初中英语中考复习 热点 18 梦想 -2021年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文

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梦想无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：么梦想。

【预测题目】

（一）

国家领导人在2019新年贺词中说，“我们都在努力奔跑，我们都是追梦人”。梦想是我们成长的力量。以下是李华和王军的梦想，请根据要点提示，以“We are all dream chasers”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的梦想和奋斗计划。

姓名

年龄

身份

梦想

奋斗计划

Li Hua

21

大学生

开办自己的公司

在校努力学习；学习与他人合作

Wang Jun

40

出租车司机

最美滨州人

学习英语；学习更好地与他人相处；

我

……

……

……

注意：词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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【答案】

We are all dream chasers

“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers”, Prisident Xi said in his New Year’s Speech. (给出部分) Li Hua is a 21-year-old university student. He dreams of running his own company. He plans to study hard and he thinks it’s very important to learn how to work with other people.

Wang Jun is a taxi driver. He is 40. He wants to be “the best Binzhouee”. He will learn English and more culture about Binzhou. In this way, he can help the foreigners and other tourists better. He also plans to learn how to get on better with others.

As for me, I want to be an engineer in the future. I will achieve my dream by working hard.I think learning how to learn is very important. I will never stop learning.

Everyone’s dream makes up to Chinese dream. Let’s hold on to it and achieve it earlier.(给出部分)

（二）

每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的？你的中国梦是什么呢？为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢？假设你叫李红（Li Hong）,请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。

要求：

1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。

2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。

4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of

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【答案】

My Dream

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up , I must get it over .

I’m sure it’s very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day

（一）

每一个人都有自己的梦想，“中国梦”是目前的最热话题，作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的？你的中国梦又是什么呢？假如你叫“李红”，请以“My Dream”为题写一篇短文。

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【答案】

MY DREAM

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.

I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

（二）

为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的l00名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do you want to be when you grow up？”和“Why？”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“the dream jobs”为主题的报告。并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。（报告开头语已给出，不计人作文总词数。）

　　                                     The Dream Jobs

　　In order to help us form good ideals （理想）， we made a survey among 100 students in our school。 Here are the results。
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【答案】

　　                                  The Dream Jobs
　　In order to know about the students‘ ideals， we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week。 Here are the results。
　　Most of the students want to be businessmen， because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future。 More students are dreaming of being doctors， because they are proud of saving the sick people 。 And being good teachers is some students’ dream。 They think it’s a pleasure to make students learn more from them。
　　Different students have different ideals。 As for me， I want to be a policeman， and make our society much safer。

（三）

最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

　　组员             理想职业                         原因

　　Mary    时装设计师(fashion designer)        喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画

　　Kate     园艺工(gardener)                  喜爱植物，想让城市更美

　　Mike    作家                             愿意与别人分享精彩故事

　　Tom     厨师                             为别人煮健康美味的食物

　　你 ？ ？

注意：

1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

　　Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

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Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

【答案】

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

　　Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener， she likes plants， and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.

　　Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

（四）

中国梦是目前较热的话题，你们班级对梦想这个话题也进行了一次讨论。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：

1、人人都有梦想，梦想可大可小。其实，大梦想就是由许多小的梦想构成的。

2、作为中学生，我们有各种各样的梦想。这些梦想就是我们的中国梦。

3、我们应该努力实现梦想，遇到困难时也不放弃梦想。

4、我的梦想是……

注意：1）文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2）第4要点需用2到3句话做适当发挥。

3）词数80左右。(给出的内容不计入总词数)

My dream

Everyone has his dreams. ___________________________________________________________________

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【参考范文】

My dream

Everyone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams. （I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. ）

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: in fact实际上；be made up of由……组成；all kinds of各种；try one’s best do sth尽力做某事；give up放弃等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

1. I think it’s meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save people's lives.
2. After that I will work in the places where they need me most.
3. In fact, I just want to try my best to help them.
4. From now on, I will work hard to make my dream come true.
5. I know it is easier to said than done.
6. I am sure my dream will come true one day.
7. it is a dream I have had for years, every time when a car goes by.
8. I cannot help but think about its mechanism.
9. I like games as much as I like science, but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal, that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.
10. I will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work.

（一）

某杂志正在征集文章, 主题为《中国梦, 我的梦》。每个平凡中国人的梦想汇聚成中国梦, 中国梦的实现在于我们努力实现各自的梦想。你的梦想是什么?你打算怎样实现?你的梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献, 能使祖国发生怎样的变化?

请你以《中国梦, 我的梦》为题, 写写自己的梦想、计划以及将来祖国的变化（如环境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。

要求：1. 词数80词左右, 至少使用两处比较级；

2. 不得出现真实的姓名或校名。

China's Dream, My Dream

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【参考范文】

China's Dream, My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目要求包含梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化?等，注意要有比较级的运用，对于比较级的相关用法要熟悉。

2.例文点评：例文通过对梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点：词组：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；

句型：I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go out every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better.

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

（二）

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你给他 回复电子邮件，主要内容包括：

1. 你的梦想是什么；

2. 你为这个梦想做过什么；

3. 为实现梦想你还需要怎样努力。

要求：

1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 词数不少于 80 词。

Dear Tim,

How’s it going?                                                                                                    

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Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tim,

How’s it going?  As we all know, it’s important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save people’s life.

I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to  see what doctors were doing on weekends. Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical  university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你以李华身份给他回复电子邮件，首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：save people’s life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends.；try one’s best to do sth.。

句型：In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ；Look forward to hearing from you.

（三）

现在许多人在讨论“中国梦”（the Chinese dream），我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真，这需要我们每个中国人的努力，因为我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。

请以My Dream为题，谈谈你的梦想。

提示：1、你的梦想是什么？

2、你为什么有这样的梦想？

3、你打算怎样实现你的梦想？

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【参考范文】

My dream

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.

I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称。

写作亮点：这篇文章主要是以梦想为主题。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等较高级的短语和词汇，而且还使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型为文章增色不少。

（四）

梦想有多大，舞台就有多大。人人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。

1.要点：

1）你的梦想是什么；

2）你为什么有这样的梦想；

3）你打算如何实现自己的梦想。

2.要求：

1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2）词数100左右。

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【参考范文】

My dream

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers.

I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：文章是一篇命题作文。贴近学生生活，有较大的发挥空间，可以根据自己的不同的梦想做具体阐述，写作时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，写作时要包含题目中列出的几个要点，也可以做适当的发挥。

2. 例文点评：这篇短文主要分三段描述。第一段指出自己的梦想是什么，第二段说明为什么会有这样的梦想，第三段为自己的梦想要付出的一些努力。整个文章内容完整，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：want to do；hope to do；not only … but also；疑问词+to do；thanks to；grow up；spend … on；make a decision to。

句型：when引导的时间状语从句；I am sure+宾语从句；how引导的宾语从句。