2023届高考英语二轮复习上海高考英语写作训练作业含答案

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英语写作
1．Directions: an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容
• 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：
• 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
• 希望从中有何收获。
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2．Directions:   Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李青，将在主题为“我的家乡变美了”的班会上发言。请撰写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：
▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；
▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。
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3．假定你是李华，近日搭乘某国际航班回国，旅途的糟糕经历令你很不愉快。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封投诉信。要点包括：
1．陈述写信原因；
2．投诉内容：航班延误、服务不周到等。
3．提出你的要求。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着人工智能时代的到来 (the age of artificial intelligence)，有人提议各中小学都将开设人工智能相关的选修课程。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1. 你是否赞同此提议；
2. 你是否会选修这门课程及理由。
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5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近期的一项网络调查发现，近七成受访者表示他们不愿对父母开放微信朋友圈；“屏蔽父母”的主要理由是，认为父母“过度关心、管教太多、无法沟通”。谈谈你对“屏蔽父母”这种做法的看法。你是否对父母开放你的朋友圈呢？请说明理由
屏蔽父母：don’t share my moments with my parents
微信朋友圈：WeChat Moments
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6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》(The Chinese Poetry Competition)、《国家宝藏》(National Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。
你的发言稿必须包括:
•简单介绍一个此类节目；
•分析此类节目热播的原因。
(注:文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。文章的开头已为你写好。)
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7．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你们学校正在向学生征询开设选修课（optional course）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。
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8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为My dream。卢平也想投稿。稿件内容必须包含：
1. 近来，我反复地做着相同的梦：我捧着那纸温暖的大学录取通知书……
2. 社会教育、学校教育和家庭教育都会给予我力量去实现梦想。
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9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
临近毕业，班委准备在高考结束后组织一次毕业旅行，正在筹集方案。请就此活动写一份方案给班长（方案中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的方案需包括：
1. 此次毕业旅行的主旨；
2. 毕业旅行的具体安排
3.   需要同学们做的相关准备（如衣物、节目等）。
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10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese。
假设你是学生李华,你校拟举办一次校园歌手大赛,现就举办场所(校体育馆,还是租借上海城市剧院( City Theatre)征集学生意见。请你给学校主办这一活动的学生会写一封信，表达你的想法。你的信中必须包括以下内容：
1.说明你的选择
2.通过比较说明你选择该场所的原因
注:文中不能出现学校、姓名等真实信息。
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参考答案
1．Dear Chris,
I’m        Lihua, a student from Class one, Grade three. I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western art in the cultural week that will be held next week, and I do hope the lecture   is about western drama, as I am very interested in western literature and art, and drama is the perfect combination of the two. As is known to all, a lot of famous literary classics are represented in a drama, such as the giant Shakespeare's "Hamlet", "Othello", "King Lear" and "Macbeth", all of which are excellent drama works. Although I have some knowledge of drama, I still want to have a deep understanding of it. In view of this reason, I hope you can give me a detailed explanation of the history of drama, including its origin, development and evolution.
I am looking forward to your excellent lecture
                                                                                                                   yours truly,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容：• 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：• 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；• 希望从中有何收获。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； culture（文化），drama（戏剧），combination（结合），represent（体现），giant（文豪），detailed（详细的），literary classics （文学经典），origin（起源），development（发展）及evolution（演变）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有give sb a lecture（给某人做演讲），be interested in（对……感兴趣），have some knowledge of (对……有一些了解)，such as（例如），look forward to（期待），in view of（鉴于）以及have a deep understanding of（对……深入理解），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, a lot of famous literary classics are represented in a drama, such as the giant Shakespeare's "Hamlet", "Othello", "King Lear" and "Macbeth", all of which are excellent drama works.”，宾语从句“I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western art in the cultural week that will be held next week”及“I hope you can give me a detailed explanation of the history of drama, including its origin, development and evolution”，让步状语从句“Although I have some knowledge of drama, I still want to have a deep understanding of it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2．As is known to all, with the deepening of the reform and opening-up policy and the development of the era, earth-shaking changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years, for example, the road becomes wider and wider, a lot of tall buildings have been built, and the government has put up a dozen of big squares and parks, which make people’s amateur life get enriched. In addition, people now pay more attention to environmental protection, leading to the better environment, and, more importantly, people's living standards have been improved, which has greatly increased the people's happiness.
I believe that with the joint efforts of all walks of life, the future of my hometown is sure to become more beautiful
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。       时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； earth-shaking（翻天覆地的），development（发展），deepening（深入），the reform and opening-up policy（改革开放）， change（变化），improve（提高）及environmental protection（环境保护）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有take place（发生），a dozen of（十几个），lead to (带来、导致)，pay attention to（注重）以及put up（建造），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, with the deepening of the reform and opening-up policy and the development of the era, earth-shaking changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years”，“more importantly, people's living standards have been improved, which has greatly increased the people's happiness”及“and the government has put up a dozen of big squares and parks, which make people’s amateur life get enriched.”，宾语从句“I believe that with the joint efforts of all walks of life, the future of my hometown is sure to become more beautiful”，非谓语动词“In addition, people now pay more attention to environmental protection, leading to the better environment”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
3．Dear Sir or Madam:
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing this letter totell you my terrible flight experience onBA793 on April 3rd. 2012.
The first trouble started when the flight waslisted as Delayed .   For what seemed an eternity we were stuck atthe airport and noone came to offer us any expl anati on.   Sevenhours later, when all the passengers finallygot on board,   we were told that we had to keepon waiting for another hour due to the badweather! If we had been informed earlier, wewould have chosen to stay in the waiting room. What was worse, upon my arrival, I f oundmy check- in suitcase which was newly bought out of shape, and its handle was broken !
I m looking forward to an explanation aboutthis unpleasant experience and I str onglysuggest that your company do something toprovide quality service to the fliers.
Sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封投诉信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封投诉信：假定你是李华，近日搭乘某国际航班回国，旅途的糟糕经历令你很不愉快。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封投诉信。要点包括：1．陈述写信原因；2．投诉内容：航班延误、服务不周到等。3．提出你的要求。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：terrible flight experience（可怕的航班经历）；all the passengers（所有的乘客）；in the waiting room（在候诊室）；out of shape（变形）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封投诉信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The first trouble started when the flight waslisted as Delayed .句中when引导时间状语从句；For what seemed an eternity we were stuck atthe airport and noone came to offer us any expl anati on.介词后面what引导宾语从句；If we had been informed earlier, wewould have chosen to stay in the waiting room.句中使用if引导的虚拟语气；I f oundmy check- in suitcase which was newly bought out of shape, and its handle was broken !句中which引导定语从句。
4．With the advent of the age of artificial intelligence, it is proposed that all primary and secondary schools will offer elective courses related to artificial intelligence.
I think this is a groundbreaking idea. As we all know, artificial intelligence is the future trend of science and technology. I think with the wide application of AI in life, it is inevitable to introduce AI into the classroom. As far as I know, many students, including me, have a strong interest in artificial intelligence, which is always the focus of our discussion after class.
Therefore, I think if the school offers the selective courses related to artificial intelligence, I will definitely choose to study this course as being a scientist has been my dream since I was a child.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求就一个提议发表自己的看法。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求就一个提议发表自己的看法：随着人工智能时代的到来，有人提议各中小学都将开设人工智能相关的选修课程。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容:1. 你是否赞同此提议；2. 你是否会选修这门课程及理由。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； the age of artificial intelligence（人工智能时代），advent（到来），elective courses（选修课），trend（趋势）， application（应用），inevitable（必然的），discussion（讨论）及definitely（必定）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有with the advent of（随着……的到来），as far as（就……而言、据……所知），be related to (与……相关)，introduce…into…（将……引入……）以及have an interest in（对……有兴趣），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all know, artificial intelligence is the future trend of science and technology. ”及“As far as I know, many students, including me, have a strong interest in artificial intelligence, which is always the focus of our discussion after class.”，主语从句“With the advent of the age of artificial intelligence, it is proposed that all primary and secondary schools will offer elective courses related to artificial intelligence.”，状语从句“I will definitely choose to study this course as being a scientist has been my dream since I was a child.”，全文没有语法错误，宾语从句“I think with the wide application of AI in life, it is inevitable to introduce AI into the classroom.”，上下句转换自然流畅。
5．Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform. But do you think parents should be allowed to see their children’s Moments?
According to the newly-conducted survey, about 70% of the participants don’t share the moments with their parents. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey. Moreover, the generation gap is always a big problem, which will cause a lot of misunderstandings to arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.
Anyway, I think otherwise. In my opinion, I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication. Besides, adolescents are easily misled by the complicated society. If they give their parents a place in the online world, they can be protected.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生针对热点话题“是否对父母屏蔽朋友圈”发表评论。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.提出论题：是否应该对父母开放朋友圈（share my moments with my parents）
          2.分论点一：反对观点及其支持句（don’t share the moments with their parents；privacy；generation gap）
          3.分论点二：个人观点及其支持句 (share the moments with my parents; strengthen mutual communication; be protected)
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
social network platform; pay attention to; set rules; the generation gap; promote understanding; strengthen mutual communication
第三步：连词成句
1. Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform.
2. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey.
3. The generation gap is always a big problem.
4. I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform.本句使用了that引导的Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform作为seems表语从句。
Moreover, the generation gap is always a big problem, which will cause a lot of misunderstandings to arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.本句使用了which 引导的非限制定语从句: which will cause a lot of misunderstandings to arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.
使用了一些衔接词first and foremost；moreover等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Apparently, such kind of TV programs definitely need our praise for they help us better appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.
The Chinese poetry competition, is a vivid example of how technology and traditional cultural, once combined together, can create a national trend. It features competitions among high school students to help them truly understand the value of traditional poems instead of memorizing them for exams.
So, you might wonder why these shows can enjoy such a great popularity. Personally, I find the reason quite simple. First, I am convinced that it is the charm of traditional Chinese culture itself that draws us to these shows like a magnet. Traditional culture, like poems, provides us with a glimpse of what life was like before. It seems as if an invisible bridge leading to Chinese culture was then built by these shows. For example, Every time I read a poem, I feel myself identifying with the writer, feeling what he felt, though there might be thousands of years apart between us.
Secondly, the increasing awareness on culture identity is another reason. Cultural identity, I assume is what binds us together as a whole. Imagine if Beijing lost Great wall, what it would be like. Maybe it will become nothing but another New York or Tokyo. Through exploring traditional culture, we deepen our recognition of who we are, what we belong to as a family.
So , from the reasons mentioned above, I call on everyone to support these programs as well as try our best to preserve our traditional culture from now in case it becomes a thing of past. If not now, then when. If not us, who?
【分析】本篇书面表达属于发言稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇发言稿；你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》(The Chinese Poetry Competition)、《国家宝藏》(National Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。你的发言稿必须包括：简单介绍一个此类节目；分析此类节目热播的原因。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture（欣赏中国文化之美），enjoy such a great popularity（很受欢迎）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意用词和句式的多样性，尽可能使用教高级的词汇和较复杂的句式结构。并注意行文的连贯性和逻辑性。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句So, you might wonder why these shows can enjoy such a great popularity.；非谓语动词The Chinese poetry competition, is a vivid example of how technology and traditional cultural, once combined together, can create a national trend.；虚拟语气It seems as if an invisible bridge leading to Chinese culture was then built by these shows.。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear headmaster,
I’m Lihua, a student from class one, grade three. I'm very delighted to know that our school is going to offer several optional courses. I hope that the course of Sinology can be offered. As we all know, Sinology is a perfect cognition and summary of nature with the continuous development of China's five thousand years of history. Learning the classics of Sinology can help us gradually find out all kinds of ideological problems that are difficult to solve in life and work from these most simple cognition, Chinese classics are full of the wisdom of the ancients, so learning Sinology can not only increase our knowledge, but also let us cultivate ourselves and shape our personality. Most importantly, learning Sinology plays an important role in inheriting our civilization and increasing cultural confidence. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
                                                                                                       Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你们学校正在向学生征询开设选修课（optional course）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； offer（开设），optional course（选修课），Sinology（国学），civilization（文明）， wisdom（智慧），cultivate（修身养性、培养），personality（人格），cultural confidence（文化自信），ideological（思想的、观念的）及inherit（传承）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有all kinds of（各种各样的），be delighted to do（高兴做某事），take sth into consideration（将……纳入考虑之中）以及play an important role in（在……方面起着重要作用），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all know, Sinology is a perfect cognition and summary of nature with the continuous development of China's five thousand years of history.”，宾语从句“I hope that the course of Sinology can be offered.”，形式宾语“I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.”，非谓语动词“Most importantly, learning Sinology plays an important role in inheriting our civilization and increasing cultural confidence.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
8．     Recently, I have been dreaming repeatedly about the same dream that after three years of hard studying, I finally received admission letter from my ideal university. I was so excited that I couldn't believe I really made it. Holding the letter, I rushed into the room to show it to my mother who was doing housework, and then I called my teacher to tell her about this exciting news, who was happy and proud of me, and I showed my most sincere gratitude to both of my mother and teacher again and again, saying without their support and encouragement, I couldn't have made this achievement.
I know this is just a beautiful dream, and realizing this dream depends on my determination and perseverance, as well as the support and encouragement of teachers and parents.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇征文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇征文：假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为My dream。卢平也想投稿。稿件内容必须包含：1. 近来，我反复地做着相同的梦：我捧着那纸温暖的大学录取通知书；2. 社会教育、学校教育和家庭教育都会给予我力量去实现梦想。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； admission letter（录取通知书），ideal（心仪的、理想的），perseverance（坚持不懈），determination（决心）， support（支持），gratitude（感激），repeatedly（反复地）及realize（实现）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有dream about（梦到），make it（成功），rush into (冲进)，be proud of（对……感到骄傲）以及depend on（依靠），而且还使用了同位语从句“Recently, I have been dreaming repeatedly about the same dream that after three years of hard studying, I finally received admission letter from my ideal university.”，状语从句“I was so excited that I couldn't believe I really made it.”，非限定性定语从句“then I called my teacher to tell her about this exciting news, who was happy and proud of me,”，虚拟语气“I showed my most sincere gratitude to both of my mother and teacher again and again, saying without their support and encouragement, I couldn't have made this achievement.”，非谓语动词“Holding the letter, I rushed into the room to show it to my mother who was doing housework”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
9．In order to leave us a good memory of our high school life, our class organizes a two-day graduation trip. We choose the historic city xi 'an as our destination.
We will arrive in Xi'an at about 9 a.m on July 12, and after a short rest in the reserved hotel, we will visit Shaanxi History Museum and several scenic spots. In the evening, we can go to Huimin street, where a variety of delicious food is waiting for us.
The next day, under the leadership of the local tour group, we will visit the route of Qin Shihuang. Remember since the tour line is relatively compact and the physical requirements are relatively high, you must have a good rest the night before. I believe that the next day's trip will shake everyone's heart.
I truly believe that all of us will have a wonderful trip.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一个毕业旅行方案。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个毕业旅行方案：临近毕业，班委准备在高考结束后组织一次毕业旅行，正在筹集方案。请就此活动写一份方案给班长（方案中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的方案需包括：1. 此次毕业旅行的主旨；2. 毕业旅行的具体安排；3.   需要同学们做的相关准备（如衣物、节目等）。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； wonderful（美好的），graduation trip（毕业旅行），scenic spots（景点），physical requirement（体力要求）， destination（目的地），memory （回忆），reserved（预订的）及compact（紧凑的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有in order to（为了），wait for（等待），under the leadership of (在……的领导下)，arrive in（到达）以及a variety of（种种），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句 “In the evening, we can go to Huimin street, where a variety of delicious food is waiting for us.”，宾语从句“I truly believe that all of us will have a wonderful trip.”及“I believe that the next day's trip will shake everyone's heart.”，状语从句“Remember since the tour line is relatively compact and the physical requirements are relatively high, you must have a good rest the night before.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
10．Dear president of the student union,
I'm Lihua, a student from class one, grade three. I have heard that the Student Union is asking students for their opinions on whether the campus singer competition should be held in the school gymnasium or the Shanghai City Theatre next week. I think that since it is a school activity, it should be held in the school, which is convenient for students to participate in actively. More importantly, it can not only create a positive campus atmosphere but also reflect the campus culture of our school. In addition, the cost of renting the Shanghai City theater is very high, which will waste our school's funds and it is not in line with the concept of "thrifty activities" in our school. In view of the reasons above, I suggest that our school hold the campus singer competition in the school gymnasium. Finally, I hope you can think over my suggestion.
Wish the competition a complete success!
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是学生李华,你校拟举办一次校园歌手大赛,现就举办场所(校体育馆,还是租借上海城市剧院征集学生意见。请你给学校主办这一活动的学生会写一封信，表达你的想法。你的信中必须包括以下内容：1.说明你的选择
2.通过比较说明你选择该场所的原因。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； the student union（学生会），campus singer competition（校园歌手大赛），actively（积极地），rent（租借），reflect（反映），funds（经费），City theater（城市剧院）及thrifty（节俭的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有ask sb for sth（向某人征求），be in line with（与……一致），participate in（参加），in view of(鉴于)以及think over（仔细考虑），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“In addition, the cost of renting the Shanghai City theater is very high, which will waste our school's funds and it is not in line with the concept of "thrifty activities" in our school.”，宾语从句“I have heard that the Student Union is asking students for their opinions on whether the campus singer competition should be held in the school gymnasium or the Shanghai City Theatre next week.”及“Finally, I hope you can think over my suggestion.”，状语从句“ink that since it is a school activity, it should be held in the school”，虚拟语气“I suggest that our school hold the campus singer competition in the school gymnasium.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。