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这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习吉林高考英语书信写作专项训练作业含答案,共25页。
书信写作
1.假设你是李华,打算邀请交换生Eric观看中国古代文化展(包括中国古代服饰,书 法,绘画等)。请给他写封邮件,内容包括;
1.发出邀请
2.展览时间,地点
3.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear Eric
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.某英语报社邀请你根据以下提示,以“The importance of Protecting Cultural Heritage”为题写一篇英语短文,以此来提高人们对文化遗产的保护意识:
1. 文化遗产可以帮助我们更好地了解历史;
2. 文化遗产可以促进当地发经济发展;
3. 文化遗产以多种形式存在。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The importance of Protecting Cultural Heritage
________________________________________________________________________________
3.假如你是某国际高中学生会主席李华,为了让同学们更好地了解中国航天事业和航天精神, 你校邀请了“英雄航天员”王亚平到校做相关讲座,请你就此在校园广播站上播报一则通知,要点如下:
1. 时间:2018 年 7 月 20 日,上午 9:00-11:00;
2. 地点:学校体育馆;
3. 注意事项(准时到达,做笔记等); 注意:
4. 词数要求 100 左右;
5. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
6. 航天员:astronaut 航天事业 space industry 航天精神 the spirit of exploration
Notice
Boys and girls, I have a piece of good news for you!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
July 14th, 2018
4.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jane现就读于中国某大学,她来信说因为疫情寒假不能回国。你打算邀请她到吉林市过年,并体验吉林的冰雪活动。请你用英语给她写一封回信,内容要点如下:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 简单列举庆祝新年的活动;
3. 介绍吉林特色冰雪活动。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:红包 lucky money in red paper
雾凇 rime
Dear Jane,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是高中生李华,你校为了弘扬中国传统文化和丰富学生课余生活,将于本周五中午12点在学校报告厅举行国画展览,你的外教老师Linda对中国文化很感兴趣,请写一封邮件邀请她前来观看。
要点包括:1. 国画简要介绍;2. 本次展览目的;3. 展览时间地点
要求:1.词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假定你是李华,你校英语报社将举办主题为自然灾害 的征文活动。请你给英国朋友Alice 写一封邮件,邀请她参加。内容包括:
1. 说明缘由;
2. 请她介绍美国的自然灾害并谈谈影响、应对措施等;
3. 告知征文的截稿日期。
注意:1.词数80左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选,请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
1. 介绍个人优势;
2. 组织校内外活动的设想;
3. 表达竞选的愿望。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:副主席vice president 竞选run for
8.假如你是某国际学校的学生李华,在即将到来的西方文化节中,你们班将上演哑剧“The Gold Rush”,你希望得到外教James的指导和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示给外教James写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 要求外教观看排练;
2. 希望外教给予指导。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.假定你是学生会主席李华,近日在策划拍摄“高考加油”视频。请给外教 Miss Jane 写封邮件,邀请她拍一段短视频。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 视频内容和要求;
3. 表示期待。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
10.假如你是李华,你校将举行一场英语演讲比赛,请写信给外教Adam,邀请他来当评委(judge),给选手打分并点评。要点如下:
1.比赛时间:本周五下午2点到5点;
2.比赛地点:学校报告厅(Conference Hall);
3. 共30为选手,每人演讲大约3到5分钟。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Adam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
参考答案
1.Dear Eric
Knowing that you have a strong passion for traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to see an exhibition on it to be held in the museum.
The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day. It covers a wide range of content. Quantities of ancient Chinese clothes will be on display. Meanwhile, you can also appreciate traditional Chinese calligraphy and paintings. Besides, lectures on the history of Chinese clothing will be given by a group of famous experts who specialize in traditional Chinese clothes.
Hopefully, you will accept my invitation. Looking forward to our early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写 邀请信。邀请交换生Eric观看中国古代文化展(包括中国古代服饰,书 法,绘画等)。
【详解】1.词汇积累
包括:cover→contain
展览:on display→on show
欣赏:appreciate→enjoy
精通:specialize→be expert in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day. It covers a wide range of content.
拓展句:The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day,which covers a wide range of content.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you have a strong passion for traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to see an exhibition on it to be held in the museum.(运用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, lectures on the history of Chinese clothing will be given by a group of famous experts who specialize in traditional Chinese clothes. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2.The importance of Protecting Cultural Heritage
Not everyone feels a connection with cultural heritage, but many people do. In fact, protecting cultural heritage can bring us many benefits.
First of all, cultural heritage can give us a connection to certain social values, beliefs and customs, which allows us to better understand previous generations and the history of the area we are from. In addition, a certain cultural heritage will contribute to the development of the local economy and improve the locals’ quality of life. Finally, cultural heritage is present in many forms such as landmarks, buildings and the stories. It’s also in the food we eat, the clothes we wear and the skills we learn. So it’s of great importance to protect cultural heritage.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以“The importance of Protecting Cultural Heritage”为题写一篇英语短文,以此来提高人们对文化遗产的保护意识。
【详解】1.词汇积累
事实上:in fact→as a matter of fact
此外:in addition→what’s more
有利于:contribute to→benefit
首先:first of all→to begin with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Finally, cultural heritage is present in many forms such as landmarks, buildings and the stories. It’s also in the food we eat, the clothes we wear and the skills we learn.
拓展句:Finally, cultural heritage can not only be present in many forms such as landmarks, buildings and the stories, but also in the food we eat, the clothes we wear and the skills we learn.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
First of all, cultural heritage can give us a connection to certain social values, beliefs and customs, which allows us to better understand previous generations and the history of the area we are from.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
So it’s of great importance to protect cultural heritage.(it为形式主语,动词不定式为真正的主语)
3.(参考范文)
Notice
Boys and girls, I have a piece of good news for you! In order to make our classmates have a better knowledge of Chinese space industry and develop the spirit of exploration, our school has invited the heroic astronaut Wang Yaping to give us a lecture. It will be given at the school gym from 9:00 to 11:00 am on July 20th, 2018. All the students who are interested in it will be warmly welcomed to this activity. And you can also invite your friends from other schools to attend it.
Be sure to bring a notebook and a pen with you and don’t be late. After the lecture, you may get a signature by Wang Yaping and even take a photo with her.
The Student Union
July. 14th, 2018
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就“英雄航天员”王亚平来校做讲座这一活动播报一则通知。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 时间:2018 年 7 月 20 日,上午 9:00-11:00;
2. 地点:学校体育馆;
3. 注意事项(准时到达,做笔记等)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a piece of good news; in order to; have a better knowledge of; be interested in; get a signature by sb; take a photo with sb; develop the spirit of exploration; be sure to do
第三步:连词成句
1. Boys and girls, I have a piece of good news for you!
2. In order to make our classmates have a better knowledge of Chinese space industry and develop the spirit of exploration, our school has invited the heroic astronaut Wang Yaping to give us a lecture.
3. It will be given at the school gym from 9:00 to 11:00 am on July 20th, 2018.
4. All the students who are interested in it will be warmly welcomed to this activity.
5. Be sure to bring a notebook and a pen with you and don’t be late.
6. After the lecture, you may get a signature by Wang Yaping and even take a photo with her.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表并列补充关系What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also)
2.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] All the students who are interested in it will be warmly welcomed to this activity.(运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] In order to make our classmates have a better knowledge of Chinese space industry and develop the spirit of exploration, our school has invited the heroic astronaut Wang Yaping to give us a lecture.(运用了高级短语in order to作目的状语)
4.Dear Jane,
Knowing about your situation, I’m writing to invite you to Jilin and celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
It would be nice to be a guest at this time of year, because the Spring Festival means big dinners, new clothes and lucky money in red paper as well as fireworks and carnivals. Isn’t it exciting? More than that, ice and snow activities are fantastic. Skating, skiing, go sledging and making a snow man…you name it! Exploring along the Songhua River, you may see rime, an amazing sight of frost and snow on the branches, which creates a silver and magic world.
I’m sure you’ll have fun in the Spring Festival. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jane写封邮件,邀请她到吉林市过年,并体验吉林的冰雪活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 简单列举庆祝新年的活动;
3. 介绍吉林特色冰雪活动。
第二步:列提纲
celebrate the Spring Festival, lucky money in red paper, as well as, fireworks and carnivals, ice and snow activities, make a snow man, rime, a silver and magic world, have fun, look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing about your situation, I’m writing to invite you to Jilin and celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
2. It would be nice to be a guest at this time of year, because the Spring Festival means big dinners, new clothes and lucky money in red paper as well as fireworks and carnivals.
3. More than that, ice and snow activities are fantastic.
4. Exploring along the Songhua River, you may see rime, an amazing sight of frost and snow on the branches, which creates a silver and magic world.
5. I’m sure you’ll have fun in the Spring Festival. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序(供参考):First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:More than that, As well as,
3.表因果关系:Because,
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It would be nice to be a guest at this time of year, because the Spring Festival means big dinners, new clothes and lucky money in red paper as well as fireworks and carnivals.(原因状语从句);
[高分句型2] Exploring along the Songhua River, you may see rime, an amazing sight of frost and snow on the branches, which creates a silver and magic world.(现在分词短语作状语和非限制性定语从句)。
5.Dear Linda,
Considering you’re interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to appreciate our Exhibition of Traditional Chinese Painting.
Traditional Chinese Painting can date back to six thousand years ago and usually contains figure paintings, flower-and-bird paintings and landscapes—describing the natural scenery of mountains and rivers. In order to promote and develop our traditional Chinese culture and enrich us students’ spare time, the exhibition is to be held at 12 o'clock this Friday in the school lecture hall. Don’t miss the good chance of obtaining further knowledge of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生邀请外教老师Linda来参观国画展览。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 国画简要介绍;
2. 本次展览目的;
3. 展览时间地点。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
appreciate ,date back to,describe,promote,enrich,the good chance of ,look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. Considering you’re interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to appreciate our Exhibition of Traditional Chinese Painting.
2. Traditional Chinese Painting can date back to six thousand years ago and usually contains figure paintings, flower-and-bird paintings and landscapes—describing the natural scenery of mountains and rivers.
3. In order to promote and develop our traditional Chinese culture and enrich us students’ spare time, the exhibition is to be held at 12 o’clock this Friday in the school lecture hall.
4. Don’t miss the good chance of obtaining further knowledge of Chinese culture.
5. I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… (供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Traditional Chinese Painting can date back to six thousand years ago and usually contains figure paintings, flower-and-bird paintings and landscapes—describing the natural scenery of mountains and rivers.(使用了并列句)
[高分句型2] In order to promote and develop our traditional Chinese culture and enrich us students’ spare time, the exhibition is to be held at 12 o’clock this Friday in the school lecture hall.(使用了不定式作目的状语和被动语态)
6.One possible version:
Dear Alice,
Our school English paper will hold an essay competition whose theme is Natural Disasters. I'd like to invite you to take part in it.
It is well-known that many natural disasters happen every year in America, causing great damage. You can introduce the main natural disasters, such as hurricanes and snowstorms and tell some common knowledge about them. For example, you can discuss how they happen, what harm they may cause, and what you can do in the face of disasters. The measures you take may benefit us, as we also face many natural disasters.
The deadline is June 8th,2020. Looking forward to your article.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Alice 写一封邮件,邀请她参加主题为自然灾害 的征文活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 说明缘由;
2. 请她介绍美国的自然灾害并谈谈影响、应对措施等;
3. 告知征文的截稿日期。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
take part in; such as ;in the face of ; take measures;look forward to;hold an essay competition;cause great damage;Natural Disaster
第三步:连词成句
1. Our school English paper will hold an essay competition whose theme is Natural Disaster.
2. I'd like to invite you to take part in it.
3. It is well -known that many natural disasters happen every year in America, causing great damage.
4. You can introduce the main natural disasters, such as hurricanes and snowstorms and tell some common knowledge about them.
5. For example, you can discuss how they happen, what harm they may cause, and what you can do in the face of disasters.
6. The measures you take may benefit us, as we also face many natural disasters.
7. The deadline is June 8th,2020.
8. Looking forward to your article.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is well-known that many natural disasters happen every year in America, causing great damage. (it作形式主语,causing现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] For example, you can discuss how they happen, what harm they may cause, and what you can do in the face of disasters.(how和what引导宾语从句)
7.Good afternoon, my dear friends. My name is Li Hua. Today I am honored to have the opportunity run for the vice president of the English club. I believe I am qualified for it.
First, I am outgoing and get along well with others. Second, I am good at organizing activities and have already gained much experience.
Were I vice president, I would spare no effort to assist the president and serve my fellow students. For one thing, I will give you a platform to show your English skills. And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures so that you can acquire plenty of knowledge. For another, I will organize more activities like debates and speech contests. Moreover, I will open more channels for you to voice your opinions.
I sincerely hope that you will give me a chance to do something for you.
Thank you all!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。要求考生按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍个人优势;
2. 组织校内外活动的设想;
3. 表达竞选的愿望。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
run for(竞选);be an qualified for(适于担任……); get along well with(和……相处的好);be good at(擅长于); spare no effort(不遗余力去……); give lectures(讲课); plenty of knowledge(许多知识)
第三步:连词成句
1. Today I am honored to have the opportunity run for the vice president of the English club.
2. Second, I am good at organizing activities and have already gained much experience.
3. Were I vice president, I would spare no effort to assist the president and serve my fellow students.
4. And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures so that you can acquire plenty of knowledge.
5. I sincerely hope that you will give me a chance to do something for you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序: First, Second…; For one thing…for another
2.表并列补充关系: Moreover, And
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Were I vice president, I would spare no effort to assist the president and serve my fellow students. 如果我是副主席,我会不遗余力地协助主席,为同学们服务。(省略if的虚拟条件句)
[高分句型2] And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures so that you can acquire plenty of knowledge. 我还会邀请一些著名的教授来讲课,这样你们就能学到很多知识。(so that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型3] I sincerely hope that you will give me a chance to do something for you. 我真诚地希望您能给我一个机会,为您们做些事情。(that引导的宾语从句)
8.Dear Mr James,
I’m writing to ask for a favor from you. Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush ”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?
This being the first mime our class is going to put on, we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing. It is really a challenge to entertain the audience with nonverbal communication. Our next rehearsal is scheduled at 3:30 this Friday afternoon in our school auditorium. If you are available then, could you be so kind as to be present and offer some instruction?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教James写封邮件,请他为班里将上演的哑剧“The Gold Rush”给与指导和帮助。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 要求外教观看排练;
2. 希望外教给予指导。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
ask for a favor; is intended for; the first mime; put on; are confronted with; entertain the audience; nonverbal communication; is scheduled at; offer some instruction
第三步:连词成句
I’m writing to ask for a favor from you.
Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush ”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?
we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing.
It is really a challenge to entertain the audience with nonverbal communication.
If you are available then, could you be so kind as to be present and offer some instruction?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表修饰限定关系:which引导定语从句;
2.表请求和邀请:Could you please;could you be so kind as to be present
3.表礼貌的期待:I am looking forward to your early reply.
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?该句中用which引导了非限制性定语从句,句式简洁,概括多个要点。
[高分句型2] This being the first mime our class is going to put on, we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing.该句中的being the first mime our class是现在分词短语做后置定语,修饰this,这种利用非谓语动词来做定语的形式,避免了重复使用定语从句的句式单一性,同时又巧妙地交代了内容要点。
9.Dear Miss Jane,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I am writing to ask you for a favor.
As you know, all the students in grade 12 are busy preparing for their first college entrance examination. To keep them better motivated, we intend to shoot some inspirational videos, where teachers and students are expected to give them some encouragement and best wishes within 2 minutes. As the most respected and loved teacher, you are the very person we’d like to turn to.
Your timely reply will be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教 Miss Jane 写封邮件,邀请她拍一段短视频。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。
结构:总分法
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 视频内容和要求;
3. 表示期待。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
ask sb. for a favor;prepare for;intend to;turn to;timely reply
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to ask you for a favor.
2. As you know, all the students in grade 12 are busy preparing for their first college entrance examination.
3. To keep them better motivated, we intend to shoot some inspirational videos, where teachers and students are expected to give them some encouragement and best wishes within 2 minutes.
4. As the most respected and loved teacher, you are the very person we’d like to turn to.
5. Your timely reply will be greatly appreciated.
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, all the students in grade 12 are busy preparing for their first college entrance examination.(as引导非限制定语从句,动名词作宾语)。
[高分句型2] To keep them better motivated, we intend to shoot some inspirational videos, where teachers and students are expected to give them some encouragement and best wishes within 2 minutes.(不定式作目的状语,where引导非限制性定语从句)。
10.Dear Adam,
I’m Li Hua. I’ m writing to invite you to be our judge of the English Speech Competition. It will be held this Friday afternoon, from 2:00 to 5:00, in the school’s Conference Hall. There will be 30 competitors taking part in the contest, each of whom is required to deliver a speech for about 3 to 5 minutes. As a judge, you need to give them marks according to their performances. Besides, you are expected to make some comments on their speeches. The English Speech Competition is an annual activity in our school and it attracts a large number of teachers and students. Could you arrange your time and come to be our judge?
I am looking forward to you early reply.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一邀请信,邀请外教Adam来当评委。
【详解】第一步:审题。
体裁:邀请信。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点:1.比赛时间:本周五下午2点到5点;
2.比赛地点:学校报告厅(Conference Hall);
3. 共30为选手,每人演讲大约3到5分钟。
第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)
如:invite,take part in,deliver a speech,according to,make some comments,arrange等.
第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)
第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步:润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合句,如“There will be 30 competitors taking part in the contest, each of whom is required to deliver a speech for about 3 to 5 minutes.”使用的是定语从句,“The English Speech Competition is an annual activity in our school and it attracts a large number of teachers and students.”使用的是and连接的并列句,主从复合句的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。
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