初中英语中考复习 专题01 观点看法类-备战2021中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈

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一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first f all, at first, in the first place, firstly, t begin with, t start with, recently, nw, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有secnd, in additin, besides, then, mrever, what’s mre, what’s wrse, fr example, certainly, bviusly, in ther wrds, still, at the same time, n dubt等。
3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, hwever, n the ther hand, n the cntrary, therwise, while, despite, in spite f等。
4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a wrd, in shrt, abve all, after all, finally, therefre, as a result, n the whle, in summary等。
总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——fr example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语（词块）
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
一、开头句型。
As far as cncerned
It ges withut saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the prverb says
It has t be nticed that...
It`s generally recgnized that...
It`s likely that
It’s hardly t much t say that...
What calls fr special attentin is that...需要特别注意的是
There’s n denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认
Nthing is mre imprtant than the fact that...
What’s far mre imprtant is that...
二、衔接句型。
A case in pint is ... As is ften the case...
As stated in the previus paragraph如前段所述
But the prblem is nt s simple. Therefre然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
Fr all spite f the fact that... Further, we hld pinin that...
Hwever, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we shuld pay attentin t... nt (that) (that)...不是，而是
In view f the present statin.鉴于目前形势
As has been mentined abve... 综上所述
In this respect, we may as well (say)从这个角度上我们可以说
Hwever, we have t lk at the ther side f the cin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……
三、结尾句型。
I will cnclude by saying... Therefre, we have the reasn t believe that... All things cnsidered总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefre, in my pinin, it’s mre advisable...
It can be cncluded frm the discussin that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if...在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型。
Let’s illustrate this.试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the abve chart as an example t illustrate this.
It remains t be further studied... There’s questin is hw...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The tpic f 主题 is becming mre and mre ppular recently. There are tw sides f pinins abut it. Sme peple say A is their favurite. They hld their view fr the reasn f 理由一 . What’s mre, 理由二 . Mrever, 理由三 . While thers think that B is a better chice in the fllwing three reasns. First, 理由一 . Secnd(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
Frm my pint f view, I think我的观点 . The reasn is that 原因 . As a matter f fact, there are sme ther reasns t explain my chice. Fr me, the frmer (later) is surely a wise chice.
典例一 (2020 • 北京)
“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。
提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make prgress
提示问题：
●What did yu d t accumulate knwledge?
●What have yu learned frm ding s?
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
语句构建

第一步：明确要求，理清思路。本篇书面表达是一篇提纲作文，要求考生以自律为主题，用英语写一篇短文。首先，需要确定题目；然后，然后根据提纲列出自己的观点。本文时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作时，可使用一些复合句来增加文章的亮点。
第二步：拟定提纲，确定句型。
点题：Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything.
在积累知识方面你自己是怎么做的及收获：As fr me, I have taken lts f measures t accumulate knwledge. First f all,…. In the secnd place,… Last but nt least,…In a wrd, I have learned a lt during the prcess f accumulating knwledge.
点睛： S I have learned that nly by gaining knwledge step by step can we achieve ur gal and realize ur dream. In the future, I will cntinue t keep accumulating knwledge and make greater prgress.
第三步：依据提纲，连句成篇。
第四步：写好后，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As fr me, I have taken lts f measures t accumulate knwledge. First f all, I attentively listened t the teachers, parents, and the thers wh culd prvide me with much knwledge, cnsidering that it was ne f the mst effective ways t enrich myself. In the secnd place, I used t bserve smething carefully and tk ntes at the same time s that I wuld nt miss anything imprtant. Last but nt least, when having spare time, I chse t read varius bks and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a wrd, I have learned a lt during the prcess f accumulating knwledge. Just as an ld saying ges, Rme was nt built in ne day. That is t say, ne cannt succeed withut persistent accumulatin. S I have learned that nly by gaining knwledge step by step can we achieve ur gal and realize ur dream. In the future, I will cntinue t keep accumulating knwledge and make greater prgress.
名师点评

这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。文章中还使用了一些亮点语法和词汇：亮点句型—— S I have learned that nly by gaining knwledge step by step can we achieve ur gal and realize ur dream.；亮点词汇——as fr；take lts f measures t d sth.；first f all；prvide sb. with sth.；used t d sth.；at the same time；last but nt least；in a wrd；step by step；make prgress。这些亮点语法和词汇提高了文章的档次，体现了作者的写作水平。
典例二（2020 • 贵州铜仁）
全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。
提示：
（所见所闻）我们政府采取了很多措施，执行（carry ut）隔离（quarantine）治疗（ treatment）的政策（plicy）；兴建（build）许多特殊的（special）医院；许多优秀的（excellent）医护人员自愿（vlunteer）去帮助灾区（disaster areas）.
（所思所想）作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如……（至少两点）；希望全世界人民……。（ wrk tgether； save mre lives）
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；
3. 必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
4. 务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad t receive yur e—mail. Nw I’d like t share my pinins with yu. Since COVID—19 brke ut, ur gvernment has taken many measures.
First_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Michael,
I’m glad t receive yur e-mail. Nw I’d like t share my pinins with yu. Since COVID-19 brke ut, ur gvernment has taken many measures. First, we have carried ut quarantine treatment plicy. Secnd, many special hspitals have been built. Third, many excellent dctrs and nurses vlunteered t help the peple wh lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must prtect urselves. Fr example, keep ur hme clean and ften pen the windw t keep the fresh air. Try t avid ging utside r ging t places where there are many peple. Wash yur hands as ften as pssible, especially befre meals and after returning frm public places. What’s mre, we shuld wear a mask when ging ut. I
I hpe the peple all ver the wrld will wrk tgether t save mre lives.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ming
解题思路
第一步：判断主题和体裁——就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想的一封信。
第二步：定时态——一般现在时；定人称——回复笔友的信应用第一人称。
第三步：列提纲：
所见所闻：面对疫情政府采取的得力措施；优秀的医护人员自愿驰援灾区；
= 2 \* GB2 \* MERGEFORMAT ⑵ 所思所想：作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如……（至少两点）；希望全世界人民……。:
第四步：组句成篇。
名师点评
本文首先直入主题I’d like t share my pinins with yu，然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施，最后表达希望I hpe the peple all ver the wrld will wrk tgether t save mre lives。本文是“总分总”结构，以第一人称为主，用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述；内容充实，结构完整，方法合理，表达流畅，条理清晰，是一篇优秀的习作。此外还有如下高分亮点：
高分短语：wuld like t d share sth. with sb., as students, stay at hme, g ut, carry ut, vlunteer t d, live in, fr example, try t d , avid ding, as ften as pssible, what’s mre, all ver the wrld.
高分句型：
1). Third, many excellent dctrs and nurses vlunteered t help the peple wh lived in the disaster areas.（定语从句）
2). Fr example, keep ur hme clean and ften pen the windw t keep the fresh air.（并列祈使句结构）
3). I hpe the peple all ver the wrld will wrk tgether t save mre lives.（宾语从句）

A (2020山东泰安模拟)
随着科技的发展,线上学习的方式也变得越来越普遍。本学期，由于新冠疫情，同学们不得不在家中进行了近三个月的线上学习。
某英文网站正在开展以“ Online Learning”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用 英文写一篇短文,谈谈你在线上学习过程中的一些做法以及你对线上学习的一些看法。
要求:1. 内容应包括提示信息,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；
3. 词数80-100词，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Online Learning
With the develpment f science and technlgy, nline learning has becme mre and mre cmmn._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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B (2020广东顺德模拟)
人生处处是考场，人生事事皆考试。由于新冠疫情，2020年高考将延期举行，近日各地教育部门出台文件规定中考时间也相继延迟一个月。假如你叫李华，即将参加今年中考,请向校园网站的外语专栏投稿发表你的看法。
内容包括：
1. 你是否赞成推迟中考，理由是什么？
2. 非常时期，如何有效开展中考备考？
3. 寄语中考学子，一起加油、共勉。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在 答题卡上。
Dear friends,
I am writing this article t share my pinin abut whether the senir high schl entrance examinatin shuld be put ff r nt.
This is my idea and mst grateful t yu fr yur advice!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua

A
Online Learning
With the develpment f science and technlgy, nline learning has becme mre and mre cmmn. Because f crna-virus, the students in ur schl had t study nline at hme fr nearly three mnths this term. During nline learning, I made a plan fr all the subjects. In class I listened t the teachers carefully and tk sme ntes. In additin, after class I ften watched the vide again t g ver the part which I culdn’t understand. In rder t get gd grades, I als did lts f exercises.
I think nline learning has tw sides. On the ne hand, it prvides mre cnvenience fr us. On the ther hand, we spend much time studying n the cmputers every day. It will be harmful t ur health.
B
Dear friends,
I am writing this article t share my pinin abut whether the senir high schl entrance examinatin shuld be put ff r nt. I agree t put it ff because the epidemic is still very serius nw, it will be safer fr us t have the examinatin a mnth later. Besides, we can prepare fr it better because nt all can have nline classes successfully every day.
During this special perid, hw shuld we prepare fr the examinatin? Firstly, we shuld make a gd plan and listen t the teacher carefully. Meanwhile, we shuld be relaxed and keep ding exercise s that we can be healthy t face the cming challenge.
In ur life the examinatin is everywhere, s let’s cherish every day and make a great effrt t achieve ur dream.
This is my idea and mst grateful t yu fr yur advice!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【环游世界】
Rme
St. Peter’s Cathedral is lcated in the wrld’s smallest cuntry —Vatican, which is the residence f Ppe and is lcated in Rme in Italy. It is the center f the Christian church f Rme, Eurpean Cathlics and the Vatican（梵蒂冈）papal Pilgrimage（朝拜）t the Hly See, and it is the wrld’s largest dme church.
Trevi Funtain is a symbl f strength. Rmans had a beautiful legend, as lng as the funtain frm the shulder with his back t thrw a cin ver t the pl, there is an pprtunity t visit Rme.
圣彼得大教堂位于世界上最小的国家梵蒂冈内。梵蒂冈是罗马天主教皇的住所，梵蒂冈全部位于意大利的罗马市市内。它比该城其他建筑的屋顶都要高。它是罗马基督教的中心教堂，欧洲天主教徒和梵蒂冈(梵蒂冈)教皇朝圣(朝拜)的地方，是世界上最大的圆顶教堂。
许愿池是力量的象征。罗马人有一个美丽的传说，只要背对喷泉从肩以上抛一枚硬