2023届高考英语二轮复习云南高考英语书信写作训练作业含答案

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习云南高考英语书信写作训练作业含答案，共24页。
书信写作
1．假定你是李华，正在你校交换学习的英国朋友Tony没能在你校组织的中国象棋比赛中获奖，有点沮丧。
请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.给予安慰；
2.提出具体建议；
3.表示鼓励。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国象棋Chinese chess
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2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问疫情期间（COVID-19 pandemic）如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 合理饮食；2. 加强锻炼；3.保持好心态。
注意：
1. 词数：100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me how to keep healthy during the COVID-19 pandemic.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，刚来你校做交换生的英国留学生John发来电子邮件，请你给他推荐一个生日聚餐的好去处。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封建议信，介绍你上周末去过的一家中餐厅。
要点：
1. 饭店位置;
2. 就餐环境;
3. 菜品特点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是高中生李华，你的交换生朋友Peter回国后，计划创立一个传播中国传统文化的社团。他写信向你寻求建议。请根据以下提示给他回信。
1.表示赞同；
2.具体建议；
3.其它。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
1．参加中文学习班；
2．看中文书刊、电视；
3．学唱中文歌曲；
4．交中国朋友。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的朋友尼克近来沉迷于游戏《王者荣耀》（King of Glory）不能自拔，你在得知此事后非常担忧。请你给他写一封信予以劝说，要点如下：
1. 你对他的担心；        
2. 游戏的危害；            
3. 摆脱游戏的办法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；            
2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Nick,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，从电视上看到新冠病毒（coronavirus）在美国爆发，你为正在美国上学的笔友Jack的健康与安全担心。请写一封e-mail询问他的情况，并提出防护建议。
注意：1.词数：100词左右（已给出的部分不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
From the TV I know coronavirus broke out and more than twenty million cases have been reported recently in the United States.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Ted要参加明年举办的《生物多样性公约》第15次缔约方大会的志愿者选 拔面试，来信向你咨询相关的注意事项。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 高兴得知他已进入面试；
2. 面试的注意事项；
3. 其他。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：《生物多样性公约》第十五次缔约方大会：UN Biodiversity Conference COP-15
Dear Ted,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，下个月即将参加你校举行的英语演讲比赛。得知你的美国网友Frank参加了“国际中学生演讲比赛”，并获得了一等奖。请你给他写封信，要点如下: .
1.表示祝贺;
2.讨教参赛经验;
3.请他帮你的演讲稿提出建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．2020年6月，联合国警告称世界濒临50年来最严重的粮食危机。全球每年约有三分之一（约13亿吨）的粮食遭到浪费，仅中国每年也有5000万吨粮食进入了垃圾堆。最近，我国进一步推广遏制餐饮浪费的活动。请你根据以下内容提示，以学生会的名义写一封信，倡仪你校的交换生遏制餐饮浪费。
内容包括：
1.必要性；
2.具体建议；
3.其它。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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the Student Union








参考答案
1．Dear Tony,
I have heard that you have participated in the Chinese chess contest held in our school without winning a prize, which made you a little depressed. Actually, it is the process rather than the result that makes a difference. So please cheer yourself up. In order to improve yourself, you can take my suggestions as follows.
To begin with, why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy. From those books you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents. Besides, just as a saying goes, practice makes perfect. So you are expected to practice every day to better your skills. Moreover, you may as well compete in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Only if you compete with others can you figure out your shortcomings which can then be improved through efforts.
I’m firmly convinced that you will make great progress soon. Looking forward to your good news.
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生对在学校组织的中国象棋比赛中获奖中失败的Tony写信进行安慰，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in→ participate in
沮丧的：disappointed → depressed
重要：matter→ make a difference
2.句式拓展
原句：Why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy. From those books you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents in the books.
拓展句：Why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy, from which you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have heard that you have participated in the Chinese chess contest held in our school without winning a prize, which made you a little depressed. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】it is the process rather than the result that makes a difference. (运用了强调句）
【高分句型3】Only if you compete with others can you figure out your shortcomings which can then be improved through efforts. (运用部分倒装句和定语从句）
2．Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me about how to keep healthy during the COVID-19 pandemic. I’d like to give you some advice in detail.
For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday is of great importance. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet. Especially, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. For another, taking physical exercise regularly is a must to help keep fit. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. Last but not least, being positive and hopeful is necessary. You should have the confidence that the human being will finally get over of it.
All in all, I do hope you and your family can be safe and sound. I’d appreciate it very much if you can find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给美国笔友Jack回信，就疫情期间如何保持健康给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → happy/pleased
保持健康：keep healthy → keep fit
乐观的：positive → optimistic
建议：suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
原句：In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet.
拓展句：We need a balanced diet so that we can get enough energy and nutrients.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday is of great importance. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] You should have the confidence that the human being will finally get over of it.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
3．Dear John,
I’m happy to introduce a Chinese restaurant to you. I went there with my family last weekend. There are several reasons why I like it.
Firstly, it’s convenient for you to get there. it is located in the city center and Bus No. 11 will take you right there. Besides, the environment inside is very comfortable. It is very clean and the atmosphere is pleasant with fantastic music. Last but not least, the service there is really excellent. It offers a variety of dishes, which are delicious but not expensive.
I’m sure this restaurant would be a good choice.
                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                          Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生John写一封建议信，介绍你上周末去过的一家中餐厅。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
此外：besides→what’s more
各种各样的：a variety of…→various
美味的：delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, the environment inside is very comfortable.
拓展句：Besides, the environment inside is so comfortable that you can have a good time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are several reasons why I like it.（运用了why引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It offers a variety of dishes, which are delicious but not expensive.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you. Knowing your awesome project, I can’t agree more. As for your letter asking for my advice, I’m writing to share you with my experience.
Firstly, it’s suggested that you should make a survey among the students in your school, which can give you a definite direction. Besides, you’re supposed to recruit students who are also enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture to cooperate together. Finally, it’s a good idea that you can host some activities such as calligraphy exhibition, tea ceremony and paper-cutting etc.
I do hope my proposals will be of great value. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生给交换生朋友Peter写信，就计划创立一个传播中国传统文化的社团提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
此外：besides→moreover
应该：be supposed to=ought to
提议：proposal→suggest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for your letter asking for my advice, I’m writing to share you with my experience.
拓展句：As for your letter which asked for my advice, I’m writing to share you with my experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Firstly, it’s suggested that you should make a survey among the students in your school, which can give you a definite direction.（that引导主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Besides, you’re supposed to recruit students who are also enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture to cooperate together.（who引导定语从句）
5．One possible version:
Dear Peter.
I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will help you learn Chinese
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →happy
建议：advice →suggestion
学习：learn → study
此外：Besides =Moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.
拓展句：First, the reason why it is important to take a Chinese course is that you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. (运用了不定式作主语)
6．Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to King of Glory. Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also makes you isolated from the real world.
I think you can try other things to distract your attention. For example, you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. It’s also a good choice to communicate with your parents and friends, sharing your happiness and sorrow. Besides, you can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.
Longing for good news from you!
Yours sincerely
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友尼克写封信，陈述沉迷游戏的坏处，然后提出一些建议，帮他远离游戏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
健康：health→fitness
加强：deepen→strengthen
扩大：widen→broaden
对……有害：be bad for=be harmful to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.
拓展句：You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time, whose content interests you so much that games are out of your mind.
【点睛】[高分句型1] you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also make you isolated from the real world. (运用了动名词短语作主语，not only…but also…引导的并列句)
7．Dear Jack,
From the TV I know coronavirus broke out and more than twenty million cases have been reported recently in the United States. As a result, many schools are closed. I'm so worried about you. Are you all right? Are there any cases in your school? Do you still have to go to school every day?
To stay away from the virus, you'd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to the places where there are many people. When you have to go out, be sure to wear masks. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Open the window to have more fresh air in the room. Drink milk and eat eggs. Eating more fruits and vegetables can keep yourself fit and strong.
The virus is dangerous, so we should be cautious! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给正在美国上学的笔友Jack写封e-mail，询问他在美国新冠爆发期间的情况，并提出防护建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.询问他的情况；
2.提出防护建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
break out; be closed; be worried about; stay away from; as much as possible; wear masks; keep oneself fit and strong; take care
第三步：连词成句
1. From the TV I know coronavirus broke out and more than twenty million cases have been reported recently in the United States.
2. As a result, many schools are closed.
3. I’m so worried about you.
4. To stay away from the virus, you'd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to the places where there are many people.
5. When you have to go out, be sure to wear masks.
6. Eating more fruits and vegetables can keep yourself fit and strong.
7. Take care and you’ll be OK.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]To stay away from the virus, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to the places where there are many people.（用不定式作目的状语和关系副词where引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]When you have to go out, be sure to wear masks.（用when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]Eating more fruits and vegetables can keep yourself fit and strong.（用动名词短语作主语）
8．

Dear Ted，
With great delight I have learned that you are attending the interview for volunteers for UN Biodiversity Conference COP-15 to be held next year．As for the matters needing attention，I’m writing to offer some suggestions．
The first is to prepare a one-minute self-introduction，covering your educational background，personal qualifications and language certificates．Besides，surfing the Internet for basic information about the conference in advance will do you a favor because you won’t be nervous when you are asked by the interviewers．A modest attitude and proper body language are of great significance too．Additionally，it is important to wear a formal suit，which will help you create a good first impression．
Hope my suggestions are helpful．Best wishes and feel free to contact me if needed．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就英国朋友Ted要参加明年举办的《生物多样性公约》第15次缔约方大会的志愿者选拔面试，咨询相关的注意事项给他回信，提出相关的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量可以用现在完成时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 高兴得知他已进入面试；
2. 面试的注意事项；
3. 其他。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
great delight, attending the interview for, as for, offer some suggestions, prepare a one-minute self-introduction,cover educational background ,personal qualifications and language certificates,basic information about the conference in advance,                    modest attitude and proper body language, be of great significance, wear a formal suit,help create a good first impression,
第三步：连词成句
1.With great delight I have learned that you are attending the interview for volunteers for UN Biodiversity Conference COP-15 to be held next year．
2.As for the matters needing attention，I’m writing to offer some suggestions．
3.The first is to prepare a one-minute self-introduction，covering your educational background，personal qualifications and language certificates．
4.Surfing the Internet for basic information about the conference in advance will do you a favor because you won’t be nervous when you are asked by the interviewers．
5.A modest attitude and proper body language are of great significance.
6.It is important to wear a formal suit，which will help you create a good first impression．
7.Hope my suggestions are helpful．
8.Best wishes and feel free to contact me if needed．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表顺序关系：the first
2.表递进关系：besides, additionally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The first is to prepare a one-minute self-introduction，covering your educational background，personal qualifications and language certificates．首先是准备一分钟的自我介绍，包括你的教育背景，个人资格和语言证书。“ to prepare a one-minute self-introduction”为不定式短语做表语；“covering your                    educational background，personal qualifications and language certificates．”为现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2]
Besides，surfing the Internet for basic information about the conference in advance will do you a favor because you won’t be nervous when you are asked by the interviewers．此外，提前在网上搜索会议的基本信息会对你有帮助，因为当面试官问你的时候，你不会紧张。“surfing the Internet for basic                    information about the conference in advance”为动名词短语作主语；“because......”为原因状语从句。
[高分句型3]
It is important to wear a formal suit，which will help you create a good first impression．穿正式的西装很重要，这会帮助你（给面试者）留下良好的第一印象。“it”为形式主语，指代“to wear a formal suit”；“which will help you create a good first impression”为which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．Dear Frank,
Learning that you have won the first place in the International Students’ Speech Contest, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your success. It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off.
I’m going to take part in an English Speech Contest next month. While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot. I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to share me with your competition experience and help me with my speech draft.
Congratulations again! And I would appreciate a response at your early convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Frank写信，祝贺他获得第一名并请他给自己的英语演讲稿一点建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示祝贺;
2.讨教参赛经验;
3.请他帮你的演讲稿提出建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
win the first place;offer one's sincere congratulations on ; pay off; take part in; have no experience in; share with
第三步：连词成句
1.Learning that you have won the first place in the International Students’ Speech Contest, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your success.
2. It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off.
3. I’m going to take part in an English Speech Contest next month.
4.While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot.
5. I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to share me with your competition experience and help me with my speech draft.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all
2.表并列补充关系：What is more
3.表转折对比关系：However
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s great that your years of hard work has paid off. 使用it作形式主语。
[高分句型2]While English has always been one of my best subjects, I have no experience in how to deliver an English speech, which worries me a lot. 使用while引导让步状语从句。
[高分句型3]I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to share me with your competition experience and help me with my speech draft.使用if引导宾语从句。
10．Dear friends,
I am writing to appeal to everyone to stop food waste. The world is now facing the worst food crisis in 50 years, while tons of food is being wasted across the world. It is high time that we advocated food-saving actions.
Above all, we’re proposed to ask for proper amount of food when ordering. Never order more than we can consume. Besides, it is suggested that we respond to the “Clear Your Plate” campaign by trying to empty the plate each meal. Last but not least, only shopping for needed food is highly recommended, as too much stored food may end up in the trash.
Don’t hesitate to join in the campaign against food waste, where your contribution is bound to make a great difference.
the Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封倡议书。
【详解】第一步：2020年6月，联合国警告称世界濒临50年来最严重的粮食危机。全球每年约有三分之一（约13亿吨）的粮食遭到浪费，仅中国每年也有5000万吨粮食进入了垃圾堆。最近，我国进一步推广遏制餐饮浪费的活动。请你根据以下内容提示，以学生会的名义写一封信，倡仪你校的交换生遏制餐饮浪费。
内容包括：1.必要性；2.具体建议；3.其它。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：appeal to（呼吁）；above all（最重要的是）；ask for（要求）；respond to（响应）；Last but not least (最后但不是最重要的)；It’s high time that…（是时候……）。
第三步：根据提及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第四步： 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。
第二段，说明具体的解决办法，结构清晰，Above all， Besides…连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。
第三段，发出呼吁，符合倡议书结尾格式，结构严谨。
文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如Don’t hesitate to join in the campaign against food waste, where your contribution is bound to make a great difference. 不要犹豫，加入反对食物浪费的运动，在那里你的贡献一定会有很大的意义。（非限制性定语从句的运用） It is high time that we advocated food-saving actions.（虚拟语气）