初中英语中考复习 秘籍18 书面表达图表类-2020年中考英语抢分秘籍（解析版）

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秘笈18 书面表达图表类 考点  书面表达图表类图表作文是中考英语写作中较为常见的题型之一，也是难度较大的一种写作题型。这类作文可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲，形式多样，但实际上只涉及5个方面:描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议，而每次考试只是从这5个方面的内容中选出3个进行考查。从写作类型来看，基本上属于说明文。要求考生围绕题目将有关信息转化为文字形式，考生应该具有一定的数据分析和材料归纳能力，同时会运用一定的写作方法。中考图表类作文一般有以下两种考查方式。【命题形式】图表作文一般要求学生根据所给出的一幅图或几幅图所提供的信息写一篇短文。在命题形式上，除了图的提示外，一般有英文单词提示或中文文字提示。有的文章开头已给出。要求书写的词数一般在80至100之间。【写作技巧】1.审题要清 看清题目要求，读懂画面内容和所陈述的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么。如果是故事或日记，宜用过去时态;如果介绍物品之类的，多采用现在时态。2.连句成文 就是把第二步所写的句子，在规定的范围内稍加发挥，适当用上连词把它们串联起来整理成一篇短文。连句成文时应注意文中动词时态的应用，简单句和复合句的交替应用。图表作文所提供的材料是一幅或几幅图。做题时，可遂图列好提纲，并运用所提供的词语。根据图示情景并结合自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避繁化简。遇到一时想不起来的词、句时，可用同义词或同义句代替。按要求逐图写好句子后，认真通读写好的句子，一查所写句子是否准确表达出了所给图画的情景，行文是否流畅;二查有没有遗漏要求，句子的时态、语态是否正确，所写句子是否符合英语的基本语序，即:主语+谓语+宾语+状语(地点、时间等);三查单词的拼写、大小写是否规范，标点符号的运用是否正确，主谓语是否一致。确定无误后，再誊写正稿。 A（2019·成都外国语中学初三月考）紫石中学校报英文版正在为其栏目“你所熟悉的身边人”征稿。 请根据下表提供的信息，以“My friend”为题撰写一篇稿件，介绍你的好朋友Lucy。要求：1．内容全面，包含所有要点;2．语句通顺, 语法正确, 意思连贯完整;3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My friendI have a good friend．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My friendI have a good fiend．Her name is Lucy．She was born in Nan Tong and lives in Lin An．She is 13 years old．She studies in Zi Shan Middle School and her school is big and nice．She is in Class 15,Grade 7．She is tall and beautiful and wears no glasses．She is good at math, drawing and swimming．Lucy wants to be a teacher when she grows up．I hope her dream will come true one day．I think Lucy is a kind and clever girl．I like her very much．【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提示性作文。要求根据所给提示写一篇以“My friend”为题的作文。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 B（2019·合肥市第四十六中学初三月考）为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的l00名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do you want to be when you grow up?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“the dream jobs”为主题的报告．并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。(报告开头语已给出．不计人作文总词数。) The Dream JobsIn order to help us form good ideals (理想), we made a survey among 100 students in our school. Here are the results.                                                                                     ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The Dream Jobs In order to help us form good ideals, we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week. Here are the results.  Most of the students want to he businessmen, because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future. More students are dreaming of being doctors, because they are proud of saving the sick people . And being good teachers is some students’ dream. They think it’s a pleasure to make students learn more from them. Different students have different ideals. As for me, I want to be a policeman, and make our society much safer.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。 C（2019·福建省厦门一中初三月考）请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为A good habit， a successful life 的短文，发表在学校的网站上。要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥；3.  100词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 A good habit， a successful life    A habit is something that you do often almost without thinking， especially something that is hard to stop doing._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】A good habit， a successful lifeA habit is something that you do often almost without thinking， especially something that is hard to stop doing.We should develop good habits of learning. For example， we should put our attention in class， which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also， we are supposed to make the best of the time for study， which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally， we are encouraged to finish homework alone.At the same time， good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more， enough sleep every night is also important for our health， for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed， it will give us power to control ourselves and be away from bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly， we are sure to live a successful life.【解析】试题分析：根据本文内容应以一般现在时态叙事为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【写作亮点】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: For example，are supposed to ， along with， makes us feel energetic ， prepared for，be away from，insist on，are sure to 等；而词汇 At the same time， What is more等使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理；同时语言流畅、内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。 D（2019·扬州市江都区第二中学初三月考）今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查。请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packets要   求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；   2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Dear Editor，I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely，                                                                         Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor， I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However， about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result， they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result， they may feel a little lonely. Moreover， looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents. I think this game is really exciting， but we should spend more time communicating with our family members. Yours sincerely，                                                                        Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本文根据所给信息可知，会使用到一般现在时。然后灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【写作亮点】本文内容符合题意，叙事条理清晰，描述自然流畅，发挥恰当，切合要求。文中使用了不少固定词组如：took part in  be worried about，  spend...doing...， feel lonely， be harmful to 等； 还使用了丰富的句型，如so that引导的目的状语从句，宾语从句等；同时使用了恰当的连词，如however，as a result等使文意更加连贯；为短文增色不少。A假如你是阳光中学英语俱乐部的同学，请根据以下问卷，写一份英文倡议书，呼吁文明出游。注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。To be a good touristNowadays, traveling is becoming an important part of our life. However, some people have bad habits when visiting places of interest.                               _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】To be a good touristNowadays, traveling is becoming an important part of our life. However, some people have bad habits when visiting places of interest.Some people often make loud noise that makes others feel uncomfortable. Some people don’t realize the importance of protecting our environment. They throw rubbish everywhere. Some people like to take photos in wrong places, even in dangerous places. These are very rude and unwelcome in public.As a student, I think we should remember to do something to be a good tourist. First of all, we should throw rubbish in the dustbin instead of dropping it everywhere. Secondly, don’t make too much noise, especially in some quiet places. It is not polite. Finally, we understand that many people like taking photos while traveling. It is fun. But we should take photos in proper places and always remember safety comes first.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【写作亮点】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。 B今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查。请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。70%学生参加抢红包游戏活动
 75%学生表示赞成
 1. 一种流行的娱乐形式，带来更多乐趣
2. 拉近人们的距离，结识更多的朋友
3. …...
 25%学生表示担忧
 1. 花费太多的时间，和家人交流少
2. 盯屏幕太久，对眼睛有害
3. … ...
 你的观点…...
 …...
  要   求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packetsDear Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.        .                                                                                          .                                                                                           .                                                                                           .                                                                                           .                                                                                           .                                                                                           .Yours sincerely,                                                                           Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result, they may feel a little lonely. Moreover, looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents.I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇书信作文。所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，贴近学生生活，学生有话可写。因此要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点： 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，书信格式正确。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语和过度词，这为文章增添了文采和层次感。 C书面表达随着互联网的发展，智能手机( smartphone )已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文。好处
 聊天、网购……
 现象
 

 
 
 弊端
 影响家人、朋友的关系；容易引发交通事故；对身心有害，不利于学习和工作
 观点
 正确使用手机……(你的两个观点)
 
 
  要求：1.词数在90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。2.条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet，smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet， smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact，face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.  But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refusetobephubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了whiledoing，insteadof，ratherthan等等结构，给短文增色不少。