初中英语中考复习 秘籍16 书面表达提纲类-2020年中考英语抢分秘籍（解析版）

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秘笈16 书面表达提纲类 考点 书面表达提纲类中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格：另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有时代特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性的命题理念仍将是今后几省各地中考书面表达的基本思路。【满分技巧】认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。①使用高级语法与句型，如，名词性从句，分词作状语和定语，还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒装句。常见词的复合结构，如＂with+复合宾语结构＂等等，这些形式来提高文章的档次，写出亮点句子。②使用过渡性词汇，增加文章的逻辑性与连贯性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑，上下文更连贯，逻辑性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语有表列举的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的because of，thanks to等。③为了避免重复和连接上下文，多用指代词。对于出现过的非关键次和短语，常用指代词来代替，保持文章的简洁，使文章跟紧凑。 (1)文章的主要要点要有逻辑地结合起来，使其结构严谨，内容连贯，层次分明，分好段落，设计好文章的开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间使用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻辑关系的词汇或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，意思连贯，给人以一气呵成之感。恰当地使用过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，避负脱节现象。(2)语言表达。新的评分标准鼓励学生尽量使用较复杂的结构和高级词汇。语言要准确，长短句结合。学着使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。评价一篇文章的好坏，一条重要的原则就是＂上下文连贯＂，要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一气呵成的感觉。 A（2019·长沙市中雅培粹学校初三月考）初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词【参考范文】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and hap piness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.However, there is stil l something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life. B（2019·合肥市第四十五中学初三）习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。提示：1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先；…2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名…要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。Hello, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【参考范文】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addit ion, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.That's all. Thank you! C（2019·福建省福州延安中学初三月考）湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。要点提示：1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2.购物时重复使用袋子。3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。要求：1.80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。参考词汇：protect the environment； reuse bags； plant； cut down； throw； wait in line； be wise； obey public rules   Start out smallHello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? ___________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为“美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。主要从1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2. 购物时重复使用袋子。3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【参考范文】Start out smallHello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown？In order to make our hometown more beautiful，as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line.D（2020·厦门市莲花中学初三月考）"你养我长大，我陪你变老．"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文．要点：（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）．注意事项：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night．Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!【名师点评】【高分句型一】When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，【高分句型二】It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who … A为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从4 月 1 日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。1. 学生吃得健康、安全；2. 及时发现就餐问题；3. 食堂提供食品多样；4. 父母更加放心。注意：1.词数80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇:规定regulation (n.)；食堂cafeteria (n.)；营养的nutritious (adj.)A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【参考范文】A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good andnecessary. I hope it will be carried on forever. B文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.”你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。写作要点：1. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；2. Reasons (looks, personality品性，ability...)；3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).要求：1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；3. 词数不少于80。____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。【参考范文】I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba w hich has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks. C请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，词数90左右。要点：1.成龙(Jackie Chen)是世界上最伟大的功夫巨星。他作为歌手和导演也很出名。2.1954年出生于香港，自小就梦想进入电影业。3.1978年的电影《醉拳》（Drunken Master）标志着他成功生涯的开始，片中他成功地将幽默和激动人心的动作结合在一起。4.他的成就远不止功夫巨星。他致力于慈善工作很多年。5.我认为……注意：1.第5要点须用1-2句话作适当的发挥。2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                                                                                                                      【参考范文】Jackie Chan is one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars in the world. He is also famous as a singer and a director. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Kong in 1954. He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. The film Drunken Master in 1978 marked the beginning of his successful career. In the film he successfully joined humor and exciting action together. His achievements are far snore than a Kung Fu superstar. He has devoted many years to charity work. I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.【详解】题干解读：这篇文章要求写成龙的生平，介绍成龙的一些事，主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，第三人称单数。要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。介绍人物生平的作文要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。例文点评：这篇短文叙述完整准确，内容忠实于材料，在短文最后表达了自己的看法。在写作中句式变化丰富运用了比较高级的句式，时态准确，符合英语表达习惯。【高分亮点】短语： one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars；is famous as；dreamt of；the beginning of。时间状语从句：He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. 定语从句：I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered. D在近几年习主席的讲话中，“实干”是一个始终不变的主题，他的话语激发了我们不断奋进的壮志豪情。在初中即将毕业之际，你从习主席的教导中学到了什么？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇毕业留言互相激励。提示：（1）What do you think teenagers need to do for our country?（2）How do teenagers achieve their goals?（3）What are your best wishes? 要求：（1）短文应包括要求的所有信息；（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。Our country has walked into new times. We teenagers_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】Our country has walked into new times. We teenagers should study hard so that we can go to a good university. Students dedicate themselves to their country when they grow up. Students can take their study more seriously than before. It is also important for students to keep strong bodies. Students can use their spare time to do more exercises. My wish is to be a teacher when I grow up. If I have time, I will do more exercise to keep fit.【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。根据题目要求回答三个问题，包括青少年应该为我们的国家做些什么，青少年如何实现自己的目标，学生自己的最好的愿望是什么。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，描述了青少年应该好好学习以便有美好的未来和好好锻炼身体等，还写出了如何做和自己的愿望是做老师。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：词组：study hard；so that；grow up；spare time；keep fit等；句型：Students dedicate themselves to their country when they grow up. /Students can take their study more seriously than before. / If I have time, I will do more exercise to keep fit.【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如study hard；so that；grow up；spare time；keep fit等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。