初中英语中考复习 05 社会名人 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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素材储备与写作指导
看到关于著名人物的话题，首先要确立哪些人属于著名人物:伟人、著名影视明星、敬星、作家、运动员等。跟前两个主题不同的是，著名人物有时是一个人，有时是个团体即多人。学生普遍会写他们最崇拜的名人、最喜欢的明星、团体给予他们的精神支持和启迪。
实践案例
题目
My favrite idl
审题
看题目是全命题作文，重点阐述why he 1 she is yur favrite idl.
段落结构
My favrite idl应该是夹叙夹议的文章，因为作者写的idl对读者来讲可能不熟悉，所以可以对idl有些外貌描写，让读着有一个形象上的认识。接着，可以写这个idl身上特有的些品质，值得作者学习的地方，突出favrite.
核心语汇
have influence n对有影响力
take a great interest in.对产生浓厚兴趣
catch the eye f sb.引起某人注意
keep up with跟上
a husehld name一个家喻 户晓的名字
speak highly f ...高度评价
ne-hit wnder县花一现的歌手、演员等
shw ff炫耀
gain ppularity受到欢迎
rle mdel榜样
be credited t归功于
deserve t be ...当之无愧
参考句型
1.be undubtedly an idl fr ..毫无疑问是 的偶像
e.g. The handsme pp star is undubtedly an idl fr teens arund he wrld.
这个帅气的流行歌星毫无疑问是青少年的偶像。
2. balance the acting life with her persnal life平衡好演艺生活和个人生活
e.g. She chses her rles carefully and wrks hard t balance her acting life with her persnal life.
她仔细地选择角色，努力平衡好自己的工作和生活。
3. have a passin fr ..对..生强烈的兴趣
e.g. Brn int such a musical family, G.E.M had a passin fr music when she was a little girl.
邓紫棋出生在这样一个音乐世家，她在很小的时候就对音乐产生了强烈的兴趣。
4.be due t 归因于
e.g. Kim S Hyun's success is due t his serius attitude twards acting.
金秀贤的成功归因于他对待演戏的那股认真劲。
5.He is famus because 他出名是因为
e.g. He is famus because he has gt talent fr playing basketball
他出名是因为他有打篮球的天赋。
6.He is famus nt nly fr ... but als fr ...他出名不仅是因更是因为
e.g. He is famus nt nly fr his amazing height, but als fr his perfect sills in basketball.
他出名不仅是因为他那令人惊叹的身高，更是因为他那完美的篮球技术。
7.Her cntributin t sciety is ...她对社会的贡献
e.g. Her cntributin t sciety is shwing Chinese culture t the wrld.
她对社会的贡献是向世界展示中国文化。
8.be fascinated by ... 着迷
e.g. In his childhd, he was fascinated by Bruce Lee, much like ther children at his age.
小时候，他与同龄孩子们一一样，对李小龙非常着迷。
习作一
My favrite idl
My favurite idl is Ninmiya Kazunari - the member f ARASHI.He has gd skin as if he were just 23 years ld, but in fact, he is 33 nw.He①is gd at writing and singing, as well as dancing: He has wn the award
f the Japanese Academy and he is als interested in ding magic tricks. Smetimes he is quiet as an adult and smetimes he is smiling like a child. He is an attractive man and I like him very much.
注：①be gd at擅长于，
as well as也
点评:小作者写她的偶像二宫和也，涉及面比较广:年龄、特长、奖项、爱好，读起来文章比较流畅，但句式简单，如果把简单句变成复合句会更好。比如原文中He is gd at writing and singing, as well as dancing.可以用 s . that 结构，改成He is s talented that he is gd at writing and singing, as well as dancing.表明他是一个很有天赋的歌手。
习作二
My favrite idl
The public tends t think that Miley Cyrus has a bad influence n teenagers because f all thse crazy things she has dne after leaving the frmer Disney star title behind.
Regardless f what thers think, Miley Cyrus is my favrite idl.Aside frm the fact that she has a harse vice which can be easily distinguished, I like her as a persn. Unlike mst Hllywd stars,she is bld, and mst imprtantly, she is true t herself. She sings the sngs she wants t sing, even thugh the theme relates t cntrversial issues. She des charity, helping many kids either psychlgically r financially. Getting rid f her frmer identity as Hannah Mntana, Miley Cyrus has finally grwn up and becme a celebrity wh has impact n the sciety, and this makes her my favrite idl.
注：
1.regardless f 不管不顾
2.Aside frm the fact that she has a harse vice which can be easily distinguished, I like her as a persn.定语从句
3.get rid f 摒弃
4.Getting rid f her frmer identity as Hannah Mntana, Miley Cyrus has finally grwn up and becme a celebrity wh has impact n the sciety, and this makes her my favrite idl.定语从句
点评:
小作者写这篇名人文章的视角比较独特:没有按一般思 路从这位当红歌星的作品及获得的奖项出发，而是另辟蹊径，将Miley Cyrus和其他明星的不同处写了出来: She isbld, and mst imprtantly, she is true t herself.除此之外，她还有更加高贵的品质: Shedes charity, helping many kids either psychlgically r financially.这样，这位歌星为何是作者最喜爱的，就-目 了然了。作者词汇、句型运用流畅得体，可见语言功底很好。
相关话题范文解析
（一）
Lin Dan A Super Sprts Star
Lin Dan, whse nickname is Super Dan, is a famus badmintn player f China. Lin Dan has an utstanding perfrmance in the badmintn histry. At the age f 27, he wn all the majr titles in the badmintn wrd. N ne in the wrd has dne better than him.
Lin Dan is an enthusiastic man, and he is a persn full f passin. He puts his heart and sul int his training and cntests. He is the kind f persn wh believes in himself. And he will nt give up, until he achieves his gals. It is this kind f spirit and hard wrk that make him a legend in the badmintn wrld.
Lin Dan is wrthy f the name- -super sprts star.
参考译文
林丹------------一位超级体育明星
林丹，昵称为“超级丹”，是中国著名的羽毛球运动员。林丹在羽毛球历史上有着出色的表现。在他27岁时，他就赢得了羽毛球世界里的全部主要头衔。世界上没有哪个人能比他更优秀的了。
林丹是一个非常热情的人，同时，他也是一 一个充满激情的人。 他会全身心地投入到训练和比赛中。他是那种一一直坚信自己的人。不实现目标，绝不轻言放弃。正是这种精神和他的刻苦，让他成了羽毛球世界里的传奇人物。
林丹不愧为超级体育明星。
亮点词汇
nickname昵称
utstanding 卓越的;出众的
passin 漱情
achieve ne's gal实现某人的目标
spirit精神
legend .传奇
出彩句型
whse nick name is.. 昵称为
He has an utstanding perfrmance.他有着出色的表现。
He puts his heart and sul n...他全身心投入到
He will nt give up, until..他不会放弃，直到
It is... that..正是
高分点评
本文主要围绕"super" 这一字眼展开， 以对林丹性格特点的详细描写，来突出他的卓越之处。本文多处使用了定语从句，如whse引导的定语从句和wh引导的定语从句，还运用了强调句“It 使文章变化多样、 精彩绝伦。
（二）
A Pp Singer
Justin Bieber, a Canadian pp singer and actr, was brn n March 1st, 1994. He lives in the nw. He has a handsme lk.
He has a deep lve fr music. When he was eight years ld, he culd play the guitar and drum. At that time, he ften played the guitar in the street, which attracted many passers-by. Nw he is a real superstar, wh is ppular all arund the wrld. A lt f teenage fans are bsessed with him. One reasn is that his sngs are very psitive, encuraging peple nt t give up easily.
He has a great talent in music. 1 hpe he can d better in the future.
参考译文
一位流行歌手
贾斯汀.比伯，一位加拿大流行歌手和演员，出生于1994年3月1日。他现在居住在美国。他有着英俊的外表。
他很热爱音乐。他八岁的时候，就能弹吉他和打鼓。那时候，他经常在街上弹吉他，吸引了很多路人。现在他是一个真正的超级明星，在全世界都很受欢迎。很多青少年粉丝迷恋他。其中一个原因是他的歌很积极，鼓励人们不要轻易放弃。
他在音乐上很有天赋。我希望他以后能做得更好。
亮点词汇
handsme 英俊的
passer-by 路人;行人
psitive 积极的
encurage鼓励
出彩句型
He has a... lk.他有...的外表。
He has a deep lve fr...他很热爱
At that time.,...在那时，
.. is/are bsessed with... 对迷恋.
One reasn is that...一个原因是
高分点评
本文从贾斯汀.比伯的基本概况到音乐之路依次展开，通过连接词“at that time"等的使用，使得文章起承转合顺畅自然。作者将同位语、分析结构和定语糅合使用，既使表达简练，又使句子富于变化。如文章的第一句中同位语 "a Canadian pp singer and actr"和wh引导的定语从句结合使用，清晰明了地传递了作者的意思，非常精彩。
书面表达满分必背
（一）
Superstar and I
In my heart, G.EM Tang is a superstar. She is my favurite singer wh has a really amazing vice. She started her career when she was nly sixteen years ld - a year yunger than I am nw! She did her gigs when she was nineteen- the time when mst f us are struggling fr the University Entrance Examinatin. She has pursued her dream with verspread rumr and dubts fr 9 years till nw. She ever cried, she ever tried t explain,but she never stpped. Nw she has the best attitude t thse rumrs: I will prve myself with my music.
As far as I am cncerned, it is very amazing t achieve such great success in music at such a yung age. Mrever, her attitude t face all the misunderstandings frm thers is what I can learn frm. We are grwing day by day, all f us, and we must try t face all kinds f things, including the misunderstandings. What shuld we d then? Maybe we shuld learn frm G.E.M and d what we shuld d t prve urselves.
（二）
My favurite star
There are many excellent stars in varius fields at hme and abrad, fr example, ZhuXun in film industry, M Yan in literature, and Blt in the sprts circles. My favrite star is Zhu Xun. wh is an utstanding actress.
Zhu Xun liked watching mvies since she was a little girl. Her father wrked in a cinema, which ffered her the pprtunity t have aces t mvies. Maybe her talent has been develped since then Over the tw decades Zhu Xun has perfrmed in TV and mvies Her acting is mature day after day. bringing her lts f awards. Nw she has becme ne f the icnic actresses in China. Besides, she devtes herself in philanthrpy and envirnmental prtectin. Zhu Xun calls n everyne t live a lw-carbn life t keep a green and beautiful planet.
I like her because f her excellent perfrming as well as her persnality.