2023届新高考英语读后续写特训脱离困境型学案

这是一份2023届新高考英语读后续写特训脱离困境型学案，共16页。

一、环境描写（恶劣） PAGEREF _Tc12736 \h 3
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎） PAGEREF _Tc28904 \h 4
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么 PAGEREF _Tc7498 \h 6
四、情绪描写（希望+努力） PAGEREF _Tc30463 \h 7
五、脱险描写 PAGEREF _Tc14337 \h 7
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴） PAGEREF _Tc2699 \h 7
七、主旨描写 PAGEREF _Tc4711 \h 8
Part3：灵活应用 PAGEREF _Tc31706 \h 8
例1：瀑布遇险 PAGEREF _Tc32291 \h 8
例2：火灾救老人 PAGEREF _Tc13905 \h 9
例3：森林迷路脱险12
Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a Saturday afternn. The clr f the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blwing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strng wind. It began t rain cats and dgs. Sn, the rad was filled with puddles frm the rain.
On such a strmy afternn, my mther tk my five-year-ld brther, Christpher, and me t a new big ty stre she had read abut in the newspaper. “S many tys,” the advertisement had
shuted in full and flashy clr,“that we had t get a huge warehuse t fit them all!”
Christpher and I culdn't have been mre excited. We ran acrss the parking lt, thrugh the cld rain, as fast as ur little legs culd carry us. We left ur mther utside t battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never wrked when she wanted it t. “Christine! Take care f yur yung brther!” Mther shuted at the tp f her vice.
“Christine!I'm ging t find the Leg sectin(乐高积木区)! There's a new pirate ship I want,
and I have fur dllars! Maybe I can buy it!” Christpher exclaimed and ran ff excitedly. I nly
half heard him. I tk a right turn and, t my wide-eyed delight, fund myself in the midst f the Barbie(芭比) Wrld.
I was studying a Barbie and ding sme simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap f thunder rared frm the strm utside. I jumped at the nise, drpping the dll t the flr. The lights flickered(闪烁) nce and went ut, cvering everything in a blanket f blackness. Thunder cntinued t shake the sky and lightning illuminated the stre fr secnds, casting frightening shadws n my mind.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“Oh n,” I thught, “Where's Christpher?”
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Paragraph 2:“Christine, I'm here.”
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答案
[写作提示]原文讲述“我”和弟弟以及妈妈去买玩具,结果“我”和弟弟刚进去玩具店没多久,由于雷电,商店停电,我们都看不到对方。根据第一段的段首句,本段应该是作者在黑暗中寻找弟弟的情景。在续写时,除了动作,还要注意心理描述。根据第二段的段首句可知,弟弟找到了“我”。此段应该描述姐弟俩相遇的情景。这里的描述应该有“劫后余生”的感觉。
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“Oh n,” I thught, “Where's Christpher?” Scared, I was frzen n the spt, vercme with
the need t see my brther, hug him and make certain he was all right. My stmach twisted and
turned inside. I ran up and dwn the aisles thrugh the darkness, panic filling my small chest and
making it difficult t breathe. I kncked int displays f candy and tripped ver tys, all the while
frantically calling my brther's name. Anxius as I was, I culd barely see his figure. Tears f frustratin and fear trickled dwn my face, but I cntinued t run.
“哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪里？”我当场冻僵了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他没事。我的胃扭曲了，转了进去。我在黑暗中跑来来跑去，恐慌充满了我的小胸部，呼吸困难。我一直在看糖果，被玩具绊倒
疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。
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“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement tk my breath away—there in the dark Leg aisle I fund
Christpher. He was standing alne, perfectly still, hiding under the pirate ship set. I began t cry
ut frm relief, thrwing my arms arund him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, say-
ing, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, yu wuld be able t find me.”Then, I tk his hand in
mine and we went t find ur mther, wh must be desperately searching the stre fr us.
“克里斯汀，我在这里。“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。他独自站着，完全不动，藏在海盗船下面。我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。他拥抱我，说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。”然后，我抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里找我们。
Part2：困境类场景描写
一、环境描写（恶劣）
——波涛汹涌：
1.As I flated n, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and apprached us.
2. The big wind rared thrugh ur ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away frm the shre farther and farther.
3. All my senses tld me that a big wave was abut t cme.(即将来临)
4. A pwerful-lking(看似猛烈的)wave was cming twards us. (靠近我们)
——鲨鱼的可怕：
It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming arund, nt far away frm her.
The shark’s jaws pened wide, shwing rws f sharp teeth.
——陆地上的水：
Splashing raindrps hit the windshield frantically and the skies were verhung with a blanket f grey,.
雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。
The water kept rising, as if it wuld engulf me alive.
水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。
Unfrtunately, the water pured in and crept upn my waist.
在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）
——推荐句型：
1. The wind blws/whistles/hwls/picks up/whips thrugh sth/sweeps acrss sth.
风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
2. They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。
3. The heavy rain was vilently beating against the windw.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。
4. The rain drummed n the rf f the building.雨不停地击打着房预。
5. The furius strm is grumbling utside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。
6. The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
7. A flash f lightning lit up the whle sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。
8. The sharp claps f thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。
9. The blt f lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。
10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the cean melt int each ther
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——疲倦/寒冷
1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.
2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
3.Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stp. Gritting ur teeth, we kept swimming.
4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard t keep myself aflat(漂浮着的).
5. He was huddled int his cat, his face blue with cld.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。
6. Fingers numbed by the chilly water, thrat chked by icy wind, I felt n the verge f cllapsing.
7. She clasped the baby t her bsm in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。
8. The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。
9. Her teeth were chattering with cld.她冷得牙齿直打颤。
——害怕
1. I tk a deep breath and swallwed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).
2. A chill feeling crept up her spine.
3. Exhausted and cld, the thught that we might die here flashed acrss my mind, which made me quiver with an uncntrllable terrr/hrrr/fright (难以控制地发抖).
4. Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy.(在身体涌动)
5. As time ticked by, fear crept upn my heart(爬上我心头) and I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd plugh n (前行).
6. The thught f hpelessness sent shivers dwn my spine(让我后脊背发凉).
7. I was flded with a sense f hrrr(被恐惧感淹没).
8. Seeing this, I felt my fear grwing/increasing(剧增) inside.
9. I felt a wave f anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept ver my bdy (袭来).
10. Tears f frustratin and hrrr gushing frm my eyes, I felt I had sunk int hpelessness.
11. A sense f terrr sweeping thrugh my bdy, I shuted in panic, “Help! Help!”
12. The hairs n the back f my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）
13. Swallwed by a wave f despair, I crssed my fingers, clsed my eyes and prayed in a shivering vice.
14. Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready t be flded away at any time, which refrained me frm mving a single inch.
——描写挣扎努力
1. Tm lked thughtful (若有所思)
2. “We need t think ut a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)
3. ...,We swam tth and nail(全力以赴地).
4. We spared n effrt t(不遗余力地) t swim twards the shre.
5. We exchanged a determined lk(互换了坚定的神情) , then plughed n (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. A distant sund reached ur ears.(传入耳朵)
2. Just then, my mind raced – why nt call 911 and Je?
3. The sund f the bat eched in ur ears.(在我们耳内回响)
4. At that mment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空).
5. When we were at a lss f what t d, there were rasping (刺耳的) shuts(喊叫声)rising frm the distance (从远处升起).
6. Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jasn shuted ut.
7. In sheer desperatin(在绝望中), I finally caught sight f sme bats with lifeguards n them heading twards us in the distance.
8. After a lng time, a light spt appeared in the distance! We waved ur hands and yelled ut fr help.
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负
1. As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.
2. Hearing the cmfrting news, I culdn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
3. His wrds reignited the flame f hpe in my heart
4. On hearing the gd news, Tm and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each ther.
5.Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush f pride(感到一阵自豪).
6. Overjyed(狂喜) t see a bat cming t ur rescue, Tm and I breathed a sigh f relief(如释重负地松了口气)
7. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies.
五、脱险描写
1.The bat finally reached us and tk all f us back t the shre.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。
2.Yelling at the tp f his lung, Je tried t sthe me and cnvince me that it was the best way t escape the danger.乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
1.When we pictured what the merry scene wuld be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written n my face.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。
2.Sighing in relief, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the whle event. I knew they wuld have died if they had been in the sea fr any lnger.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。
七、主旨描写
1. It ccurred t me that helping thers was priceless and everyne shuld be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。
2. Fr the first time since…, ne’s emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。
3. Only then did I realize that it was Je wh had been caring fr me thrugh thick and thin.
4. Sbbing in relief, I was verwhelmed by waves f guilt and remrse. I murmured srry, reflecting that I shuld have taken his warning seriusly.
5. All this tk nly a few minutes, but Betty wuld never frget the frightening experience.
Part3：灵活应用
例1：瀑布遇险
It was last August. We were n vacatin, having driven frm ur hme in Washingtn, DC, t New Hampshire. We wuldn’t see friends r family—it wuld be just me, my husband, and ur tw kids ut fr a nice,safe, scially distanced week away.
We had hiked abut half a mile t a ppular spt called Diana’s Baths, near the twn f Nrth Cnway, where the water falls ff a series f flat bulders layered up the muntainside like an M.C. Escher drawing. The baths were full f families, s we made ur way t ne f the upper levels f rck t keep ur distance.
Bth where we sat and dwn belw, the water cascaded and fell int small pls, where kids in swimsuits were splashing arund. I watched as sme yunger parents nervusly crralled their tddlers away frm the rcks’ edges, feeling grateful that my husband and I were ut f that stage— that ur kids, at six and eight, culd navigate their physical space with mre cnfidence. Dn’t get me wrng: I was still terrified as I saw my tw bys jump between the slippery rcks. “N running,” I said again and again. “Stay away frm all thse edges.”
But I sn relaxed, and we were all having fun, splashing in the pls, my kids laughing as my husband dunked his head under the cld running water. Then, secnds later, every fear I’d ever had rse t the surface.
I turned and saw my sn Wyatt sitting dwn between tw bulders（大圆石） in a fast-mving stream. I yelled at him t get ut. He yelled back smething that I culdn’t hear, and then he disappeared ver the edge.
My husband was already sprinting dwn the rcks. I finally lked. Wyatt was sitting up—he was alive. My biggest fear was erased.
While everyne else lked n frm a distance, t afraid r unbthered t help, a lady with a mask didn’t hesitate. In fact, by the time I had climbed dwn the rcks and my husband had pulled Wyatt ut f the water, she had already called 911.
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She tld me that she was a nurse. ___________________________________________
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The rescue team came. ________________________________________
参考答案：
She tld me that she was a nurse. She gave Wyatt a red, white, and blue striped twel t put under his head. She implred us t keep him still and n his back in case he had injured his spinal crd. I finally had the wherewithal t ask her name. “Lisa,” she said. “And I’m nt leaving yu.” She lked at me s deeply, as if she were trying t take every bit f energy, lve, and strength in her bdy and push it ut thrugh the nly part f her face I culd see.
她告诉我她是一名护士。她给了怀亚特一条红、白、蓝条纹的毛巾放在他的头底下。她恳求我们让他保持不动，以防他伤了脊髓。我终于有了钱问她的名字了。“丽莎，”她说。“我不会离开你。她深深地看着我，仿佛她想把身体里的一切能量、爱和力量，从我唯一看到的脸推出去。
The rescue team came. They tk Wyatt ut f the park n a stretcher. An ambulance tk us t the small lcal hspital where he was underging tests and scans. As sn as I knew that Wyatt was ging t be OK, my thughts fell t Lisa. If she had nt stepped up, wuld smene else have dne s? Perhaps. But it was her. She was the ne wh went tward the unthinkable instead f turning away.
救援队来了。他们用担架把怀亚特带出了公园。一辆救护车把我们送到当地的小医院，他正在那里接受检查和扫描。我一知道怀亚特会没事，我的思绪就落到丽莎身上了。如果她没有站起来，还有其他人会这样做吗？也许吧。但那是她。她是那个走向不可想象的事情而不是转身离开的人。
例2：火灾救老人
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The event that stands ut in Tm's memry happened ne mrning when Tm was nly ten years ld. He was at hme with his elder sister Jane. Tm was ding his hmewrk when he heard raised vices. At first he thught nthing f it since custmers in the mtrcycle shp directly belw their flat ften became lud, but he sn realized this time it was different.
“Quick!Quick!Remve the mtrcycles frm the shp.” smene yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tm pened the frnt dr f their flat t investigate, a thick clud f smke greeted him. The mtrcycle shp had caught fire and peple were running and crying.
Jane, wh had been playing the vilin in her rm, hurried t the living rm. They rushed ut f the dr and alng the crridr(走廊)thrugh the smke.
They were heading twards the stairway at the far end f the crridr when Jane suddenly stpped.She turned arund and headed back the way they came. Tm had n idea what she was ding, but he fllwed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s wh lived next dr t them, wh they called Makcik. Jane began banging n Makcik's dr, but gt n answer. As the smke thickened arund them, Tm culd see many f their neighbrs—sme still in their pyjamas—running fr safety. The thught f fear crssed his mind.
“She wuld have run fr safety like everyne else!” Tm cried. Hwever, Jane refused t give up. “I knw Makcik's still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily rutine and
was certain she wuld still be sleeping. She punded against the dr. “G dwnstairs. G nw!
G!”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Tm nticed the flame was reaching up.
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Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help.
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[写作提示] 这是一篇比较典型的具有正能量,而且故事性比较强的文章。文章讲述了在一次火灾中,Jane 和Tm不顾安危去救援一个邻居老人的故事。文章的第一部分叙述了两个孩子在大火中表现出的勇敢和善良。那么续写部分就应该延续这种故事情节和赞扬的态度。根据第一段的提示句,该段应该是对他们在敲门救邻居时火势蔓延的描述,当然更应该涉及两个孩子在这种情况下的表现。而第二段的提示句提示我们有其他的邻居来帮忙,那么应该是一个幸运的结尾。
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Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. Frzen with fear, he std rted t the spt. He cmprehended the gravity f the situatin and held Jane's hand tightly. Bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed t stand still, thugh they were prbably there fr nly tw r three minutes. Tm begged Jane t run fr safety as quickly as pssible. Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke and shk her head. She kept punding against the dr. Tm burst ut crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。他被吓得冻僵了，深深地站在那里。他明白了形势的严重性，紧紧地握着简的手。他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛都在刺痛。时间似乎停滞不前，尽管他们可能在那里只有两三分钟。汤姆请求简尽快跑安全。简试图保护她的鼻子不受窒息的烟雾，并摇了摇头。她不停地敲敲门。汤姆突然哭了起来。
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Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help. A sense f strength immediately re-
placed the munting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She tld them Ms. Makcik must be still in
the rm. They frced the dr pen with all their might. Sure enugh, Makcik was lying in bed,
uncnscius. She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital, where she finally came t herself. Peple in the neighbrhd felt relieved and Jane and Tm were very happy.
幸运的是，一些路过的邻居停下来提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻使简的心中充满了越来越强烈的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克西克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，最后苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆也非常高兴。
高级语块 pund against猛敲 with all ne's might竭尽全力
佳句背诵 Frzen with fear, he std rted t the spt.
A sense f strength immediately replaced the munting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind.
例3：森林迷路脱险
Deep in the frest, my husband and I had fun climbing ver and crawling under the dwned trees that blcked the dirt path befre us. It was May, yet we walked up a snw-cvered hill. When we nticed ur jeans were wet up t ur knees, it did nt dampen ur spirits Nt nce did we say, “Let’s turn arund.” This was ur vacatin, and we were n an adventure. Little did we knw this was the beginning f many mre surprises.
The trail was marked as an easy ne-kilmeter like yet we were already walking a lng distance. Our lightheartedness stpped when we came ut int a clearing and saw a parking lt withut ur rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the surrundings, nthing lked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lst in a natinal park that did nt fficially pen fr anther week.
Usually, I am the calm ne in the relatinship, but my husband surprised me with his calmness. This did nt cmfrt me; in fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband t call fr help, but there was n cell-phne signal in this islated（偏僻的）area.
It was awfully quiet except fr ur ftsteps hitting the rad, and my heavy breathing. My husband suggested we cnserve energy and walk slwer. With each step n the rad, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thughts abut peple wh gt lst in the Canadian wds fr days.
My visin sharpened. I nticed everything arund me: the trees, rcks and snw. I thught we culd eat the snw n the grund in case we needed water. Fr the first time in my life, I was ready and willing t get a ride, but we did nt meet with a single car n the rad. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We fcused n each ther, made jint decisins and cnnected thrugh gratitude. We managed t stay n the main rad and walked straight n.
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My husband suddenly sptted a small building n a hill in the distance.
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Just then, a friendly wman appeared, saying, “Hell.”
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【参考答案】
My husband suddenly sptted a small building n a hill in the distance. In n time we fund urselves heading fr it. We were filled with hpe and excitement t find such a building in the middle f nwhere. We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gne. As we apprached, a sign came int sight, which read: Administratin Office. Hwever, it was nt pen fr business. The empty hall made us nervus all at nce. We std there hpelessly, wndering what t d next.
Just then, a friendly wman appeared, saying, “Hell.” I culd barely hld back my enthusiasm and blurted ut, “We’re lst!” She cmfrted us and pened a rm fr us t take a break. Seeing we were cld and hungry, she treated us with ht chclate. After studying the map, we figured ut that ur car was parked ver three kilmeters away. She ffered us a ride back t ur car and we accepted gladly. I felt relieved t see ur rental car again. What a blessing t have such an unfrgettable experience.