初中英语中考复习 万能模板03 议论文-备战2020年中考英语书面表达万能模板（解析版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 万能模板03 议论文-备战2020年中考英语书面表达万能模板（解析版），共29页。试卷主要包含了 体裁解读， 写作攻略， 表示对比， 表示递进， 表示顺序， 表示转折， 其他， Unlike A, B等内容，欢迎下载使用。

1. 体裁解读
议论文是针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文三要素是论点、论据、论证。
议论点表明作者对某一方面的问题所持的主张、观点和态度。
论据是用来证明论点的根据。它包括事实论据和理论论据。事实论据即通常所说的“摆事实”，如客观存在的现实、发生的事件、确切的数字及案例等；而理论论据即通常所讲的“讲道理”，如原理、规则、法则、名人名言、经典著作等。
论证如同一条线，把需要的论据围绕着论点组织起来，贯穿在一起。
2. 写作攻略
初中生在写议论文时要首先考虑自己的观点是什么，明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证，最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式：开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下：
第一步：确定主题，引出论点；
第二步：通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起；
第三步：得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。

模板① 观点态度型（一）
引出一种观点
Many students think that _____________, because _____________
阐述自己的观点，并论证自己的观点
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think, _____________, so _____________（我的看法）. First of all, _____________（原因一）. Secondly, _____________（原因二）. Thirdly/Most important of all, _____________（原因三）.
总结自己的观点
All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that _____________（总结观点）. And I hope _____________（提出愿望）.
【模板范文】
Many students think that they do not need to learn Engish, because they don't plan to go abroad.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that English is very important to us, so we should learn English well. First of all, in the opening times, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must use English because most of them speak and write in English. Secondly, in the world today most books are written in English. If you know much English, you can read newspapers and magazines in English. Most important of all, you can learn something more widely.
All in all, I hold the opinion that we should learn English well. And I hope that all the students can use English freely.
模板② 观点态度型（二）
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.
模板③ 说明利弊型
介绍一种社会现象并引出论点
Nowadays, _____________ like to _____________（社会现象）. About this different people have different opinions.
总结自己的观点
阐述缺点并论证
阐述优点并论证
On the one hand, some people think _____________（优点一）. Moreover _____________（优点二）. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, _____________（缺点一）. Besides, _____________（缺点二）.
I think _____________（我的观点）.
【模板范文】
Nowadays, many students like to make friends online. About this different people have different opinions.
On the one hand, some people think it's interesting to talk with friends online. So you will never feel lonely when you are alone. If you are lucky enough to make a friend from English speaking country, you can improve your English greatly. Moreover, it's pretty cool to have several foreign friends. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, only a few people have made really good friends online. Many people are cheated by the ＂friends＂. Besides, it is terrible for students to spend much time making friends and talking online.
Some people say making friends online is making trouble. I think there is something in what they say.
模板④ 解决方法型
阐述一种现象并具体说现状
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________（问题）. For example, some _____________（例一）; some _____________（例二）; some _____________（例三）and still some _____________（例四）.
“我”的观点以及对未来的憧憬
提出解决方案
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________（解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better _____________（解决方法二). Because, we should _____________（解决方法三）.
In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________.
【模板范文】
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is many students have bad eating habits. For example, some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks; some always like to eat the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods, such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. For another thing, we'd better have meals at the right time. Besides, we should not eat too much especially before we go to bed.
In my opinion, if we have god eating habits, we will have good health. And we can study beer.

1. 表示反对
oppose v. 反对 be against... 反对……
be opposed to反对，不赞成 object to... 反对，对……反感
disagree with不同意；不一致 on the contrary反之，正相反
2. 表示赞同
support v. 支持 stand by支持
in favour of 有利于；赞成，支持 agree v. 同意
3. 表示对比
on one hand/side 一方面
on the other hand/side 另一方面
4. 表示递进
further more 进一步 in addition此外
besides 除此之外
5. 表示顺序
last/finally adv. 最后 first of all 首先
what's more而且 the last point 最后一点
last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
6. 表示转折
yet adv. 然而 however adv. 可是，然而
in all 总的说来 in a word 简而言之
in short 总之
8. 其他
nowadays adv. 现在 discussion n. 讨论
argument n. 争论 as follows 如下
mental health 心理健康 establish v. 创建
limited adj. 有限的 reduce stress减压
in the opening times在开放时代
take a series of effective measures 采取一系列有效措施

【夺人眼球篇首句】
1. Nowadays, there is a wide-spread concern over…
现今，……引起了人们的广泛关注。
2. Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to…
如今，人们把更多的注意力放在……上。
3. It is universally acknowledged that... 众所周知的是……
4. It's commonly/generally believed that... 人们普遍认为……
5. Recently, sb. has/there is a discussion about…
近来，（某人）就……展开了一次讨论。
6. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
大体上，有以下几方面优点。
7. Recently, the students of my class had a discussion about whether Grade Two students should go to school in the evening. 近来，我们班针对二年级的学生是否应该夜间上课展开了讨论。
【亮点出彩篇中句】
1. People have different opinions on this problem.
在这个问题上人们有不同的观点。
2. It has to be noticed that... 需要注意的是……
3. As to me, I am not in favour of this point of view.
对我来说，我不赞成这种观点。
4. I hold an opinion that... 我认为……
5. Ithink it harmful to... 我认为……是有害的。
6. There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问的是……
7. There is no denying that... 不可否认的是……
8. Compared to/In comparison with..., ... are more... 与……相比，……更……
9. Unlike A, B... 不像A一样，B………
10. It's good/beneficial for sb.to do...
对某人来讲做……是有好处的/有益处的。
11. What's more, everything has its own two sides.
而且，任何事情都有两个方面。
12. What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是……
13. Further, we hold the opinion that... 还有，我们的意见是……
14. I can't agree with their opinions for the reasons below.
我不同意他们的观点，原因如下。
15. My argument/advice for this problem goes as follows.
针对这一问题，我的观点/建议如下。
16. I can't entirely agree with the idea that... I believe...
我不能完全同意……的观点。我认为……
17. They can ask their teachers and parents for advice on how to solve problems.
他们可以向他们的老师和家长寻求解决这些问题的建议
18. However, unlike the former students, some others think they should have their own time to study.
然而，与前面这些学生观点不同的其他一些学生认为，他们应该拥有自己的学习时间。
19. There is no doubt that it is harmful if a person works without rest.
毫无疑问一个人只工作不休息的话是有害的。
20. Just as the saying goes, ＂A smile can make you ten years younger.＂
正如俗语所讲：＂笑一笑，十年少。＂
【韵味无穷结尾句】
1. From above, we can predict that…
从以上情况，我们可以预测……
2. I will conclude by saying... 总结一下就是说……
3. Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我们有理由相信……
4. As a student, we should face all the possible difficulties in our life positively.
作为学生，我们应该乐观地面对生活中所有可能存在的困难。
5. I agree with the later. I think we should develop our own self-study habit.
我同意后者。我认为我们应该培养自主学习的习惯。
6. From my point of view, our life would be better if we learned how to reduce stress.
我认为，如果我们学会了如何减压，我们的生活会更好。

（一）【2019 •广西河池市】
“人生没有彩排，生命没有重来”，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!” 为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛。请跟进以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作提示：

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚：
4. 词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Keep away from the danger为题，写一篇演讲稿。审题可知，题目中利用思维导图的形式，列举了这篇文章中应该包括的几个要点。观察这个思维导图可知，短文应该从游泳、交通、交友、饮食、学校安全以及毒品等六个方面进行叙述，每个方面都给出了一些提示词，学生们可以利用这些提示词来组织语言，用完整的句子表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先题目中给出的所有提示词以及要点都应包括在内，不要有所遗漏。可以根据表达需要进行拓展，使文章内容更加充实。但应注意拓展内容应与文章主题紧密相连，不要写没有用的东西。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句式的正确结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语和句型。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句之间应使用一些衔接成分，注意叙述的层次性，条理清楚，行为连贯。
【参考范文】
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besides, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给我们介绍了生活中应如何远离危险，保证我们的安全。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，提示词都使用上了。文章中从六个方面进行了具体的介绍，每个方面前都有表示顺序的词First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的结构非常清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、祈使句等结构，句式多变，表达准确、清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。
（二）【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ______________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词
【参考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
（三）【2019 •湖南省湘潭市】
哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途．请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法．
参考词汇：
Chores
take out the rubbish sweep the floor
wash the clothes do the dishes
water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch …
…
Opinions
Pros：develop our independence take care of ourselves
…
Cons：a waste of time no need to …
…
注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I ____________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes
for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平时所作家务）
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家务的看法）【高分句型二】
（四）【2019 •辽宁省本溪市】
每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶．请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下"景美人更美"的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！
提示词：beautiful views美丽的景色
要求：
1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范．
2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名．
3． 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．

How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．__________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views ，but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（开篇点明题意）
First， We must be friendly．Use"please，OK，welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides， we should be ready to help others（高分句型一）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need us，we should help them．What's more， we should follow the rules． For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn't drop litter carelessly．At last ，we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（从四个方面展开对成为文明市民的论述）
Why not do as above points？Let's try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（结尾倡议大家成为文明市民）
（五）【2019 •浙江省绍兴市】
学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英语课上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。

Opinions
Reasons
most students
Yes
◆have free time
◆feel relaxed
some students
No
◆waste time
◆get bad grades
I
…
…
注意：①短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
②词数：80-100；
③短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：无作业日 Homework-free Day
短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】
这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日"学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主要以第三人称和一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【参考范文】
I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games.
Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual.
In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.
【名师点评】
文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，无作业日；prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果状语从句）；I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语从句）。 还运用了or， however 等使上下文衔接的更好。
（六）【2019 •鄂州市】
现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
优点
1. 及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难；
2. 在家就能学习，简单，方便；
3. 可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。
缺点
1. 有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏；
2. 有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的学习，只是虚度光阴。
你的建议
联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。
要求：
1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。
参考词汇：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do...假装做…… think independently独立思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think ___________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.
I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。
（七）【2019 •四川省南充市】
近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights, electric bikes（电动车）…
Swimming
rivers, swimming pool…
Internet
ID number, code(密码）, unhealthy websites…
……
……
要求：
1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【写作思路】
近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【名师点评】
文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.；Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.这些给文章增色不少。
（八）【2019 •江西省】
文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。
写作要点：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】
这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
范文1
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
范文2
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
（九）【2019 •北京市】
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email _________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。
（十）【2019 •贵州省安顺市】
请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【参考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?

Writing 1
好的环境能使我们高兴和舒适，改善了环境就意味着改善我们的生活。平时我们应该多种花草和树，别乱扔垃圾，看见垃圾应该把它扔进垃圾箱；别随地吐痰，购物时最好用布袋代替塑料袋，应该记住3Rs，尽自己所能去保护环境，成为一个环保者。
根据以上信息，以＂How to Protect the Environment ＂为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
How to Protect the Environment?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】
这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，按照提示内容逐条进行回答，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
【范文赏析】
How to Protect the Environment?
Good environment can make people feel happy and comfortable. If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. So the environment is important for all of us. I think we should do something we can to make our environment better. For example, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. We should also plant more trees to make our planet green. What’s more, we mustn’t spit everywhere. While shopping, we’d better use cloth bags instead of plastic ones. We should remember 3Rs: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle and try our best to protect the environment to become a environmentalist. In this way, we can have a better and greener earth to live in.
【写作亮点】
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be important for all of us，make our environment better，for example，here and there，pick it up，instead of，try our best，in this way等。而If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. / I think we should do something we can to make our environment better./ If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin.等多种从句的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。
Writing 2
目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训机构或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同的观点。
有些人认为有必要，因为：1. 可以巩固课堂所学内容；
2. 可以学到更多东西。
另一些人认为没有必要，因为：1. 容易养成依赖习惯；
2. 学生需要更多的时间休息；
3. 许多培训班和家教以盈利为目的。
你的观点：……
请根据以上提示，以＂Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?＂为题写一篇短文。
参考词汇：巩固 strengthen（v.） 依赖 dependence（n.）
要求：1. 词数：80~100；
　　　2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
　　　3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，适当发挥。
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students go to many kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】
这是一篇关于目前学生上各种各样的补习班的一些看法的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系。
【范文赏析】
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some people think that it is necessary. First, they can learn better with the help of the teachers than by themselves. Second, they can strengthen what they learn in class. Third, they can get more useful things in those classes.
However, other people insist that it is not necessary. For one thing, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same knowledge in training classes. For another thing, most senior students haven’t enough time to rest. What’s worse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money.
In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary. We can study well at school if we work hard.
Writing 3
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于80词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校英文网站正在针对上网是否是一件好事展开辩论，请你以＂The Internet is （not）a good thing＂为题，写一篇短文给英文网站投稿，说一说你认为上网是好事还是坏事，然后说出2-3条理由，理由包括：
1. 人们通常用网做什么？
2. 为什么你认为上网是好/坏事？
提示词语：download, listen to, send email, chat, relax; hack(攻击) website, steal money, hide from police
The Internet is _________
Some people say the Internet is ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
For these reasons, I think _____________________________________________________________
【思路分析】
该题要求以＂The Internet is（not） a good thing＂为题，写一篇短文给英文网站投稿。写作时首先要表明自己的观点，即你认为上网是好事还是坏事，并要说明自己的理由。理由包括：人们通常用网做什么？为什么你认为上网是好/坏事？时态应用一般现在时，人称为第一人称。所有的句子均用陈述句，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【范文赏析】
Some people say the Internet is a good thing. However, I think it is a bad thing.
First of all, I think there are many bad people using the Internet. They send junk emails, hack websites and steal people’s money. In addition, it is easy for them to hide from the police.
Second, in my opinion children play too much using the Internet. Children can download games, listen to music and chat easily on the Internet. In addition, they do this for many hours. However, these kids do not want to do any homework! Therefore, the Internet is hurting their education.
For these reasons, I think the Internet is not a good thing.
Writing 4
学校最近以＂学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？＂为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对。请根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以＂Think before you search online＂为题用英语写一篇作文。

赞成者
反对者
你自己
观点
1.做题
2.别人
3.时间
1.于提升能力
2.于思维发展
（至少2点）
注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】
本文是一篇话题作文，题目是Think before you search online。主要根据调查情况写一篇调查报告，并写出自己观点。考生首先要认真阅读提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，提示词需用上。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【范文赏析】
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
Some students agree with it. They sometimes don’t know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it’s easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answers won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.
I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.
【写作亮点】
这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。文中使用so，at the same time, however等连词，使文章表达更有条理性。写作内容包括表格中所有提示词和提示内容。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。