2023届高考英语二轮复习高考英语作文分类训练:学校生活类作业含答案
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英语作文
1.假如你是李华,得知学校近期将举办毕业典礼(graduation ceremony),现需要招募英语主持人。请给活动负责人John写一封信。内容包括:
1.信息来源,写信目的;
2.自我介绍,申请理由;
3.表达谢意,盼望回复。
注意:
1.字数100字左右;
2.注意电子邮件(书信)的写作格式。
2.假设你是中学生李华,在英国学习,担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期,校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知,请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。
AnnouncementThis is to inform that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022.Any student club that intends to join please send an email to Internationalculturalfestival@gmail.com by May 15th, 2022 to apply for a booth(摊位). The name of the booth and main activities should be included in the application.
Student Union
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
3.报社准备举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:街舞(hip-hop)、烹饪(cooking)、武术(kung fu)、护理(nursing)等。假如你是李华,写一封申请信给编辑,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
1. 你感兴趣的课程;
2. 你期望从这门课中学到什么;
3. 为什么想学这些内容。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是高一学生李华,你从学校网站(the school website)上得知学校模联(the Model UN)要招募(recruit)新成员。请给负责该工作的Ms. Wang写一封信,申请加入模联。包括下列要点:
1. 个人基本信息;
2. 学习情况和英语水平;
3. 优势或特长。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Wang,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假定你是李华,下周你校外教Mr. Smith将组织主题为“Create Green Campus”的活动,需要招募活动志愿者,你想申请加入。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.咨询详情;
3.期盼回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假定你是李华。你校英文报正在招聘校园记者,请写一封信应聘。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.假定你是李华,你校英语广播电台正在招聘播音员。请你给负责人Mr. Jams写一封英文申请信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.英语能力及相关经验。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. James,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8.假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部即将举办英语辩论赛(English debate contest),目前正在招募主持人。请你给活动负责人Mrs. Jones写一封信,申请做主持人。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.自身优势(知识、能力、经历等);
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Jones,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设今年暑假你们学校学生会组织部分学生开展支援边远地区一所学校的志愿者活动,正在招募志愿者。现有两个活动方案:一是暑期自费去当地一所学校开展教学工作;二是在暑期开展募捐,购买几台电脑和一些书籍寄往该学校。你有意向参加志愿者活动。
请你写一封信给学生会,信中包括:1、简要介绍你自己;
2、你报名参加哪一个项目;
3、简要说明你选择这个项目的理由。
10.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,最近你校“解忧”社团(Anxiety Relieving Club)正在招新,旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员,请给社长写封申请信,内容须包括:
1. 你想加入该社团的理由;
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
11.假设你是李明,刚从学校安排的“英国行”返回北京。请给在英国时借住的家庭写一封信, 信的内容主要包括:
1.你已安全返回北京;
2.感谢他们在英国期间的热情接待;
3.邀请他们来北京游览。
注意:
1.词数100左右, 开头语已为你写好;
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson:
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
12.假定你是校学生会主席李华,上周五你在学校组织了帮助贫困地区孩子上学的慈善捐赠活动,你校外教Richard也给予了爱心捐赠。活动结束后,请你用英语给外教Richard写一封电子邮件。
要点包括:1.表示感谢;
2.捐赠情况;
3.征求建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Richard,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13.假设你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办了英语演讲比赛,得到了外教David的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后,请你代表学生会用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1. 感谢; 2. 外教的帮助; 3. 同学们的收获。
注意:
1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.假如你是李华。最近收到笔友John的电子邮件,得知他在学校的英语竞赛(English competition)中获得一等奖。请跟据以下内容给他写封电子邮件。
1.祝贺他取得的优异成绩;
2.告诉他你在学习中的苦与乐;
3.请他介绍他的学习方法。
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.假定你是李华,在上周举行的校园英语戏剧表演比赛中,你班获得了第一名。请你给外教老师Mr. Green写一封信,感谢他的指导与帮助。内容包括:
1. 告知获奖消息;
2. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Green,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
16.假设你是高二学生李华,得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信,主要内容包括:
1.写作目的;
2.感谢他的付出;
3.表达你的祝福。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.假定你是李华,在某英文报社举办的主题为Together for a Shared Future的征文比赛中获得了一等奖,你打算对帮助你的外教Linda表示感谢。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 说明感谢的原因。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18.假定你是李华。上周你校邀请外教Jackson做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座,请你给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢:
2.总结收获;
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19.假定你是李华,现在是新星中学高一新生,初三时在李老师的帮助下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给李老师写一封感谢信。要点如下:
1. 梦想成真,考上理想高中;
2. 因为李老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好;
3. 对老师祝福。
注意: 1.词数: 100 词左右(已给部分不计人总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr/Miss Lee,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
20.假如你是李华,高中生活已经结束,这三年的时光弥足珍贵,请你给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信,要点如下:
1)写信目的;
2)你们之间难忘的事情;
3)再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。
注意: 1) 词数100左右。
2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案
1.Dear John,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 2. I learned from the school website that the English host for graduation ceremony is wanted. I am writing to apply for the position. I’m sure I am well qualified for the job.
To begin with, I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have once hosted different parties in our school. Therefore, I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the ceremony well. Last but not least, I’m capable of organizing activities and have a strong team spirit.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信,申请毕业典礼的英语主持人职位,在信中进行自我介绍并说明申请理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
首先:to begin with→first of all
此外:in addition→what’s more
因此:therefore→thus
能够做某事:be capable of doing sth.→be able to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To begin with, I can speak English fluently.
拓展句:To begin with, I can speak English fluently, which makes me competent for English hosting.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I learned from the school website that the English host for graduation ceremony is wanted.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, I am experienced, which will contribute to my hosting the ceremony well.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022. I am writing to apply for a booth.
The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加国际文化节活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
开心做某事:be glad to do sth→be pleased to do sth
被认为是:be considered as→be though as
高兴的:pleasant →happy
各种各样的:various→ all kinds of
2.句式拓展
原句:Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting.
拓展句:Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink ,which has a long history of planting.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and their benefits. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型 2】It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.(运用了through which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
3.One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the Summer Camp will be held, I'd like to register for nursing, because I have always dreamt of taking nursing as my occupation.
For one thing, I hope to gain a bit more knowledge and improve my competence of nursing so that it can qualify me to major in it at college. For another, learning more about nursing will allow me to take care of my parents better.
As is known to all, there are many senior citizens in China. Therefore, I want to devote my life to looking after them after I graduate from college.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信给编辑,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
想要:would like to→want to
申请:register for→apply for
职业:occupation→job
照顾:take care of→ care for
2.句式拓展
原句:Learning that the Summer Camp will be held, I'd like to register for nursing, because I have always dreamt of taking nursing as my occupation.
拓展句:Since I learned that the Summer Camp will be held, I'd like to register for nursing, because I have always dreamt of taking nursing as my occupation.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Learning that the Summer Camp will be held, I'd like to register for nursing, because I have always dreamt of taking nursing as my occupation.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】As is known to all, there are many senior citizens in China. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和there be句型)
4.Dear Ms. Wang,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Learning on the school website that the Model UN is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply for a position.
Personally, I am outgoing and helpful, making me popular with people. Besides, I speak fluent English and have a great command of western cultures, which will help me perform well in the Model UN. Also, politics just fascinates me and to be a diplomat has always been my dream job. Thus, I do have the urge to have this precious opportunity.
I would be very grateful if you could take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求给学校模联负责招募工作的Ms. Wang写一封申请信,申请加入模联。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
就个人而言:personally→ personally speaking
受欢迎的:popular→ welcomed
此外:besides → what’s more
吸引:fascinate →attract
因此:thus→ therefore
宝贵的:precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, I am outgoing and helpful, making me popular with people.
拓展句:Personally, I am outgoing and helpful, which makes me popular with people.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Personally, I am outgoing and helpful, making me popular with people.(运用了非谓语动词做结果状语)
【高分句型2】Besides, I speak fluent English and have a great command of western cultures, which will help me perform well in the Model UN.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.Dear Mr. Smith,
Learning that the activity Create Green Campus which aims at protecting the environment of our campus will be held next week. I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer and ask about some information about it.
First of all, I want to know what the volunteers are expected to do. Secondly, when and where will the volunteers perform their duties? Thirdly, what tools or equipment will the volunteers need to prepare for their work? Last but not least, how should students apply for this volunteer program?
I genuinely hope I can join in it. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以李华的身份,给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,申请加入主题为“Create Green Campus”的活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
执行,履行:perform→carry out
申请:apply for→put in for
真诚地:genuinely→honestly
参加:join in→participate in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer and ask about some information about it.
拓展句:Because I want to apply to become a volunteer, I’m writing to ask about some information about it.
【点睛】
[高分句型] Learning that the activity Create Green Campus which aims at protecting the environment of our campus will be held next week. (运用which引导定语从句)
[高分句型] First of all, I want to know what the volunteers are expected to do. (运用what引导宾语从句)
6.Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3. Having heard that the school’s English newspaper is recruiting reporters, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well. First, I am interested in reading English news in my spare time. Moreover, I am good at English writing. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I’m a crazy fan of football. I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘校园记者。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in →show interest in
擅长:be good at →do well in
此外:Moreover →Besides
机会:chance →opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to apply for the position.
拓展句:I’m writing to apply for the position, which I will spare no effort to devote myself to.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Having heard that the school’s English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I’m writing to apply for the position.(运用了现在分词完成式作状语)
[高分句型2]I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
7.Dear Mr. James,
Knowing that you are looking for an English news announcer, I am writing to apply for this post.
Firstly, I have a good command of oral English. I won the first prize in the Spoken English Contest in my school last year. Besides, working as a part-time English tour guide has contributed to the fluency of my oral English. Finally, I have a great passion for this job.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英语广播电台负责人Mr. Jams写封信,申请当播音员,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.英语能力及相关经验。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
职位:post→position
另外:besides→moreover
最后:finally→at last
考虑:take...into consideration→take...into account
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Firstly, I have a good command of oral English. I won the first prize in the Spoken English Contest in my school last year.
拓展句:Firstly, I have a good command of oral English, which enabled me to win the first prize in the Spoken English Contest in my school last year.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you are looking for an English news announcer, I am writing to apply for this post. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
8.Dear Mrs. Jones,
Knowing that the English Club is planning to hold an English debate contest and the host is in need, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I am convinced that I am qualified for the contest host. First of all, I have a good knowledge of spoken English, which has helped me win twice in the city English speaking contest. Secondly, I am good-looking, quick-minded, easygoing and good at communicating with others. What’s more, I used to act as host of our school New Year’s party. From the experience, I have learned how to organize an activity.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生给活动负责人Mrs. Jones写一封信,申请做英语辩论赛的主持人。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
有资格:be qualified for→be fit for
首先:First of all→firstly
此外:What’s more→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:What’s more, I used to act as host of our school New Year’s party. From the experience, I have learned how to organize an activity.
拓展句:What’s more, I used to act as host of our school New Year’s party, from which I have learned how to organize an activity.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that the English Club is planning to hold an English debate contest and the host is in need, I’m writing to apply for the position.(由that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作原因状语)
【高分句型2】I am convinced that I am qualified for the contest host.(由that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】First of all, I have a good knowledge of spoken English, which has helped me win twice in the city English speaking contest.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.Dear Students Union,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old student in N.6 High School. Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. And the reasons why I choose it are as follows.
I love teaching and I’ve been dreaming to be an English teacher since I was young. So I will put great enthusiasm into teaching at this local school. Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to students there.
I do hope that you can consider my application so that I can make some contribution to the voluntary cause of our school and this remote school.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇是一篇应用文,学生会正在招募志愿者,开展支援边远地区学校的志愿者活动,写一封申请信,表明自己申报志愿者的具体内容和原因。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
举办:hold→carry out
支援:support→assist
投入:put into→ devote to
考虑:consider→take……into consideration
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
拓展句:I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher, who can teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. (运用了非谓语现在分词结构)
[高分句型2] Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to students there.(运用了定语从句)
10.Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.
At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key. It’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信,申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员,信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
创立:set up→establish
害羞的:shy→self-conscious
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure.
拓展句:At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure, which made me sad.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
11.Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson:
I'm writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in England. It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived. When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right. With Jenny's help, I visited so many places of interest in England, which leaves me quite a good memory. I hope some day you will come to visit Beijing and I can return your kindness.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于刚从学校安排的“英国行”返回北京这一情况,给在英国时借住的家庭写一封信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
多亏,由于:Thanks to→ owing to
紧张的:nervous → stressed out
拜访:visited→ pay a visit to
希望:hope→ wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived.
强调句:It was the first time that I went abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With Jenny's help, I visited so many places of interest in England, which leaves me quite a good memory.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句。)
12.Possible version:
Dear Richard,
I’d like to thank you for your donation and your generous heart for the donation event last Friday. You know any help, big or small, will make a big difference to the children’s future. I’m sure you’ll be pleased to hear that we managed to raise 10,000 yuan that day. With the money we bought some books, pens, pencils and rubbers, which are on their way to the poor regional area. Next year, I will organize the same event. Do you have any great ideas to share that might make it more successful?
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给外教Richard写一封电子邮件,向他介绍上周五你在学校组织了帮助贫困地区孩子上学的慈善捐赠活动,并对他给予的爱心捐赠表示感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased →glad
成功地做某事:manage to do →succeed in doing
期望:look forward to →expect
答复:reply → answer
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:You know any help, big or small, will make a big difference to the children’s future.
拓展句:You know it is any help, big or small that will make a big difference to the children’s future.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With the money we bought some books, pens, pencils and rubbers, which are on their way to the poor regional area.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m sure you’ll be pleased to hear that we managed to raise 10,000 yuan that day.(运用了宾语从句)
13.One possible version:
Dear David,
On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success.
Under your instructive guidance, we performed very well. Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture.
Your professional help is of great benefit to us. For one thing, it is you that have built up our confidence in language learning, for another, we have caught a glimpse of the differences between eastern and western languages.
Thanks again for your generous assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对外教David在举办英语演讲比赛期间提供的帮助表示感谢。同时也要介绍同学们在活动中的收获。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→in the name of
感激:gratitude→appreciation
比赛:contest→competition
帮助:help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your professional help is of great benefit to us.
拓展句:There is no denying that your professional help is of great benefit to us.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture. (运用了部分倒装句,同时运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
14.Dear John,
I am glad to know that you got the first prize in the English competition in your school. Congratulations! I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.
It's been two years since I entered the senior high school. Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed. But I feel content more often because study occupies most of my time, for I know success lies in hard work. Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
You are so good at studying, so would you please introduce some of your learning methods to me?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向笔友John写一封信,祝贺John在英语竞赛中获得一等奖,并分享自己在学习中的苦与乐,向他求教学习方法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴:glad→ happy
导致、带来:contribute to → result in/lead to
沮丧的:depressed → dejected/disheartened
源自于:lie in→ result from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
拓展句:Only if I can make every effort, I can realize my dream of going to college.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
15.Dear Green,
I'm writing to tell you good news. Our class has won the first prize in our school's English drama performance competition. I really appreciate your guidance and great help.Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest, I'll never forget the great progress we made with your help. Not only did you correct the mistakes in our pronunciation, you also recommended wonderful English drama videos for us to imitate.What's more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired us to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest. Through the contest, I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end. Many thanks again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。现要求考生给外教老师Mr. Green写一封信,感谢他在上周举行的校园英语戏剧表演比赛中给你班的指导与帮助。其中内容包括告知获奖消息以及表达感谢。
【详解】
词汇积累
帮助:help→ assistance
鼓舞:inspire→ motivate
至关重要的:vital →crucial
意识到:realize → be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I'm writing to tell you good news. Our class has won the first prize in our school's English drama performance competition.
拓展句:I'm writing to tell you good news that our class has won the first prize in our school's English drama performance competition.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Not only did you correct the mistakes in our pronunciation,you also recommended wonderful English drama videos for us to imitate.(运用了not only放句首引导的半倒装结构)
【高分句型2】What's more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired us to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest. (运用了强调句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
16.Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, a student from your English class in Senior 2. Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. Never shall I forget your patience and support, which have given me the strength to overcome difficulties. Besides, your informative classes with your creativity and passion have been such a joyful harvest that they have not only sharpened my language skills, but also fueled my enthusiasm for various cultures. Words really fail to convey my gratefulness for your unreserved help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home. May you inspire others to achieve the greatness you have.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高二学生李华,得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
返回:return to→go back to
表达:express→convey
指导:guidance→instruction
促进:boost→promote
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
拓展句:Since I heard that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. (运用了强调句)
17.One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you. I’m delighted to tell you that I have won the first prize in the essay contest titled “Together for a Shared Future”.
Thank you for taking the time to edit the article for me. You were so careful that you pointed out and corrected all the mistakes I had made in the essay. To be frank, without your help, I couldn’t have won the prize.
I really appreciate your precious time and generous help. I will reward your effort with even greater progress in the days to come.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在获得征文比赛一等奖之后,写一封邮件,对给予帮助的外教琳达表示感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚的:heartfelt→sincere
高兴的:delighted→pleased
坦率地说:to be frank→frankly speaking
感激:appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
陈述句变强调句
原句:I really appreciate your precious time and generous help.
拓展句:It is your precious time and generous help that I really appreciate.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m delighted to tell you that I have won the first prize in the essay contest titled “Together for a Shared Future”.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You were so careful that you pointed out and corrected all the mistakes I had made in the essay.(运用了that引导结果状语从句,省略that引导的限制性定语从句)
18.Possible version:
Dear Jackson,
How’s everything?I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday. I’m writing to tell you how much I learned from it and convey my gratitude.
Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship” featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other.I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust. I applied this knowledge to resolving a quarrel with my roommate who had ignored me for a week. In your next lecture I am expecting to learn more about being on good terms with family members.
Once again, thank you for your enlightening/instructive/helpful lecture, and hopefully I will see you in the near future!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jackson写一封感谢信,感谢他上周为学校做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:convey→express
解决:resolve→solve
保持;维持:maintain→keep
参加:attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
原句:I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding,respect and trust.
拓展句:What I have learned is that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship”featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other.(运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句)
19.Dear Mr./Miss Lee,
I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of Senior 1 student in Xinxing Middle School.
I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of Junior High School, my English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement. Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal middle school. Wish you healthy and lead a happy life!
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向李老师写一封感谢信,感谢李老师在初三时对自己的帮助,并给老师祝福。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感激:thanks→ gratitude
因为:because of → thanks to/due to
实现梦想:achieve one’s dream → realize one’s dream
真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Without your help, I would not be a student of Senior 1 student in Xinxing Middle School.
拓展句:If you hadn’t helped me, I would not be a student of Senior 1 student in Xinxing Middle School.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of Junior High School.(运用了when引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal middle school .(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
20.Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.
With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, as my headteacher, you asked me to go to your office. Instead of blaming me, you comforted me and discussed with me the reasons for my failing in the exam. More unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the exam.
Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. Wish you happiness and good health.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求即将结束高中生活的考生给同学或老师写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
真诚的:sincere→heartfelt
帮助某人:give sb. a hand→do sb. a favor
保持冷静:stay calm→keep calm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the exam.
拓展句:Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the exam, which made me achieve good results in the exam.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary. (运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. (运用了what引导的宾语从句和介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)
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