亲安慰地说。 我的眉毛皱了起来，我的拳头紧握着，我胆怯地喃喃地说，“但我没能在所有的练习中扮演公主。 “
"But yu will be a beautiful narratr," mm said.My glance steadily resting n the blssm, when I raised my head, I hardly resisted the impulse t take a glimpse.In an instant ur eyes met, and it was a reflective lk. The tender breeze f early spring blew my cheeks flush. Mm lwered her lean shulder, reached ut and patted n my head. A gentle smile slipped frm her lips."Yu are the dandelin blssm, the best narratr in ur garden." A faint whisper came int my ear. The perfume f grasses and bushes and,all flwers scented the mellw atmsphere.
“但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者，”妈妈说。我的目光坚定地停留在花朵上，当我抬起头来时，我几乎无法抗拒要瞥一眼的冲动。刹那间，我们的眼睛相遇了，神情也在沉思。早春的微风使我的脸颊红晕了。妈妈放下她瘦削的肩膀，伸出手来拍了拍我的头。她嘴里露出一丝温柔的微笑。“你是蒲公英的花朵，是我们花园里最好的叙述者。”我耳边传一阵耳语。草和灌木丛的芳香，所有的花朵都散发着柔和的气氛。
3.
Appraching the drway, Jenny tk a deep breath. When she kncked at the dr, she fund the dr was lcked and her mther was nt in.Tired and sad, she sat dwn in frnt f the huse."Where culd my mther be?" she wndered,"Was she stil angry with me?" Again, the scene f the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness t her mther. Realizing that all the sclding frm her mther was due t the fact that her mther really cared a lt abut her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began t rll dwn her cheeks.
走近门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。 当她敲门时，她发现门被锁着，她的母亲不在。 她又累又伤心，坐在房子前面。 “我妈妈在哪儿？” 她想，“她还在生我的气吗？” 再次，争吵的场景出现在她的脑海里。 她记得她对母亲的粗鲁。 意识到母亲所有的责骂都是因为她母亲真的很关心她，她感到相当羞愧，眼泪开始从她的脸颊滚下来。
A gentle tuch n her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face f her mther."Here yu cme! I've been lking fr yu, she said, tired and relieved.Jenny culdn't help thrwing herself int her mther's arms."Mum, I'm s srry and thank yu fr all yu have dne fr me." She expressed her sincere aplgy and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mther smiled patting her back gently.
她的头发上轻轻的一碰，使她的思想恢复了。 她抬起头，看到了母亲那张熟悉的脸。 ”“你来了！ 我一直在找你，她说，累了，松了一口气。 珍妮忍不住扑进妈妈的怀里。 “妈妈，我很抱歉，谢谢你为我所做的一切。” 她表示真诚的道歉和极大的感谢。 听到这话，妈妈笑着轻轻拍了拍她的背。
二、父子关系
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The man, seeing that the by already had mney started t get angry again."Hw can yu be s selfish?Why d yu want mre mney since yu already have these bills?" the father culd hardly hld his anger back and inquired with tw eyebrws knitted int ne. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little by slwly and carefully cunted ut his mney, and then lked up at his father, replying,"Because I didn't have enugh befre, but nw I d." with big blue eyes]shining with tears.
那个男人，看到那个男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。 “你怎么这么自私？ 既然你已经有了这些账单，你为什么还要更多的钱？” 父亲几乎不能忍住他的愤怒，用两个眉毛编织成一个。 小男孩含着泪水，慢慢地小心地数出他的钱，然后抬头看着他的父亲，回答说：“因为我以前没有足够的钱，但现在我有了。” 带着蓝色的大眼睛]眼泪闪闪发光。
Nt knwing what his sn meant, the father just std there, waiting fr his by's explanatin.Wiping away his tears and an inncent smile appearing n his face, the by requested in a relieved vice,"Daddy, I have $20 nw. Can I buy an hur frm yu?Please cme hme early tmrrw.I want t have dinner with yu." Hearing the by's small but sincere request, the father culdn't hld back his tears.Realizing he was t busy with his business t spare sme time with his belved nes, he gathered his sn int his arms and aplgized again and again,"Srry., and I prmise I'Il be back early tmrrw."
他不知道儿子的意思，父亲就站在那里等着儿子的解释。男孩擦去眼泪，脸上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口气的声音问道：“爸爸，我现在有$20了。我能从你那里买到一个小时吗？请明天早点回家。我想和你共吃晚饭。”听到男孩小而真诚的请求，父亲忍不住流住了眼泪。意识到自己忙了，没有时间和心爱的人在一起，他把儿子抱在怀里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保证明天早点回来。”
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The bird drpped like a rck,ne wing flpping behind as it fell.I heard it thump int the dirt.Befre lwering the gun,I realized what I'd dne~I'd killed my first animal. "Oh n," My stmach was tied in knts and I prayed,"Oh Gd, please dn't let it be dead." The bird lay there with bld streaming frm its beak, feathers large and small scattered abut.I reached ut and rlled it ver, but its head drped lifelessly t the side. After burying it,I hurried hme, hiding my BB gun in the clset.
那只鸟像石头一样落下，一只翅膀在它落下的时候扑向后面。 我听到它砰的一声撞到泥土里。 在放下枪之前，我意识到我做了什么~我杀了我的第一只动物。 “哦，不，”我的胃结成结，我祈祷，“哦，上帝，请不要让它死了。” 鸟儿躺在那里，鲜血从它的喙流出来，羽毛大大小小散落在周围。 我伸手把它翻过来，但它的头毫无生气地垂到一边。 埋了它之后，我急忙回家，把我的BB枪藏在壁橱里。
When my dad gt hme that evening, he asked me hw my day was.I hesitated, and was mmentarily uneasy that guilt crssed my face. My dad,a man f keen perceptin, quickly went int cnfrntatin mde, asking what really happened.I replied, as if I had t chke the wrds ut f my thrat, tears streaming dwn my face. He didn't say anything but just lked at me, hand resting n my shulder. That evening, my dad made me vw t never kill a thing again, explaining that nce I gt bred f animals, thenext target culd be smething even mre priceless.
那天晚上我爸爸回家时，他问我今天过得怎么样。 我犹豫了一下，一时感到不安，内疚掠过我的脸。 我的父亲，一个敏锐的感知，很快进入对抗模式，问到底发生了什么。 我回答说，好像我不得不掐住喉咙里的话，眼泪从我脸上流下来。 他什么也没说，只是看着我，手放在我的肩膀上。 那天晚上，我爸爸发誓再也不杀任何东西，解释说一旦伊戈特厌倦了动物，下一个目标可能是更无价的东西。
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The bird drpped like a rck,ne wing flpping behind as it fell. A surge f excitement ran thrugh me, as ifI were the king.Lwering the BB gun, I cameup t check my target. It was sill alive, with nly ne wing bleeding. "Why nt take it hme s that I can play with it?" I picked up the little creature and went hme. When I placed it n the desk, it was struggling t stand up but in vain. At the sight,I began t feel a little uneasy. With the night falling, I was n pins and needles.
那只鸟像石头一样掉了下来，一只翅膀在它掉下来的时候向后面。 一阵兴奋从我身上掠过，仿佛我是国王。 放下BB枪，我来检查我的目标。 它还活着，只有一只翅膀在流血。 “为什么不把它带回家让我玩呢？” 我抱起小生物，回家了。 当我把它放在桌子上时，它挣扎着站起来，但徒劳无功。 一看，我就开始觉得有些不安。 夜幕降临，我如坐针毡。
When my dad gt hme that evening, he asked me hw my day was.I was dead silent.Dad merely rested his hand upn me and waited with a sft lk in his eye."I.." my vice cracked and I cleared my thrat."I sht a bird." "Oh?" he replied, his expressin unchanging. "Where is the bird nw?" I led him t the desk. Seeing the bird,dad smthed its feathers with his gentle fingers and fixed the brken wing with a bandage. Several days later, the bird was fully recvered. Seeing it fly away,I realized I shuld use the real pwer t prtect rather than hurt lives.
那天晚上我爸爸回家后，他问我今天过得怎么样。我沉默了。爸爸只是把手放在我身上，温柔地等待着。“我。”我的声音裂开了，我清了清嗓子。“我射杀了一只鸟。”“哦吗？”他回答说，他的表情始终保持不变。“这只鸟现在在哪里了？”我把他领到桌子前。看到这只鸟，爸爸用它温柔的手指抚平了它的羽毛，用绷带固定着折断的翅膀。几天后，这只鸟就完全康复了。看到它飞走了，我意识到我应该使用真正的力量来保护生命，而不是伤害生命。
父女之间
It was a lng trip back t the ffice.I picked up the wastebasket and pured the cntents n my desk.I was carefully srting it all ut.After was remving the dirt ff and spraying the whle thing with breath freshener t kill the smell f fd.I carefully smthed ut the bag and put the treasures inside.I carried the whle thing hme gingerly,like an injured kitten. That evening,I returned it t Mlly. After dinner,I asked Mlly t tell me abut the stuff in the bag,and s she tk it all ut a piece at a time and placed the bjects in a rw n the dining rm table.Everything had a stry, a memry, r was attached t dreams and imaginary friends J managed t say"I see" very wisely several time Ad_as a_matter f fact,I did see.
这是回办公室的长途旅行。 我拿起废纸篓，把东西倒在桌子上。 我仔细整理了一下。 在清除污垢后，用呼吸清新剂喷洒整个东西来杀死食物的气味。 我小心地把袋子弄平，把宝藏放进去。 我小心翼翼地把整件事带回家，就像一只受伤的小猫。 那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。 晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我袋子里的东西，所以她一次拿出一块，把东西排成一排放在餐厅的桌子上。 每件事都有一个故事，一个记忆，或者依附于梦想和想象中的朋友J成功地说了几次“我明白了”事实上，我确实看到了。
T my surprise, Mlly gave the bag t me nce again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside.I felt frgiven,and trusted and lved.And a little mre cmfrtable wearing the title f father. Over several mnths, the bag with the nte in went with me frm time t time.In time Mlly turned her attentin t ther things. She fund ther treasures,lst in new games, and grew up.I was left hlding the bag.She gave it t me ne mrning and never asked fr its return. And s I have it still.
令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把这个包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被宽恕，被信任和被爱。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一点。几个月多了，那个带着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她还发现了其他在新游戏中丢失的宝藏，然后长大了。我一直拿着袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求让它回来。所以我还在那里。
姐妹之间
Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead. Refusing t give up at this pint, he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd.He dashed acrss the finish line and wn the furth prize. Thinking he wuld let her sister dwn, Ali culdn't help sbbing.Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize as the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule.Hlding the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, Ali felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.
阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。 在这一点上，他拒绝放弃，他跳起来，跑得尽可能快。 他冲过终点线，获得了四等奖。 以为他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。 就在这时，他突然听到广播中宣布，他赢得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的跑步者因违反规则而被取消资格。 在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧贴在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口气，因为他最终为他的妹妹赢得了鞋子。
Filled with delight, Ali walked hme quickly. He culd nt wait t see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali fund Zahra was waiting utside. She was really nervus whether her brther had brught her what she was expecting. "Zahra, see what I have gt fr yu" he tk the prize ut f his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Zahra saw the shes, her face lit up. S thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali."Thank yu! Ali." Tears f jy welled up their eyes as the brther and sister hugged tightly tgether.
充满喜悦，阿里快步走回家。 他迫不及待地要去看妹妹，分享这个惊心动魄的消息。 阿里一到，就发现Zahra在外面等着。 她真的很紧张，她哥哥是否给她带来了她所期待的。 “扎赫拉，看看我给你买了什么”他用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。 扎赫拉看到鞋子的瞬间，她的脸就亮了起来。 她激动得扑向阿里。 ”“谢谢！ Ali。” 当兄妹紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛。
兄弟之间
There was n fence at all.It was a bridge! A bridge stretched frm ne side f the creek t the ther!Jhn was abut t cmplain abut everything,when he fund the neighbr,his yung brther,was cming acrss the bridge,his hands utstretched."Yu are quite a fellw t build this bridge after all I have said and dne," said Jhn's brther. The tw brthers met in the middle,taking each ther's hand and hugging each ther.
根本没有栅栏。 是一座桥！ 一座桥从小溪的一边延伸到另一边！ 约翰正要抱怨一切，当他发现邻居，他的弟弟，正在过桥，他的手伸出。 约翰的哥哥说：“我说了这么多，你真是个造桥的好朋友。 两兄弟在中间相遇，牵着对方的手，互相拥抱。
They turned t see the carpenter lift the tlbx nt his shulder."N,wait! Stay a few mre days.We have mre jbs fr yu," said the lder brther."I'd lve t stay n." the carpenter said."but I have many mre bridges t build." Observing the carpenter leaving,the tw brthers waved grateful gd-bye t him.What a thught-prvking stry! Every day we have the chice f building a fence r a bridge.One leads t separatin and anger while the ther leads t penness and friendship.
他们转过身来，看到木匠把工具箱抬到肩上。“不，等等！ 再呆几天。 我们有更多的工作要给你。 “我很想继续。” 木匠说。 “但我还有很多桥要建。” 看着木匠走了，两个兄弟向他挥手表示感谢。 多么发人深省的故事啊！ 每天我们都可以选择建造栅栏或桥梁。 一个导致分离和愤怒，另一个导致开放和友谊。
祖孙之间
When Christmas break came, Grandma gt a chest cld, and I was afraid t leave her.I hadn't been hme since Labr Day, and my mther was anxius t see me.I agreed t cme hme,but fr tw weeks instead f fur, s I culd return t Grandma and Grandpa.I said my gd-byes,arranged fr their temprary care and return hme.As I was lading my car t g back t schl, the phne rang."Grandma died last night,I'm srry."I hung up the phne feeling like my wrld had ended.I had lst my friend, and that was far wrse than knwing I wuld have t return t washing dishes.I went back at the end f fur weeks, asking t begin the wrk-study prgram again.The financial aid advisr lked at me as if I had lst my mind.I explained my psitin, then he smiled and slid me an envelpe. "This is fr yu, he said.
当圣诞假期来临时，奶奶胸口感冒了，我害怕离开她。 从劳动节开始我就没回家，我妈妈很想见我。 我同意回家，但两个星期而不是四个星期，所以我可以回到奶奶和爷爷身边。 我说了我的道别，安排他们暂时照顾，然后回家。 当我正在装货回学校时，电话响了。 “奶奶昨晚死了，对不起。 “我挂了电话，感觉我的世界已经结束了。 我失去了我的朋友，这比我知道我必须回去洗碗要糟糕得多。 四个星期后，我又回去了，要求开始勤工俭学。 财政援助顾问看着我，好像我疯了似的。 我解释了我的立场，然后他笑了笑，递给我一个信封。 “这是给你的，”他说。
The envelpe was frm grandma. She had knwn hw sick she was.In the envelpe was enugh mney t pay fr the rest f my cllege year and a request that I take pian lessns in her memry. Mved t tears,I determined t learn pian lessns by heart and my memry f grandma mtivated me t practice day and night.I dn't think the pian piece was even played with mre feeling than it was my secnd year in cllege. Nw,years later, when I walk by a pian, I smile and think f Grandma. She is playing the pian smilingly in heaven,I am sure.
那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支付我大学剩下的时间，并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了，决心用心学钢琴，对奶奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年后，当我走过钢琴时，我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。
夫妻之间
The driver respnded,"It must feel gd t be taken care f and prtected like yu are every day." Cnfused by what the driver talked abut,she asked,"What d yu mean?" The driver answered,"Every mrning in the past week,a fine-lking gentleman in a military unifrm has been standing acrss the street watching yu getting ff the bus.He makes sure yu crss the street safely and he watches until yu enter yur ffice building.Then he blws yu a kiss, gives yu a salute and walks away.Yu are ne lucky lady."
司机回答说：“每天都像你一样受到照顾和保护，感觉一定很好。” 她被司机说的话弄糊涂了，问：“你什么意思？” 司机回答说：“过去一周的每天早晨，一位穿着军装的英俊绅士一直站在街对面，看着你下车。 他确保你安全过街，他看着你进入你的办公楼。 然后他给你一个吻，给你一个敬礼，然后走开。 你真是个幸运的女士。 “
Tears f happiness pured dwn Susan's cheeks.With tears f happiness in her eyes, she std mtinlessly facing the ppsite side f the street, as if gazing at smene.Althugh she culdn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thught she was actually lucky,fr he had given her a gift mre pwerful than sight, a gift f lve that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little wrried,he saw his wife break in t a radiant smile and blw a kiss t his directin. Finally she fund back herself, blind but attractive and cnfident as she used t be.
幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。 她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街道对面，仿佛在凝视着某人。 虽然她看不到他的身体，但她绝对感觉到马克的存在。 苏珊认为她实际上是幸运的，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗中带来光明。 就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子露出灿烂的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一个吻。 最后，她发现自己回来了，她失明了，但像以前一样有吸引力和自信。
Part4：灵活应用:
例1：圣诞节的礼物
Several years ag, I was living in New Yrk and wrking fr an airline, s I never gt back hme fr Christmas. My Christmas was happy t with sme ther clleagues arund. But in my heart I was sad because I culdn’t stay with my family. Smetimes my clleagues wuld say ur Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whle day ff, which meant I culd stay with my family n Christmas Eve.
When Christmas mrning came, I awke t a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!”was all my yunger sn had time t say. He seemed t be racing against time. I knew he was hunting fr gifts with his brther eagerly. I gt dwn stairs just t see the tw little bys’ faces as they lked at the pcket rckets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was fr the children wh had deep belief in the amazing pwer f Santa Claus. At first,their fingers went almst shyly ver their tys. When their inspectin had been cmpleted, the tw bys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything int the center f the living rm.
Delight flded the rm. As their mther began giving ut gifts, I smiled t myself, wndering hw my unexpected gifts this year wuld be received. With s many Christmas spent utside, I had prepared s many gifts fr my children and tgether with my wife. I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they fund all f them. They were happily pening packages cnstantly thanking cnsiderate Santa Claus fr his kindness and ability t knw their desires. But I had nt received a single ne. I knew they had frgtten my existence with my absence frm their Christmas these years.
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I had t admit that my disappintment was grwing steadily. I was wndering whether I culd get a gift when my yunger sn ran t me, wh was really kind enugh t save my face. He asked me t admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chsen by Santa Claus. He said happily that he wuld share sme f the gifts f his and allw me t chse ne frm them. I thanked him frm the bttm f my heart, still feeling disappinted.
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Suddenly my wife walked up t me. It seemed that she had guessed hw I felt. She asked me t lk at the Christmas tree which was decrated with s many bxes. I think she was shwing ff her effrts n the decratin but she tk ff a small bx and passed it t me smiling and saying it was fr me. I pened it and saw a letter which read.“We will never frget yu. Merry Christmas!”Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight.I was mved t tears.
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我不得不承认，我的失望正在稳步增长。 我在想，当我的小儿子跑到我身边时，我是否能得到一份礼物，他真的很善良，足以拯救我的脸。 他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的。 他高兴地说，他将分享他的一些礼物，并允许我从他们中选择一个。 我从心底感谢他，仍然感到失望。
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突然我妻子走到我面前。 似乎她已经猜到了我的感受。 她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。 我想她是在炫耀她在装饰上的努力，但她脱下了一个小盒子，微笑着递给我，说这是给我的。 我打开它，看到一封信，上面写着：“我们永远不会忘记你。 “圣诞快乐！”信下面是一只手表，它正高兴地咔嗒作响。 我感动得流泪。
例2：爸爸带我体验生活
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ding things with my father was always fun due t his rich imaginatin. With his persnality, it was amazing hw patient Dad culd be. I dn't recall a time when he std acrss my path; he always walked beside, guiding me with__his__wn__steps. When, at 10, I annunced that I was ging t Africa t bring back wild animals, my mther and sisters pinted ut my age, the prblems f transprtatin and all such rdinary and unimprtant facts.
But nt Dad. He brught hme bks abut Africa, train and bat schedules fr us t study, and even sme irn bars which we used t build cages fr the animals I was t bring back. When the departure day apprached and I was becming anxius, my father brught hme a newspaper that tld f an accident n the railrad that was t take me t Baltimre. This pstpned my trip and, by the time the train tracks were repaired, he and I were ff n a new and mre exciting prject.
When a neighbr's dg killed my dg Bunce, I was determined t kill that dg. I thught it day after day,almst making myself ill with my wn hate.
“Let's get it dne，” my father stated unexpectedly in a whisper ne evening after dinner. I fllwed him, t discver that he had tied the dg. He gave me a gun, and then stepped back fr me t d my wrk. The dg and I lked at each ther. He shk his tail t express friendship. Suddenly the gun was t heavy fr me t hld and it drpped t the grund. The dg came up and kissed my hand. The three f us walked hme tgether, the dg jumping in frnt. N wrd was ever said abut what had happened. Nne was needed.
When President Harding died, the_funeral_train was scheduled t pass thrugh a twn abut 20 miles frm urs. I wanted desperately t g and see this train, but Mther pinted ut that there wuld be schl the next day and that it wuld be a lng trip. That ended the discussin.
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But when the day arrived, Dad did nt frget. He came t me and, in a vice as near a whisper as his nature wuld allw, said, “Jim, by, it's time t see the funeral train．” We drve alng t the twn withut talking much. When we came t the railrad statin, a half dzen peple were talking in sft tnes and lking dwn the tracks. Suddenly the funeral train was cming!
但当这一天到来时，爸爸并没有忘记。他走到我跟前，轻声说：“吉姆，孩子，该看葬礼火车了。”我们不说话就开车去城里。当我们来到火车站时，六个人轻声说话，望着铁轨。突然间，葬礼上的火车开来了！
Dad put tw pennies int my hand and asked me t put them n the rails. I did as tld and jumped back t hld his hand as the train went past. I culd hardly breathe. S exciting were the sight and sund. After the train had left, I gt back the tw pennies frm the tracks. Dad put ne in his pcket and I kept the ther. Fr years, Dad and I carried thse cins pressed by the weight f histry. And the knwledge f what we shared made me feel very clse t him.
爸爸在我手里放了两便士，让我把它们放在铁轨上。我照了，火车经过时跳回去握住他的手。我几乎无法呼吸。这种景象和声音是如此令人兴奋。火车离开后，我从铁轨上找到了两便士。爸爸把一个放进他的口袋里，我放了另一个。多年来，我和我都拿着那些受历史沉重的硬币。我们分享的知识让我觉得和他非常亲近。
Part 5： 高考真题再现：母亲节的惊喜
2021年6月新高考全国1卷：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther's Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jema fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jef t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff's hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear！The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. One lk and he knew what they were up t. Seeing their discuraged faces, he tld them t clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast fr Mther. The twins cheered up and did as tld. Within an hur, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made sme French tast and chicken prridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back t bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed fr their parents' bedrm.
当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. "Happy Mther's Day, darling Mummy!" thrilled vice yelling frm their thrat, the twins hugged their mm tightly. Mved and excited, mther held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight f the breakfast tray. She shk father wh was pretending t snre. He whistled in astnishment when seeing the breakfast. Mther bit int a sandwich and said she had never tasted a better ne. Jeff immediately wanted t have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each ther secretly.
这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。