初中英语中考复习 秘籍17 书面表达图画类-2021年中考英语抢分秘籍（解析版）

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秘笈17 书面表达图画类 考点  书面表达图画类图画作文是近年来高考书面表达考查的热点题型之一。它是指根据某幅图画所提供的图像信息写一篇短文或叙述一个故事；或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。体裁多样，可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文等。图画作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转成英语，旨在避免考生运用汉语思维布局谋篇。图画类作文的命题要求如下： 1. 图画作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。2. 写图画作文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句、段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。图画作文通常是给出一幅或多幅图片，要求考生仔细分析图片内容，并通过文字形式将图中所包含的思想内容准确地表达出来。试题具有以下特征：2.文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文；时态要视图画反映的内容而定，介绍人物 或叙述某件事的发展过程，通常用一般过去时，揭示或反映某件社会现象 图画作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力、丰富的想象力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上诸方面素质综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景，画面生动形象，具有趣味性。以图为 载体，附带少量文字提示或说明。要求考生从体察入手，通过对画面的理解，发挥想象力，按照一定的 要求把图画内容准确、生动地加工成书面语言。A【2020·宿州市埇桥区教育局九年级月考】足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要，然而调查显示，许多学生睡眠不足。请根据图示内容，简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因并提出建议。要求：1．要点齐全，并适当发挥：2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。It’s important for students to have enough sleeping time．However,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It's important for students to have enough sleeping time. However ,many of them don’ t have enough time to sleep．There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don’t go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep．In order to get enough sleep ,we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn’t stay up too late . What’s more ,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed ,which can help us have a sound sleep．In a word , if we make good use of time and form good habits , we’ll have enough sleeping time . Then we’ll be happier and healthier .【解析】试题分析：提示：足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要，简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因，叙述这些内容的时候句子的时态必须用一般现在时，主语是第三人称；最后并提出建议的内容应该用一般将来时，表示学生今后应该如何做的事情。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：it is+形容词+to do sth；spend too much time on sth；instead of；help sb do sth；make good use of；keep away from等；还用了一些连词如：before，which，if等，使句子结构不再单一。 B【2020·温州绣山中学九年级月考】如今，青少年的课余娱乐方式与他们的父母辈小时候的娱乐方式有很大的不同。请以After-school Entertainment 为题写一篇短文，简要描述漫画内容，分析图中的这种现象，并谈谈你的看法和建议，让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。注意： （1）文中不得出现真实人名、班级等相关信息；（2）词数：110 词左右。参考词汇：play hopscotch 跳房子After-school EntertainmentFrom the picture, we can see                                                                                                                                             ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After-school EntertainmentFrom the picture, we can see some children playing hopscotch in the past. It can not only make us strong but also breathe fresh air. But now we can only go online. This picture shows us children don’t have enough time to exercise now. Some of them are unhealthy and weak. They play computer games so much that their eyesight will be impaired. Nowadays, with the development of the technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We should choose some activities that is good for our health. We had better balance the time of exercising and playing computer.【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“After-school Entertainment”为题写一篇短文，要求描述漫画内容，分析现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。2、例文点评：例文采用一段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细的描述了漫画内容并谈了自己的看法；结构清晰；逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：in the past；not only ...but also ...；go online；enough time；the development of；had better do sth。句型：Nowadays, with the development of the technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We had better balance the time of exercising and playing computer. C【2020·保定市乐凯中学九年级其他模拟】网络的普及给人们的生活带来了很多便利，同时也带来了很多问题。请你根据对漫画的 理解用英语写一篇短文。提示：(1) What can you see in the pictures ?(2) What do you think of the two children?(3) How do you get on well with your parents?注意：(1)  短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2）短文中不要出现真实地名、校名和人名。 (3）词数 80 个左右。参考词汇：Moments（朋友圈），relationship, face to face, communicate withThe Internet is becoming more and more popular. It brings us a lot of fun and convenience, but it also causes some new problems. In the first picture, ____________________________________________________________                                ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Internet is becoming more and more popular. It brings us a lot of fun and convenience, but it also causes some new problems.In the first picture and the second picture ,we know children like Internet.They would rather communicate with others online than talk with their parents.On the one hand,in my opinion,the Internet makes people closer.On the other hand,if we spend too much time on the Internet,we will have less time with our families and friends in the real world.Parents are always with us.So why not talk to them face to face when we have problems?If so,I am sure that we can get on well with our parents.【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据对漫画的理解和所给提示写一篇短文，可适当发挥，必须包含所有提示内容。2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细具体的描述了网络带来的好处和弊端；结构清晰；逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：would rather do sth than do sth；communicate with；face to face；get on well with；make people closer。句型：if we spend too much time on the Internet,we will have less time with our families and friends in the real world；So why not talk to them face to face when we have problems。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如would rather do sth than do sth；communicate with；face to face；get on well with；make people closer以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 D【2020·瓦房店市第三十三中学九年级月考】针对下图所示的生活现象，本期英语园地组织同学们围绕“How to live a healthy life.”展开讨论。请你选择图示中的一种生活现象用英语写一篇短文与同学们分享你的观点。 内容提示：                     (1)你对其中一种生活现象的看法(2)结合这种现象谈谈你在生活中的做法要求:(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；(3)词数 80 词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sure, it is common for us to get up late, and time seems so short at night that we are always busy enjoying doing things we like. For me, staying up late once in a while is all right, as long as you usually get about eight hours’ sleep a night. However, I am not very happy about getting up early. Luckily, I love sport, and often do exercise in the morning, so it’ll be worth it. I think exercise is very important to keep fit. If you are always playing computer games and do no exercise at all, you will put on weight and harm your health.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画中所示的现象并围绕“怎样健康生活”写一篇文章。图画描述了一种早上不起，晚上不睡的日常现象，选择其中一种现象进行分析，浅谈看法以及做法。本文应以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时。2.例文点评：本文选择了“早上不起”这一现象进行叙述，介绍了自己的看法以及日常生活中的做法，紧扣题目要求；短文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要；文章语法规范，句式完整，叙述清晰有条理。3.高分亮点：短语：get up；be busy doing sth；once in a while；as long as；keep fit；put on weight。句型：it is common for us to get up late（it作形式主语）If you are always playing computer games and do no exercise at all, you will put on weight and harm your health.（if引导的条件状语从句）A 今年1月底2月初爆发的由新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎疫情牵动人心。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark得知此事后，对你很关心，他在微信上给你留言，想了解一下你和你的父母是如何科学预防该病毒的。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。要求：内容要紧扣图片；2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：face mask 口罩；treadmill 跑步机Hi, Mark. I'd like to tell you what my parents and I did to stop the virus spreading.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                            Thanks for your care about me and my family. Please don't worry about us. We'll take good care of ourselves. We believe everything will go well.【答案】Hi, Mark. I'd like to tell you what my parents and I did to stop the virus spreading. First of all, the doors and windows should be opened regularly for ventilation. Wear a face mask when we go out. Reduce access to densely populated areas. Don’t go to places with high outbreaks. Washing our hands is a good way to keep away from disease. When we use the mask, distinguish the front and back of the mask. Cover our mouth and chin. We should exercise often in order to build up our health, such as running on a treadmill. Also enough sleep is important to enhance resistance. Thanks for your care about me and my family. Please don't worry about us. We'll take good care of ourselves. We believe everything will go well.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。注意语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一人称。多用祈使句。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：First of all；Wear a face mask；the front and back of；such as；care about；worry about；take good care of等。句型：时间状语从句Wear a face mask when we go out. 祈使句Don’t go to places with high outbreaks.【点睛】首先认真审题，看清图片的内容要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如First of all；Wear a face mask； care about；worry about；take good care of等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 B假如你是李伟，下图是昨天下午你回家后发生在家里的事情，请根据图示信息，给你的父母写一封信，描述一下事件，谈谈自己的想法。 提示词：broom, pay attention to要求：1．参考所给提示，可以适当发挥；2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；4．词数：不少于80词；（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Dear Mum and Dad,Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school.___________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love,Li Wei【答案】Dear Mum and Dad,Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school. As I studied all day at school, I wanted to relax. As soon as I picked up a broom and started to clean the room, Dad came and said, "Go and read your books. You needn't clean the room!"I was unhappy. Then I turned on the TV. Just as I sat down, Mum shouted at me, “Don't watch TV anymore. You must study hard."I sat down to study, but I couldn't think clearly. I just want to relax. But why don't you let me do things by myself? I'm growing up now and I can make my own decisions. I know studying is important for me. But sometimes, I need to relax. Also, it's necessary for me to learn to do chores at home. Do you agree with me?Love,Li Wei【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，在写作时应注意要根据图画的内容，写一封信，描述一下事件，提出自己的想法。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时。格式正确，条理清晰，观点明确。3.高分亮点：短语：after school；all day；want to do；pick up；turn on；shout at；study hard；let sb do sth；grow up；make decisions；agree with。语法：情态动词+动词原形；as soon as引导的状语从句；祈使句的否定形式；it做形式主语。 C如今，手机到处可见，许多同学都拥有手机。但是，学生在学校使用手机是否合适？请你写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法，并根据下图提示，给出相应的理由。要求：1. 清晰表明自己的观点，要提及图示所有要点，并适当发挥，补充相关内容；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数80字左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。注意：不能透露个人的任何信息 (例如：具体的学校和姓名等)，否则不予评分。  Now cell phones can be seen everywhere. Many students own cell phones. Is it good for students to use cell phones at school? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now cell phones can be seen everywhere. Many students own cell phones. Is it good for students to use cell phones at school? Many students may think cell phones are quite helpful in school. They can call parents after school more easily. They can listen to some music to relax. What’s more, students can also use cell phone to buy books online easily.However, there are many disadvantages about using cell phones at school. If students take cell phones with them, they may take photos, watch videos in class instead of focusing on lesson. Some students may use cell phones to play games or search the answers for their homework online. These are not good for them.In my opinion, students should not use cell phones at school. As students, we should pay more attention to our studies instead of playing with cell phones. If we want to call our parents, we can ask teachers for help.【详解】1.题干解读：本篇文章是一篇看图作文，所以在写作之前一定要把图片中的内容梳理清楚，主要是针对“是否使用手机”表达看法，要根据图中所给提示的几个方面去阐述，不要遗漏要点；文章不仅仅是阐述正反两方面的观点，也要表达自己的观点。2.写作指导：本文是一篇说明文，主要针对“是否使用手机”表达看法，时态用一般现在时，在阐述正反两方面的观点时可用第三人称，在阐述自己的观点时可用第一人称。文章开头已经给出，第二段描述正方的观点，第三段描述反方的观点，最后一段表达自己的看法。文章的句式要灵活多变，不要单一使用一个句式。 D图中男子Mr. Smith在乘坐高铁时，因霸占一位女士的座位而被罚款。请根据图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，简要描述事件的经过，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1.短文已给出部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯、通顺。3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。4.参考词汇：occupy one’s seat霸占某人的座位；train attendant列车服务人员。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Once Mr. Smith was on a business trip. He occupied a woman’s seat on the high-speed train. When the woman asked him to give her seat back, he was unwilling to stand up. Then a train attendant came, but he still refused to give up the seat. So the train attendant had to fine Mr. Smith 200 yuan for his bad behaviour. Mr. Smith finally realized he was wrong and felt very regretful.In my opinion, this behavior is not right. We should never do that. As a member of society, it is our duty to obey the public rules. Besides, we should behave well in any public place.【详解】1.题干解读：细读所给的文字和图片提示，提取以下信息：（1）本文要求描述图片所展示的事件的经过并谈谈自己的看法，故本文是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。（2）描述图片所展示的事件经过时，应用一般过去时；发表自己的看法时，用一般现在时。（3）事件发生的主人公是Mr. Smith，所以描述图片所展示的事件经过时，应用第三人称；发表自己对此事件的看法时，应用第一人称。（4）词数90词左右，文章已给出的部分不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。2.例文点评：高铁霸座事件要点提示素材串联开头：引出事件史密斯先生一次出差时，在高铁上霸占了一位女士的座位（on a business trip；occupy one’s seat）。正文：描述事件的整个过程1.当女士要求归还座位时，史密斯先生不愿意站起来（ask sb. to do sth.；give back；be unwilling to do sth.；stand up）；2.列车服务人员来了之后，他仍然拒绝放弃座位（refuse to do sth.；give up）；3.列车服务人员不得不因为他的不良行为而处罚他200元（have to do sth.；fine sb. +金钱）；4.最后史密斯先生意识到自己错了，感到非常后悔（realize；regretful）结尾：发表观点1.这种行为是不对的（right）；2.作为社会中的一员，遵守公共秩序是我们的义务（a member of ...；it is one’s duty to do sth.；obey the public rules）；3.此外，我们在任何场合都应该举止得体（besides；behave well）。3.高分亮点：短语：on a business trip，occupy one’s seat，ask sb. to do sth.，give back，be unwilling to do sth.，stand up，refuse to do sth.，give up，a member of。句型：（1）When the woman asked him to give her seat back, he was unwilling to stand up.（when引导的时间状语从句）（2）As a member of society, it is our duty to obey the public rules.（固定句型it is one’s duty to do sth.）