2023届高三英语新题专题10书面表达读后续写月考题含解析

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 2023届高三英语名校新题快递--10月月考专辑
专题10 书面表达读后续写 解析版

浙江省强基联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考
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When school was over, the day was fading and it started to drizzle(毛毛雨). I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again: a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste, a weekend at home. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm and comfortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy, but something like dismay(沮丧). I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking(嘎吱作响) against the wheel to announce her arrival.
Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up for the weekend, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the numerous cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.
To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache once in a while. She just looks a homely middle-aged housewife. Being a practitioner of DIY, she knits most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half joking manner: homemade.
I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been much fun riding with mom. But just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
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Today she showed up in a raincoat.
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Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in.
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【答案】 Today she showed up in a raincoat. Seeing her standing in the heavy rain with all the body wet, I finally could not control myself and shouted at her, “Why do you look so flustered? I don’t need you to take me home. I feel ashamed to have a mother like you!” Suddenly, Mom was shocked and silent. Maybe, she had never thought that I would have that feeling of her appearance and our home condition. She said nothing and just covered the raincoat on me. I pushed it away wildly.
Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in. With a smile, she said, “Dear son, I’m trying my best to earn our living, and I’m sure that if we work harder, we will get whatever we want in the future.” Hearing her words, I felt embarrassed. I thought of the time when she knitted in the deep night and cooked for me in the early morning. Yes, she had always been doing whatever she could to make me live well. But I was still unsatisfied. I had known that if I wanted to get what others had, I should spare no efforts to study hard and get it by myself.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述作者在同学们都是被爸爸们汽车接回家的时候，他的妈妈却是骑着破旧自行车来接他，这让他感到很丢人，但一个大雨天的经历让作者认识到了自己的错误。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“今天，她穿着雨衣出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在看到他的妈妈穿着雨衣出现在学校门口的时候的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“暴风雨来临时，妈妈又试图用雨衣背面盖住我。”可知，第二段可描写作者在和妈妈交流之后，终于认识到了妈妈的辛苦，并且下定决心要通过自己的努力获得他想要的生活。
2.续写线索：看到妈妈——生气——朝妈妈吼叫——妈妈说话——认识到错误
3.词汇积累
行为类
①尽全力做某事：try one’s best to do/ spare no efforts to do/do whatever one can to do
②谋生：earn our living/ make our living
③做饭：cook/make food
情绪类
①羞愧的：ashamed/abashed
②震惊的：shocked/surprised
【点睛】【高分句型1】Maybe, she had never thought that I would have that feeling of her appearance and our home condition.（由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m sure that if we work harder, we will get whatever we want in the future.（由that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句和whatever引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】I thought of the time when she knitted in the deep night and cooked for me in the early morning.（由when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型4】Yes, she had always been doing whatever she could to make me live well.（由whatever引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型5】I had known that if I wanted to get what others had, I should spare no efforts to study hard and get it by myself.（由that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
湖南省长沙市长郡中学2022-2023学高三上学期月考卷（二）
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Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. l knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home，and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus!” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don’t believe it. That rumor has been going around for years，and it makes me mad, plain mad.”
“Now，put on your coat，and let’s go.”
“Go where, Grandma?” l asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store. the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors，Grandma handed me ten dollars.“Take this money.”she said，“and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
l was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother，but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded，full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there，confused，holding that ten-dollar bill，wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker，who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs. Pollock’s grade-two class.
Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. l knew that because he never went out for recess(休息) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note，telling the teacher that he had a cough，but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough，and he didn’t have a coat. I fingered the ten dollar bill with growing excitement. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one，which looked really warm，and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone?”the lady behind the counter asked kindly，as I laid my ten dollars down.“Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me，put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.
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That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
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Grandma and I waited breathlessly in the bush for Bobby Decker’s front door to open.
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【答案】One possible version:
That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby，From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining l was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street from Bobby’s house, and l took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, l put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and l hid in the car.
Grandma and l waited breathlessly in the bush for Bobby Decker’s front door to open. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks”to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what l had done. At that time, I decided to be Santa’s helper forever. It was on that night that l realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的姐姐告诉作者世界上没有圣诞老人，作者逃到奶奶那里想要听奶奶说实话，结果奶奶把作者带到一个商店，给了作者10美元，让作者给有需要的人买东西，于是作者给班里坐在自己后面的Bobby Decker买了一件红色的外套。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，奶奶帮我用圣诞包装纸把大衣包好。”可知，第一段可描写作者和奶奶去给Bobby Decker送外套的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“奶奶和我屏息等待Bobby Decker的前门打开，终于它打开了。”可知，第二段可描写Bobby Decker收到外套后的反应，以及这件事后作者的内心活动，作者为自己的所作所为感到非常自豪，决定永远做圣诞老人的帮手。
2.续写线索：
作者送外套——作者放下礼物——作者躲进车里——Bobby拿到外套——作者为自己感到自豪——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
冲到：dash for/ rush to
看：see/look/notice
决定：decide to/ be determined to
情绪类
自豪：be proud of / take pride in
惊讶：astonished / surprised
【点睛】[高分句型1]
She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house, explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语，和省略了引导词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree. (运用了强调句型，that引导的同位语从句，who引导的限制性定语从句）

浙江省C8名校协作体2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次联考
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Jayce began noticing when he was in kindergarten that he looked different from his classmates. They had two hands while he had one. Due to their young age, Jayce was encouraged that he was just like an angel with one wing folded to prepare for something.
It started when one boy laughed at him. From that day, 5-year-old Jayce turned sad. He returned home with questions. “Why am I different? Why me? Why?” He cried to ask his mother, Lewis Seeing Jayce was mad at God for making him that way, the poor mother felt it a huge dagger to her heart. What made her more sorrowful was that she didn’t know what to do at that point and how to provide answers to her son’s questions which she could never find out herself. The white lie burst just like bubbles that day.
A few weeks later, Lewis turned on the TV to a news story, where she was shocked to find out the answer. It was Trashaun, an eighth grader, that displayed positive energy from his head to his toe. The 14-year-old sunny boy performed his slam dunks(大灌篮) on the TV, who had been a hit on the Internet. However, like Jayce, he had missed most of his left arm since his childhood! Lewis called her son Jayce in. The poor little boy got spellbound, watching dunk after dunk.
At the time, it seemed that watching Trashaun would simply be an inspiring moment for Jayce. He saw Trashaun as a tough role model who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life. And had it stayed just that, Lewis would have been happy. But little did she know that a family friend had already reached out to Trashaun, asking him to help set up a meeting with Jayce to rebuild his confidence.
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The day was not spent drowning in self-pity but for fun.
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Staring at the shirt he sent Jayce, Trashaun began to talk about their left arms.
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【答案】Version 1
The day was not spent drowning in self-pity but for fun. The boys met at a middle School on a sunny afternoon, and instantly bonded. Seeing his role model in flesh, Jayce was too thrilled to say a single word but stand there with his mouth open wide. Amused by the sight, Trashaun held Lewis’ tiny hand as if Lewis had been his little brother to play hide-and-seek first, due to their similar congenital defect. Gradually, Trashaun led Jayce to ride bikes around the school, and eventually, taught Jayce slam dunks. During the rest, Trashaun took up a shirt that says “Five fingers can also make it”, which was prepared for Jayce.
Staring at the skirt he sent Jayce, Trashaun began to talk about their left arms. Trashaun smiled, “I guess you may be puzzled, surprised, upset, even frustrated, hating God make you this way.” He stopped, falling his eyes on Jayce’s, with one hand patting Jayce’s head, “But I think this is the perfect way God made me. With five fingers, we also made it in lots of things just now. The missed arm is like a wing folded by an angel. Only when you’re tough will you see the wing!” Behind stood Lewis, whose face was flooded with tears. She confirmed the 14-year-old would be a superhero one day, so would her son, who was unfolding his hidden wing！
Version 2
The day was not spent drowning in self-pity but for fun. It was a sunny day, when a doorbell rang unexpectedly. Jayce opened the door, feeling his heart race. It was Trashaun, who can only be watched on TV! Jayce was wild with joy. He screamed, “How can you know my address?” Stepping into the house, Trashaun laughed loudly, took out his gift -- an old shirt carefully from his bag, and gave it to Jayce. Confused about the shirt, Jayce asked curiously “Does the shirt have any special meaning?”
Staring at the shirt he sent Jayce, Trashaun began to talk about their left arms. “When I was young, I lost most of my arms in a serious car accident. However, I was lucky enough to meet a kind-hearted coach who gave me the precious shirt for encouragement. That’s the source of my bravery. Now I pass my bravery to you.” Hearing the story, Jayce’s eyes were sparkling like diamonds. “Thanks for your present!” Trashaun nodded, “Disabilities are people who own different abilities that can’t be easily found by ordinary people. We are born differently, because we are born to make a difference.”
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了先天只有一只手臂的Jayce在学校里遭到了同学的嘲笑，于是便回家中问母亲，为何自己和其他人不一样。他的母亲一时难以回答，直到她在电视中看到了和他孩子情况一样的Trashaun，她便让两个孩子见面。最后在Trashaun的鼓励下，Jayce也逐渐认识自己并且走向成功。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这一天不是在自怜中度过的，而是为了玩耍”可知，第一段可描写当Jayce在遇见Trashaun之后激动的表情，然后Trashaun十分感动并亲自教Jayce打篮球，甚至还送了一件球衣给他。
②由第二段首句内容“Trashaun盯着他送给Jayce的球衣，开始谈论他们的左臂。”可知，第二段可描写两个孩子就自己的手臂进行交流。Trashaun鼓励Jayce勇于面对自己的缺陷，只要坚持到底，一定可以成为自己的超级英雄。
2.续写线索：两人见面——Jayce激动不已——Trashaun教打篮球并赠与球衣——谈论手臂——鼓励Jayce——Jayce相信自己
3.词类激活
行为类
①看见：see/catch sight of
②握住：hold/grip
③打开：unfold/turn on
情感类
①惊讶的：surprised/astonished
②困惑的：puzzled/confused
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only when you’re tough will you see the wing! (运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2] Behind stood Lewis, whose face was flooded with tears. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)


江苏省南京师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月考
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On a steamy morning in July, Clay and Acaimie Chastain arrived at the base of Mount Liamuiga on the Caribbean island of St．Kitts, ready to spend a day of their honeymoon climbing Mount Liamuiga．The highest point on St．Kitts, Liamuiga is also a dormant（休眠的）volcano that starts in the clouds and plunges down to meet the sea．
They couldn't find a visitor centre or hire a guide, so they set off on their own．They reached the peak around noon and ate their sandwiches looking out over the ocean and surrounding islands．
That's when Clay saw it: a small trail that led into the volcano's crater（坑）, a bowl of green with cloud forest giving way to green grass．A series of screw eyes（螺钉孔）had been drilled into the rocks, with ropes that led down．Clay wanted to go down and take some pictures．Acaimie followed him a little way, but she was very cautious and quite scared of heights；so Clay went on alone．
A few minutes later, she heard a crash——a noise that sounded like a large branch snapping, followed by the sound of something big rolling downhill．"Clay?" she called．Silence．
Uneasy, she waited a minute and shouted again——still nothing．And then, from somewhere much further down, she heard a weak cry for help．This time she was certain: It was Clay calling for help from deep within the crater．
As she looked over the lip of the volcano, she tried to stop some of her worst worries．Her phone wasn't getting a signal, and her cries for help were met with only silence．"Clay!" she shouted as loud as she could．"Clay, are you OK?"
Acaimie grasped the rope and began climbing down the trail．When the path became too steep, she slid on her butt, her legs and arms getting bruised and scraped in the process．Then, just off the trail, she saw a flash of red．It was Clay's scarf．And next to it was his cell phone．
She grabbed both and continued down, screaming for Clay all the way．
"Help," he said in that strange voice．
"I'm coming! Stay where you are," she said．
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Finally, she spotted Clay．
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Acaimie had to push those thoughts away and focus on what she could do．
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【答案】Finally, she spotted Clay. He was sitting on the ground, blood running down his face. “Clay,” she called in an anxious voice. “What’s wrong? Have you broken anything?” With a confused look on his face, Clay just stared at her and couldn’t remember anything that had happened. Perhaps the rope he’d been holding had snapped, or maybe he’d just missed a step, but it was clear he’d fallen a long way. Acaimie had to stay calm for Clay, but inside she was in great panic, worried that he had internal injuries that could kill him.
Acaimie had to push those thoughts away and focus on what she could do.She helped him up, had him hold the rope tight and pushed him from behind. Inch by inch, they climbed. After what felt like forever, they reached the top. As they made their way down the trail, Clay’s breathing became more laboured. Acaimie kept shouting for help, but they didn’t see anyone. Thankfully, about halfway down she managed to get a signal and call an ambulance. To their relief, by the time they reached the bottom, the ambulance was waiting for them.
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了两个探险者去火山探险故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后，她发现了Clay。”可知，第一段可描写Acaimie发现了Clay之后做的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“Acaimie必须抛开这些想法专注于她能做的事。”可知，第二段可描写Acaimie专心致志救同伴的具体过程。
2.续写线索： 上山—遇险 —呼救—相救—即将得救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.发现：spot/find/catch/see
②.关注：focus on/pay attention to/concentrate on
情绪类
①.焦虑：anxious/nervous/with anxiety
【点睛】
[高分句型1].With a confused look on his face, Clay just stared at her and couldn’t remember anything that had happened.（with的复合结构）
[高分句型2]. After what felt like forever, they reached the top. （宾语从句）
河北省邢台市六校联考2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月考
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The Boy and the Puppy
A farmer had some puppies and he needed to sell. He painted a sign advertising (广告)the pups and set about nailing (钉)it to a post on the edge of his yard. As he was driving the last nail into the post, he felt a pull on his overalls (工装). He looked down into the eyes of a little boy “Mister,” he said, “I want to buy one of your puppies.”
“Well,” said the farmer, as he rubbed the sweat of the back of his neck, “These puppies come from fine parents and cost a good deal of money.” And with that he let out a whistle. “Here, Dolly!” he called.
Out from the doghouse and down the ramp(斜坡) ran Dolly followed by four little balls of fur. The little boy pressed his face against the chain link fence (篱笆). His eyes danced with happiness. As the dogs made their way to the fence, the little boy noticed something else moving inside the doghouse.
Slowly another little fur ball appeared, this one noticeably smaller. Down the ramp it rolled. Then the little pup began awkwardly shaking its body toward the others, doing its best to catch up. “I want that one,” the little boy said, quickly pointing to the little dog .
The farmer knelt (蹲) down at the boy’s side and said, “Son, you don’t want that puppy. He will never be able to run and play with you like these other dogs would.”
“Just that one.” With the answer, the little boy stepped back from the fence, reached down, and began rolling up one leg of his trousers. In doing so he showed a steel brace (支架) running down both sides of his leg attaching itself to a specially made shoe. It is obvious that the poor condition of the little fur ball also apply to the little boy.
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Looking back up at the farmer, he said,
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“No charge (费用),” answered the farmer,
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【答案】One possible version:
Looking back up at the farmer, he said, “You see, sir, I don’t run too well myself. I feel lonely because my leg stops me from playing with other kids. I am extremely looking forward to it but nobody cares. I do know he will need someone who understands.” With tears in his eyes, the farmer reached down and picked up the little pup. Holding it carefully he handed it to the little boy. “How much does it cost, sir?” asked the little boy，eyes with expectations.
“No charge （费用）,”answered the farmer, “There’s no charge for love and understanding.” “Thank you so much, sir.” The boy said excitedly with the puppy in his arms. He petted his new little friend softly and then pressed his face against the puppy happily. Seeing the good match both find their best, The farmer felt relaxed, “God will give you something, never to others, so, everything is the best arrangement.”
【解析】
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个农夫要卖掉他的小狗，一个小男孩要买一只小狗。当小男孩选好小狗后，农夫告诉他这个小狗不合适，因为小狗有残疾，永远无法像其他的狗一样和他一起跑和玩。小男孩坚持要买那只小狗，并且让农夫看了看自己同样残疾的腿。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他抬头看着农夫说”可知，第一段可描写小男孩向农夫解释原因，农夫听后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容““不收费，”农夫回答说，”可知，第二段可描写农夫把小狗免费送给了小男孩，看着小男孩和小狗在一起快乐的样子，农夫有所感悟。
2.续写线索：卖小狗——买小狗——选中小狗——劝说——得知原因——免费送小狗——感悟
3.词汇激活
行类
抱起来：pick up /lift up
问：ask / inquire
情绪类
期盼：look forward to / expect
兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel lonely because my leg stops me from playing with other kids. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] I do know he will need someone who understands. (运用了who引导定语从句)

湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考二
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Emily White came to the world 17 years ago, with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive long. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
In her hometown, a yearly outdoor performance was held in the school auditorium (礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the own's people.
Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only in elude the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens—her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a glance at Amy's body and said, ''Child, you are just not suitable. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too. ''
Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral (合唱的) room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, ''Emily, you’re next.'' Kind of nervous as she was, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn’t sleep that night. She tossed and turned in bed one thousand times. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain due to stress.
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Emily hurried to the choral room and anxiously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
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Finally, the day of performance came.
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【答案】Emily hurried to the school and nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. The fear of being rejected came to strike again. ''Jeff Green, Rose Black…'' she murmured as her eyes moved upward. ''Wow! '' Emily abruptly covered her wide-opened mouth, feeling as if her heart would jump out. There, at the top of the list was posted her name. The leading singer! However, whispers around her pulled her back to earth. Just then, she felt a pat on the shoulder. It was Mr. Butler. ''We selected you for our faith in your abilities and voice. '' Inspired, Emily practiced even harder for the day of performance.
Finally the day for the performance came. Emily's eyes danced with excitement as she stepped on to the stage. Standing still, she heard noises among the crowd. Obviously not cheers! Emily felt nervous again and even her legs began trembling. At that moment, her eyes parked on Mr. Butler at the corner. He nodded and exchanged a determined glance with her, which timely put her heart back in place. With the music rising, Emily began her singing. Her sweet voice poured and the audience fell into an abrupt silence. When she finished, the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers. Emily White in tears, with so many birth problems in her body, became the shiniest star!
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了天生有很多身体缺陷但嗓音甜美的Emily被音乐老师Owens拒绝参加选拔，从而决定不再尝试。今年新的音乐老师Butler鼓励Emily去参加选拔。
【详解】续写分为两个自然段。
第一段的开头是：Emily匆忙赶到合唱室，焦虑地看着合唱室门上的名单。所以可以接着写：害怕被拒绝的恐惧再次用上心头，Emily从最后开始，默念看到的每个名字。终于她念到了自己的名字，她很兴奋，自己是第一名。但是耳边却传来了同学们的讽刺和讥笑。还好，Butler老师这时赶过来说，是因为Emily的实力，才选择了她。
第二段的开头是：终于，表演的那天来了。所以可以接着写：Emily忐忑地走上舞台，开始认真演唱，但听到台下的议论她开始变得紧张。这时，站在角落里的Butler老师向她投来鼓励和信任的目光。Emily受到鼓舞，认真表演直到结束。她的表演受到了大家的肯定，礼堂爆发出雷鸣一般的掌声和欢呼声。
续写时注意所写内容要符合逻辑。续写的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Emily abruptly covered her wide-opened mouth, feeling as if her heart would jump out.中as if引导表语从句；He nodded and exchanged a determined glance with her, which timely put her heart back in place.中which引导非限制性定语从句。

2023届广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Crash! The old black pickup truck in front of me stopped. I didn’t. I crashed into its back breaking the fender (挡泥板) and bending the driver’s door of my car. To make matters worse, it wasn’t my car. It was my father’s. I shouldn’t have been driving it, and now I had destroyed it.
A farmer jumped out of the truck, slowly and carefully, and looked at the damage. I sat sobbing (抽噎), my lip bleeding where I’d bitten it. He was in a hurry to leave, but we managed to exchange names and phone numbers before he pulled out onto the highway again. I followed, knowing I dared not go home. I’d be in big trouble.
It was my high school graduation day. I drove to school and climbed out through the passenger door. Surveying the broken fender and the door, tears flowed down my face, which was rapidly becoming swollen. I walked into the gym and joined my classmates to prepare for the graduation party. Bad news traveled fast, and soon a teacher came to me
“You’ll have to go home to get dressed for the graduation sooner or later,” she said. “Sooner would be much better and you have to tell your parents.”
I finally agreed and slowly drove home. The Death March sounded in my ears.
My mother took one look at my face when I got home and screamed, “What on earth happened?”
I hung my head and tears rolled down my face again. “I crashed Daddy’s car.”
She threw up her hands in panic and rushed to the backyard where Dad was making burgers. “Stop cooking, Ted. We’re not going to eat. Jean has destroyed your car.”
Dad looked at her and said quietly, “Is she hurt?”
“No, except for biting her lip.”
“Well, then, what does that have to do with eating dinner?” He put a burger on a plate with the others, then walked across the yard and put his arm around me. “Let’s go inside and hear all about this if you’re sure you’re all right.” I sobbed and nodded.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The phone was ringing when we got to the back door.
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I graduated that evening with my family in attendance.
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【答案】One Possible Version:
The phone was ringing when we got to the back door. After answering the phone, my father understood what had happened. It turned out that the farmer called to ask whether I was safe or had any other injuries. Father assured him that I was safe and sound and offered to make up for the damage I caused to his truck. To our surprise, the farmer declined my father’s offer. Meanwhile, my mother helped treat my lip and swollen eyes with some ice. “Don’t worry about the car. Your safety matters most.” my father comforted me. To my great delight, they decided to accompany me to the graduation ceremony.
I graduated that evening with my family in attendance. With my parent’s company, I enjoyed an unforgettable and meaningful graduation ceremony. Even many years later, the laughter and sweet memory we shared together still lingered in my mind. Had it not been for my father’s unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt. I finished high school, growing into a loving and confident person. I was so grateful that my dad taught me what’s most valuable in my life.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者去参加高中毕业典礼的路上，开着父亲的车去学校，结果在半路上遇到车祸，致使父亲的车被毁，但万幸的是，作者并无大碍。作者非常害怕被父亲责备，但最终受到父亲原谅的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们走到后门时，电话铃响了。”可知，第一段可描写农民打电话问作者是否安全，并拒绝作者补偿造成的损坏的提议，并且父母决定陪作者去参加毕业典礼。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上我毕业了，我的家人都出席了。”可知，第二段可描写在父母的陪伴下，我度过了一个难忘而有意义的毕业典礼。
2.续写线索：询问——拒绝补偿——安慰——参加毕业典礼——回忆——感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①接电话：answer the phone / pick up the telephone
②补偿：make up for / compensate
③决定做某事：decide to do sth. / determine to do sth.
情绪类
①令某人高兴的是：to one’s delight / to one’s joy
②感谢：be grateful / show my gratitude
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It turned out that the farmer called to ask whether I was safe or had any other injuries.（运用了that引导的主语从句和whether引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. Had it not been for my father’s unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt.（运用了虚拟语气的倒装形式）

江苏省泰州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月检
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Dad and Madison were walking through the party store, gathering decorations for Madison’s upcoming birthday party.
“But I don’t want to invite Lucy Gilbert! I don’t like her!”
“Madison, you are being unreasonable. If every girl in your class is invited to party but you, you’ll feel left out. It would be a big mistake not to invite Lucy to the party.”
“She never even talks to me!”
Dad sighed and moved down the aisle. “Lucy is a new girl in class. She just moved here a little over a month ago. Think about how that must feel. She doesn’t know one single person in the school. She left all of her to get to know everyone.”
“No, it won’t. She will probably sit in the corner and not talk to anyone. Every day at lunch she sits all by herself. She wants to eat alone!” Madison shrugged and rolled her eyes.
“Madison, I’m done discussing this. You will invite every girl in your class, including Lucy Gilbert!”
On Saturday morning, the family blew up balloons and decorated the house cheerfully. Madison was dressed beautifully for the day, wearing her new blue dress. It was not typical of her to dress herself like this. She usually wore sports clothes because she loved to be outside riding her horse Star with a lead rope (缰绳).
Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep, picturing various presents her friends would bring her. In the meanwhile, she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came. Anyhow, all the girls she invited came finally, including Lucy.
The girls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone. Later, all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents. Opening them one by one, Madison thanked her friends, with a bright smile on her face.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下各式作答。
Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened.
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Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands.
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【答案】Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened. Worrying that it would ruin the party, Madison grabbed the present reluctantly and ripped open the gift-wrap paper. Inside was a delicately hand-made lead rope! Shocked, she widened her eyes, covering her hands over her mouth. “It’s a lead rope for your horse Star. I made it by myself!” Madison pulled it out of the box and placed it on her lap, amazed at its beauty. Lucy added, “I heard you talking about your horse at school. That’s when I got the idea to make you a lead rope. ”
Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. It was, by far, her very favorite birthday present of the day. She suddenly felt so bad because she had been so mean to Lucy. With tears swirling in her eyes, she blinked hard to fight them back, feeling a mixture of regret and gratitude. “Thanks so much for this lead rope. I love it! Would you like to join us and be our friends？” Lucy nodded cheerfully. Madison put her arm around Lucy’s shoulders, both smiling. With applause and laughter echoing through the house, Lucy joined the other girls to enjoy the party.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了麦迪逊在过生日时，邀请全体同学包括不喜欢的露西庆祝生日。露西别出心裁的生日礼物深深的感动了麦迪逊，让作者看到了露西内心深处的善良并自此与露西成为好朋友。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段段首内容“最后打开的是露西的礼物。”可知，第一段描述麦迪逊打开露西的礼物时的过程及心理状态。
②由第二段段首内容“被她的话深深地打动了，麦迪逊紧紧抓住线绳。”可知麦迪逊听到露西的话之后，心理状态发生了变化，重新认识露西并与她成为了好朋友。
2. 续写线索：打开礼物——听到露西的话——感动——心理变化——成为好友
3. 词汇激活
行为类：
①紧抓住线绳：hold the lead rope tightly/grab the lead rope tightly
②抑制：fight back/hold back
③拥抱某人：put her arm around sb./hug sb./embrace sb.
情绪类：
①惊讶：amazed at/surprised at
②感动：moved/touched
③悔恨：regret/sorry/guilty
【点睛】【高分句型1】Inside was a delicately hand-made lead rope!（运用了完全倒装）
【高分句型2】She suddenly felt so bad because she had been so mean to Lucy.（运用了because引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型3】With tears swirling in her eyes, she blinked hard to fight them back, feeling a mixture of regret and gratitude.（运用了with+宾语+宾语补足语复合结构，现在分词作状语）
山东省潍坊市五县市2022-2023学年高三10月统考
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

In 1996 I was a 23-year-old surgery student at Srirama Chandra Bhanja Medical College in Cut tack, Odisha. Being a doctor was my dream. Each time I wore my white doctor’s coat, I felt excited. I had a spring in my step while walking the halls of this famous institution. Above all, I could follow behind the senior physicians treating patients in real time.
Like many medical students in training, I was assigned the night shift. As part of the team, I enjoyed interacting with patients. On a summer night, around one a. m., I was on duty when a tall middle-aged man came in on a stretcher (担架) in severe pain. His large body was doubled over his hands pressing his stomach to try to contain his pain. We got to work.
Banudhar, the patient, complained of progressive pain in his stomach which was abnormally swollen, a symptom building up over the past four hours. Despite some relief from the pain killers, his continuous discomfort was clear. It had been troubling him for several months but he had ignored the symptoms, caring on with his work to feed his family. But that night, he just could not carry on and needed an operation right away.
Banudhar had been taken to the hospital, but nobody attended him. He was alone and terrified. He asked me if his condition was serious, his eyes wild with worry. I couldn’t find the right words, stricken by inexperience and emotion.
“Should I be honest? Will honesty upset him further?”
“How can he make right decisions in his state?”
There must be someone to be here for him, especially during and after the operation. I thought and did my best to contact his wife.
His family lived in a village five hours away from Cuttack. The first three calls did not go through. A few more went unanswered. By then it was almost dawn and my hope was fading.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Twenty minutes later, his wife called back.
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His wife made it to the hospital after the operation.
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【答案】One possible version:
Twenty minutes later, his wife called back. I informed her of Banudhar’s physical condition and that he needed an operation at once. When she heard the news, she burst into tears, eager to rush to the hospital. But she added that she might be late because of traffic inconvenience. I realized her inner anxiety and tried my best to comfort her, promising to attend to her husband before her arrival. During the period Danudhar’s operation was performed against time. And I did perform my duty as I had promised.
His wife made it to the hospital after the operation. When I led her to her husband-weak but alive, she wept with relief. She apologized for her delay and meanwhile appreciated my care and help. I still paid a visit every day. To my delight, Banudhar was recovering day by day. Soon he left hospital, carrying on with his daily routine to feed his family. From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。文章讲述了我作为外科学生时的经历。一个夏天的夜晚，大约凌晨一点，在一次值夜班期间，我遇到一个躺在担架上的中年男人，男人双手压在自己的肚子上，试图抑制肚子的疼痛。肚子疼的症状已经困扰他好几个月，但他一直忽视这些症状，那天晚上的疼痛使得他无法忍受，要面临手术。因为没有人照顾他。他很孤独，很害怕，我也找不到合适的词来安慰他，所以我想尽办法联系他的妻子，但联系的电话都没接通，我的希望越来越渺茫。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“二十分钟后，他的妻子打来电话。”可知，第一段可描写我在电话里告诉他妻子男人的情况，我意识到他妻子的焦虑，答应在她到来之前照顾好她的丈夫。
②由第二段首句内容“他的妻子在手术后赶到了医院。”可知，第二段可描写男人的妻子来到医院看到做完手术的丈夫后，对我表示感谢。此次经历让我感悟到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值。
2. 续写线索
电话接通——告知情形——意识到她的焦虑——我做出承诺——妻子来到医院——感谢我的帮忙——康复离开医院——我的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
告知，通知：inform/notify/acquaint
照顾：attend to /look after/take care of
安慰：comfort/console/soothe/ease
情绪类
急切的，热切的：eager/anxious/keen
如释重负：with relief/in relief/to one’s relief
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I realized her inner anxiety and tried my best to comfort her, promising to attend to her husband before her arrival.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

江苏省南京市2023届高三上学期10月学情调查考试
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last winter, Linda went through a very messy divorce and was very depressed. So she quit her job and left Los Angeles, where she encountered her ex-husband in college. She flew to Boston on the east coast of the US. Later, she settled in a new neighborhood in East Boston. However, shortly afterwards, the company where she worked went bankrupt (破产). Suffering a series of bitter blows, she fell ill, a severe case of flu. She had to stay at home for the whole week, feeling extremely bad and hopeless.
Early one morning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all over. Then all of a sudden, there was an upsetting knock on her front door. Struggling out of the bed, she dragged herself to the window. There, outside, she saw a young lady carefully holding some leaflets（传单）and a TV set model. She knew of a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was about to be gently delivered. “This is the last thing I need today.” She muttered to herself and hesitantly opened the door.
Coughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head out. “Excuse me, madam…” the young lady said with a smile. “I’m sorry but I am not the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever.” Linda interrupted her impatiently. “As a matter of fact, I am feeling terribly awful.”“Is there anything I can do for you, madam?” the young lady asked with concern. “No thanks, just leave me alone.” Linda then shut the door in her face. The young lady politely turned and left in silence.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。


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Linda was surprised by this loving action. ______________________________________________
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One possible version:
A few hours later, another knock. Linda glanced out of the window. To her surprise, at the door was the same lady, back again. Really annoyed this time, Linda opened the door. Before Linda could utter any word, the young lady handed her a warm pot, with a concerned look on the face."I’m so sorry to have disturbed you earlier. I thought you may need this homemade chicken soup. Hope it might make you feel a little better. "
Linda was surprised by this lovely action. After being refused so rudely, the lady still showed much kindness to her. A sense of shame creeping upon her heart, she could only force a smile with burning ears. But also, a warm current surged through her brain and body. Linda took the chicken soup gratefully, tears blurring her eyes and a lump in her throat. The lady wrapped Lindain her arms and patted her on the back. “It’s OK, dear. Everything will be fine.” Hearing these words, Linda felt a ray of bright sunshine lighting up her life.

江苏省苏州市2022〜2023学年高三上学期八校联考
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事。
Once in a kingdom, a man named Liam protested against(反对)the King. The King was so angry because he didn't like anyone going against him so he ordered his soldiers to arrest(逮捕)and hang the man. Liam didn't show any fear and said, "My Lord. I will gladly accept your punishment but please grant(允许)me one last wish. Please give me some time. Before dying I just want to visit my home and see my children one last time."
The King refused his request, saying, "No. I can't allow it. There is no guarantee(担保)that once you leave you will come back."
Just then a man from the crowd came forward and said, "My Lord, please arrest me instead of him as a guarantee. If he doesn't come back on time, you can hang me instead of him."
The King was surprised because he had never seen a man who would offer his own life for someone else. He believed that there was no real friendship in the world. The King asked him. "Why are you ready to take this person's place?"
The man replied, "My Lord, Liam is my best friend and I have trust in him. He is a man who always keeps his promise. I am sure that he will be back once he finishes meeting his family."
The King agreed and allowed Liam to leave for his home. He was given six hours in all. He would need one hour to go and come back from his house, so he had at most five hours to meet his family. Liam left for his house. He met his family. He still had enough time to reach the King's palace before the time of his hanging.
Liam wanted to come back to the hanging place as soon as possible, but on his way he fell from his horse and got hurt. Because of this, he got delayed(耽搁).
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1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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At the same time, as time passed his friend was being held and prepared for hanging.
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Listening to this, Liam went up to his friend and said
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【答案】At the same time, as time passed his friend was being held and prepared for hanging. His friend was standing on board to be hanged, happy to give his own life for him. Just as his friend was about to be hanged, Liam arrived, out of breath, and fell to the ground. Liam shouted, “Please stop! I am back. Please set my best friend free.” His friend replied, “Liam! You are finally back. I would be happy to take your place and die here.”
Listening to this, Liam went up to his friend and said, “My friend, thank you for your help. Now please go. This is my punishment and I should face it.” Seeing this, the King was greatly touched by their friendship and said, “I forgive you. I had never thought that you would keep your promise. More importantly, your true friendship has made a deep impression on me. You are so lucky to have a friend who has trust in you and always stays by your side no matter what happens. You both are free to go.”
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Liam因为反抗国王，国王命令士兵逮捕并绞死这个人，接受惩罚前Liam有一个愿望，他想回家看下孩子们，但国王拒绝了他的请求。这时，人群中一人出来给Liam担保，让国王同意Liam回家看孩子，最后国王同意了。看完孩子们，Liam想尽快回到绞刑处，但在路上他从马上摔了下来，受了伤。因为这个，他的返程被耽搁了。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：与此同时，随着时间的推移，他的朋友被关押起来，准备被绞死，所以第一段应该描述在Liam的朋友即将被绞死时，Liam回来了，但他的朋友愿意替他去死。第二段开头是：听了这话，利亚姆走到他的朋友跟前说……，所以本段应该写Liam对朋友说的话，和国王被这俩人感动了，释放了这两个人。
写作时，需注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，要检查写作任务。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：Seeing this, the King was greatly touched by their friendship这句话运用了非谓语动词seeing作状语，文章也使用了一些固定词组，如be about to ; take your place; keep your promise等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

湖北省襄阳市重点高中2022-2023学年高三上学期第二次月考
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The little car was crowded with kids: my brothers and sisters. We fought, debated and cried, making much noise. Being part of a big family was really starting to annoy me. For example, my brothers and sisters knocked on the bathroom door all the time. How I wanted to be the only child in my family.
As the car rolled down the small road, my mom said cheerfully, "The pool is three minutes away. You’ll have much time to swim. " Swimming was a peaceful activity. I could float on my back and look at the sky. I could pretend I was the only person in the world. Mom parked the car beside a small row of other cars. "One at a time, " she yelled before the car doors opened. Nobody listened. The car doors all flew open at once. After pushing, yelling and crying, we came out.
I quickly pulled off my jeans, T-shit, socks and shoes, and finally put on my swimsuit. "Yeah! " I yelled as I jumped into the big natural pool with small stones on its floor Cold water struck my face. I put my head under the water, which shot up my nose. After standing up again, I dropped backward into the water and began to float. The water sat around my cars, smooth and silent. The sun warmed my face.
I was like a leaf floating in a large pool peacefully. Everything was silent under water. For the moment, I felt I was the only child there. I didn’t have to share things like snacks with other kids. My stomach made a noise at the thought of food. Hadn’t Mom packed a huge bag of chips for our snack? I stood up to walk to shore.
Oh! Dark sandy water suddenly filled my mouth and covered my head. The rocky ground was gone; I was pushed into the deep, dark water. I tried to kick to the surface. As my face peeked out（微露出）from under the water, I took a deep breath. I tried to swim and leave the deep water. But it didn’t work. I only knew how to float.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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The water closed over my head again.


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I could feel my body moving upward as a familiar hand started to pull me through the water.


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The water closed over my head again. I struggled to move both my hands and legs. I thought about my mom. What would she do if she couldn’t find me? What about my brothers and sisters? When thinking, I didn’t know the noise produced by my hands and legs’ moving attracted my brothers and sisters’ attention. Before long, I felt the water moving around me. Something warm and strong touched my hand. Was it a shark in the pool? No, it was someone’s hand.
I could feel my body moving upward as a familiar hand started to pull me through the water. It pulled until I could feel the ground under my feet, and I came onto the shore. “We did it! ” yelled one of my brothers as I looked up and saw my mother holding my hand. I learned she and other kids made a human chain so that she could get me. I was speechless. Kids ran all around me, jumping, running and screaming. Maybe this great big crazy family wasn’t so crazy. After all, they were the human chain. Because of them, I was out of danger.


山东省济南市重点高中2023届高三上学期10月月考联考
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends. He would tell me that he was already seventeen， but still had a curfew（宵禁），He believed he was practically an adult. I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.
“You don't trust me!” he yelled. Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away. I sighed. How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe?
I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head. I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball. “Hi, Meatball," I said, bringing her into my arms. I walked back in, touching her neck gently. Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.
“Why won't she just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan, my youngest son asked.
I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.
“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go. He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.
Meatball became a regular.
One night, temperatures were unusually low. Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.
I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death. She stared at me and meowed again. I patted her head, “I know you're not happy, but it's for your own good.”
“Mom's not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat. “She's just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.” We both laughed at his joke.
The next morning, I couldn't find Meatball. I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jordan nodded,“ I let her out last night.”___________________________________________________
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Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.” My mouth dropped open. “She was outside all night?” I was so furious, “It was freezing and she could die!” Jordan choked back his words, stunned. I grabbed my coat and rushed outside. Jordan followed, fear welling up in his eyes. Several minutes later, the poor thing was found, shaking and curling into a tiny ball. I picked her up, unsure whether she was alive or dead. Jordan was scared, “We need a vet! Now!” (75 words) As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat. I could hear him talking to the cat, apologizing repeatedly. Luckily, the vet saved Meatball. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears. Then, surprisingly, he turned to me. He apologized for what he had done. “I know you just want to keep me safe,” he murmured. I felt a lump in my throat. He rubbed Meatball’s back, “Looks like we are both going to observe the curfew. It’s for our own good.”