初中英语中考复习 专题04 咨询建议类-备战2020中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈 doc
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这是一份初中英语中考复习 专题04 咨询建议类-备战2020中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈 doc,共8页。试卷主要包含了 首先要知道给出建议的格式, 然后写出提建议的原因, 写出希望等内容,欢迎下载使用。
四步法写出给建议的短文
1. 首先要知道给出建议的格式:常用书信格式。
2. 然后写出提建议的原因。
3. 最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议。
4. 写出希望。
英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现,英语书信类作文的常用表达:
开头部分:
Hw nice t hear frm yu again.
Let me tell yu smething abut the activity.
I’m glad t have received yur letter f April 9th.
I’m pleased t hear that yu’re cming t China fr a visit.
I’m writing t thank yu fr yur help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
I’d appreciate it if yu culd reply earlier.
We shuld take measures t cntrl pllutin in rder t save the wrld.
We’d better take effective measures t prevent students frm cheating n exams.
The gvernment decided t take strng measures against drug abuse.
Urgent measures shuld be taken t prevent terrrists frm carrying ut further attacks.
Why dn’t yu...
Yu can have a t d...
Dn’t be afraid f...
I believe yu can d it. Gd luck.
In ne /a wrd/Generally speaking
解决方法类作文模板
In recent days, we have t face a prblem____________A, which is becming mre and mre serius. First, ____________(说明A的现状). Secnd, ____________(举例进一步说明现状).
Cnfrnted with A, we shuld take a series f effective measures t cpe with the situatin. Fr ne thing, ____________(解决方法一). Fr anther ____________(解决方法二). Finally, ____________(解决方法三).
Persnally, I believe that____________(我的解决方法).
Cnsequently, I’m cnfident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________(带来的好处).
典例一 (2019 •南京中考 假如你是李华,在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集网友建议.请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件.
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is nw designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is t help learners explre ideas, rganize them and write them dwn. Yur ideas are needed!
Here’ s what t d:
Write t share yur ideas! Feel free t be creative!
Please let us knw:
● What’s the name f the app?
● What prblem des the app slve?
● What des the app d?
Cntact us at appdesign @Britech cm
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥.
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数).
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等.
Dear Sir r Madam,
Thanks fr designing an app fr English writing.
___________________________________
Yurs
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir r Madam,
Thanks fr ding an APP fr English writing. I’d like t share my ideas here. Culd its name be "right made easy"?
Many f us have difficulty in writing. We dn’t knw hw t rganize ideas, use prper wrds, and s n. I hpe it can slve these prblems.
Here is my advice n what the APP des. First, it shuld prvide sme reading materials. The mre we read,the better we write. Secnd, the APP shuld have an nline curse s that we can develp ur writing skills. Third, there shuld be an e-teacher wh can crrect mistakes and ffer suggestins.
I hpe my advice is wrth taking.
Yurs
Li Hua
名师点评
本题要求给英国某公司写一封信,就该公司要开发的一款提高英文写作能力的app写一封信,并提出自己的看法和建议。这是一封书信,要注意书信的基本格式,注意书信的语言选择。根据短文提示,本文就从两个方面来写作,一是我们在英文写作中常遇到的问题,主要用第一人称,一般现在时态进行表达;二是自己的建议和看法,用一般现在时态。
亮点回放
本范文层次清楚,条理分明。短文分为三部分,第一部分是就app的名字给出建议"right made easy"。第二部分介绍我们在写作中常遇到的问题,Many f us have difficulty in writing. We dn’t knw hw t rganize ideas,use prper wrds,and s 。第三部分就该app的功能提出建议,Here is my advice n what the APP des. First,it ; Secnd, The APP shuld have ;Third,there shuld be 条理清楚,中心突出。本文精彩句子:Thanks fr ding sth.感谢某人做了某事;Culd its name be "right made easy"?使用了疑问句,显现出作者的礼貌和修养;The mre we read,the better we write. 越多越好句式既使用准确,也增添了文章的亮点。
典例二(2019 • 贵州安顺) 请你结合以下提示,以“Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示:
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇:
1.self-prtectin(自我保护)
2. bully(n./v.欺凌)
3. persnal safety(人身安全)
4. have vilent behavirs(打架斗殴)
Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?
【参考范文】
Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?
Schl bullies happen in almst every schl. In my schl we smetimes have bullies and sme students are hurt, s it is really bad fr us t bully thers r be bullied at schl.
We are suppsed t stp any schl bully when we are in the truble f it. Fr example, we shuld stay calm befre a bullying behavir happens. We shuld always be friendly and helpful when making friends with thers. Here are sme f my ideas abut stpping schl bullies. Firstly, we will learn hw t have a self-prtectin because ur persnal safety is the mst imprtant. Secndly, we shuld be peaceful with thers at all times and can’t have any vilent behavir. Finally, beying schl rules is als a way t avid schl bullies.
I’m hping that n schl bullies will happen at schl in the future ,d yu think s?
名师点评
本文叙述了校园中存在的欺凌现象,就这些现象作者提出了一些预防和阻止办法,因为是通常发生的事情和建议,所以本文的主要时态是一般现在时和将来时。句子的主语一般用第一人称,用适当的连词,要注意上下文的衔接,使用自己熟悉的句式,所写的句子符合英语语法。
亮点回放
短文用了一些短语和句式,如it is bad fr sb.t d sth;We are suppsed t stp d sth; be in the truble f sth等,用了and连词,用了Firstly,Secndly, Finally,使文章更叫有层次感 ,也增加了文章的亮点。
A
【黑龙江省哈尔滨市69中2019年校内模拟测试】假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信,介绍一下你的近况,并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。
写作要点:
1. 欢迎他来中国。
2. 介绍你的近况:
(1)大多数时间忙于复习备考。
(2)有时在户外做运动。
(3)很少有时间外出娱乐。
3. 给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。
写作要求:
1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2、可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4、至少80词。
Dear Alex,
Hw are yu ding? _________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ming
B
【安徽合肥市庐阳区42中2019年中考一模考试】每个人的生命只有一次。请你以"Hw t Prtect Our Lives"为题,从安全和健康的角度入手,写一篇如何珍惜和保护我们生命的短文,要点如下:
1. 交通安全,校园安全
2. 健康的饮食和生活
3. ... ...
参考词汇:treasure(v.)珍惜
注意:
1. 词数80~100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hw t Prtect Our Lives
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
A
Dear Alex,
Hw are yu ding? Yu said that yu wuld cme t China as an exchange student in yur last letter. Welcme t China. Yu want t knw abut me. Let me tell yu. I have been spending mst f my time reviewing fr exams these days. Smetimes I d sprts utdrs. But I seldm have time t g ut fr fun.
Yu said yu will wrry abut hw t get alng with students when yu are in China. In fact, yu dn’t have t be wrried abut it. Chinese peple are friendly. Yu shuld take an active part in all kinds f activities in schl. If yur friends have sme questins, yu shuld help them. They’ll thank yu fr yur help. Yu can bring sme small gifts t yur classmates when yu are invited t their hmes. I hpe yu can get n well with yur classmates.
Best wishes!
B
Hw t Prtect Our Lives
It is very imprtant fr us t knw hw t treasure and prtect ur lives.
First f all, we shuld bey the traffic rules and pay attentin t traffic safety.
Secndly, we shuld nt chase and fight in schl. Dn’t climb trees, dn’t play dangerus games.
Thirdly, we shuld eat sme healthy fds, such as vegetables, fruits, and s n. They are able t help us maintain a healthy bdy.
Finally, a gd sleep can als assure us a healthy bdy. We shuld sleep seven t eight hurs a day t maintain adequate sleep.
If we can learn t treasure and prtect urselves, I believe we can have a healthy bdy and a better life.
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