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    考点47 书面表达之叙事描写类
    叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式,以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体:
    这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高,且富于变化,用得最多的是动词的过去时态,其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时,如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格,那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:
    1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
    写好书面表达,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个"W"和一个"H"来展开,分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。
    2. 突出中心,详略得当
    在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。
    3. 用活语言,准确生动
    记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。

    1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind ... is the most unforgettable one.
    2. On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was...First of all... Then ... After that... In the end ...
    3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienced, I will remember him/her forever.
    加分句子:
    1. Sth impressed me greatly...
    2. What impressed me most is that...
    经典句型:
    1. Last Sunday(Saturday...), it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy) 
    2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus...   
    3. We enjoyed ourselves.
    4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock.   
    5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.  
    6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 
    7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.   
    8. We visited a lot of places of interest.  
    9. We had a good time there. 
    10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. 

    l 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格,塑造人物形象,反映生活,表现主题,模版如下:
    开门见山,引出要介绍的人物
    正文(时间、地点、人物……)
    感想
    I will never forget my English teacher…She is a beautiful woman…


    It was…o’clock, I did…in…



    I realize that…

    l 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
    l 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构,模版如下:
    介绍景观
    介绍旅行经历
    总结旅行感受
    … is one of the most beautiful scenery spots.
    I volunteered a guide to introduce…
    It was a busy and tired day but I was very happy.



    A
    我们共同经历了一段不平凡的日子,也留下了许多触动心灵的瞬间,他们中有逆行而上的医生,变身主播的老师,为你解决衣食住行的父母……近日,某英文报正在举行以“身边的感动”为主题的征文活动。请你结合此主题写一篇英语短文。
    提示词语: protect, move, help, proud, hero
    提示问题: ●What did he/she do?
    ●What can you learn from him or her?
    The fight against the outbreak has lasted for a few months. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    The fight against the outbreak has lasted for a few months. During the fight, doctors and nurses are like heroes— they protect us and they fight for us. My aunt who is a doctor moved me a lot.
    For the past years, my aunt was just an ordinary relative for me. But the decision she made on January 23rd changed my thought completely—she was asked to go to Wuhan to help the patients there. Though her daughter was only three years old, she decided to leave for Wuhan. For her, it was the thing that she must do. I was really moved.
    I want to tell my aunt that I am proud of her and I think she’s a real hero.
    B
    假如你是李梅。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣, 希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画, 给Tom写一封电子邮件, 向他讲述这一经典故事, 并告知其寓意。
    Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)
    ①②③④
    提示:play hide-and-seek(捉迷藏), be frightened(惊恐的)
    要求:
    1. 文章须包括所有图画内容, 可以适当发挥, 使全文连贯;
    2. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息;
    3. 90词左右, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
    Dear Tom,
    I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name "Sima Guang hit the tank". ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
    Yours
    Li Mei
    【答案】例文:
    Dear Tom,
    I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”.
    Once Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang! ” The tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.
    From the story, we know Sima Guang was brave and clever. When meeting danger, we should calm down and try to find ways.
    I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
    Yours
    Li Mei
    C
    假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述在今年4月20日,复课开学后的第一天,你在学校的生活以及对老师的感谢。
    (1)我又回到了学校,我很兴奋,早上7:00老师在学校门口等候着我们;
    (2)进入教室前,老师为我量体温;
    (3)进入教室后,当我坐下时,发现桌子上有老师为我准备的欢迎卡片;
    (4)中午,老师把午餐盒放到我的桌子上;
    (5)放学后,老师给整个教室消毒;
    (6)老师,您辛苦了……
    要求:
    1.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
    2.词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
    3. 书写工整占1分。
    参考词汇:欢迎卡片 Welcome card 午餐盒 lunch box 给……消毒 v. disinfect
    After a long winter holiday on April 20th, I__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文:
    After a long winter holiday, on April 20th, I returned to my school again. I was so excited to see my teachers and classmates. We didn’t see each other for a long time. When I got to school at 7 o’clock in the morning, teachers were waiting for us at the school gate. Before I entered the classroom, my teacher took my temperature. After I sat down, I found a Welcome card which my teacher prepared for me on the desk. I was moved deeply. At noon, my teacher put the lunch box on my desk. After school, it was teachers who disinfected the whole classroom. How great they are!
    Thank you—my dear teachers. You have done a lot for us. We will try our best to study.
    We promise that we can make progress. Please believe us.
    D
    一场突如其来的、肆虐的新冠使我们过了一个超长的寒假。特殊的寒假你是怎样度过的?经过全国人民共克疫情,我们重返校园。“经一事长一智”,作为一名中学生,我们今后如何去做?假如你是王华请根据你的经历给你的笔友王辉写一封信。内容包括:1、下表中已出示的内容。2、补充上相关内容。
    My experience

    Our long
    holiday

    1. What did we do to
    protect ourselves?
    1. Stayed at home and don’t go out unless necessary.
    2. Wore protective masks (口罩) outdoors.
    3. Washed hands as often as possible.
    2. How to make our
    holiday meaningful
    and colorful?
    1. Developed new hobbies.
    2. Kept studying.
    3. Spent more time with family.
    Back to
    school
    What will I do?

    要求:1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
    2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
    3. 80-100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Wang Hui,
    Over the past months, the COVID-19 (新冠病毒) has made its way around China. It has a strong impact on our life and study. We middle school students had the longest winter holiday. What did we do in the holiday? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    What’s your experience? I am looking forward to your reply.
    Best wishes.
    Yours,
    Wang Hua
    【答案】例文
    Dear Wang Hui,
    Over the past months, the COVID-19 (新冠病毒) has made its way around China. It has a strong impact on our life and study. We middle school students had the longest winter holiday. What did we do in the holiday?
    First, we stayed at home and didn’t go out unless it is necessary. Secondly, we wore protective masks outdoors when we went out. What’s more, we washed hands as often as possible to keep ourselves away from the virus. It seemed everyone was stressed out during this special holiday. However, in order to make our holiday meaningful and colorful, we did something wonderful as well. We developed new hobbies, kept studying and spent more time with family instead of going out. I think I had a busy and interesting holiday. After we go back to school, I will pay more attention to physical health care and do more sports.
    What’s your experience? I am looking forward to your reply.
    Best wishes.
    Yours,
    Wang Hua
    E
    一个人可以非常清贫、困顿、低微,但是不可以没有梦想。只要梦想一天,只要梦想存在一天, 就可以改变自己的处境。——奥普拉
    初中三年,你一定遇到过很多困难,但最终梦想给了你勇气,帮助你战胜了困难。某英文报社以“梦想的力量”为话题展开征文活动。请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿,谈谈你在梦想的力量下战胜困难的一次经历,以及你的收获感受。
    提示词语: dream, power, remember, defeat, proud
    提示问题:
    ●What was your dream?
    ●How did your dream help you to overcome a difficulty?
    ●What have you learnt from the experience?
    Everybody has a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】例文
    Everybody has a big dream. A life without a dream is a life without a sun. Therefore, in no circumstances can we give up our dream. Unquestionably, dreams are of great importance.
    My dream is to be a reporter. To achieve my dream, I have to work hard to enter the best high school in my town. I still remember when I failed my math exam last month, I was so sad and upset that I was ready to give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl who wasn’t good at it, it was so difficult for me to work out the problems. Luckily, my dream encouraged me to walk further and cheered me up. It is like a good friend and always gives me a lot of energy and power to defeat the failure.
    I realize no matter how difficult the road is, I should try my best to keep walking to reach the end of the road. And my dream is always guiding me correctly.

    A【2020 •黔南州】
    61.
    一场新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延,对各行各业影响很大,使人们对未来的工作选择有了新的认识和思考。请你以"What is my dream job?"为题,用英语写一篇短文,发表在学校英语手抄报上,谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法。
    内容:
    1. 疫情前的职业梦想和原因(2点);
    2. 疫情后的梦想职业和原因(2点);
    3. 现阶段应该怎么做(2点)。
    要求:
    1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
    2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息;
    3. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考词汇:scientist, engineer, policeman/policewoman, teacher, doctor
    What is my dream job?
    I have many
    dreams.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    I will be a good
    student.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【写作思路】
    这篇短文要求以What is my dream job?为题,介绍一下自己理想的工作。审题可知,文章中应包括以下内容:首先介绍疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因;然后介绍发生疫情之后,自己理想的工作发生了变化以及原因;最后简述一下现阶段应该怎样做来实现自己的理想。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主叙述,人称是第一人称或第三人称。
    【参考范文】
    What is my dream job?
    I have many dreams. I wanted to be a scientist because scientists can invent many high-tech products to make our life more convenient. I also wanted to be a teacher because I like to get along with children and it is a respectable job. But at the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out suddenly and my dream has changed since then. Now I want to be a doctor because I want to help people in need. When our country and people are in trouble, doctors and nurses devote themselves to saving people’s lives. They are heroes.
    I will be a good student in order to make my dream come true. I will study hard from now on and go to a medical college. I hope I can realize my dream one day.
    B【2020 •青海省】
    61.人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延,我们见证了全国人民居家隔离,医务人员驰援武汉,学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动,这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life Lesson I Learned"为题,用英语写一篇短文。
    要求:1.观点明确,内容完整,逻辑清晰,书写规范;
    2.词数100左右。
    A Life Lesson I Learned
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【写作思路】
    本题属于话题作文。要求以“A Life Lesson I Learned”为题,结合新型冠状病毒肺炎在中国和全球的蔓延这一事件,写一篇短文谈谈自己的思考和启发。写作时要紧扣题目要求并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
    【参考范文】
    A Life Lesson I Learned
    All of us joined together to fight against the disease when COVID-19 hit the whole world in a sudden early this year.
    It was a big challenge to everyone, but no one held back. Many people devoted themselves to fighting against it. The government advised us to stay at home and avoid going to the public places if possible. Doctors and nurses tried their best to treat the patients and take good care of them though they were at the risk of getting infected. People who were willing to help others worked as volunteers. They did a lot and were not afraid of the danger they faced.
    The outbreak has caused so many deaths that it gives me a life lesson: We should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
    C【2020•随州市】
    81.2020年初,一场突如其来的新型冠状病毒疫情开启了我们“停课不停学”的居家时光。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情下的我们”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张鸣,请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。
    要点提示:1. 认真上网课,按时完成作业;
    2. 广泛阅读,增长知识;
    3. 看英语电影,听英文歌曲,放松自己;
    4. 坚持锻炼,保证睡眠,保持健康;
    5. 与父母交流,增进了解,分担家务;
    6. 你的感受(1-2点)。
    写作要求:1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
    2. 词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
    3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
    To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
    During the hard time, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【写作思路】
    本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“疫情下的我们”为主题并根据题目中的要点提示写一篇文章,浅谈自己在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主,要注意文章的逻辑顺序,确保语句通顺流畅。
    【参考范文】
    To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
    During the hard time. I had online classes carefully and finished my homework on time. I also read a lot of books to increase my knowledge. Sometimes I watched English movies and listened to English songs to relax myself. In order to keep healthy, I kept on exercising and got enough sleep. What's more, I spent time talking with my parents. In this way, we understood each other better. In my spare time, I tried to help them with some housework.
    All in all, I think it is an unforgettable experience in my life.
    D(2020 •娄底市)
    56.“生命在于运动。”“运动兴,民族兴。”全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是一名初三学生,你们学校的英语社团正在举办题为“Sports”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参赛。
    1.要点:

    2.要求:
    (1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;
    (2)语言要通顺,表达要正确;
    (3)要求包含所有要点提示,为了行文需要,可适当拓展和增加要点;
    (4)词数不少于60个英语单词,开头己给出,不计入总词数。
    3.正文:
    Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【写作思路】
    本题为话题作文,要求以“Sports”为题写一篇文章。文章用现在时,人称用第一人称。
    【参考范文】
    Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China.
    As for me, I like taking part in different kinds of sports, like football, basketball, walking, swimming and so on. And I also like to watch sports matches. My favorite sport is swimming. I look like a lovely fish in the swimming pool. I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness.
    As we all know sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports. Doing sports can make us look good and feel good. And doing sports regularly can even help us sleep better at night.
    E(2020 •湖南省衡阳市)
    51. 法国作家雨果曾说“进步,才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光,你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步,比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
    要求:
    1.选取至少两个方面;
    2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同;
    3.如何取得这些进步的;
    4.书写工整,语句通顺,连贯,词数不少于80。
    注意:便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。
    参考词汇:used to do/be... , try one’s best to do…,make progress in( doing....)
    I have made progress
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    【写作思路】
    该题目是话题类书面表达,要结合题目所给信息,谈一谈自己的进步。
    【参考范文】

    I have made progress
    I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I’m not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
    I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn’t give up. I kept on remembering new words , listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and also I became more and more confident.
    What great progress I have made!
    F【2020 •广西北部湾经济】
    66.春去秋来, 四季交替, 你最喜欢什么季节? 请根据以下提示, 以"My favourite season"为题, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
    写作要点:
    1. 你最喜欢的季节是什么?
    2. 它有哪些自然现象?
    3. 可以进行哪些体育、休闲活动?
    4. 你有哪些感受?
    写作要求:
    1. 内容必须包含所给的要点, 可适当发挥, 使行文连贯;
    2. 语篇完整, 语句通顺, 语法正确, 书写规范;
    3. 文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息, 否则一律不予评分。
    My favourite season
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    【写作思路】
    该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我最喜欢春天;接下来介绍春天的自然现象,可以进行的体育、休闲活动和我的感受;最后鼓励大家一起享受春天。
    【参考范文】
    My favourite season
    There are four seasons in a year. Of all the seasons, I like spring best.
    In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers start to come out. We can hear the birds singing happily in the trees. It usually rains lightly and the air is fresh. During this season, there are many outdoor activities, such as going hiking, flying kites and planting trees. I usually go cycling or have a picnic with my parents on weekends. I think these activities are colourful and meaningful.
    Spring stands for a new beginning and it is full of hope. Let's enjoy this wonderful season together.
    G【2020 •徐州市】
    71.2020 年 6 月 16 日,我市某中学发生了一件感人的事情。请以 What a moving story!为题,写一篇英语短文,简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下:

    经过
    1.两工人为学校装空调,怕影响学生学习,夜晚工作;雨天路滑, 不小心碰掉一块瓷砖;留下纸条和 50 元钱,愿赔偿。
    2.学校表示不用赔偿;学生也为两人点赞并送去了西瓜。
    感想
    ……(内容自拟)

    注意:
    (1)词数 90 左右。短文需包含表格中的要点,但不要逐字翻译。
    (2)短文已给出的部分(见答题卡)不计入总词数。
    (3)短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
    参考词汇:空调:air-conditioner 瓷砖:ceramic tile
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    【写作思路】
    该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述事情的经过并发表自己的看法。
    【参考范文】
    What a moving story!
    A moving story happened in a school of our city on 16 June, 2020.
    In order not to disturb the students who were studying at school, two workers decided to put in air-conditioners at night. It was rainy and wet. When they were carrying one air-conditioner, they broke one ceramic tile. Feeling sorry for what they had done, they left a note and 50 yuan to pay for the tile. The school, however, didn’t accept the money. The students gave the two workers thumbs up and sent a water-melon to show their gratitude.
    I think both the workers and the school have done something right. If we do something wrong, we should be honest and face it bravely. Meanwhile, forgiving others is always appreciated. Just as the saying goes, “one good turn deserves another”.
    H【2020 •枣庄市】
    47.Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。)
    (请根据下面的提示,在答题卡第六节下面,写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意:不要出现自己信息:诸如姓名,学校,人名可以用英文名字。)
    1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。)
    2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who).
    (首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。)
    3. Next write about how it happened.
    (接下来写事件是如何发生的。)
    4. Then write about how you feel about this event.
    (然后写一下你的感受。)
    5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it.
    (最后写一下这件事如何改变你人生或者你从中学到什么。)
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    【写作思路】
    这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲,学生们可以根据这一提示,组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题;然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过;接下来介绍一下自己的感受;最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示,但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力,结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性,能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。
    【参考范文】
    Giving is better than taking
    I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking.
    Sample 2:
    The black boots
    When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gong by, the black boots are always in my memory.
    I【2020 •河南省】
    56. 爱思考的人善于提出问题,而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
    1、要点:
    1)你提出的问题是什么;
    2)你为什么会提出这个问题;
    3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
    2、要求:
    1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
    2)词数100左右。
    A question I asked
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    【写作思路】
    该题目是话题类书面表达,短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。
    【参考范文】
    A question I asked
    When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless.
    One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remember words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.”
    I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more.

    A(2020山东省东营市初中学业水平模拟(二模))
    明天的你一定会感谢今天努力奋斗的自己。假如你现在已30岁, 请以I want to say thanks to myself.为题, 给学生时代的自己写一段话, 简要回忆那时的生活和学习, 那时的梦想实现了吗?回首往事有何感想?
    要求:
    1.100词左右;
    2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
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    【答案】One possible version
    I want to say thanks to myself
    How fast time flies! I am 30 years old and has already worked as an English news reporter for China Daily in Beijing for nearly two weeks. I have to face all kinds of challenges but at the same time I enjoy every moment because it is the dream that I have ever had.
    At my junior school, I had deep interest in language learning so Chinese and English were my favorites. But because of other weak subjects, my grades were not good enough. My teacher told me I must work harder to catch up. From then on, I put effort in every minute to make progress. In class, I followed the teachers and wrote down key notes. After class, I searched for the best solutions to problems by thinking again the again or working with others. I treated every test or homework seriously. I had never told myself to give up although it was not easy for me at all.
    Thanks to the hard work, I finally achieved my dream. Where there is a will, there is a way. I have known that facing challenges with courage and effort, the world will be what you like one day.
    B(2020上海市松江区中考二模)
    (疫情期间,我们足不出户,但是我们看到听到了很多感人事迹,我们也经历了一段不同寻常的学习生活。无论是无私奉献的白衣天使或社区志愿者还是我们自己的生活经历都给我们带来了不同的感悟和收获。请结合这些感人事迹或自身经历,完成一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
    The following expressions are just for reference:
    online learning moving
    medical workers impressive
    community volunteers warm-hearted
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    【答案】例文:
    We Chinese students have to take online courses at home because of the virus. There is no denying that every student has his own impressive experience. As for me, I firmly believe that it makes me more knowledgeable and self-disciplined. During this period,teachers arranged our time well enough to make every student study more efficiently at home. I also took full use of my leisure time to learn my poor subject---Maths. When I was in trouble, I also used QQ or WeChat to ask my teachers for help and they could help me instantly. However, sometimes my self-control was not enough, so my parents always remind me that I must spend more time studying at home so that I could be admitted into an ideal high school. After a certain time, I am able to take full advantage of my time flexibly. Therefore, online learning improves my ability of getting knowledge and controlling myself.
    C(2020云南省昆明市官渡区中考英语一模)
    在每个人的生活中,都有许多故事发生。请根据所给题目“A story in my life”写一篇英文短文,叙述一个你自己生活中的故事。
    要求:
    1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
    2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
    3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
    A story in my life
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    【答案】A story in my life
    When I was young, I went through a thing which influenced me deeply.
    One day, I went to school as usual. All of a sudden, I heard a voice crying. I knew there was something wrong. So I walked towards the direction of the voice. Then I found a child and he couldn’t find his mother. I decided to help him find his mother, and I took him to the police station nearby. After that I went to school in a hurry, but I was still late. My teacher was angry at first. But when she heard what happened, she excused me.
    After the thing, I feel very happy to do good things.
    D(2020北京市西城区2018届初三英语一模)
    现在,某英文报纸正在开展以"遇见美"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历,主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美,经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。
    提示词语:visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory
    提示问题:
    1. When and where did it happen?
    2. What did you experience?
    3. Why was it beautiful?
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    【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
    The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.
    From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.
    E(2020河南省实验中学2017届九年级中考第二次模拟)
    时光精灵带走了三年相伴的岁月,却给我们留下了满满的收获。作为实验人你一定学到了很多,成长了很多。请以“I'm a wonderful teenager'’为题,写一篇文章,描述一下现在的你。
    要求:1.从自己拥有的优秀品质、特长爱好等方面描写
    2.不能出现真实姓名、班级、校名
    3.语言流畅、情感真挚
    4.不少于80词
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    【答案】I'm a wonderful teenager
    I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
    One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my reading ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. By reading Shakespear's works, I know what Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China.
    I am sure to continue reading, so I can lead a colourful life.

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